Mushibugyo 3

Thanks, Hopefully I can get back to releasing this series

My suggested changes are bolded. Good job!

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01

Man: Faster, go faster dammit!
Man: I'm going as fast as I can, boss!

Man: Shit, it's caught up!


02

Title: Camp #3: Hibachi and Jinbee


03

Hibachi: ...huh?
Where's this...?

Hibachi: !!!
M-mugai-san!

Hibachi: U-um, Mugai-san!

Hibachi: ...Eh?

Mugai: Today's job
Was an easy one.


04

Mugai: ...Also, when you bring your sword down, make sure to keep your sides shut.
Jinbee: Yes! Thank you for your guidance!

Hibachi: Gyaaaa
Aaaaaah!!

Hibachi: ....A...
A nightmare...

Hibachi: Just one thing after another...


05

Hibachi: Tsukishima Jinbee..!!
It's all his fault!!

Jinbee: ....Phew!
Good!

Hibachi: Aw, man!
Could this morning get any worse?!

Jinbee: Good morning Hibachi-dono!
Shall we start our patrol?


06

Jinbee: Oh, my sincerest apologies.
I see you were in the middle of changing.

Jinbee: Take your time, I shall be waiting outside.

Hibachi: You pervert!!
Jinbee: Guaah!

Hibachi: .....
..Oh yeah, that's right...
I forgot...


07

Hibachi: Starting today, I'll be doing my job
Together with him

Jinbee: Heh heh heh... patrolling city streets...
The cornerstone of government work.

Jinbee: Alright! I, Tsukishima Jinbee, will give this mission my all!!
Handwritten: Father! Mother!
Hibachi: You, stop that! (handwritten) And shut up!


08

Hibachi: ...Jeez.
Why am I the one stuck babysitting the newbie?
Jinbee: Bugs!
Where're the bugs?

Box: The previous day...

Kotori: Hey, Hibachi-kun, Jinbee-kun!
During the regular patrols tomorrow, I want you two to pair up, okay?

Jinbee: Really?!
Handwritten: Finally!
Hibachi: Absolutely not! Why me?!

Kotori: So Jinbee-kun can familiar himself with the town and our job, of course.
After all, it's the seniors' duty to guide our newcomers.

Shungiku: Kah Kah! Lucky you!
You're a senior now!
Handwritten: I'm jealous!

Kotori: Don't you worry, I'll be having Jinbee-kun pair up with each and every one of you in the future!
Shungiku handwritten: Urk!
Hibachi: Sigh...


09

Jinbee: Hibachi-dono, if I may!

Jinbee: For today I am your humble student!
Please regard me kindly!

Hibachi: ...I
Hate weaklings.

Hibahi: ...Tsukishima, right?
Your idiotic way of fighting and your stupid reliance on strength is beyond dumb.

Hibachi: Let's get one thing straight.
I hate you.
And in no way do I consider you a friend, or even a colleague.


10

Jinbee: Alright!
Then I'll grow stronger until you feel I am worthy!

Hibachi: ...Jeez...
What's your problem...?

Jinbee: Oooh, Mugai-dono!
Thank you for your hard work!

Hibachi: ...Ah.

Hibachi: M...
Mugai-san...


11

Hibachi: M-M-M-M-Mugai-san!
G-G-G-Good work t-t-today!

Jinbee: ....
Hibachi-dono?

Hibachi: Sigh...

Hibachi: He's so cool...
Handwritten: Swoon


12

Jinbee: What? You think so too?!
Hibachi: Wah?!

Hibachi: ...Hmm.
I get it. So you admire Mugai-san too...

Jinbee: Too?

Hibachi: Hmph.
I do too!


13

Hibachi: I was scouted by Kotori-san, who brought me here from the hidden village of my clan. About one year ago.

Hibachi: On my very first mission
I was saved by Mugai-san.

Hibachi: It was the first time I'd ever met someone so strong.

Hibachi: One day, I'm going to become so strong that even he will acknowledge me.
And I'll be sure to return the favor from that day!

Jinbee: ...!!
Hibachi-dono is the same as me...

Hibachi: It's for that reason that I've learned all I can about bugs
And practiced my clan’s arts and skills to the point of puking blood.

Hibachi: Oh!
Did you know? Mugai-san actually owns an entire array of weapons, not just that big sword!
Jinbee: Really?!


14

Hibachi: He's called "Mushikari"
Because he uses parts from especially tough bugs he's killed to make weapons!
Jinbee: Really? Really?!

Hibachi: Yeah, apparently a lot of the people in the office used to work in smiths and iron casting factories.
Jinbee: I see!
Indeed!


15

Hibachi: Wait, why the hell am I getting all excited with you for?!
Jinbee: Gyaboh!

Jinbee: ...Hi, Hibachi-dono?

Hibachi: Don't get any funny ideas, Tsukishima.
That nightmare from last night...

Hibachi: Was his fault too!
Because I saw Mugai-san talk to him!!

Hibachi: But...
Handwritten: Awawa

Hibachi: But Mugai-san has never
Started a conversation with me!!


16

Hibachi: And I'm much stronger than him, too...
Never...

Hibachi: I'll never acknowledge
An idiot like you!!

Man: Ugyaaaah!!

Man: Ah... aaaah....
Jinbee: !!
What's wrong?!


17

Jinbee: A bug attack?! (I have no idea what he's actually saying here...)

Hibachi: This... this is!

Hibachi: Not good! And it's evening now!
You two, get away from this river! This is its territory!

Jinbee: Hibachi-dono, what is-

Hibachi: .... It comes.


18 (For these next 3 pages I'm posting an alt trans in brackets after the lines I feel it's needed. They're a more accurate trans, but doesn't work as well in English and require some explaining)

Hibachi: The
"Blue Dragonfly" ["Blue Oniyanma"]


19

Hibachi: Belonging to the family of dragonflies, the blue dragonfly is an extremely territorial bug that makes its home around small rivers. [Belonging to the family of dragonflies, just like regular Oniyanma it's an extremely territorial bug that makes its home around small rivers."]
It rests during the day and comes out at dusk, when it’s cooler, to search for food.

Jinbee: Amazing!
Knowledgeable as always Hibachi-dono!

Hibachi: ...I'd at least know that much.
Because...

Hibachi: My first mission
Involved one of these things, too!

Hibachi: Tsukishima.
You get the two of them out of here.

Jinbee: B-but Hibachi-dono, you cannot fight alo-
Hibachi: ...Heh heh. A perfect opportunity.


20

Hibachi: This time
I'm gonna bring you down myself!!

Hibachi: Get going Tsukishima!

Jinbee: ...!!
Be careful, Hibachi-dono!!

Hibachi: Let's dance "blue dragon"!! [Let's dance "blue demon"!! (She calls it "oni" from "oniyanma"... and I'm sure most of you know oni means demon)]


21

Hibachi: One year ago, on my first mission...

Hibachi: I was a miserable failure.

Hibachi: I was so scared, all I could do
Was shake like a leaf behind Mugai-san...!

Hibachi: Happa Jutsu, first form... (Blasting technique, one)

Hibachi: Ajisai Dama!! (Hydrangea Grenades)


22

Bug: GISHAAAAA!!

Hibachi: ...But

Hibachi: I'm completely different now
From the me back then!!

Bug: GIYAAAAH!!

Hibachi: Hmph, it's over!!
I'm going to beat this monster on my own

Hibachi: And prove
My strength!


23

Hibachi: Wha-?!

Hibachi: H, he dodged?!

Hibachi: I can't believe I forgot...
Dragonflies can move freely in all directions, and even stop mid-air, all the while flying at top speed, which is around 100 km /h...


24

Hibachi: It's the most
Agile creature in the world!!

Hibachi: ...Hmph!
Perfect!

Hibachi: !!!
My explosives are drenched...!!

Hibachi: Cra-!


25

Bug: GISHAAAA!!

Hibachi: .....Ah.

Hibachi: M...
Mugai-sa...


26

Jinbee: Are you hurt Hibachi-dono?!

Hibachi: ...Tsu!
Tsukishima?!

Jinbee: I did as you asked and evacuated the couple!

Jinbee: Now then, let's go!!
Hibachi: Ho-hold it!!

Hibachi: I'm going to defeat that thing on my own!
And prove that I've grown strong...!

Hibachi: If... if I do that...
Then, I'm sure...


27

Hibachi: I'm sure that even Mugai-san
Will acknowledge me!

Jinbee: ....
No!

Jinbee: These missions
are no place for proving one's strength!!

Jinbee: I do not know much about you, Hibachi-dono.

Jinbee: But if Mugai-dono were here
I'm sure he would have said the same thing.

Jinbee: ...You realize, do you not, Hibachi-dono?


28

Jinbee: Just why we both
Admire Mugai-dono's earnest strength!

Hibachi: ...Hmph.
You talk pretty big for a newbie.

Hibachi: What, d'you think you know
Mugai-san better than I do?


29

Hibachi: Come on, Tsukishima!
Time to work!!
Jinbee: Yes!

Jinbee: Uoooh!

Jinbee / Hibachi: Ooooooh!!


30

Jinbee / Hibachi: Joujuu Senjin plus
Higi, Kodachi Senka!! (Short sword secret art, one thousand blossoms!! ...or something. I dunno.)

Hibachi: Tsukishimaaa, it's a little lukewarm.
Jinbee: Yes, one moment!

Hibachi: ....Phew.
I'm exhausted.


31

Couple: Um...
Thank you so much!

Kotori: Good work Hibachi-kun!
I can always rely on you!

Shungiku: Whoa!
Good goin'!

Hibachi: Giggle... of course!

Hibachi: .......Well..
I guess he's not half bad...

Jinbee: Ooh, Mugai-dono!
Has your day been good?!

Hibachi: Wha?!

Mugai: .......Yeah.
Jinbee: I see!
Rest well tonight!!

Jinbee: Aaaalright!
I have to grow even stronger!!


32

Jinbee: Oh, Hibachi-dono!!
Let's both work hard and do our best to make Mugai-dono acknowledge us!

Box: Hibachi's statement reads as follows: "Why do you get to talk to Mugai-dono like you're fast friends, huuuuuuuuuuuuuh??".
Jinbee: ...Er?

Hibachi: ....!!
I'll never

Hibachi: Acknowledge an idiot like you!!
Jinbee: Gyabofuh?!