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    My new manga project

    First of all, hi I'm back! To anyone that remembers me I had an old manga idea going on before. It didn't get far so I've started anew with something else (yeah it took a while). I'd love to hear any feedback and other stuff!

    I have 5 chapters done in script so far, but I'll post the 1st one for now though!

    Manga title: Hunter academy

    Synopsis: The world is under a current invading threat of dark mysterious creatures, and amongst the chaos a young teenager is kicked out of his house and is forced to find a job. But his life takes a sudden turn as he bumps into a mystical organisation.

    Genres: Action, adventure, comedy, drama, fantasy, romance

    Rating: Teen for violence, explicit language

    Chapter 1: Me, my sword and I

    Code:
    EXT. DERELICT FLAT - DAY
    
    
              Morning sunlight is pouring in through a dirty, stained
              cracked window. Birds are chirping nearby.
    
    
              INT. DERELICT FLAT - ROOM - DAY
    
    
              The light rays are focusing on the head of a dark haired
              teenager.
    
    
              Near to his bed is an alarm radio which reads 08:59AM. As it
              hits 09:00AM a radio station starts playing.
    
    
                                  NEWSREADER MALE
                        Good morning, this is Sunrise radio
                        the best sound to wake up to in the
                        morning! We hope you’re all awake
                        and ready to start the day!
    
    
              The male shuffles getting up slowly out of bed, his face
              looks drained. The radio is now going over the news.
        
    
                                  NEWSREADER FEMALE
                        And in further news this morning,
                        we are still having reports of
                        unusual sightings of the black
                        creatures emerging unexpectedly out
                        of nowhere.
    
    
              The male stands up looking back at the radio with a
              nonplussed expression on his face.
    
    
                                  NEWSREADER FEMALE
                        So far there have been over 30
                        casualties. People are warned to
                        take care when venturing outside,
                        and to avoid cordoned areas until
                        further information can be given.
    
    
                                  NEWSREADER MALE
                        Thank you Marie, and now on to the
                        weather with Jonathan Blake.
    
    
              The male leaves the room heading to a closet in the dusty
              hallway. He opens it revealing a sheathed katana on a stand
              which he straps around his back.
    
    
              He heads back to his room booting up his computer, the main
              desktop is shown as he browses the web to check his emails.
    
    
              He scans over them and frowns realising there is no new
              mail. He turns the computer off and leaves the house.
    
    
              EXT. HIGH STREET - DAY
    
    
              The teenage male arrives outside a familiar grocery shop, he
              walks in to meet the owner a rather large man with stubble
              and a stained apron.
    
    
                                  OWNER
                        Oh you again! Sorry kid still no
                        vacancies!
    
    
                                  MALE
                        Do you know if any will show up?
    
    
                                  OWNER
                        Have you been checking online? You
                        do realise everything is done by
                        machines these days!
    
    
                                  MALE
                        I’ve been checking, but nothing
                        still, and not a single email!
    
    
                                  OWNER
                        Hm sorry there lad, come back and
                        try again next week why don’t you?
    
    
              The male sighs and leaves the shop back into the blazing hot
              outdoors. He looks down the entire row of shops sighing to
              himself.
    
    
              Suddenly a ringtone plays from his pocket, he takes a cheap
              mobile phone out and answers.
    
    
                                  VOICE O.S
                             (loudly)
                        Oi loser good morning!
    
    
                                  MALE
                             (holding the phone away
                             briefly)
                        You again ‘sis! What do you want?
    
    
                                  SISTER
                        I want to know if you’ve got a job
                        yet? Or is your broke ass still
                        lazing around in that crapshack
                        flat of yours?
    
    
                                  MALE
                        I’m trying okay? Look you know it’s
                        not my fault!
    
    
                                  SISTER
                        It so is! You’re the one who was
                        kicked out for the summer holidays,
                        you did nothing in that house, just
                        sleep eat and crap all the time!
    
    
              He grunts loudly continuing to walk.
    
    
                                  SISTER
                        So are you ready for inspection?
    
    
                                  MALE
                        The **** you on about? You can't
                        come to my house, you have no
                        permission!
    
    
                                  SISTER
                        Says who? I could turn up right now
                        if I wanted to! And watch your
                        language kid!
    
    
                                  MALE
                        Too bad you wouldn’t find anyone at
                        home.
    
    
                                  SISTER
                        Oh I forgot, too busy wishing you
                        had a job to pay your rent!
                        (laughing) You could always live
                        with me!
    
    
                                  MALE
                        Screw that.
    
    
                                  SISTER
                        Well then, you get a job now okay?
                        Got to take care of yourself, being
                        17 and all! Bye bye now!
    
    
              She hangs up as he puts his phone away heading to the local
              park.
    
    
              As he sits on a bench, a group of kids rush over to an ice
              cream van nearby.
    
    
              He watches sweating as he dips his hand into his pocket. He
              feels around but pulls out a dirty grey lining.
    
    
              he sighs and sits back fanning himself as the sun glares
              down on him above.
    
    
                                  ICE CREAM MAN
                             (waving to children)
                        Thank you! Come again!
    
    
              The dark haired teen continues sitting but suddenly hears a
              rustle behind him. He hears it again then hears a dog
              barking loudly.
    
    
              He gets up and sees the dog barking at a small bush
    
    
                                  MALE
                        Crazy mutt!
    
    
              He looks closer however, and notices the bush shaking
              slightly.
    
    
              A cream coloured fox with large ears pops out from the bush
              running from the dog who barks menacingly at it.
    
    
                                  MALE
                        Hey stop bullying the poor animal!
    
    
                                  FOX
                        Gii! Gii!
    
    
              The dog continues barking as the fox stays near the
              teenager's feet. He shoos the dog away and it eventually
              leaves.
    
    
                                  MALE
                        You okay?
    
    
              He holds it up observing it closely noticing how small it is
              in his hands comparing to a puppy.
    
    
                                  MALE
                        Hehe your ears are cool!
    
    
              He strokes one with a finger and the fox paws at it. It
              looks up at him at he puts it back down.
    
    
                                  MALE
                        I wish I could, but I can’t keep
                        pets, I’m too broke. The landlord
                        probably wouldn't allow it either.
    
    
              He sighs and turns away sadly from the fox walking away.
    
    
                                  FOX
                        Giii!
    
    
              He looks down noticing it is clinging on to his ankle.
    
    
                                  MALE
                        Huh? You wanna stay? Okay I guess
                        while we’re out it couldn’t hurt.
    
    
              He picks it up and tucks it into his beige strap bag facing
              the front.
    
    
                                  MALE
                        Let's go!
    
    
              The duo head down a narrow path with not many people around.
              It is more shaded due to the trees above.
    
    
                                  MALE
                             (smiling)
                        I’m James, August James!
    
    
              The fox tilts its head at him.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Yeah I know, sounds weird right?
    
    
              It continues to stare at him rarely blinking.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        I wonder what your name is?
    
    
              He searches for a name tag or collar, but it has none.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Oh you’re a girl? I see.
    
    
              Caption: It's not that hard to tell.
    
    
                                  FOX
                        Gii!
    
    
              August chuckles as she pulls her ears down over her eyes,
              she lets go and they spring back up making him laugh again.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        You're funny!
    
    
              They cross a bridge over a lake, but August shivers.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Oi it’s gotten cold all of a
                        sudden!
    
    
                                  FOX
                        Gii! Gii!
    
    
              A slight eerie wind picks up as temperatures suddenly drop.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        What? What’s going on?
    
    
              The wind picks up making the trees rustle. He hears a loud
              rumble before noticing a puddle of black liquid bubbling up
              from the soil.
    
    
              The puddle gets larger and a figure rises up from it forming
              into a large black creature. Two slits on its face open up
              to reveal a pair of blood red eyes.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Crap it’s them!
    
    
              He removes the bag placing the fox somewhere safe.
    
    
              The creatures mouth splits open bearing a sharp toothed
              grin. It strikes at August, but he turns and draws his
              weapon.
    
    
              By luck he blocks with the sword, but the blow makes him
              struggle.
    
    
              The monster pushes him back and he hits the ground hard.
    
    
              It punches at him again and he blocks, however the recoil
              makes him drop his weapon. The creature grins menacingly
              sending him flying as it swipes August with its paw.
    
    
              August crashes into a bench trying to get up quickly.
              Already the creature is advancing on him. It towers above
              August about to deal the killing blow.
    
    
                                  FOX
                        Gii! Gii!
    
    
              The fox is standing between August and the creature.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Oi what are you doing? Get back
                        you’ll be killed!
    
    
                                  FOX
                        GIIIII!
    
    
              Her fur begins to glow bright yellow as a gust of wind kicks
              up around her.
    
    
              Her eyes glow also as his sword begins to shake. He picks it
              up feeling a surge of energy travel down his arm.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Whoa! What is this light?
    
    
              The fox glows brighter and there is a flash of yellow as it
              merges into an orb of pure light.
    
    
              August panics as it fuses with the blade of his sword
              casting a glow all over.
    
    
              He continues to feel the strange energy surge inside him as
              the sword stops glowing.
    
    
              August looks amazed noticing the pattern of the blade has
              changed to an orange and black flame design going down from
              the tip.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        What is this?
    
    
              The creature responds to the sudden shift advancing on
              August again.
    
    
              August grits his teeth looking up at it feeling more
              determined.
    
    
              The creature punches at him but he avoids it and swings. Its
              hand falls coming clean off dissipating into thin air.
    
    
              It recoils but August goes at it. The creature uses its
              remaining arm to block the sword back and attack.
    
    
              The creature slams its fist into the ground trying to crush
              August. He avoids it and leaps at the creature who is well
              open.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        What!? Since when could I jump so
                        high?
    
    
              He sails at speed towards the creature gripping his sword
              tight before slashing wide across its chest.
    
    
              It falls backwards crashing to the ground and August lands
              on it stabbing through its chest.
    
    
              Black liquid spurts everywhere from the wound and the
              creature's red eyes die out before it dissipates completely.
    
    
              He stands on the ground looking closely at the sword
              observing the pattern.
    
    
                                  FOX
                        Gii!
    
    
              He drops it in shock and it starts glowing again. An orb of
              light lifts from the blade changing back into the fox.
    
    
              The light fades and she sits there looking up at him.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Hey it's you again!
    
    
              August notices the blade has gone back to its original bland
              design.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        So you were in there? But how!?
    
    
              She pats the sword with her paw as August picks her up. He
              sheathes his sword and walks over to put her back in the
              bag.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        That just now when you were in
                        there. That energy I felt, what was
                        it?
    
    
              He touches his chest and feels a rather strange pulse, but
              not like his heartbeat.
    
    
              Up above in the canopy of trees a girl is dashing from
              branch to branch.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Come on, come on where are you?
    
    
              She leaps another branch looking down at the ground below.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        I can’t feel anything Yuno, are you
                        sure it’s here?
    
    
                                  YUNO O.S
                        I felt it before, but it seems the
                        energy has dissipated.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Wait! Someone purged it already?
                        Who could have done that?
    
    
              She pauses on a branch for a while.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Hold up, I sense another. Straight
                        down there!
    
    
              She leaps down in front of someone and turns to meet a
              scruffy looking August giving her a shocked look.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Hey who are you?
    
    
              She leans forward demanding an answer, but then she notices
              he has a katana and a cream coloured fox tucked in his bag.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Huh? He’s one of them. Yuno it
                        looks just like you!
    
    
                                  YUNO
                        Hmm?
    
    
              Her blue backpack flips open and a similar looking blue fox
              pops his head out. He has smaller ears.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Ah a talking fox! I-It just talked.
                        Hey get away from that thing it’s
                        dangerous!
    
    
              August pushes her away making her fall as the fox leaps onto
              the ground.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        What are you doing creep!?
    
    
              She covers her chest with her arm as the blue fox comes
              close to her.
    
    
                                  YUNO
                        How dare he? I’m not dangerous at
                        all.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Just what is going on here?
    
    
              The girl stands up abrpuptly
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Who are you, and what academy are
                        you from?
    
    
              She narrows her bright red eyes at him.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Hm no emblem either, got anything
                        Yuno?
    
    
                                  YUNO
                             (looking at his claws)
                        Nope he's just a blank!
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Do you have a license to use that
                        thing?
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        What do you mean?
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Your sword you dummy, how can you
                        not know you need a liscence for
                        it?
    
    
              August still looks confused.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Just as I thought! A faker!
    
    
              She looks away from him but he looks at her long beautiful
              blue flowing hair. August finds her rather pretty but he
              then notices she's wearing a blue hat which is twitching.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Hey your hat is moving!
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Don't touch it!
    
    
              She pulls her hat down her head and storms off.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Ugh come on Yuno, before he does
                        anything creepy!
    
    
              As she leaves he noticed a blue katana sheath strapped to
              her back.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Hey wait! That sword!
    
    
              She ignores him and leaps high into the air amongst the
              branches.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        That's impossible!
    
    
              August then remembers when he leapt high at the creature
              before.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Wait come back! I have questions!
    
    
              He takes after her and now realises he is somehow running
              faster.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        What a creep, first he touches me
                        and then stares at me, honestly?
    
    
              Yuno rests his chin on his paws
    
    
                                  YUNO
                        No idea why he acted like that, but
                        I found something else peculiar.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        And that is?
    
    
                                  YUNO
                        That's the exact same area where
                        the dark being was purged!
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        WHAT? Wait what is that?
    
    
              She senses something and looks down.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Wait, is that?
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Hey I want to talk to you!
    
    
              August is down below having caught up with her still
              running.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Impossible! How is that freak
                        keeping up with me? He's a fake we
                        checked out!
    
    
                                  YUNO
                        Maybe we should talk to him?
    
    
              She decides to stop and drops down to his level. August
              catches up without breaking a sweat.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                             (fidgeting with his hands)
                        I have to ask you something.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        You'd better not be coming onto me
                        faker!
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        No, your sword can I see it?
    
    
              She turns sharply away from him.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Nice try kid but you can’t. You
                        don’t even have a license!
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Kid? I’m 17! And what is this
                        liscence crap!?
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        You're definitely not a hunter!
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        A hunter?
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        You ask too many questions!
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Where are you heading?
    
    
              Caption: He's not listening.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Did you not just hear me creep!?
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Your hat again!
    
    
                                  GIRL
                             (pulling it down)
                        Oh no.
    
    
              August reaches out to help.
    
    
                                  GIRL
                        Don't touch me creepy pervert!
    
    
              She lets go to push him away, but as she does her hat
              springs off her head.
    
    
              August looks in awe as a pair of furry blue ears twitch
              amongst her hair.
    
    
              She stands in silence blank faced as August continues to
              stare.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        They're real?
    
    
              She remains mute as she snatches her hat from the ground,
              and before August can say anything she storms off in a
              hurry.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        What was that about? And those
                        ears, is she even human?
    
    
              The cream coloured fox pops her head out from the bag
              looking up into his eyes.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Did you see that blue one? He could
                        talk, and since when were foxes
                        blue?
    
    
              She blinks staring casually at him
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Well, can you talk too?
    
    
                                  FOX
                        Gii!
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Oh well. Hey I'm getting hungry
                        again, what about you?
    
    
              She continues to look at him as his stomach rumbles.
    
    
                                  AUGUST
                        Sadly I can’t get a meal though, I
                        thought my hunger would go away,
                        but it’s back from yesterday.
    
    
              He leaves the park having no other business there.
    
    
              INT.UNKNOWN BUILDING - DAY
    
    
              A man with a barely visible face is standing at window, he
              rubs his stubbly chin continuing to observe.
    
    
                                  MAN
                        Seems there's another one out
                        there.
    
    
                                  VOICE O.S
                        Are you sure?
    
    
                                  MAN
                        I'm quite sure, it's been a while
                        since one has popped up, but he's
                        compatible alright!
    
    
                                  VOICE O.S
                        So its found him?
    
    
                                  MAN
                             (clenching fist)
                        Yes, the light has found him. Now
                        all we have to do is get him!
    
    
              He turns to face the unseen person.
    
    
                                  MAN
                        Send out a team, hurry!
    
    
                                  VOICE O.S
                        Yes sir.
    More to come soon!

    ---------- Post added at 03:38 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:11 PM ----------

    Not so sure why the code box is so small. Is there a way to make it larger?
    Last edited by Theorangefox; June 23, 2012 at 09:37 AM.

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    Ohhhh... I remember you... I just PMed you. Please read it.. ehehheh

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    this is rather intriguing (is that spelled right?)

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    Yes, and thank you!

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    so, how's it coming so far?
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    - Imagination is greater than intelligence. (Einstein)
    - Try. Fail. Try again. Fail better. (i forgot)

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    Pretty good actually, I've cranked out 10 chapters, working on the 11th. I keep forgetting that I've posted this on other sites, but onemanga forums is where I mainly host it, dunno if I'm gonna update here cos of the time it takes!

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    onemanga? can you post a link, please?
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