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    MangaHelper 伝説メンバー / Densetsu / Legendary Member riki's Avatar
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    The Maiden of Puria

    I got this story stuck in my head so I figured I better write it down before I forget. It came out longer than I expected *cough*around15pages* though. LOL I might expand the universe later on, but I need to organize my ideas first. Anyway... here is the story. I had break it down into spoiler tags to make it easier to read (not to mention it would be a very long post otherwise).

    Enjoy!


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    Last edited by riki; April 29, 2012 at 07:29 PM.

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    Re: The Maiden of Puria

    good work riki. i was suspecting Janae all the ways. I even thought she was Merzak in disguise. i also predicted she was under an illusion or a spell all the time, however i never expected that ending. I was expecting something flashy or fantasy-like happening in the end, an awakening, a miracle or something like that
    It was a bit sad at the end. In a way you can say Merzak won.
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    Re: The Maiden of Puria

    The part of Janae wasn't in my original draft, but it just came about. She was originally supposed to a Merzakian disguised as Janae but I later decided to make her into a traitor because it would make more sense imo.

    Anyhow, I'm currently working on a novel. It is in the same universe but in the distant future. However, there will be a hint about Roku and Kyah in the first chapter.

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