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Thread: The Lashival Trilogy - Book 1- The Ilmarians

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    The side story is completed so I hope everyone is happy.




    Side Story: Welcome Home

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    ---------- Post added July 09, 2012 at 03:39 PM ---------- Previous post was June 28, 2012 at 04:24 PM ----------

    Okay, Ch. 4 is finished! I found the original story concepts in my old laptop and was amused to see how much alteration I made (e.g. Kejuta was supposed to be a well-intentioned extremist, the world is supposed to be set in different dimensions, etc).

    Anyway, enjoy!




    Chapter 4: Marika - "My role is to guide the Seeker"

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    Last edited by riki; July 09, 2012 at 02:45 PM.

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    Finally, I caught up with the first two chapters....It's been quite hectic lately and did not have much free time, but today I said .."heck I want to indulge myself in reading something interesting"...and you know what Riki??...you got me all tangled in the chains of pleasurable reads...too bad that is late and tomorrow I have work....otherwise I'll continue reading ...

    To be honest, I have the impression that Adia's power is similar to the power of the goddess who brought all the creations to life...To me, Pen, Kejuta and Adia seem to be the descendants of gods, rather than the descendants of the cursed rebels. Yet, it's too early to predict, especially because I did not finish reading...Riki, you've got me hooked..darn I try to go to sleep but this story makes my mind roam in all directions ....

    ---------- Post added July 11, 2012 at 10:17 PM ---------- Previous post was July 10, 2012 at 11:16 PM ----------

    I finished it....at work ...Great story Riki. Keep up the good work....So my intuition was correct. Pen and Adia are actually replacing the twin gods, whilst Kejuta's power was born from their will to control destinies. Quite interesting. I love the way you portrayed Merzak and Puria with human characteristics. They had a human nature exactly like the Hellenic gods. However, there was one thing I did not understand...the Caellum war...how come the immortal gods were mortally wounded??? Is there a certain detail I don't know?? What was the thing that caused such a wound...did they have a weak spot..something like Achile's heel??? and why Seitha was the last to die?? wasn't he wounded as well??

    so many questions ...
    "I fancy myself as a fine example of womanhood...
    the kind that clambers on a bike and rides off like John Wayne on a horse
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    Umm... you will find out in the last chapter why and how the gods die. ^^

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    but you'll answer all these questions..right??



    ...oh wait.... the last chapter....what am I gonna do meanwhile?? ....I am such a curious kitteh

    I WANT HINTS!!!!!
    "I fancy myself as a fine example of womanhood...
    the kind that clambers on a bike and rides off like John Wayne on a horse
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    Sorry, but no hints until the last chapter. The rest of the chapters will be mostly about the new Ilmarians. ^^;

    Oh, to answer the last question about Seitha, he was the least mortally wounded so he was able to survive longer.

    And... PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE

    Anyway, I'm revamping the blog aka mostly the encyclopedia posts. The character profiles post has been updated and FYI, there will be spoilers.
    Last edited by riki; July 11, 2012 at 05:01 PM.

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    character profiles...is fun to create avatars for them...can I do that?? ...want to visualize the mermaids

    ...and I'm not a patient person...therefore not virtuous.... thank god for the spoilers

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    what do you think abt my Pen?? am I doing it right??
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    "I fancy myself as a fine example of womanhood...
    the kind that clambers on a bike and rides off like John Wayne on a horse
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    Sure, go for it.

    Here is my version of the Neriad (well, the best that I can do since they don't have image for back fin):

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    Oh, FYI, I'm planning to combine all of the chapters into a "book" after I finished and convert it into a PDF file. Of course, I'm going to do some revision and whatnot.
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    omg omg...aaaa mermaid

    I looked for flippers,tails and whatnot but found nooone ....I'm gonna browse that site some more..cos now I know I can make mermaid pngs

    ...well, after I feed my cat ...cos she's meowing like a mad one...

    ---------- Post added at 04:58 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:07 PM ----------

    ...and I did it

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    and a dark one:
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    god I'm really having fun with this
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    They look great

    Speaking of which, your last pic reminded me that I forgot some details in Ch. 4, which I added in the blog post. If you guys are lazy to read it, then...

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    Quote Originally Posted by riki View Post
    Speaking of which, your last pic reminded me that I forgot some details in Ch. 4, which I added in the blog post. If you guys are lazy to read it, then...

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    That was actually a hint Riki...I have the feeling that the love story between Kejuta and Thesben has not ended. But rather...it has begun ...If you decide to go on this road...I was wondering how Kejuta will make Thesben fall in love with her again...As we know, the character of a person is shaped by his/her past experiences, family, society, culture and religion. As a result, Thesben might not be Thesben anymore , but a new individual who looks like him (I assume Adria made her reincarnated father look like Thesben)...I'm curious how you'll go around that....

    I still have questions on this theme, but I'm not sure whether you'll write something about it.
    "I fancy myself as a fine example of womanhood...
    the kind that clambers on a bike and rides off like John Wayne on a horse
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    Maybe, maybe not.

    It may involve them or other characters so you'll have to read and find out.

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    ...you're such a tease ...of course I'll read it...in my own time ...but I'll read it nevertheless
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    the kind that clambers on a bike and rides off like John Wayne on a horse
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    Okay, I'm finished revamping my blog. Here is my encyclopedia post which contains information on geography, events, and terms. Of course there will be spoilers so beware! Let me know if I'm missing anything. ^^

    *off to write CH. 5 now*

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    Re: The Ilmarians

    Okay so I finally read ch.4 and really enjoyed seeing everyone finally starting to fulfill their destinies. Sad that Adia and Pen are now away from there mother and have to spent eternity alone, pretty much. It was a lovely touch for Adia and Pen to perform their first life cycle on Thesben's soul, also seeing Eloria, finding out what she's been up to since they were seperated. Hopefully we'll get more scenes from them in the chapters to come.

    There's something about Aundra's personality that doesn't sit well with me though; she's too forward maybe and disregarding of other's feelings and thoughts at times; but I guess it's a tough world and she's experienced enough to know what she's doing.

    I also have seen the character profiles and that you put a spoiler warning; thanks!

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    Don't worry. The wisps will keep them company and the others can visit them whenever they want.

    Aundra has a reason for acting the way she does. You'll find out in the future... the distant future. Sorry, Ancy.

    Oh, I forgot to mention that I changed the year when they will meet the next Ilmarian. Instead of 30 years, it will be 50. ^^

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