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Case: 1 地獄の処方箋 (Hell’s Prescription)
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Page 01
Yuko：肌をくすぐる爽やかな風
The brisk wind tickling your skin
Yuko：ビタミンDをつくる眩しく燃える太陽
The brightly burning sun creating vitamin D
Yuko：う―――――ん
Mmmmmmm
Yuko：それにしても今日はいい天気ね
Even so, what a nice day
Bottom right vertical text above logo：「学園黙示録HIGHSCHOOL OF THE DEAD」の作者が新境地に挑む！！
The author of “Campus Apocalypse: High School of the Dead” challenges a new frontier!!
Below logo：佐藤ショウジ
Sato Shouji
Page 02 + Page 03
Miki：ちょっと友子・・・・・・いい加減にしてよね
Hey, Yuko.....could you get your act together?
Yuko：マジメねえ美姫
You’re so serious, Miki
Yuko：気分だけでもいいじゃない
You should be enjoying this feeling
Yuko：どうせ今日は主任いないんだし
Anyway, the boss isn’t here today
Yuko：たまに光合成しないといろんな所が腐っちゃうわよ
And lots of parts of you will rot if you don’t photosynthesize every once in a while
Miki：いろんな所・・・・・・とりあえずあなたの頭の中ね
“Lots of parts”......like the inside of your head, for starters
Miki：いいお薬知ってるわよ！
I know some good medicine for that!
Miki：さてもうじき配置完了オーダー出して頂戴ドクター
Now then, deployment will be complete soon. Give out the orders, Doctor
Yuko：はいはい
Alrighty
Yuko：三神クン？
Mikami-kun?
Page 04
Arashi：―――ON CALL
-----ON CALL
Arashi：美琴と共に待機中です
I am standing by with Mikoto
Yuko：ラベルはブラック・・・・・・いいわね？
The label is black......got it?
Arashi：はい
Yes
Page 05
Cluster of text at top：奴等の前に立たされた者は全ての希望を捨てなければならない・・・・・・
Those who find themselves standing before these guys must abandon all hope......
Title at bottom：Case:1 地獄の処方箋
Case:1 Hell’s Prescription
Page 06 + Page 07
No text
Page 08 + Page 09
Mikoto：ハハッ
Haha!
Mikoto：ブン回せっ
Crank it hard
Mikoto：危険状態だガーッといくぜ
The situation is critical, let’s get a move on
Mikoto：嵐
Arashi
Page 10
Yuko：門まで５０ｍ
50 meters until they’re at the gate
Yuko：オープンファイア
Open fire
Miki：了解
Roger
Yuko：お――
Oooo
Yuko：お――
Oooo
Yuko：上手
Very nice
Yuko：上手
Very nice
Page 11
Gate busting
Page 12
Yuko：門突破
They’ve broken through
Yuko：あとは新人君のお手並み拝見かしら
Now, I suppose all that’s left is to see the new guy’s skills
Miki：間違いはないわ
And see them we shall
Miki：望月理事長が選んだんだもの
After all, it was Chairman Mochizuki who selected him
Yuko：さーて
Now then
Yuko：このあと15時から第3オペ室よよろしくね
After this I’ll see you in operating room 3 at 3 pm
Page 13
Yuko：患者がお待ちかねよ
Let’s head back
Yuko：帰りましょう
Our patient is expecting us
Miki：えっ今日オペ無い日でしょ！？
Huh? There aren’t any operations today, are there!?
Miki：それって私もなの！？午後はオフのはず・・・
And I have to go, too!? I’m supposed to have the afternoon off...
Yuko：残念ねえ急患なのよ
Sorry, but it’s an emergency patient
Yuko：美姫が麻酔してくれなきゃどうやってオペしたらいいの？痛いわよ？ 患者さん
And how am I supposed to operate if you don’t administer anesthesia? The patient would be in a lot of pain
Miki：・・・あなたまた知ってたのねどおりで今のうちに休んでおこうなんて・・・
...You knew about this, didn’t you? No wonder you were all about relaxing...
Miki：でもここは放っていいの？
But is it okay to just leave?
Yuko：柩には事前に指示を出してあるわ
Hitsugi has been given her orders
Page 14
Yuko：彼女は優秀な看護婦だもの
She’s an exceptional nurse
Yuko：きちんと「処置」してくれるわ
She’ll administer a proper “treatment”
Yuko：オペ・レコードも任せちゃったし
Besides, I’m leaving the operation record to her
Miki：最低！
You’re the worst!
Page 15
Yuko：は~~い回診の時間ですよ～～
Alrighty, time to make your rounds
Mikoto：嵐！曲がって突き当たりのドアだ
Arashi! Turn, it’s the door at the end
Arashi：！！
!!
Page 16
Mikoto：ちょっ
Hey!
Mikoto：バカヤロ・・・
Idiot...
Mikoto：ったくゥ
Dammit
Mikoto：しょうがねえな
No choice now
Page 17
No text
Page 18
Yakuza：おいっ誰かっ早く来い！
Hey! Someone! Come quick!
Yakuza：ワシを誰か分かってるのか・・・・・・
Do you know who I am......?
Yakuza：なっ何だ・・・貴様はっ
W-who...are you?
Arashi：悪性腫瘍「荒波秀夫」・・・この街から切除する
Aranami Hideo, you are a malignant tumor...I will excise you from this city
Arashi：お前は今日ここで病巣として消えてなくなる
You are a source of disease and will vanish here today as such
Yakuza：どこの組の・・・
What group are you fr-
Arashi：ラベルカラーはブラックだどのみちお前は救えない
The color of your label is black, you cannot be saved
Arashi：しかし
However
Arashi：もしお前が人としての死を望むなら
If you wish to die as a human being
Arashi：この弾をやる
I will give you this bullet
Page 19
Yakuza：！？
!?
Mikoto：なんばしょっとかァ
The hell’re you doin’?
Mikoto：アラシッ
Arashi
Yakuza：この馬鹿野郎が
You fucking moron
Yakuza：死ねえ
Die
Page 20
Arashi：やはりお前に施す治療はない
As I thought, there is no treatment for you
Arashi：レベル０ブラックだ
You are level 0 black
Page 21
Mikoto：嵐
Arashi
Mikoto：お前一体何して・・・・・・
What the hell were you......
Arashi：・・・・・・・・・
.........
Page 22
Mikoto：帰るぞヘタクソッ
You suck, we’re going back
Mikoto：やっぱりお前にバイクは任せられねー
And I obviously can’t leave the driving to you
Mikoto：帰りはお前がケツだからなっ
So you’re riding bitch on the way back
Page 23
Mikoto：おッ
Oh
Oriha：いっえーい ♪
Noooo Prooooblem ♪
Mikoto：バカオリハ！
Oriha you idiot!
Mikoto：火薬多すぎだぞっ
That was way too much gunpowder
Oriha：enブロックってやつだよお
It’s called “en bloc”*
MARGIN NOTE: *French for “all at once”. In medical terms, it means to remove a tumor (or other problem area) and all the surrounding tissue/area.
Page 24 + Page 25
Sign：望月総合病院
Mochizuki General Hospital
Page 26
Arashi：・・・・・・・・・
.........
Mikoto：・・・・・・・・・
.........
Page 27
Mikoto：なァ嵐よ
Hey Arashi
Mikoto：お前あの時・・・
About back there...
Mikoto：・・・・・・・・・
.........
Mikoto：聞いてんのかーっ
Are you listening to me?
Mikoto：大体オマエコケてんじゃねーよ！！
And don’t be falling off of the damn bike!!
Mikoto：下手コキやがって
Fuckin’ screwin’ up all over
Arashi：ん
Mm
Arashi：ああ
Yeah
Arashi：すまん
Sorry
Arashi：あの時 考え事してたんだ
I was thinking about something back there
Mikoto：あの段でかよっ
At that stage in the op!?
Mikoto：・・・ったく
...Geez
Mikoto：18時からミーティング
There’s a meeting at 6
Mikoto：遅れんじゃねーぞっ
Don’t be late
Arashi：ああ
Okay
Page 28 + Page 29
Black text top：望月総合病院理事長
Chairman of Mochizuki General Hospital
Black text bottom：望月正宗
Mochizuki Masamune
Page 30 + Page 31
Black text top：望月病院院長
Director of Mochizuki Hospital
Black text bottom：フィオナ・蘭・ウインチェスター
Fiona Ran Winchester
Text：梨田織葉
Nashida Oriha
Text：木場美琴
Kiba Mikoto
Text：柩小夜
Hitsugi Sayo
Text：剣美姫
Tsurugi Miki
Text：狭霧友子
Sagiri Yuko
Text：三神嵐
Mikami Arashi
Page 32
Sign above head：望月総合病院
Mochizuki General Hospital
Arashi：・・・・・・ッ
......
SFX：ゴリ
Gulp
Bottom text black：ドラゴンエイジ
Dragon Age
Bottom text white：6月号につづく
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I looked at your translation, and I think it's really great ^^ I liked the way you translated this chapter, it flows really well while keeping the original atmosphere ^^ Your understanding of Japanese is quite good too, which is very cool ^^
I have just a few comments, though, if you may:
Page 01
Yuko：それにしても今日はいい天気ね
Despite all that, it’s still a nice day
-> Either way, what a nice day!
Page 12
Yuko：あとは新人君のお手並み拝見かしら
Now I wonder if we’ll get a look at the new guy’s skills
-> Now, all we have to do is to get a look at the new guy’s skills.
Miki：間違いはないわ
Undoubtedly
-> He won't fail.
Miki：望月理事長が選んだんだもの
Chairman Mochizuki did select him
-> After all, it was Chairman Mochizuki who selected him.
Page 14
Yuko：オペ・レコードも任せちゃったし
I’m leaving the operation record to you, too
-> Besides, I left the operation record to her.
Page 18
Arashi：もしお前が人としての死を望むなら
If you wish to die as a person
-> " If you wish to die as a human being" seems to be a bit better, but perhaps that's a matter of opinion ^_-
Page 23
Oriha：enブロックってやつだよお
It’s called “en bloc”*
MARGIN NOTE: *French for “all at once”.
-> I think you should also cite that it's used as a medical jargon ^^
Thank you for taking an interest in my work, and thank you for taking the time to read it and offer advice/corrections, I really appreciate it. I implemented most of what you said (noted below) but I was wondering if you could offer some more detailed explanations about some other ones? I've copy pasted your suggestions below with my comments below. If you have the time, it would be very much appreciated and be a great learning experience.
Page 01
Yuko：それにしても今日はいい天気ね
Despite all that, it’s still a nice day
-> Either way, what a nice day!
-->Could explain why you chose 'either way' over what I had? My Jp-Jp dictionary gives me そうであろうと, and alc.co.jp gives me "at any rate // but still // but then // by any measure // even so // switching gear(s)". My understanding here is that it's kind of an ironic statement in that she isn't really enjoying those aspects (which most people would enjoy), but she is, overall, enjoying the weather. I usually think of 'either way' in a situation like the following: "You can go or you can stay here, but either way, you need to make a decision.". Perhaps "Even so, what a nice day"?
Page 12
Yuko：あとは新人君のお手並み拝見かしら
Now I wonder if we’ll get a look at the new guy’s skills
-> Now, all we have to do is to get a look at the new guy’s skills.
-->I'm at a loss on this one. My version doesn't properly account for the "あとは”, but the one you suggested doesn't properly account for the "かしら”. I'm not really sure what to do here as I'm pretty sure the next line is the answer to a question/supposition/hypothetical, especially considering the line that follows it. For now I'm going to change it to "Now, I wonder if we’ll get a look at the new guy’s skills? That's all that's left". Let me know if you can think of anything better.
Miki：間違いはないわ
Undoubtedly
-> He won't fail.
-->I'm not sure about this one. I think Miki is answering Yuko's "kashira", and looking at the examples on alc: link to alc and this one (which is 間違いない） another link to alc, I thinkwhat I had works. What I thought was that Miki was replying to Yuko's hypothetical about seeing the new guy's skills, and that she meant sort of "of course we will, I mean, chairman mochizuki did select him, after all" (see below). I think if it was "he won't fail" or he won't make a mistake", the line would be closer to "しくじない” or "心配はしないわ” or "間違えない” (from the transitive verb "machigaeru" to make a mistake or to mistake something). Let me know what you think.
Miki：望月理事長が選んだんだもの
Chairman Mochizuki did select him
-> After all, it was Chairman Mochizuki who selected him.
--> I have a hard time justifying the after all without a "nani shiro" or a "yappari", but thinking about it neither of those really fit, so I'm going to change it to what you suggested as it does flow a lot better. Thanks.
Page 14
Yuko：オペ・レコードも任せちゃったし
I’m leaving the operation record to you, too
-> Besides, I left the operation record to her.
-->Thanks, that's definitely a lot better.
Page 18
Arashi：もしお前が人としての死を望むなら
If you wish to die as a person
-> " If you wish to die as a human being" seems to be a bit better, but perhaps that's a matter of opinion ^_-
-->I debated that a lot, too, as I would look more for the word "ningen" to mean human, but I think in the end it does sound better with human being, so I switched it over.
Page 23
Oriha：enブロックってやつだよお
It’s called “en bloc”*
MARGIN NOTE: *French for “all at once”.
-> I think you should also cite that it's used as a medical jargon ^^
--> good idea. added.
I changed most of the stuff in the translation above, even the stuff that we're discussing here. If we come up with something better, I'll just change it again.
Once again thanks so much for your help and time, if you could look at those top 3 or 4 that'd be great.
BK
You make some very interesting questions! ^^ Let me answer them.
1) Yuko：それにしても今日はいい天気ね
Despite all that, it’s still a nice day
-> Either way, what a nice day!
-->Could explain why you chose 'either way' over what I had?
The "それにしても", in this case, is Yuko summing up her feelings. It's not something ironic. She was really enjoying the sun and the wind. So, perhaps a better alternative would be something like "Really, what a nice day!"
2) Yuko：あとは新人君のお手並み拝見かしら
Now I wonder if we’ll get a look at the new guy’s skills
-> Now, all we have to do is to get a look at the new guy’s skills.
-->I'm at a loss on this one.
Okay, perhaps if we think a bit more literally, it'll be easier to grasp the meaning: "What is left? To get a look at the new guy's skills, right?"
The "かしら", while being a structure that evokes a question, it's also used in a similar way to a question tag. Therefore, the sentence is an assertion, actually. She has no doubt that she'll get a look at the new guy's skills.
3) Miki：間違いはないわ
Undoubtedly
-> He won't fail.
-->I'm not sure about this one. I think Miki is answering Yuko's "kashira" (...) What I thought was that Miki was replying to Yuko's hypothetical about seeing the new guy's skills, and that she meant sort of "of course we will, I mean, chairman mochizuki did select him, after all" (see below).
Yes, your interpretation is right. But using "undoubtedly" in this context gives an impression that Miki is referring to the possibility of seeing the guy's skills, which is not the case, since Yuko makes an assertion - it's not a possibility, it's a certainty. And Miki is emphasizing that certainty.
So, her "間違いはないわ" could be understood as something like "there was no mistake (in sending him to do this work)".
The questions you raised are very well put and I'm really glad to see a good translator like you here at MH ^^