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    Legend Of The Black Lions

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    The U-17 team has just ran into their biggest threat of all time. An underground tennis team known as "The Black Lions" have been devastating the tennis world. All around the globe, national teams are being utterly beaten by these mystery players, one of which used to be Echizen's brother, Ryoga, who eventually went rogue. They have never lost, and are said to wear black with the image of a lion's head. Led by their infamous and fearless leader, sometimes known as "King David," they seem to be taking hold of the tennis world with an iron fist. They have wiped out the tennis team of every major country except for one, Japan. Team Japan is the next target, and these men will stop at nothing to conquer. Will Team Japan be able to stop the onslaught, or will they be the last victim?

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    Spoiler: Characters show


    Spoiler: Black Lions Stats show


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    Chapters
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    Spoiler: Chapter 1: "The Black Lions" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 2: "Aspersio" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 3: "Beyond The Door (1/2)" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 4: "Beyond The Door (2/2)" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 5: "The True Devil" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 6: "Clash Of Two Elites" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 7: "Sphere Of Odin" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 8: "Revelation" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 9: "The Coming Storm" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 10: "The Savior Of Tennis" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 11: "The Prophet" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 12: "Form The Strongest Team" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 13: "The Other Side Of The Net" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 14: "The Battle Of The Most Dangerous pt.1" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 15: "The Battle Of The Most Dangerous pt.2" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 16: "The Battle Of The Most Dangerous pt.3" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 17: "The Battle Of The Most Dangerous pt.4" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 18: "Hidden Talent" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 19: "Black Breeze" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 20: "Perfection and the Moonchopper" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 21: "The Child Of God vs The Legendary Herald" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 22: "Two Supernatural Men" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 23: "The Dream" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 24: "Reality" show

    Spoiler:  Chapter 25: "Swindle Pair vs Legendary Pair" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 26: "Why So Serious?" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 27: "The Mysterious Raizan" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 28: "The Sleeping Lions Roar" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 29: "Man Of God" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 30: "Messiah Complex" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 31: "Messiah Complex 2" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 32: "Messiah Complex 3" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 33: "Messiah Complex 4" show

    Spoiler: Chapter 34: "Messiah Complex 5" show
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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    King David is the character you created? He'll have the same techniques?

    Actually, it's a good story, better than that shit movie of a london gang. At least, the Black Lions have Yukimura level players or even better, the new POT movie only had lame rivals. I like the idea of everyone playing, a movie of POT should make all players play without leaving behind the strongest characters. The battle at the british castle didn't show Yukimura, Niou, or other strong players. Even Tooyama didn't play against a rival, only was shown playing with Niou, but that's no screentime at all for those two players who deserved more in that movie.

    Finally, thanks Fayte, I'm very excited about your story and can't wait for the chapters to come out.
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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Quote Originally Posted by LetalHawk View Post
    King David is the character you created? He'll have the same techniques?

    Actually, it's a good story, better than that shit movie of a london gang. At least, the Black Lions have Yukimura level players or even better, the new POT movie only had lame rivals. I like the idea of everyone playing, a movie of POT should make all players play without leaving behind the strongest characters. The battle at the british castle didn't show Yukimura, Niou, or other strong players. Even Tooyama didn't play against a rival, only was shown playing with Niou, but that's no screentime at all for those two players who deserved more in that movie.

    Finally, thanks Fayte, I'm very excited about your story and can't wait for the chapters to come out.
    Hey thanks for actually commenting. And yes, my characters are the black lions. I'm incorporating all the PoT favorites into the story, and it is going to be very different than the typical PoT that Konomi writes. Hopefully it will not be as predictable. I'm writing the first part of it now. If anybody could give some input on things they would like to see, that would be good.

    ---------- Post added at 07:33 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:55 PM ----------

    I finished chapter 1, it is in my first post.

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Tezuka is already in problems in the first chapter, this looks veery interesting

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Quote Originally Posted by LetalHawk View Post
    Tezuka is already in problems in the first chapter, this looks veery interesting
    Yeah, I have a lot of crazy ideas.

    ---------- Post added May 03, 2012 at 03:35 AM ---------- Previous post was May 02, 2012 at 08:29 PM ----------

    Where is everybody. I know LetalHawk isn't the only one on this forum with an opinion.

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Love it that Tezuka is confronted with the Black Lions. You leave us on the edge of our seats
    "Sorry, but I never lose to the same opponent twice." - Fuji

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

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    Love it that Tezuka is confronted with the Black Lions. You leave us on the edge of our seats
    It's hard to write a whole story with just a concept lol. I know if I think of things chapter by chapter I will screw something up. Right now I'm thinking ahead to try to see how I want this to end up. I'm going to post chapter 2 soon, probably today.

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    I'm not a huge fan of PoT fanfiction, but just tell us where you see this going. Like, do you imagine a lot of training/other matches to improve Sanada's standing, or are we going Konomi style and skipping the intervening training, to skip right to the matches against the "Black Lions?" I'm assuming you'll want time for Tezuka to lose/or whatever, and then power up time...

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

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    I'm not a huge fan of PoT fanfiction, but just tell us where you see this going. Like, do you imagine a lot of training/other matches to improve Sanada's standing, or are we going Konomi style and skipping the intervening training, to skip right to the matches against the "Black Lions?" I'm assuming you'll want time for Tezuka to lose/or whatever, and then power up time...
    What do you mean "improve Sanada's standing?" Also, I'm going to show a lot more tennis than Konomi, while adding a plot of suspense. I'm not a fan of fanfiction either, but I'm not making some stupid love story about highschool. I'm pretty much making a parallel PoT story line up as close as possible with the actual storyline. That's why I'm incorporating real canon into it (such as the airplane flight back, picking up Ryoga, and Ryoga wearing a black hoodie). This is why it will be worth reading.

    ---------- Post added at 10:50 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:27 PM ----------

    Chapter 2 is out

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Nice work on Chapter 2. I feel like Irie is in troll mode XD
    "Sorry, but I never lose to the same opponent twice." - Fuji

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Quote Originally Posted by Fuji Shusuke View Post
    Nice work on Chapter 2.
    Thanks, glad you like it.

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    I feel like Irie is in troll mode XD
    We will just have to see :P

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Registered just to say I think this is going great

    Kintarou 3-3 with Kirihara is a bit unbelievable though, lets see how it ends but i could never picture Kirhara playing evenly with kintarou post mifune training. Sure kirihara has had time to raise skills but he was trolled by a pre mifune training renji. One can safely assume that kintarou was above renjis level at the end of the mountain training. Great read looking forward to more

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Quote Originally Posted by Duplicity View Post
    Registered just to say I think this is going great

    Kintarou 3-3 with Kirihara is a bit unbelievable though, lets see how it ends but i could never picture Kirhara playing evenly with kintarou post mifune training. Sure kirihara has had time to raise skills but he was trolled by a pre mifune training renji. One can safely assume that kintarou was above renjis level at the end of the mountain training. Great read looking forward to more
    Many people underestimate Kirihara. He dominated Krauser, who is a great player by high school standards. Renji was definitely better than Kintarou at the time Kirihara lost to him. We can safely assume everyone has improved by now, so Kirihara will most likely be back to his original "Fuji-level" like he always was. He will eventually achieve a level past devil form in canon, so I'm going with that. Besides, Kirihara is definitely a favorite of Konomi so aint no way he getting dominated by anybody but the three Rikkai monsters.

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Are you going to make new techniques for the existing characters?
    "Sorry, but I never lose to the same opponent twice." - Fuji

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    Re: [PoT OVA Script] Legend Of The Black Lions

    Quote Originally Posted by Fayte View Post
    Many people underestimate Kirihara. He dominated Krauser, who is a great player by high school standards. Renji was definitely better than Kintarou at the time Kirihara lost to him. We can safely assume everyone has improved by now, so Kirihara will most likely be back to his original "Fuji-level" like he always was. He will eventually achieve a level past devil form in canon, so I'm going with that. Besides, Kirihara is definitely a favorite of Konomi so aint no way he getting dominated by anybody but the three Rikkai monsters.
    I dont belive renji was at a greater level than kintarou at the time kirihara lost to him. while this match was going on kintarou was taking points against a full string oni and we all know oni's true strength now. Kintarou through feats is allways showen to be above renji who kirihara has yet to defeat regardless of level. He is the rivial of Ryoma, feat wise you cant justify Kirihara even being in the same tier as kintarou.

    Ofcourse its yours story but if your staying true to the tier it doesn't make much sense unless you explain what Kirihara has been up to all this time during the match cause I can think of many who will stomp Kirihara badly aside from the big 3 lets see,

    Tezuka,Atobe,Irie,Shiraishi,Oni,Fuji,Ryoma and Tokugawa come to mind. Shiraishi even states that Kintarou is stronger then him. *shrug*
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