I love the conversation, though I was surprised that I.Amaterasu suddenly appeared at the church. Did I already killed the exorcists who guarded the church? Are I.A. and I already in the church?
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Re: Chapter 11 - Within the darkness
well, the point is that I really can't end a story -> suprise: is something that a creative one can do. It doesn't matter how and when. About you and I.A. being already there, or excorsist being killed is something I left in the middle. The only choice I made was, making of opalo a distraction to something bigger. Th rest can be filled in by the next writer(s)
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I guess, how the last chapters are built, you have to remove the last sentence you wrote.
"Meanwhile our excorsists arrive at the church of Opalo. They can't believe their eyes..."
cause they are still in a restaurant. ^_^" and Magier and I.A. are on the way to the restaurant.