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In deep space, there was a planet in which there existed a small numbered race of merciless yet powerful warriors with an almighty king, who was unrivaled in power.The king had a base, miserly, ill-omened, fortune-telling old wizard whose prophecies were always accurate. He prophesied the fall of his kingdom. He said that it would be at the hands of an unborn child from the North Tribe. The king frowned upon hearing such omen, and asked about the unborn child's birth date. The wizard replied that it would be 13 days from today. One the thirteenth day, the king commanded that all male children born that day on the North Tribe be killed by drowning in the nearby river. His men invaded the tribe and began executing their ruthless orders. A woman who overheard what was going on bore a child and kept him concealed for three months. When she couldn't keep him hidden any longer, instead of delivering him to be killed, she set him adrift in a small basket coated in pitch towards the light of the blue star as her tears flew from her eyes with the winds. Thirteen years afterwards, the king was entertaining himself in the arena by watching as gladiators fought one another to death. On that very day, the king witnessed the birth of the strongest warrior. He slaughtered a hundred Khimaros with nothing but his bare hands (the Khimaros was a creature resembling a lion, but it was countless times stronger and fiercer than a lion). It is said that such warrior is born once every 500 years. He caught the king's interest. Not knowing he is the sole survivor from the cruel event that befell the poor children 13 years go, the king called him, and asked about his name. The young warrior answered that he had none. The king therefore named him "Kaido of the Hundred Beasts."(Kaido means slaughterer.) He invited him to his army. A few years later, he became one of the king's elite 10 soldiers.
The race of warriors had a highly sophisticated technology, and were always looking for dangerous lifeforms that provided them with a challenge throughout space. They were enjoying the feeling of triumph each and every time they find a stronger and more dangerous life form in space, but their king wasn't. He was possessed by an ominous feeling. He saw a threat in Kaido's potential. The night came, and the king was relaxing in his room, until he heard a knock on the door of his room,"your majesty, It's I, your faithful wizard. I can see from the look on your face that my prophecy has begun happening. It's the young man named Kaido, isn't it? He must be a survivor of that damned tribe." The king's expression changed from a calm look into a scowl. "If you let such man keep increasing his power level after each and every battle, he will grow strong and with his conceit, he will see to it that he rebels against you, to usurp your throne." "What you say is right, wizard, my sound advisor," agreed the king. Then he asked the wizard what was to be done about Kaido. The wizard said,"betray him before he betrays you, and you'll be safe from any harm he may intend to do to you." The king agreed, and they spent the whole night scheming.
The morning dawned, and the king arranged a party and sent for Kaido, who came gladly, not knowing the merciless trap that awaits him. He ate his fill, but fell unconscious because of the poisonous food. The king decreed the worst capital punishment over Kaido: to be put in a space capsule, and sent towards the blue star. While the science team was setting his destination up, Kaido regained consciousness; he found himself in a space capsule, and understood right away who was behind all of that, and all that awaits him is death, so he used Color of Conqueror Haki, and knocked every single one of them unconscious; such strong Haki caused a malfunction in the system, which caused a deviation from the ordained path. The capsule was sent into space. Kaido was cursing the king as his spacecraft dove deeper and deeper into the darkest corner of space. Not knowing how many days have elapsed, Kaido grew hungrier and thirstier beyond how anyone could ever imagine. The only thing that kept him clinging desperately to life was his great hatred towards the king.
Shortly after that, he suddenly was blinded momentarily by a bright light; it was the light of a beautifully blue planet. His space capsule began colliding with the planet's atmosphere and after a few minutes, it crashed on a winter island. His inhumane body and unfathomable level of Haki helped him survive the crash. He was in a terrible state, but he was quickly found and saved by a granny that lived for more than a century in that island. Soon after he was completely healed, he began his quest for power. He found the humans to be strongly interesting creatures. He conquered many island and came to be known as a younko. He slaughtered mercilessly whoever attempted to obstruct his path. He was slightly different than humans in appearance. One day, a pirate named DonQuixote Doflamingo approached him and offered him an offer he couldn't refuse: it was to create an army using artificial Devil Fruits. He agreed. He made an army of 500 DF user, but it wasn't enough. He needed more power to stand up to the king who betrayed him and caused him all the pain, suffering and humiliation. His intention is to build a humongous spacecraft and return to his home planet, to obliterate the kingdom and kill the king.
Don't want to sound mean, but too many elements from the Bible, Superman's Doomsday, Hulk, even One Piece's own plot reused and intermixed. Something more original would have made a better read.
Last edited by Schabrak; February 10, 2013 at 03:23 PM.
And the elements I used weren't exactly from the sources you referred to :P
Last edited by NEMO; July 21, 2013 at 09:24 PM.
Cue The Prince of Egypt soundtrack
In any case, it was ok for a fanfic. Kudos for putting in the time to write it.