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    What do you think?! Practice Page

    Hey everyone! I need some feedback on a practice page I drew!





    How to draw manga face: http://carlton88.hubpages.com/hub/Ho...raw-Manga-Face

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    Re: What do you think?! Practice Page

    ohmygosh this is so wonderful! I love the atmosphere and the screentones you used! is there more?

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    Re: What do you think?! Practice Page

    Great screen tone for the fading background and the atmosphere is good like bluechaser said. The drawing itself is pretty good too and the main layout of the scene is good.

    Hoping to see more from you.
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    Check out my Art Gallery here on the forum or my DeviantArt ^_^

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    Re: What do you think?! Practice Page

    Thanks for the comments! This was a random practice page, but I think it turned out better than my actual manga I have been working on hahaha. I wasn't planning on making more but I suppose I could continue it when I practice.

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    Re: What do you think?! Practice Page

    Quote Originally Posted by MangaDude View Post
    Hey everyone! I need some feedback on a practice page I drew!
    The top of the head is way off where it should be by looking where the face is at, and also too small compared to the upper part of the face, arm and palm connection is fatter than arm itself which also is off any proportions, and the torso looks as if it's been knit together from potatoes.

    I think that training at drawing the same object or character several times from set basic angles until you can get what you want to draw right with the first try would be what you need most at this point before attempting something more.

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