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Thread: The Lashival Trilogy - Book 1- The Ilmarians

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Quote Originally Posted by riki View Post
    Don't worry. The wisps will keep them company and the others can visit them whenever they want.

    Aundra has a reason for acting the way she does. You'll find out in the future... the distant future. Sorry, Ancy.

    Oh, I forgot to mention that I changed the year when they will meet the next Ilmarian. Instead of 30 years, it will be 50. ^^
    Distant future? man!

    Yeah that's what I have it as. BTW, you'll definitely need to revisit especially this chapter in the future; there's quite some typos there. Or if I have time some time, I'll highlight them for you

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Distant future = Book 3

    Yeah, I figured that I have some typos. Once I finished, I just post it because I want to get it over with.

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Quote Originally Posted by riki View Post
    Distant future = Book 3

    Yeah, I figured that I have some typos. Once I finished, I just post it because I want to get it over with.
    that's too far! I thought you meant by the end of this book!

    It's okay for now, as it's not any major mistakes that alter the meaning of the sentence or anything.

    Btw, now that Eloria is dead I can ask this; did you ever intend or think about going down a romantic path with her and Pen?

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    You'll understand why when you read about it.

    No, I mentioned in Ch. 2 that Pen only saw her as a sister; besides he was too busy focusing on taking care of his family. However, she did have feeling for him so it would be one-sided.

    ---------- Post added July 20, 2012 at 09:36 AM ---------- Previous post was July 15, 2012 at 05:36 PM ----------

    Okay, Ch. 5 is completed! Lanskas's background gave me the most trouble out of the bunch, but as soon as I figured it out, it was a breeze. Oh, I added the months in this chapter and I'll add them to the previous chapters when I revise them.

    The next chapter title is kinda obvious what the next Ilmarain's power will be me.




    Chapter 5: Lanskas - "Well, that was unexpected"

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    OMG omg...Ilmarian of the Beasts....after I've read the details of his death...and I've learned of his vision of wolves and a lady with long sharp nail...I knew she must be

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    And you're correct.

    ---------- Post added August 07, 2012 at 09:55 PM ---------- Previous post was July 26, 2012 at 08:10 PM ----------

    Soooo... Ch. 6 is much longer than I anticipated so I decided to break it into two parts. This was originally a short story (titled "Catalyst") that I planned a long time ago so that's probably why. Anyway, most of the original concept is still here except with some modifications. This chapter will be also unique since it's entire from another character's POV not the Ilmarian's. In case you're wondering about the locations of places, here is a map I made (not the best but oh well).

    Here is the first half. The second part will be posted shortly since I only have at least three sections left. The whole chapter will be posted at my blog.




    Chapter 6: Oraji - "Please tell me that you know the difference between an apple and a pear"

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    TBA

    ---------- Post added August 08, 2012 at 11:05 PM ---------- Previous post was August 07, 2012 at 09:55 PM ----------

    Here is the second half. There is a hint for the next chapter in the last part




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    Re: The Ilmarians

    looking forward to reading it....probably Monday evening
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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Ch. 7 is finished and I'm halfway completed with the first book.

    Anyway, school has started already so I'll be busy with work. Expect some delay for chapter release. ^^




    Chapter 7: Zentran - "Why should I help the humans who are terrified of me?"

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    ---------- Post added September 09, 2012 at 08:41 AM ---------- Previous post was August 26, 2012 at 07:31 PM ----------

    Ch. 8 is completed and it has actually less pages than Ch. 6 & 7 (a little more than 23 pages ). LOL

    Anyway, the first part introduced some concepts that will be seen in the second book. I also felt bad because Adia hasn't been seen much since Ch. 4 so she made an appearance here.

    Enjoy!




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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Finished reading chapter 6 a few days ago and I really liked the way it was written and the themes conveyed in that part of the story. Now for 7 and 8

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Chapter 9 is going to be pretty long so I decided to divide it into two or three parts. Oh, I imagine the Aerians to live a Spartan lifestyle.

    Here is the first part.




    Chapter 9: Alethea - "What else can I do?" Part I

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    ---------- Post added September 30, 2012 at 11:19 PM ---------- Previous post was September 26, 2012 at 08:00 PM ----------

    Part II.

    I'm almost done~




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    ---------- Post added October 05, 2012 at 05:24 PM ---------- Previous post was September 30, 2012 at 11:19 PM ----------

    The final part is up.

    I feel kinda bad for some of the characters. I only introduced them just to kill them off.




    Chapter 9: Alethea - "What else I can do?" - Part III

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    Last edited by riki; October 01, 2012 at 06:05 AM.

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Okay, so I'm about to read chapter 9 and I'll try and remember to post my thoughts here when I'm done . Please dont hurry with ch 10 yet

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    I'm going to post a snippets of the upcoming chapters to make it less daunting to read. ^^ The whole chapter will be posted over at my blog.

    Enjoy!




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    Re: The Ilmarians

    So I'm starting chapter 8...but I had to comment on ch 7 before I forget....the story of Zentran is absolutely amazing. I enjoyed reading about his personal drama and I identified with him at so point...powerful stuff there...keep it going Riki!
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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Glad you like it, Ancy.

    I have to admit he was the toughest one to write emotionally since I wanted him to feel bitter about the whole thing.

    Oh, here are the designs for the exorcists:



    As for Ch. 10, I think I have at least two parts left. ^^

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    I WANNA GO BACK TO READ IT Ç.Ç
    November 11 seems so far away T.T

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