Hiya! This is my very first post on this forum, so I hope I get this right.

This is my version of chapter 216. Not for Scanlation. I took liberties with Hiyori's thick accent in an effort to make it pronounced and notable, but I feel I've done badly in that area. I would greatly appreciate any feedback from fellow Bleach translators.

Originally posted yesterday on the LiveJournal community "soul_society" under my username "rukia."

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...虚化...!
Ichigo: ...she's gone Hollow...!
お...おいおいおい!!
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