Shinigami-sama ni Saigo no Onegai wo 1

I did this for fun, and I'll admit that parts aren't worded really well. Also, I didn't enjoy the second chapter much, so I'm not sure if I'll continue... If you want to use it, pm me.


p1
A crime where juvenile law will not even be applied. He is given the death sentence according to extralegal measures.

judge: Defendant: Aida Shizuka!
judge: Even after taking into account the maximum penalty possible for a 16 year old...

judge: But due to the fact that the crimes you committed are far too inhumane, // I hereby...

judge: sentence you to the death penalty!
shizuka: On that day, my death was decided...


p2
shizuka: That's true though, I mean I
shizuka: did kill my entire family.

shizuka: My kind parents
shizuka: and even my cute little sister,
shizuka: I killed them all.


p3
box: Three days until execution...

shizuka: ...oh yeah, I wonder if they'll really ask me about my last meal,
shizuka: if they do, what should I get...

hibiki: I don't know about the last meal but,

hibiki: there is the "last wish".
box: The person who appeared in front of me...


p4
box: was Aida Hibiki, the little sister I killed.

red text: In the final moments of your life // what would you wish for!?

chapter 1


p5
shizuka: ...Hi- Hibiki? // You're alive?

hibiki: Yes, I'm Hibiki.
hibiki: But... I'm not alive.

hibiki: After I died I became a "shinigami".
* - I left shinigami untranslated... after Bleach I guess everyone knows what that means...
hibiki: Our job includes guiding the souls of people after they die, // and <i>relieving</i> people who have the largest regrets when death approaches.

hibiki: So!
hibiki: When I heard that Aida Shizuka was going to die soon, I came to visit you.

hibiki: We're not actually meant to be looking after friends or relatives, // but I forced them to assign me to you.
hibiki: Do you know why I would do that?
shizuka: No...


p6
hibiki: It was to make sure that you would go to hell,
hibiki: you murderer!

hibiki: You see, the person incharge is responsible for how the client is dealt with,
* - clients pay for services, so it doesn't really make sense, but I couldn't think of another word... lol...
hibiki: Which means, whether you go to hell or go to hell within hell, is totally dependant on me!

shizuka: ...I see, // guess that means I'm going to hell...

hibiki: That's right! You scared? You're scared, right!?
hibiki: It's what you deserve! Even after you die, you will continue to suffer!!


p7
shizuka: That's good.

hibiki: Nyaaahhhh!!

hibiki: Why are you always like that... you're always smirking and I never know what you're thinking.

hibiki: And all you do is read those disgusting books,
hibiki: or writing all that weird stuff you call a novel...

hibiki: ...but,


p8
shizuka: but?
hibiki: b- but...

hibiki: what I'm trying to say is that you're such an idiot that I just want to kick you!
hibiki: Ahh, that's enough, I'll deal with you later.

hibiki: Let's go!
shizuka: ...? Go where?

hibiki: Outside.
shizuka: Eh?


p9
box: There has been a report that the shounen A* who's death sentence was confirmed yesterday has escaped from prison.
* - lit. 'Boy A' but shounen A sounds so much better^^

box: As of now, the boy's whereabouts are still unknown,

box: After taking into account the danger involved, the police have announced they will be revealing the real name and the face of shounen A,

s: Hey, Hibiki... isn't this really bad?
h: It's alright, when we're done, I'll sent you back to where you came from.


p10
h: Ah, // we're here.
s: 'Here'... is?

h: It's my work! // I have another client here.
h: One of the conditions for me to be in charge of you was that I was forced to do more work.
girl: Thanks!

h: You know, a shinigami's other job: // the "last wish".
h: I told you when I met you right? Relieving people who have a large regret towards their death...

h: When a person dies and the regret they hold is too strong, there's a large possibility they'll become an "evil spirit". // In order to prevent that, we grant them one wish before they die.
h: That is, their "last wish".


p11
s: A "last... wish", huh?
h: Hmph... I'll say this beforehand, but-

s: A murderer like me doesn't have the right to one... right?

h: ...That's right,
h: isn't that obvious?

h: ...well then, time to meet my client.

asami: Hello~,
asami: ...umm, // who's there?


p12
h: You're Arisawa Asami-san, right?

h: My name is Hibiki, // a shinigame.
h: I have come here to grant your "last wish".

h: Unfortunately, in seven days time

h: you will die.
a: Eh?


p13
h: This might too sudden and you might not believe me, but...

a: ...no, my heart has always been weak, // and even the doctors tell me that I don't have long,

a: But putting that aside,
a: This profile... it's broad, but everything is correct. // And some of them... are things that only I'm supposed to know.
h: Then,

a: ...yeah,
a: It's a little disappointing,

a: but I believe you, shinigami-san.
h: ...that's good.


p14
h: Well then, let's get to the main topic, do you have something for your "last wish"?
a: ...well about that,

a: I actually have two and I'm stuck on which to choose.
h: ...two? I'm sorry, but I can usually only grant one. // How about you tell me them first?

a: The first is to find "someone", someone that I had wanted to meet before I die,
h: I see, that's a popular wish.

a: The other is a healthy body.
a: By finding "someone" doesn't mean that I just want to meet them, but I'd also like to talk to them a bit. // But with this body, it would be a bit hard...

a: ...okay, // I've decided.
a: I choose the healthy body.


p15
a: Actually I have an idea where the person I'm looking for is,
a: so I was thinking that if I get a healthy body, I may be able to find him.

h: Okay.
h: Just that even if it is a healthy body, the fact that you'll die in a week doesn't change.
a: Of course.

h: Then, take your clothes...

h: And you turn around!!


p16
a: Aha <3

a: Thank you so much! My body has never felt so light!

a: Alright! I'll get start preparing right away.
h: By the way, who was it that you're trying to find? A relative?
a: Ah, I haven't told yet, right?

a: I'm looking the person everyone's talking about now: // shounen A.


p17
h: The one that murdered his entire family three months ago, // and was a juvenile, but still got the death penalty?
a: That's right, the one who's on the run right now.

a: I think that he's innocent.

h: What?
h: ...What's that mean?

h: Wait a minute...
h: Do you have something to prove what you're saying?

a: Are you...
a: interested?


p18
a: With my body like this, I live my live staying at home and surfing the internet... // and then I became intrigued in the case.
a: Basically, this case is filled with mysteries.

a: Shounen A was born into an average family and lived with his parents and little sister,
a: His behaviour was always good, and there were no signs of being bullied.

a: But he ended up committing a crime,
a: and it seems like all they found at the crime scene was him holding the murder weapon and the remains of his slaughtered family.


p19
h: That's right! That's why it's obvious that he's the murderer, right?

a: While it's true that the boy admitted to the crime as soon as he was arrested.

a: but it's too quick. // Shounen A's death was decided in <i>only three months</i>,
a: and that's just not normal.

a: I can only conclude that "something special" happened.

h: But that alone isn't enough to prove his "innocence", right?
a: Yeah, // the main reason why I felt he was "innocent" is because of this "novel".
h: "Novel"?


p20
a: It's called "F".

a: It's a novel about family.

a: They say that shounen A wrote this novel before the incident occurred,
a: and they also say that it became the motive for the murders,

a: because at the end of the novel, the eldest son slaughters his entire family.


p21
h: Come with me!

h: Is that true...? That... you wrote that?

s: ...yeah, it's true.

h: So what happened? You got confused between the novel and reality?
h: And that's why you killed us?

s: ...th- that's

a: Umm... is everything alright?
a: Things start to get important from here onwards...


p22
a: I'll be blunt about this,
a: the person who wrote this is incapable of killing another person.

a: If you read it carefully, you know, // that this is just a <i>normal</i> novel.
a: There may be some crazy parts to it, // but overall the person who wrote it had everything planned out, and made a good novel.

h: B- But all these bizzare books about murder was found in shounen A's room...
a: While it's true that the news made a big fuss about that...

a: but I actually think it's the other way round.
a: You research books to learn about things that you <i>don't possess</i>...
h: But that's...


p23
a: ...umm, what about you? You've stayed quiet all this time,
a: what do you think?

s: ...I- I...

h: Answer her.
h: I'm also interested in hearing your opinion.

s: ... // I don't know.


p24
h: What do you mean you don't know?
h: You just have to choose one answer from two answers.

h: Do you think he did it?

h: Or do you think he didn't do it?

a: Well, well clam down.
h: Let go of me!

a: I'm gonna go and ask him in person right now.


p25
h: Oh yeah! You said you had an "idea" of where he was, right?
a: It's this.

h: Shounen A's... fansite!?
a: There are groups of people who worship him as their god, and they created this website.

box: Shounen A's escape: at last he has become god.
box: Expect more tragedies!
box: The police's reluctance to release his name and face: just what A-sama wanted.
a: And take a look at this article.
box: Successfully made contact with A-sama: agreed to participate in our office meeting tomorrow.


p26
h: No way...
h: I mean, Shounen A is right next to me.

a: I'm sure you probably think that this doesn't make sense,
a: but the one who wrote this article was the webmaster... he's in a position where you can't really make things up.

a: And either way, we'll at least get something out of this,
a: If things go well, we'll get to meet the real person, // if not, we'll at least get more information.

a: For example, // the real criminal behind the murders...

a: I may be rushing things a little, // but just stand around thinking about this.
a: I want to goto that office meeting!


p27
s: Can I go to the office meeting as well?

h: ...what are you thinking-
a: You really want to go!?

a: The truth is that I was actually a little scared to go by myself. // I'd feel much better if a man came with me.

h: ...umm... you guys...
a: Yeah?

a: Ah, don't tell me


p28
a: he's your boyfriend!?
h: No way!!!

h: How can that be possible!? And why would a shinigami have a something like a boyfriend?
a: I guess you're right... no matter how I look at him, he's a normal person, // but for some reason I sense this unusual connection between the teo of you.
h: Of course! That's because we're-

a: ...you're?
h: We're...

h: We... are...


p29
s: She disappeared!

h: This is the office? // I was forcefully teleported?
voice: Hi... biki...

h: ...huh, it's you?
girl: Hibiki~


p30
saya: Hi~bi~ki~

h: Sa-

h: Saya!
box: Hibiki's Superior
Shinigami Saya

saya: Hibiki... why did you change the person you're incharge of without asking?


p31
h: Never mind that, more importantly, send me back down below!
h: I think I may have found something out!!

saya: Be quiet!!

saya: Are you still worrying over things that happened while you were alive?
h: I want to know...

h: I want to know what happened...
h: As long as I know that, I won't complain anymore...

h: You know what happened, right!? Tell me!


p32
saya: I can't. Besides it's fundamental that a shinigami is prohibited from interferring with an individual's ideas and/or personal memories, // whether they be for good or bad purposes, bringing feelings into our work will only make it harder.

saya: And no matter how matter times you ask me, I don't know anything.
h: You're lying! You were the one incharge of me! There no way you wouldn't know anythi-
saya: Get a hold of yourself!!

saya: If you keep pursuing your previous memories, then I'll have no coice but to erase them.
saya: Please don't make me do that...

saya: However... We shinigami may not have the right to look into other people's memories... // but we also don't have the right to stop people talking about their memories.

saya: If you give me one day I should be able to make you officially incharge of him,
saya: but there's only two days left till you brother dies...


p33
saya: You only have around one day to do it, so make sure you talk to him.

h: Yes!

h: This is my last chance...
h: I have to ask him what happened...

h: Three months ago,
h: my memories of what happened...


p34
dad: Stop it Shizuka!!
h: What? ...dad's voice?

h: Dad!!?

h: ...Who's there? Who did this...
h: ...I can't stand up, my feet... feel weird.

h: Nooooo!!!!



p35
h: ...huh...? // The pain's gone... was it just a dream?
saya: No it wasn't.

saya: ...I'm sorry, but you're dead.
h: She's floating...

h: ...What's happening? ...Is that me?

h: Dad...

h: Mum...

h: Bro-... eh?


p36
h: You were the one
h: that did it?

h: I'll never forgive you.
h: I'll never forgive you. I'll never forgive you!!

h: ...And that's all I was thinking at that moment...

h: But as time passed on, I remembered...
h: He was always smirking about something and I never knew what he was thinking about...
h: And all he ever did was read those disgusting books...
h: or write all those weird articles he'd call a novel...
h: ...but


p37
h: he was kind...

h: I...
h: never hated him....

a: The murderer may have been a different person.
h: I need to ask him what happened.
h: Alright! The formalities are done!

h: Be back soon!
h: Right now he should be in that office meeting.


p38-39
h: What... the?

h: Everyone's... dead...


p40
(on my raw, this was the same as page 39)


p41
a: Kyaahh!

h: That voice! Asami!?

h: No way...

h: I don't even want to consider it.

h: It can't be...
h: There's no way, right!?


p42
s: ...Hi... Hibiki

h: What are you doing?
h: It's the same as what happened back then...


p43
a: Help me, Shinigami-san!!

a: He was Shounen A!! // My reasoning was wrong and he just went berserk!!
s: Wait...


p44
h: Shizuka!!
s: Hibiki!!?

s: Let go of me, Hibiki. Listen to me...
h: Shut up!

h: I don't want to hear anymore!!
h: Damn it! And I really wanted to believe in you!!

a: Aha <3 And this makes number seven.


p45



p46


p47
h: Eh... What's the meaning of this?

a: I'm sorry, shinigami-san...
a: I told a lot of lies.

a: First of all, my "last wish", that was a lie.
a: What I really wanted was...

a: "even if it's just once, I want to try killing someone"


p48
a: I basically have two hobbies, one is surfing the internet... and the other is playing online games. // Especially the ones where you do nothing but hunt are my favourites.
a: Hunt... // and hunt...
a: All I did was hunt.
a: And then eventually I wanted to "hunt" in the real world.

a: So, if I we're to go hunting, of course it would be people // I mean, there are 6 billion people, it wouldn't matter if a few were gone <3

a: ...but, I didn't want to cause trouble for my parents who I live.
a: So I thought that I'd stick to killing the useless people, and then pin it on someone else... but

a: in the end, all of it was just a dream. // I mean with my body like that...
a: But then, two strokes of good luck hit me!

a: A "healthy body",
a: and Shounen A's escape.


p49
a: And after adding these two conditions, my plan was almost perfect.
a: My target // would be those losers who worshipped a murderer.
a: The person to take the blame // would be Shounen A.
a: And I had the "healthy body" I needed to accomplish this.

a: After reading what was posted on that site, the police would definitely think that the murderer is Shounen A.

h: Wait a minute... // The messages posted on the site would just be a coincidence, right? // Things are never that convenient!

a: Ah, I'm sorry again, // that would be my second lie.

a: I'm actually the webmaster of that site.


p50
a: I wrote that "Successfully made contact with Shounen A" message when the two of you were outside.
a: But of course when I wrote that it was all fake.

a: And by the way, when he said that he'd accompany me, I was so happy...
a: that the single flaw in my plan had gone: in the case where Shounen A is arrested again before I took action, // but now I had another person to pin the murders on.

a: But right after you disappeared...
a: The police released Shounen A's face and name.

a: And when I realised that he was the person I was looking for,
a: I was about to go crazy at how lucky I was.


p51
a: And all I had left to do was put my targets to sleep...
a: and enjoy myself while doing it, but...

a: unexpectedly he actually protected them,
a: and when he took my weapon, I thought everything was over.

h: ...Shounen A's escape? // A healthy body?
h: When he took the weapon?
h: ...then doesn't that mean everything was my fault?

a: No, that's not true.


p52
a: It's all <i>thanks</i> to you that,
a: I was able to kill seven people.

a: Thank you very much for granting my wish before I died, shinigami-san <3

h: But...

h: Then that means what you said was also a lie? // That "shounen A was innocent"?


p53
a: Ahh... No, that was the truth.

a: I was able to comfirm that myself.
a: Because he actually tried to protect those pieces of garbage.

a: If you had been with him a little more, you probably would've realised it as well. // There's no way that boy could kill a person.

h: ...I

h: I... // already knew that right from the start...


p54
s: ...Hi- Hibi...ki

a: Huh!?
a: You're still alive? I do feel a little bad for killing such a nice person, // but it makes me feel even worse that I've failed to kill you.

a: Wha-!?

h: I've canceled your "last wish".
h: You body's back to the disabled one you had beofre.


p55
s: ...Hi ...Hibiki
h: Yes?

s: I- I'll tell you... what happened then...

s: On that day, the mornings were... just like every other day... // Everything was normal...
s: But... once night fell...

s: I... don't know...

s: I don't have any memories at all of what happened that night...


p56
s: The next thing I remember... is being arrested by the police.

h: You should've just told what you just said to the police! // Why did you admit to doing it?

s: They never asked me anything. // Evidence, motives, juvenile laws... almost none of that was even mentioned. // And even the investigations and trials were done on the premise that I was the murderer...

s: And since I had no memories of anything...
s: I just... began to believe that I really was the murderer.

h: ...It's
h: It's my fault.
s: Hi- Hibi...ki?

h: I was so convinced that you were the murderer back then,
h: and as my "last wish" I wanted...


p57
h: you to recieve the greatest punishment possible!

h: ...but I kept thinking back to what happened... I just had to ask you...
s: I see... Now I get it.

s: Hibiki, I don't know what actually happened yet, but I want you to believe me...
s: I loved my family. // I would never wish for the deaths of our family!


p58
h: I know, onii-chan!
h: because you're my brother.

h: Together, we'll find the truth.
s: Yeah...

h: It's a promise, onii-chan.
s: Okay...


p59
(blank)


p60-61
a: Aha <3 // Now that <i>definitely</i> makes number seven.


p62
h: N-

h: NOOOOOO!!!!


end.