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Thread: The Lashival Trilogy - Book 1- The Ilmarians

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Even though it was difficult, you did a good job Riki! I appreciated your ability to sum up the whole story in the title...it was so catchy and expressive...well, at least I found it that way ...

    I also imagined and designed a new Ilmarian...with a more different power...but this is not my novel

    Click only if you're curious....

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    @falla


    @Ancy
    There's always fanfic

    She looks cool! What is her power? Is it music-based?

    Okay, I'm almost done with Ch. 10. Then two more chapters and epilogue left. Man, I've been writing this for almost 7 months now.




    Ch. 10: Torryn & Weiss: "Friends are meaningless

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    I've read up to part IV posted on the dreamwidth site, so I'll give my impressions of chapter 10 up to that point so far:

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Well, I'm currently going to write that part soon but the only thing I'll tell is that they won't get along with one Ilmarian especially and I already give you a hint of who. But then, I wouldn't blame him.

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    Okay, I just need to write the fight and the conclusion and then I'm done.

    @goldb

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Quote Originally Posted by riki View Post
    @goldb

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Oh, I saw the "lol" and was wondering what you meant by that.

    Anyway, I'm almost finished with CH. 10; I just need to complete the conclusion and then onward to CH. 11.

    The next chapter will take a while because it will involve a lot of time skips since the next Ilmarian is one of four connecting factors to some of the previous chapters. The other ones are Kejuta and Pendance (though he's not really a major factor; you'll find out why in Ch. 12) in case you're wondering. If any of you guys figure out the last one, I'll give the title of Ch. 12 and maybe a snippet of the ending of Ch. 11 since I already written that downl




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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Ok so I've finished with chapter 10:

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    How far are you with chapter 11?

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    Re: The Ilmarians

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    Only two pages and this is only the "introduction". It took me awhile b/c writing the beginning is the hardest part imo.

    Anyway, here is the first part of CH. 11. It's going to start out slow and then it will pick up speed, I promise. ^^ Any guess on what his power will be?

    Oh, I know that I mentioned that the Duermon's eyes are "gem-like" and this is how I imagined what they look like.




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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Hey, riki^^ How are those special chapters with notes about the characters going?

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    It's going pretty well. I'm working on Hessin right now so I only have few characters left.

    FYI, my writing will probably be sporadic since I'm busy playing P4G.

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    What's P4G? XD And that's ok by me, since I need to catch up ><
    Bob prolly won't enjoy that info, though xD

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Persona 4: Golden. It's a JRPG. ^^

    Ehh... if he's impatient for the next part, he'll nag me about it. Of course, I don't have to listen to him.

    ~♪ goldb



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    Oh, I almost forgot to mention something in a previous post and added it. You need to go to my blog and read Part V

    Some more parts for Shintra's chapter




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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Are the changes in the last 2 tags? because I think I read the chapter before it was edited and I don't wanna re-read!

    Also how many parts did you say were left of this chapter? and any hints as to what the final chapter of the book holds?

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    No, I'm too lazy to post it here. You need to click the right-side link and read it there.

    Umm... for the blog, I guess two more?

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    I forgot to answer your last question. >.> Anyway, the last two paragraphs will be the transition to Ch. 12.

    Oh, I made some minor edits so yeah.




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    Re: The Ilmarians

    omaigawd ...so many chapters...need to catch up...
    "I've always believed you were meant to stay!
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