I'll follow you into the dark

[riki]

Nope, the last thing I've heard was that all of them were adopted within three days.

And that one was your favorite, Welkin.

[Farfalla]

Oh! Once I confused Welkin with another one xD God, I love the color of his eyes @.@
Hope he'll let you know about them T.T

[riki]

Hopefully, but I don't know. I don't think he'll keep tabs on them since they're already sold.

[Farfalla]

But maybe they'll be that vet's clients xD So the vet would have a history on them and could share with your neighbor /o/

[riki]

Maybe. That might work.

---------- Post added May 27, 2012 at 06:05 PM ---------- Previous post was May 26, 2012 at 10:18 PM ----------

Good news: The chapter is finished!
Bad news: It's little over 21 pages long so it will probably take you guys a couple of days. Good thing I decided to divide the chapter, huh?

Good news: Here is a snippet from the second chapter. I've already written it down beforehand:

While Kejuta was wringing the towel, her son suddenly spoke, "While I was... dead, I had a dream." She stopped what she was doing and turned to look at him. Pendance was staring at the fire contemplatively while stroking his older sister's hair gently. A dream? Kejuta always has one when she died so why shouldn't he? Wiping the sweat off his forehead, she whispered softly, "And what did you dream about?"

"I was in a strange land where no sounds seem to exist," he began slowly. "Maybe it was because I was dead, but everything seems to be black and white. Millions of people were walking around me so it was hard for me to move around. I was so confused on where I was so I decided to talk to them. However, they just averted their eyes and continued on their way. Not knowing what to do, I looked up and saw a man sitting on a throne with a familiar man standing beside him. For some reason, I knew that I needed to go there so I walked toward them. As I was walking up the stairs, I suddenly realized who the man standing was - it was father."

Kejuta froze when she heard those words. Her son's dream was much, much different from hers - she dreamed of her past but her son was dreaming of another place. Finding her words, she inquired hesitantly, "A-and... what did he say?"

Bad news: I don't think there won't be any snippet anytime this week since I need to work on the video game news digest for this month.

[scav]

heh u're awesome

[riki]

Oh, I just realized that the snippet contains spoilers so read it at your own risk~

Of course, if you're like me and you read the last part first, then you should be fine.

[goldb]

I won't read the snippet til I finish the monument that is your first chapter

Awesome work riki, very much looking forward to the 2nd chapter

[riki]

Awww... thanks!

What part are you on now? If you can't recall, just write what happened in that part (in spoiler tags of course)

---------- Post added May 28, 2012 at 12:52 PM ---------- Previous post was May 27, 2012 at 08:28 PM ----------

I lied. I wrote the first part of the second chapter since the internet was acting up so here's the beginning:

“Is it true that you have a sister?”

Pendance glanced up to find two young boys looking at him curiously. He didn’t recognize them so they were probably new slaves. “Yes, why do you ask?” he wondered as he picked up some more fire woods.

“Oh, that’s what we heard,” one of them said quickly, “but we didn’t see her around so we weren’t sure if we were being tricked or not.”

The boy just smiled and explained, “It’s because she is usually spending time with the Merzakian noble ladies. They considered her as their ‘personal servant’.”

The others murmured with understanding looks. “That makes sense,” the other agreed. “I’ve heard that she is very cute. By the way, how old is your little sister?”

That was when Pendance began to smirk. “Let’s see… right now, I’m thirteen, which means…” he paused for a dramatic effect as his audience drew closer to him, “… she should be twenty years old.”

And with that, he left the two confused boys behind him as he walked back to the camp with his bundle of sticks.

[Ancy]

Chapter 1 is out ...I'll read it later in the evening.....and and and...you're working on chapter 2 already


I'm so proud of you

[goldb]

Slow down! I've not even started yet lol

[riki]

Creative minds never slow down for anyone!

[Ancy]

Creative minds never slow down for anyone!

you tell em sistaaa

[scav]

[riki]

LOL That is how I feel whenever I "talk" to the cat.

Hopefully I don't say anything raunchy.