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    My webcomic.... Pure Havoc

    Hey everyone!
    I recently started a web-comic-manga series and I'm looking to get some feedback (positive or negative)

    It's a story about a 20 year pizza delivery boy named Aaron Kidway who ends up involved in a crazy mess of magic, battle, and chaos during one of his "routine" deliveries!
    I'm working REALLY hard on it, so please help me out!


    thanks guys!

    www.pure-havoc.com <-- Main Site

    http://pure-havoc.smackjeeves.com/co...518443/page-1/ <-- Smackjeeves Account






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    Re: My webcomic.... Pure Havoc

    I'm not sure if you are going for epicness or comedy. The characters are funny everytime I look at the I laugh. You could totally draw funny comics for the newspaper. I love how much effort you put into "the Slice!" Try working with anatomy more. Also try shading only selective areas and dotted tones. That is what differentiates American comics and manga!

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    Re: My webcomic.... Pure Havoc

    I'm going for a mix of epic and comedy. The epic part is coming AND fast.
    Ya, I'm not the best artist yet BUT I figure most web-comic artists start off rough around the edges.
    You laugh? Is that good or bad?

    Lmao, keep reading please! I promise Im working really hard to deliver a good story with good humor and decent art ;-)

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    Re: My webcomic.... Pure Havoc

    I laugh because the style is like a lighthearted style (I'm not laughing because the artwork is bad or anything). It isn't a dark or sadistic toned comic. I like it.

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    Re: My webcomic.... Pure Havoc

    Thanks a lot!
    Ya, I'm pretty new to the comic authors world so it's all been a process.
    I'll admit I'm having certain "troubles" like getting people to see it! Lmao.

    ---------- Post added at 10:36 AM ---------- Previous post was at 10:30 AM ----------

    Hey, been a little bit since I bumped so... BUMP.
    If anyone is following my comic, or starts following it, I'd really enjoy hearing your thoughts.
    Thanks!
    Last edited by outlawkion1; July 23, 2012 at 11:34 AM.

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