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Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 18

Thu, 29 Sep 2011 02:12:48 +0000

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Springs have such a wonderful mechanic to them. The molecules of the metal resist any change to their structure, but the overall structure is quite flexible. So, when you pull on a spring, it tries to maintain its shape by pulling back. Then, with the spring a million machines sprung forth from its properties. Imagine a world where the spring never existed. Such a world would be so alien from the one we have now.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 18
Title: Lyrical Night Fright

page 1

1. You did well...

2. ......

3. The "police" / has arrived.

4. I am finished with the crime scene.

5. Now how about we begin the witness questioning?

page 2

Title: Lyrical Night Fright

name:
Rulebook of Sentencing and Exectution

unit:
Killing Goods

author:
!Justice Nakajima
<- original
"The Lawful Savage" Garibaldi

skill:
!Conditional Murder
<-tips: Death by hanging can only be executed if the following 2 conditions are satisified.
The target must be commiting a felony level crime. (The judgement is based on the level of the offense)
There needs to be edivence that catches the criminal red-handed.

page 3

1. There is more to the play.

2. The Queen, Zewulfa, went insane.

3. When a black haired girl is seen, she was called out as a reincarnation of the detestable witch and executed. / From there, her actions only escalated up.

4. Extortion, / dehumanization, / tortue.
TL note: PR, shorter word for dehumanization?

page 4

1. The queen herself became a murderer. / She looked follow to slaughtering those girls... It didn't take long for her to wish for it to continue forever.

2. The original system of the Goods and Queen came from this. / Later on, Gossip took to managing it.

3. Violet Witchie...

4. was it?

5. I am sorry. / ...For doing such an regrettable thing to him.

page 5

1. Regrettable, you say?

2. Yes. / I believe it so.
TL note: Trying to go for high class late 1800 victorian speech.

3. I sympathize for both the Killing Good Authors and the Hair Queen's dilemma.

4. But, all I do is mournfully make the decisions.

5. We, / the blood relatives of "Witchie" form Gossip.

6. My father's fathers has done this for generations ever since the beginning.
TL note: reTL

page 6

1. ..."Witchie"

2. "Witch?"

3. So, everything of the "Queen" is bad, is it?

4. I saw the play. / If maybe, just maybe all that was true,

5. then assuming the curse is what it is,

6. the queen isn't what she is, is she?
TL note: reCheck

page 7

page 8

1. Stop!

2. Don't take away my important person from me!

page 9

1. Don't do what you did to him...

2. to Kiri...

3. Weren't you in a cage?

4. To have met

5. like this...

page 10

1. Sorry for being so rude.

2. Today was supposed to have been a peaceful night.

page 11

page 12

1. That much is the same as what the Byouinzaka sisters said... / Though It was very public... We were not able to see the crime commited.
TL note: I believe the 2nd part is where she is reciting where their stories are the same.

2. Really now?

a. Where did the Professor go at a time this?

3. Thank you. / Later, I'll deal with the officiers, okay?

page 13

1. Even if psychological shock is an after-effect of suffocation, your's seem worse than normal, so / anything happens, please inform a doctor.

2. ......

3. What about you, Ms. Kozakura?

4. This must be hard on you, right? / I mean... Umm...

5. Didn't you like that guy or something?

page 14

a. AHAHA HAHA HA

1. No, / not at all.

b. Really?

2. Right. You're just Middle Schoolers. / An adult woman isn't that simple minded.

c. You are still young

3. Adult?

4. It's just...

5. ...Yeah. / He was like the troublesome little brother.

page 15

1. He always acted out so terribly mischievously... Didn't he?

2. He always, constantly made me worried.

3. ...Aah.

4. He did kill people, so / saying this may seem out of place, but...

5. But, I kept chasing after him, and he kept choking me at the neck, / while making a sour face as he ran away.

a. Agah!

b. Tch

6. I honestly found our relationship quite nice.

page 16

1. But it seems our little story together has ended, hasn't it?...

page 17

1. This was the first time I saw someone died...

2. ...Yeah...

3. I have seen the murder scene a little while ago, but... / it must've been very different.

4. Yeah... Right before my eyes, a perfectly still corpse appeared...

page 18

1. Even though just a little while before that, he was such a strong and talkative person...

2. He told me his final words...

3. It was something detestable, but

4. I am honestly quite similiar to him.

5. When I met you, / I felt so grateful that you brandish a pair of scissors that I loathed up till then.

6. I was shaking in joy.

page 19

1. So, when another person completely hits the mark, it's a little annoying.
TL note: reCheck

2. How I got high on the power of Killing Goods like him...

3. Aah... So, that is how you were able to jump so easily.

4. All of this is just so new.

5. yeah...

6. It is overwhelming.

7. Since someone so similiar could die as such,

8. I wonder if I keep using the Killing Goods,

9. would the same happen to me one day?

page 20

1. If I were to die... I wouldn't be able to cut your hair.

2. I would be so lonely.

3. Yeah...

4. I'm scared too.

5. If I died... I wouldn't be able to do anything with you anymore.

page 21

1. I want you to keep cutting my hair.

2. There's so much I want to say. I want you to always be with me.

3. All these emotions are just spilling out of me.

4. I'm scared.

5. I'm really scared.

page 22

1. There isn't any point / in trying to comfort her by saying, "Everything will be okay."

2. Yeah... / I can't even convince myself of it.

3. I'm the same, full of fear.

page 23

1. I want to touch this girl.

2. touch this body full of hair.

3. I feel a little weird trying to force myself into isolation...
TL note: reCheck

4. But, surely following these emotions is the right thing to do. / For Iwai as well.

5. I won't have another oppuntunity like this again, so / before I die...

page 24-25

1. Allow me to profess my feelings.

page 26

1. ...Kiri...

2. ...Lay still.

page 27

1. SFX: smooch

2. SFX: suck

3. SFX: lick

page 28

1. SFX: lick

2. I love your hair.

3. That is the honest truth.

4. But, / But, you see

page 29

1. It's more like / a simple love affair with you.
TL note: I cannot decide if I want to include the last two words or not... It is just a which one would be better thing... I can't decide.

2. ...Yeah, / I know.
TL note: remember when princess leia told han solo, she loved him? No? well, this line is what han solo said.

page 30

page 31

page 32

page 33

1. I can't... / the forehead is as far as I can go...

2. Kiri...

page 34

a. She's kneeing?!

1. I...

2. I will...

3. and my lips will wait, so

4. At the very least, until then

5. Please don't die!

b. ......

page 35

1. ...Ye

2. Yes!

3. aah...

page 36

1. I am happy.

2. The one I like, / the one I love,

3. Stop

4. Ehe

5. eheheh

6. Kiri

7. I pray from the bottom of my heart, he'll stay by my side. / Maintaining our love forevermore.

page 37

1. Once its morning, I'll get dressed.

2. Crouching down, I'll welcome in that person with all my love and care.

3. Then, I'll get my hair cut.

4. ngh...

5. Everyday, this hair that grows in bed...

6. This excessively long hair...

7. My cursed hair...

page 38

1. Huh?

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 17

Thu, 29 Sep 2011 01:53:09 +0000

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I guess if I can't get a cleaner I might as well keep doing this. This would be more fun with a cleaner...

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 17
Title: Party Checker

page 1

1. Oh. / What is this appaling black hair?

2. So beautiful. So desirable.

3. You jest, My Queen. / I am but a simple village girl. / Yours is far far better.

4. No, No, I shall not listen to the words of a witch. / You were in the forest performing some sort of strange spell.

page 2

1. A play...

2. Along side a dinner party.

3. Seems sorta extravagant...

4. Iwai?

5. ...Queen?
TL note: heh... she looks like she has bunny ears.

page 3

Title: Party Checker

page 4

1. Have mercy, My Queen. / I did no ill-deeds.

2. No, you have wronged.

3. Yours is glossier.

4. Yours is longer.

5. Yours is more youthful.

6. Yours is more fragent.

7. I forbid it.

8. I forbid it. / I forbid it.

9. I forbid it.

10. I forbid it. / I forbid it. / I forbid it.

11. ...Well then,

12. why don't I give you this hair?

page 5

1. All of your decendants shall inherit it.

2. along with all your desires and indesires...
TL note: reCheck.

3. "Black hair."

4. "Queen."

5. Basically...

page 6

1. This play is my story...

2. Yeah...

3. ...This fairy tale sounds like bull to me...

4. But being in this organization and all, I believe it.

5. You're joking... The Goods is proof enough.

6. Aah, you like mystery novels, didn't you? / That is much like an occult, isn't it?

7. No, I know the story. It is...
TL note: yeah, when they speak vague I don't really know what they are talking about... but I assume it continues on page 7 with the narration.

page 7

1. ...It seems / everyone doesn't know eachother, huh?

a. Is it good?

b. Hm-huh Hm-huh.

2. ...Yeah...

3. I imagined them being like an evil secret society.

4. ...Afterwards, the Queen completely changed.
TL note: I'm going to assume narration of the play

5. Everyone sought to kill the girl with the eye-catching black hair...

6. For that's the witch's curse.

7. Her Majesty's hair became uncuttable.

8. While she was pregent, her stillborned baby strangled herself with her own hair.

9. It was impossible to not go mad.

page 8

1. Mister Haimura and Madam Mushiyanokouji?

2. We've been tasked to have you two go through here. / You're to help with the entertainment.

3. Entertainment?

4. These are costumes. / Could you wear them?

5. Okay...

6. ...What is this? Fur?

7. What's...

8. Uh...

9. Uugh...

page 9

1. Demon girl?

2. W-Why am I to dress like this?

3. What is this really?

4. Ah, well... We're hotel workers. / You'll have to ask the sponsor...
TL note: This is a Tanko tl.

5. ...Wait, this is...

a. We're on the stage...

6. Aren't you two the next actors?

7. EEEH?

page 10

1. Wh-Wha-What are we going to do, Kiri? I've never been in a play.

2. I did one back in kindergarden...

a. Wait, this is really strange.

3. The Queen is the sacrificial lamb. / The Authors of the Goods are the wolves that eat her.

b. Eh, what? Lamb?

4. ...Kiri?

5. ...So, you came to Gossip's party. / Nothing could've been more perfect I think.

page 11

1. Could it be that the one who invited us to this party, was you? / Justice Nakajima... "The Rulebook."

2. ...I

3. didn't think you would come.

page 12

1. I was sure you would've ran away scare like a baby.

2. How reckless.

3. I could have refused the invite?

4. I have thought of it... but

5. even if I had been waried of

6. the formal dress party, I am wanted everywhere...
TL note: reTL, umm... sounds weird to me.

page 13

1. This is the second time we've met, My Queen.

2. I have introduced myself before, and I do not have the time to do so again...

3. I know. / Kiri told me.

4. You're the person who choked Kiri by the neck with that rope.

5. I have not forget.

6. ...She's surprisingly blunt.

a. Ah?

7. I'm not fond of it...

8. Well, whatever. Kozakura doesn't know about this place, so she won't be coming.

9. I'm the judge. / Now let's continue where we left off as a play.

page 14

1. ......!

2. Iw-Iwai, are you hurt?

3. I'm fine... but.....

4. It's a play, a play. / So, use threatical words from here on.

page 15

1. Ah. / Oh, how I wish, how I wish for an enemy...

2. The cause of this power / Simple criminals are like babies.

3. Few and far between. Only an Goods Author can cure my thirst.

4. How I wish for a stronger enemy.

5. Powerful. / Killing them is the joy uncompared. / But still it's not enough.

6. I want to display my power.

page 16

1. For there's a Scissors Good.

2. SFX: crack

3. A boy said to be protecting the Queen.

4. However, was he truly noble?

5. For the boy to cut the hair he himself was so fond of

6. He accepted to injure an attacking human.

7. and now, see as he feels uplifted for battle...
TL note: ugh... reCheck all

page 17

1. What a horrible questioning.

2. You fit perfectly as a criminal.

3. To "desire" and "profit" from a murderer's power

4. I believe that to be a greater crime than any.

page 18

1. If you're going to deny it, then hurry up.

2. I came here to confirm that.

3. But, if you can't deny it, I believe you'll only have a few moments left...

4. ...Kiri!

5. Kiri! What are you doing?!

6. Tell him he's wrong!

7. Kiri protects me because...

page 19

1. SFX: Grack

2. Raise the curtains.

3. SFX: Guh Guh Guh

4. Applauses.

page 20-21

a-f. SFX: clap

page 22

1. What's that?

2. What are they doing?!

3. ...It's RuleBook

4. What's the matter with them... doing that right in front of these people!

5. It seems most of them still think it is a play though...

a. SFX: Boh...

6. ...How horrible.

7. Spoiling this party.

8. I even told them to treat the guest courteously.

page 23

page 24

page 25

1. Forcibly stretch the rope!

2. If I am to be hanged, I mustn't panic.

3. However, I can't hold my breath for long.

4. SFX: creak / creak / creak

5. SFX: gasp

6. An additional... / dozen seconds...!

page 26

1. For you...

2. Those crimes... are called justice!
TL note: reTL

3. ...We're quite similiar.

page 27

1. However,

2. I don't just randomly flail about.

3. You can never reach me.

page 28

1. Like you could win by just talking big.

a. pant

b. SFX: Guh...

c. SFX: Creak

d. SFX: Creak

e. pant...

2. Even if I can't reach you.

3. I won't die from this.

4. After, I'll show you how to really choke someone.

5. You coward.
TL note: reTL, unsure exact meaning here as english has various meanings.

page 29

page 30-31

page 32

1. Gasp / Gasp / Gasp!

2. ...My win, is it?

page 33

a. SFX: Thud...

page 34

a. SFX: Bang

page 35

1. ......?!

2. .......?

3. What?

4. What happened?

5. .....!

6. For the crime of "murder," / Rulebook of Sentencing and Exectution...

page 36

1. Eh?

2. The curtains fell?!

3. Where's Kiri?

a. I can't see at all

b. Hah

4. There's no rope.

5. Perhaps he was able to fend off that other man?

6. But... But...

7. Does he live?

page 37

1. Please...

2. Where is...

3. the Rulebook?

page 38

1. Fuck...

2. hah...

3. Hah...

4. What was that? / I should fall back... and regroup...

5. Hah...

6. Hey Rulebook. / I have recently been hearing some unpleasant things from the police about you helping them.

7. How you would arbitarily kill any criminal without needing any compensation. / It sounded a bit... much.

8. I see... So it's you.

9. I had no idea the Lady was so young.

page 39

1. Today is good. / I want you be more prudent.

2. Shut up. / That's for me to decide.

3. The Goods Authors are just your pawns, right?

4. I act by my own will. And besides,

5. The one that judges is me!

6. That's too bad.

page 40

1. !

2. Gah

3. Dah!

4. SFX: Gulp

5. SFX: Cough

6. cough / cough

page 41

1. Damn... / Kuh..

page 42

page 43

1. ...Hah

2. A-hem

3. Hah...

page 44

1. ......

2. ...You

3. So I didn't kill you. / Damn... When it rains, it pours...

4. The Lady Violet Witchie.

5. ...?

6. Remember that name. She's the head of Gossip.

page 45

1. That person... Had adopted Authors kill me. / That's what I gathered from the way she did it.

2. What should I do?

3. I don't know how to treat this...

4. Are you stupid?

5. You should be more happy.

6. You hated me from the first time we met, didn't you?

7. So, you needn't show any compassion in the end.

page 46

1. Don't be sad...

2. "Look, it's me."

3. "Prideful till the end"

page 47

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 16

Wed, 28 Sep 2011 09:26:03 +0000

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I believe I promised you guys from my edit on chapter 15 that I will edit in tanko translations for chapter 10. I never got around to doing that so here is chapter 16. There are a few lines in here that I didn't mark that I didn't like the sound of. Those lines I will probably get around to redoing during my Quality Check part of the scanlation. I'll give you guys 17 and 18 as well when I like the sound of most of the lines. I'll also get to volume 4 when I get to it. That's a fun volume. The artist really shows off her previous ero-art skills in there.

Also, every time on the internet in a blog post or topic post about crime edge from what I see, the person's favorite moment always seem to be chapter 6 page 11 line 1,2,3,a. Heh, compare the translation in the release and the ones I originally planned to have on mangahelpers. I like to think that tiny change made all the difference.

One more thing, I need a cleaner... Badly, Pm me if you think you can clean crime edge with contact details. Examples of prior work is required. Examples must include the original uncleaned page for comparison.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 16
Title: Wonder Wheel

page 1

1. Hey, Kiri

2. What's making you so tense?

3. Eh? / You can tell?

a. Done

4. I can tell.

5. You've been keep this stiff face for a while.

6. You should be more grateful to me who you insisted on cutting your hair.

7. S-Sorry...

8. To come here specifically to get a haircut even when the store is closed... / There has to be something else to this...

b. It can't be for a date, can it?

9. The party is today after all... / I probably need this since my hair was reaching my shoulders...

page 2

1. I don't know where you are planning to go, but... / Whereever it is! I don't allow it!

a. What is she talking about?

2. W-Why do I have to tell you?

3. ...I'm worried.

4. This reminded me of then.

b. SFX: Squeak...
TL note: sound of chair leaning back

5. Of the first time you came here.

page 3

Title: Wonder Wheel

page 4

1. Sorry, this is going to sound bad. / but, could you remind what happened then?

2. I hate to attack you on this, but

3. It's rather hard to have just forgotten about it.

4. It was exactly 2 years ago, right?

5. I have just arrived in this area and didn't know of any hairdressers.

6. Then, Kotarou told me about this place.

7 ...What?

8. What are you talking about, Mom?

page 5

a. To Kashiko
I'm leaving the customer to you, so I'll give you the money too, okay?

1. You're leaving it to me so you can go shopping, aren't you?...

b. Is this okay for the customer?

2. Well, nothing I can do... I just hope I won't anger him.

3. Hm.

4. Huh?

5. It's so dark, where's the customer?...

page 6

1. That

2. That scared me...

3. I see. He didn't get up 'cause he fell asleep.

a. Though it's not like I care if he got up.

b. SFX: Suuh...

4. Ah.

5. This is that guy who hangs around Kotarou in class.

6. Ah, Kotarou must've told him about this place.

page 7

a. SFX: Zzzzz...

1. ......

2. He doesn't look half-bad.

3. ...Haimura, was it? Wake up.

4. I'm sorry to have to kick you out.

5. But, it's night. You should go home now.

b. SFX:
TL note: sound of girl undoing the knot

6. My mom should probably be a little more thoughtful about these things.

7. you can't just leave a customer alone and go shopping.

page 8

1. You have been a good customer though.

2. So, did you only want a simple haircut?

3. I guess I'll give you a discount...

4. SFX: Ba-Bump

page 9

1. Eh...

2. Sorry...

3. I didn't do a thing so....

page 10

1. For a long time...

2. SFX: Ba-Bump

3. I haven't touched it so...

4. SFX: Ba-Bump

5. SFX: Ba-Bump

6. For this beautiful hair...

7. SFX: Ba-Bump

8. Ye...

9. SFX: BA-Bump

10. SFX: Ba-Bump

11. SFX: Ba-Bump

12. Yeah?...

page 11

a. SFX: Stretch...
TL note: note the hand on the bottom of the shirt

1. I appretiate this.

2. I haven't been able to say this to anyone till now.

page 12

1. ...I feel like you're making secretly fun of me by having me retell this.
TL note: reEverything

a. Boo

2. What's the point if it didn't do at least that much.
TL note: reEverything

3. You fetish freak.

4. Back then, you were really scary, so

5. maybe it was all just the suspension bridge effect.

6. Suspension bridge effect? what's that?

7. Ah! No, forget what I just said.

b. Shit!

8. Ah, well... Sorry.

9. That really was a mistake. / I will never do that again...

page 13

1. ...Ever.

2. You are doing well, right?

3. ...Well.

4. Sorry.

5. But... I remembered.

6. How you were like a different person during that evening.

7. ...I feel Like you are living a whole different life / from mine.

page 14

1. Apart from that one time you looked at me,

2. You appear to be just a spineless everyday boy.

3. ...and nothing more.

4. ...But still,

5. I sometimes feel like you've grown so far away

6. from me...

7. ...Sorry. / ...for saying such strange things...

page 15

1. ...It's all fine.

2. I'm still me.

3. ...Well, / thanks for today.

4. See ya.

5. Kashiko.

page 16

1. Thank you for all the help, Professor.

2. What are you saying? / We, Gossip, were the one who invited you.

page 17

1. Go satisify your curiousity of the higher-ups by diligently scrunitzing them.

2. Once you're done, you should go enjoy the food and drinks.

3. ......

4. Ah.

5. So, you

6. came.

a. Wah...

7. Hey, Kiri...

8. Ah.

b. Boo

page 18

1. So, you did buy it.

2. Yes...

3. Sister is so cute.

4. Not really...

6. As I am with this sort of thing...

7. It suits you relatively well.

8. Good.

9. Well, / You got your coins.

10. This is where we part ways.

page 19

1. Shall we go in?

page 20

1. Iwai?

2. This really is a bit terrifying.

3. "Te cursed girl"...

4. So many people sees me as some sort of freak.
TL note: Hey! I just noticed the quote in the front of the tanko are quotes within the volume... This line is the quote on v3

page 21

1. ...I'm the same as you

2. My Queen.

3. ...So you are, / Mr. Murderer.

page 22

1. ...Yes. / Yes.

2. They have been safely delievered.

3. I'll leave them to you, my lady... to you from here on out.
TL note: this is tricky in that he first uses a formal usage of "you" in this case "lady" but then corrects it to be a casual "you"
TL note2: Yes... I know the japanese dictionary has the definition as "Lord" aka male, but chapter 17 pretty much defines what it will be.

4. What will they see, / and what will they learn?

5. I will be keeping watch over them.

page 23

1. ..."Cutting and Severing"... No. / "Mr. Haimura."

2. Don't be like me.
TL note: Hm... I have a thoery in that the Professor is an Author and his instead of Iwai's mother. Very farfetched theory.

3. ...Kiri Haimura.

4. Iwai Mushiyanokouji

5. ...Two.

page 24

1. We're here to discover.

2. The meaning of what we held in our hands,

3. its very existence, we will come face to face with.

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 15

Fri, 02 Sep 2011 01:31:37 +0000

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I thought I should put out another translation for all of you to see. Scanlation isn't getting any faster (I think it is getting slower... apply today!). Start of a new arc. I personally like this arc the best out of the four arcs currently out... The intro arc, the zombie arc, the fancy dinner arc, and the knife loli arc (These are not official names by any means).
Personally, I was hoping to have gotten chapter 18 out in scanlation by now, but speed of group is by no means fast, so we'll just keep chugging along.

EDIT: sigh... damn bastard who uploaded tanko raws... messing me up and having me redo/add in stuff.
I'll do the other chapter that needs stuff added in later.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 15
Title: Heaven's Coins

page 1

1. ...Then, / are you two all finished with me?

2. All because Ruka caved in...

3. Ah, / well, it's not like I wanted to lose...

4. It's just... I guess I prefer to hit Romeo exclusively... / As of now, I've stopped my meddling with the Goods...

5. ...yeah. / We're cleansing ourselves of it.

6. Right, if you come into contact with a person from Gossip, / give him this.

page 2

1. As he handed it to us, he said

2. to not look inside, but...

3. well, then...

4. Byouinzaka, / When did you say your sister will be coming?

5. She always changes train here at around this time, so

a. Ah!

6. she should be here soo...

page 3

1. Ahh, / Stop with those stories...

2. Heheh... Houko was very scared back then, wasn't she?

3. Even though it was just a little bit scary...

4. Haha... Sorry.

5. I'm... Just not very good with these scary occult things.

6. Yeah, really.

7. Houko completely can't handle any stories with blood, huh?

8. Ah. / Well, this is where we part.

9. See you tomorrow.

10. Yeah.

11. See you tomorrow...

page 4

Title: Heaven's Coins
TL note: From the popular Japanese tv drama! I never heard of it... It just came up in a google search

page 5

1. I

2. I didn't see a thing. Not a thing.

3. ...Forgive me, Sister...

a. SFX: Frustrated
TL note: tired frustarted at what just happened... meh

4. ...Why are you here?

5. Iwai... I mean

6. The Queen was given this...

7. and I thought you would know more than me about this...

page 6

1. There're Gossip's coins. / They seem to be like identification.

2. I thought as much...

3. Included was a letter about a party hosted by Gossip.

4. It says they wish for us to join them...

5. ...Yeah, one of those came to our place too.

page 7

1. What do they intend with this?

2. My knowledge is not to that extent.

3. However... I guess information slowly trinkle to the top. / Including that whole affair with Petwhip from back then.

4. ...Well, that's what I'm told.

5. I don't think anything will happen with so many people gathered in one place though.

6. We're done.

7. This is enough.

8. ...Sister...

9. Yamane, / I'm going home first.

10. Hey, wait...

page 8

1. Don't be so mad. / We only accidently saw what we did there.

2. ...You two are often together, aren't you?

3. Being a Good's Instead is constantly very hard mentally,

4. so I changed who I had been. / Everyday, I can at least try to forget it all.

5. Yet, you two are so lovey- dovey without a care.

page 9

a. Lovey-dovey...

1. ...Seeing it irriates me to no end.

2. Seems like you're trying to blame me.

3. I'm the bad person

4. who keeps distancing herself from Yamane.

page 10

1. For the party, I wonder / if wearing the uniform is a good idea.

2. It does seem suitable enough, but

3. won't you stand out too much with it?

4. If you ask the Professor, he'll prepare something for you, won't he?

5. He is more and less our guardian.

page 11

1. That... Pedophile / will certainly do whatever trife we ask.

2. ...Sister...

a. SFX: .....Ring Ring.....

b. SFX: Ring...

c. Iwai
TL note: cell phone

page 12

1. Ah...

2. Umm... Houko?

3. About that party...

4. As to what to wear... I'm wondering if there is a requirement... / or would anything do?

5. ......!

6. Why are you asking me?

7. ...It's about clothes. / I don't think Kiri would know anything about this I think.

page 13

1. ...Let me clarify.

2. Why are you asking me?! / Both you and Haimura!

3. How you casually talk and call me!

4. ...I'm your enemy...

5. I even keep telling you that I will one day kill you as your enemy...

6. Sorry... / I'm Sorry...

7. But...

page 14

1. But... You did come to help me.

2. even during my orienteering not long ago.

3. That was...

4. But most importantly... / Before I met Kiri,

5. during that time, you were very scary to me, but

6. But... You always delievered me things for my daily needs.

7. It's cause the Professor asked...

8. ...Even so!

9. I didn't meant to blatter so much, but

10. But, as I didn't had any friends my own age,

11. it made me a bit happy...

page 15

1. I've become good friends with Yamane...

2. So...

3. ...Don't

4. I saw you as stupid and pulled your hair even.

5. I did horrible things. / You have all the rights to hate me for what I did, and yet...

page 16

1. And yet

2. You're come to care for me...!

3. ...Sorry.

4. Sorry. / I'm sorry...

page 17

1. ...Yamane

2. ...You talked for quite a while.

3. I decided I will borrow an old-fashioned formal dress.

4. I will... try and ask the professor myself.

5. Iwai asked one for her as well.

6. ...I see. / That's good.

page 18

1. ...Here.

a. SFX: Seeh...
TL note: ugh... sound of sleeve being pulled up, whatever that sound is, it is probably not seeh

2. It just popped into my head... That we should have this be a daily routine.

3. Go ahead.

4. ...Okay.

5. ...Today, Sister is

6. being so very kind.

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 14

Thu, 04 Aug 2011 06:44:17 +0000

~read only~

Eh... I thought about it while playing darksiders. What I was thinking... should I post the other TL I have. And, I said, sure why not... There is probably a few dozen people who actually read this because I don't have the staff to churn out the scanlations at lightning speed (That is due to various reasons of various natures). So, I thought I should at least end the arc for those people... or you people I guess.
This of course might bring the question of... How many translations did bokolife already did?... Well... That's for me to know and for you to don't ask questions.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 14
Title: Waltz of the Stars

page 1

1. I am the vanguard.

2. You are the rear guard.
TL note: metaphors... meh

3. ...?!

4. You've done well enough. / "To protect the battle game flag," we are entirely same in that respect.
TL note: jintori - a game children play where two sides try to take over the other side's "base." aka a children war game. aka, battle game.

5. But, I see you as someone who liked to fight.

6. The fate of a murderer is to be unwillingly caught. / However... KaKaKah

7. ...Putting you in this ghastly state,

8. I take no joy in this.

page 2

1. STOOOOOOOOP!

2. What

a. SFX: Be-Ring
TL note: Umm... I'm not really sure, but I think it is a feedback noise. I don't know the correct way to make that sound with letters...

3. Hello, "Sentencing and Execution."

b. What are you saying?

4. I've heard a lot of rumors about you from the Professor.

page 3

Title: Waltz of the Stars

name:
"Pet Whip of Submissive Butchery"

unit:
Killing Goods

author:
!Ruka Shihoudou
<-original
Fujin "the Swine Mistress" Shihoudou

skill:
!Domesication Strengthening
!Domesication Whipping
<- tips: When targeted at a male, whipping him serveral times can manipulate his mind into your control. However, once manipulated, he will be only capable of accepting very simple commands.

page 4

1. Kuh...

2. Justice Nakajima!

3. Quietly surrender that rope of yours! / As long as I'm alive, you shall do no evil.

a. My cell...

4. Kozakura...! / Don't butt in! I go nuts when you're around!

5. I don't care! You're the bad guy here!

6. Aah?

7. Even though I honestly don't know a whole lot about these Killing Goods!

8. ......

9. You believe what you're doing is cool or something, don't you?!

page 5

1. Hey...! Leave me alone! Turn that damn thing off!

2. By the Public Noise Pollution Act, I order you...
TL note: That isn't a real regulation name... I just prefer this to the extra long Regulations for the Prevention of Public and Private Nuisances. But, of course if the TS can make that fit, then by all means use that instead.

3. No.

4. You can't kill like that, right?

5. That Kozakura told you about my "conditions," didn't she?

6. It's wrong to just randomly kill someone! / You're not worthy to be called an "Ally of Justice!"

7. Please stop trying to get high off of this!!

page 6

1. !

2. Ah...

3. Ah

4. Tsk... / I lost my concentration...

5. Hey, Cutting and Severing!

6. We'll continue this at some later date!

7. I can't even speak calmly!

8. Wa-Wait!

9. Ah?

10. I've already lost my interest in you.

11. Wait, what?! Weren't you the one who sent the letter?!

12. Help us...

13. You don't get it? What you did was entirely your own.

page 7

1. So fuck off.

2. You dumb bitch.

page 8

1. For now it seems, / the two of them are safe.

2. Thank you, Byouinzaka.

3. It was nothing...

4. Kiri... That man...

5. Ah... He was an Author too. / More importantly...

page 9

1. That whip of yours... It's killing powers have peaked.
TL note: okay... so, this line is a bit weird... I'm just going to leave my note as that.
TL note2: What I'm trying to say is that the whip's power has reached its maximum and is now drained and uselesss.

2. So, all your puppets are gone. It's over now.

3. Ah... Umm...

4. The President... Is he okay?

5. That may sound a bit strange coming from me, but...

6. His wounds look really terrible...

page 10

1. I'm a bit worried...

2. To be pitied...

3. To be wretchedly pitied... / By the Queen.

4. This... This... / Again, I'm... like that depressing...

page 11

1. U....

2. Eh?...

3. Uah

4. UAH

5. AAAH... AH

page 12

1. Looking back to my childhood...

2. At that depressing Performance Day when the role of the princess was stolen from me.

3. Romeo was the school idol, and I was that childhood friend of his. / The class leader, that girl I couldn't stomach.

4. The bewitched boys all voted for that girl to be the lead. / To them it was all just a game.
TL note: I added the "to be the lead" part for clarfications where lead = princess

5. Even Romeo was one of them.

6. ...I was little / but I was deeply sad by it.

7. It was after that is when I encountered the Good.

8. It was then I decided.

page 13

1. That I will try to reverse the natural order as well.

2. Men are...

3. Men are all just idiots.

4. I never forgot how sad I was that day.

5. I never wanted to experience that again.

6. So it told me to rise to the top... To rise to the top, / if I had control,
TL note: yeah... reTL

7. I can get everything and everyone I want.

page 14

1. Even if the control is temporary, Petwhip gave me it.

2. After that, only by the Queen's death could I get greater true dominance.

3. All so I can have the person I love!

4. That's what I believed in! Yet I'm again as this unseemly...!

5. As this unseemly...!

6. U...Ugh...

7. I will... always

8. For my princess...

page 15

1. Cutting and Severing is so horrible.

2. Saying how your hair is full of split-ends.

3. All I see is pretty red hair.
TL note: I added stuff into this line. It still has a similiar meaning. Literal would be more like, "It's just pretty red hair."

4. It still even has that natural wave.
TL note: umm... wave as in wavy hair. I'm not sure if wave is a often used word to describe hair. I'm transliteraling the japanese in this line. AKA, it literally says wave. The hair isn't curly... It is just wavy...

5. I have always

6. liked it...

page 16

1. To be saying such things after all this time...

2. You're too modest, Ruka. / Please give me another attack order...
TL note: umm... that "modest" word had multiple meanings... it could mean sweet, kind, modest... etc etc >_> I had to choose one, I chose modest

3. Haha... This isn't like you, Ruka.

4. It seems like... This is your win...

5. ...And thus, the fighting was over.

6. Ugh...

7. What was I...?

8. Ah...

9. ......

10. Afterwards, the Professor filled us in on rest of the story.

page 17

1. The original... confined... disciplined... and broke down men.

2. But, not one of the victims was found to be chained down.

3. Was it devotion? or fear? / I didn't understand why they didn't run away.

4. Though I believed / it wasn't the female who had the chains around the men.
TL note: the ending scene pictures finishes the rest of the thought

5. Is

6. Is the star gazing...

7. over already?!

8. Eh... Iwai?!

9. But I wanted to see them too...

a. You're late.

b. It was really cloudy till a while ago though.

10. Where did you go by the way, Iwai?

11. Eeeeeeh... Well.

page 19

1. You two, where did...

2. S-Sorry, Kashiko.

a. SFX: drag

3. We're just want to go and take a look!

b. SFX:
TL note: I don't know what this is... Umm... maybe it is "grr..." I dunno >_> It's probably not grr btw.

4. Why are they bothering to go when you can see the stars from the cottage?...

5. Who knows, Ko-rou.
TL note: Kotarou... is his name. This is my liberty at translating this line. If you do not know japanese, don't worry about it :)

6. Myabe that's a better place to see them.

c. Hey

7. Where did you two run off to?

d. I didn't see you for quite some time!

8. W-We had a meeting to be tomorrow's duty officers!

e. Don't accuse us of anything

9. Ahaha

f. ...Damn it!

g. What was that for?!!

page 20

1. How is it? You can't really see the stars. / Are you having at least a little bit of fun?

a. It cleared up a bit for us to see though

2. Yeah... / ...Yeah...

3. I guess I should've watched it with everyone. / That probably would've been more fun and exciting...

b. Hahaha...

4. Really now?

page 21

1. ...Sorry, Kiri.

2. For all the stuff today... Causing you so much trouble.

3. Hm, it's fine.

4. ...But, like this, I can see it with you.

5. I guess this is quite all right.

6. ...Heh?

7. When you didn't promptedly return after not answering my request. / I didn't know what to do then.

a. What?

8. ...Answering your request?

page 22

1. Eh?

2. Eh?

4. ...Well, when I was there at that time, you merely told me I was convienent for cutting hair...

5. Eh, I wouldn't...

6. ......

7. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH / Sorry! SORRY! I didn't mean what I said!

a. You took in such a horrible meaning from it!

8. No... Yeah, sorry.

9. I guess I jumped to conclusions there...

10. Yeah...

11. Such a sensation...

page 23

1. ...It's so pretty.

2. ...Yeah.

3. ...It's but... But

4. I'm feeling a bit... warm.

a. SFX: gulp...

b. SFX: Grab

c. ......?

page 24

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 13

Thu, 04 Aug 2011 02:06:38 +0000

~read only~

again, I got bored... and unable to come up with a new way to make the translation fun for me... I just sent it to google. Basically, I had google translate my english to french, then I had it translate it back to english. It's interesting. Most lines remain largely unchanged, but then there are those few key lines that get changed a lot. Most of the meaning remained intact. You can check it out for yourself by using google translate convert this translation to french then back to english.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 13
Title: Strawberry Jam

page 1

1. Kiri... Kiri!

2. How are... How are your wounds?

3. I'm fine.

4. They don't seem like it was meant kill.
TL note: reCheck

5, But...

6. ...Honest...
TL note: like the american saying scout's honor.

7. Come on, calm down now.

8. Yeah... Seems I made this girl worried too much.

9. Ngh...

10. You don't need to try so hard now.
TL note: reTL

page 2-3

1. ...Let's go!

Title: Strawberry Jam
TL note: what a sick sick sick title

page 4

1. Ah, but, forgive me...

2. Just a little

3. Just a little...

4. Wha

5. What are you doing... All of a sudden...

6. At a time like this...

7. I'm just showing them something...

page 5

a. Eh?

b. H-Hey

1. I can easily cut the uncuttable hair.

2. To you, she is the queen that should be killed, but to me, she is a normal girl.

3. Just normal.

4. I simply want to cut this girl's hair.

5. Just that meager thing.
TL note: reTL, thing

6. So,

7. Don't

8. interfere.

page 6

1. Killing Goods are

2. deprived of "fear."

page 7

1. Basically... Look

2. Say someone is randomly waving a knife at you, okay? / Your legs will freeze up, and the rise in blood flow will cause you to be unable to stay calm.
TL note: reTL

3. But, say that weapon was... / Here.

4. If it was like this toy?

5. It's not scary at all, is it?

6. You're bad at making things, aren't you?

7. Hey now.

8. Killing Goods are different from that phenomenon so to speak.
TL note: reCheck, reEverything

9. They by nature try to keep fear at a "zero" state.
TL note: reCheck after 8

page 8

1. Zero...

2. ......

3. This "zero" state is not something a normal human can attain.

4. You would have to eliminate the subconcious "particulars" and instinctual levels of the "mind."

5. "Achieve the perfect existence by murder."

6. The human's original persona is warped, severing his morality and ethics.
TL note: reCheck page 8

page 9

1. ...That is the Killing Goods.

2. And

3. it'll expose the true desires buried deep in the Author's heart...

page 10

1. For me, "I wish not to be alone."

2. For Haimura, it'll be... "I wish to cut girl's hair."

3. For me,

4. "I wish to rule over humanity."

page 11

1. You, having been born as a queen, can't understand what it is like.

2. How depressing it is to have never been offered the lead in the Performance Day plays.

3. Once I've killed you, my wish shall be granted.

4. If I do not,

5. I'll never be able to return any love to anyone.
TL note: yeah... I don't get it too... Hopefully this line got changed and got made more sense in the tanko, but I only have the magazine raws at the moment...

page 12

1. Haimura... If you still plan to continue to protect the Queen,

2. I'll have to kill you as well.

page 13

1. The President...?!

2. What is this strength... / My head... is going to break...!

3. SFX: crack

4. SFX: crack
TL note: okay, his head isn't cracking... yet... It is mostly just the sound of someone trying to smash your head in... >_>

5. Please don't lump me together with those cookie-cutter puppets.
TL note: cookie-cutter - and american saying meaning no originality

6. SFX: Crack
TL note: knuckles cracking, this time it really is a crack sound.

7. This body

8. has been strengthened by the power of the Good.

page 14

1. Kiri...!

2. ...Ah...

3. Snip

4. Snip

5. Snip

6. SFX: RIP
TL note: the sound of the scissors cutting the shirt and skin

page 15

1. As I am now,

2. I won't even flinch from that.

3. Well...!

4. It'll be alright if I cut apart your hands then...!

5. Did you think that

6. a regular human can win against a murderer?

page 16

page 17

1. How...

2. How is it so sharp...?!

3. SFX: Clink

page 18

1. Gah

2. Ah...

a. SFX: Fuuh...

3. Ro... / Romeo...!

4. You... You bastard!

5. How... How dare you... To Romeo...

page 19

1. !

2. ...That guy should be saying that.
TL note: reCheck

3. I'll never in god's name be able to understand any of this!

4. Why you are trying to kill Iwai!

5. You think I want to kill the Queen? / It's only natural for us to have been gathered together!

6. It's fate for the Queen to die by the hands of an Author! / You know it's true!

page 20

1. Iwai...

2. Did you have fun in the orienteeting?

3. I... / I had fun!

4. This is the first time I've done this...

5. Eating curry with everyone...

6. Telling stories before going to bed...

7. I...

8. I had a lot of fun...!

page 21

1. This girl merely wish to live a normal life.

2. And you want to dispose of that future "individual?"
TL note: he is talking about whip lady trying to destory hair girl's normal life

3. If you won't give up those actions...
TL note: reTL, meaning if they won't stop trying to kill hair girl

4. Then, I will simply stay by her side forever.
TL note: I wanted to say something like "till the end of time," or something cliche like that... But, I dunno... is it too cliche?

page 22

1. We will never surrender.

2. Kuh...

3. ......

4. ...?

5. ...Hey,

6. What is... / that?

page 23

1. What is the meaning of this?

2. I had planned to dispose of the "Pet Whip."

3. I had her fight with "Crime Edge," and when I would see her intent to kill, I would have laid her to rest.

4. But, both the "Rulebook" and I / dreadfully believe that another should be killed...

page 24

1. The true evil here...

2. Is it you, Kiri Haimura?

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 12

Tue, 12 Jul 2011 10:41:35 +0000

~read only~
Hello! Here is chapter 12 ending volume 2. The arc spills over to volume 3. and arc 3 spills over to volume 4... The author kinda just does his own thing and doesn't really care about the volumes. Which is cool... Since he does try to keep the end of a volume in a high note.
As always, the scanlations will take a while since the timing of the group members are never in sync. Anyways, it will always be nice to have an extra group member or two to do a side series or something. So, [inset generic recruitment message for kono-basho here].
Anyways, like always this is the rough translation that I came up with in the first or second run through the chapter. Nothing is proofed or fix for better english or whatever. I did, however, not do something funny like give hair girl a personally. Which I still find funny, and may do again just for fun. That will never show up in the kono basho releases though.
There is one little error I purposely put in this translation. Try and find it! (aside from the obvious spelling errors I mean)

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 12
Title: Hardcore Breakbeats

page 1

1. Hah

2. Hah

3. Everywhere I turn, there is enslaved people...

4. The "enemy" is capable of this?

5. How scary!

6. If only Kiri was here... / Though,

7. to get his mind back, what should...

page 2

1. ......!

2. ----....

3. .......?

page 3

Title: Hardcore Breakbeats

name:
Injection of Coma Death

unit:
Killing Goods

author:
Houko Byouinzaka
<-original
"the wicked angel" Nightingale

skill:
!therapeutic success
!drug enhancement
<- tips: The effectiveness of a drug that's injected is increased a dozen folds. One can include herself in the list of victims. If done, it is possible to incur what is called "doping."

page 4

1. Hello?! Hello?!

2. Justice Nakajima, / The Rulebook! Are you there?! There's word that he is heading there!

3. Hey... You're too loud.

a. Quiet down.

4. Sister... There's many voices in my head.

5. Take a deep breath, Yamane.

6. Don't kill them.

7. Just paralyze the ones attacking you. / If you're to go mad... Just don't give in...

page 5

1. Because once you get back, / I'll let you prick me all you want...

2. ...I'll try...

3. There has to be a different Author!! / Since the Rule Book requires a "flagernt crime!"

4. Seems like it... They're being attacked by that, right? / A Good that manipulates men into zombies...

5. Don't you know of anything that fits? / The powers of Killing Goods "imitate the original's crimes," don't they?

6. Not in the way you said it...

7. "Stealing the mind of a person," now that...

page 6

1. The victims seems to have these welts on them as well. Like they were whipped by some sort of slender object.

2. Signs of whipping?

a. Ngh...

3. HmHmHmm, nothing seems comes to mind...

4. ...Also, "all the victims are men."

5. Going out of the way to be this sadistic...

6. This person must really hate men.

7. ...Or maybe, "she wants to reverse the need for dependence."

8. Anyways, if this person is targeting Authors, go make sure the Queen is safe.

9. ...Okay

10. ...There is no back-up.

11. But, we cannot let this person get a wish.

page 7

1. Kiri...!

2. Stop... / Snap out of it!

3. Is it no good?

4. Nothing is working?

5. Is it too late...?

6. This...

7. This is... Cruel.

8. This sort of thing is...

page 8

1. ...The Star Gazing.

2. ...If you had said yes... We would be there...

3. Then we would eat barbeque for dinner afterwards.

4. Today was supposed to be fun...!

5. There may still be enough time for it.

6. So come back... Please!

7. Kiri...!

page 9

1. ......

2. ......?

3. You only need to ask.

4. With just that, your world will change.

5. Kiri?

6. Did my feelings...

7. reach you?

page 10

1. An unfaithful pig / is a useless pig!

page 11

1. Kiri!!!

page 12

1. Kiri!...

2. Kiri...

3. How brave of you. / To do all this for a boy.

4. You are...

5. ...The "Pet Whip of Domesicated Butchery."

6. Hello again. / My Queen.

page 13

1. Kiri... And the High Schoolers... / What did you do to them?

2. I merely just took the boy's minds and ordered them "to hunt down girls," My Queen.

3. I can't command them to do too complex of a thing, I'm afraid.

4. What they do after that is all their own...

5. Basically what their "instincts" tell them to.

6. Their instincts...

7. Then...

8. ......!!

page 14

1. My Queen, you understand now, right?

2. That is what males are.

3. What is on their mind is just these disgusting things.

4. ...A girl's feelings, / that is the only thing they don't think about.

a. SFX: Snap

page 15

a. SFX: Crea-ek-ek-ek
TL note: sound of the exacto knife

1. The Queen here... has yet to offer much in entertainment.

2. Give us all a big scream. / Like a pig.

3. No...

4. Stop...

5. ...!

6. ....!

page 16

1. haha... It won't cut. It won't cut. It won't cut!

2. It's not like it's hard. It's quite flexible, but it's like it physically refuses any change to it...

3. You monster

4. monster!

5. monster!

6. Hahaha...

7. I honestly did not believe / it couldn't be cut.

page 17

1. These two... / are trying very hard to break my spirit!

2. I'll never surrender. / I refuse to surrender. I won't!

3. ...Seems we have to try something else.

page 18

1. Cut my hair.

2. Kiri Haimura.

3. I heard you like to cut girl's hair, am I right?

4. I'll let you cut mine.

5. What did... / !

page 19

1. Ah...

2. You must be looking forward to this, am I right? / Though I must say, cutting hair of this beauty

3. The joy you'll get will be nothing like from that child.

4. No...

5. That's simply... No!

page 20

1. Stop, Kiri. / Don't cut her hair.

2. Please

3. Stop! I said please!

4. Stop! / You dummy!

page 21

1. Dummy!

2. Dummy! / Kiri, you dummy! / You've fallen for her enchantment.

3. Dummy! You big dummy!

page 22

1. Kiri... Kiri...! / I HATE YOU!

page 23

1. God, you're loud.

page 24

1. Hyah... / Ah...

2. You hair is full of split-ends.

3. It's a mess.

4. ...And, I'm back.

5. ......!!

page 25

page 26

1. ......!!

2. Wha...

3. What is going on?!

page 27

1. OH!

2. Ki...

3. Kiri...

page 28

1. Who is a big dummy?!!!
TL note: reTL, come back to this if still feels weird

a. ?!

page 29

a. Ah, God! It really hurts now!!

1. It was all because of that whip, I couldn't freely do anything on my own!! / And yet, you went all dummy dummy...

2. Also, you hate me?! Just who do you think you are?!

3. What made so angry all of a sudden?! I don't believe this!
TL note: I wanted to say what has your panties in a bunch. But that may be out of character? I dunno... I just thought it would be weird to translate a very literal sentence with an american saying.

4. I don't believe any of this! What was all those words supposed to be?!

5. That was not what I intended it to mean...!

6. Then, what did you intend?!

page 30

1. Say it clearly! / I won't understand if you don't tell me!!

2. ...Sa

page 31

1. SAVE ME!!

2. Understood.

page 32

1. I, who herited the worst blood in history, am

2. The Crime Edge of Cutting and Severing.

--End of Volume 2--

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 11

Sun, 19 Jun 2011 23:38:28 +0000

//read only//

This is a modified version of my translation for chapter 11. In this modified version, I imagined Iwai being a scottish new englander and Kiri as a white rapper poser. Basically I had iwai said bloody hell at every chance I had and kiri say fuck and bitch at every chance I had.
The important thing is I think it is funny.

Also of note, this is the Zombie Rape in what I call the zombie rape arc.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 11
Title: To overcome the corpses
TL note: this is about a previous translation: back in like chapter 5, I TL'ed the title as "to cross the storms" or something like that, I wanted to change it to "to overcome the storms" after the chapter was released. Yeah... It was already out, I didn't bother. There is a pattern to the titles... no matter how slight

page 1

1. She fell?

2. Uh-huh. / Mushiyanokouji did.

3. Really? / Is she okay?

4. Well, she looks alright.

5. She was taken to the medical office in the high school lodging area to dry.

6. That girl sure is clumsy...

a. But, doesn't it seem strange?

b. Yeah, I know.

7. Has it begun...?

page 2

1. Bloody hell, it's Night...?

2. ...I can see 'em cottages from here. / Then, this must be the them high schooler's lodge, right?

3. I see...

4. I must've fell into the water...

page 3

1. No...

2. I was pushed?

3. No matter...

4. First, I have to get on out of here...!

5. ...To Mushiyanokouji.

6. ...Poor thing

7. No one can save you now.

page 4

1. No matter what you'll do, you're all alone.

2. As I lead you to your horrific fate, / let out your patethic cries for help.

3. Tokuasa Private High School President, / Romeo Saiga

4. Bloody hell?

5. It's so awful...

page 5

1. ......

page 6

Title: To overcome the corpses

page 7

1. ...Bloody hell...

2. Why won't it open?

3. What's is this...?

4. The High Schoolers... Did they all go to sleep?

5. ...Hell, what time is it right now?

page 8

a. SFX: Clink

1. Crime Edge?!

2. What are you doing here?

3. Did Kiri come here?...

4. How queer.

5. Did he drop you?

6. How is Kiri even able to drop this?

page 9

1. Ki... / Kiri...

2. Oh bloody hell, you almost gave me a heart attack you...

3. Yes! / Hey, while with the vice president, I...

4. Are you listening?

page 10

1. Bloody... Don't ignore me!

2. Like how when you left without saying anything yesterday!

3. Hell! Kiri!

4. Are you daft?...

5. ...Eh?...

page 11

a. SFX: Slap

1. ......

page 12

1. ...Bloody

2. Mad.

3. How Kiri is

4. Kiri is...

page 13

1. being like that!

2. Never has he been so rough with my hair!

3. Those eyes... That stance...

4. It was like he's gone bloody mad.

5. ...Just what happened here?...

6. ...AH...

7. --...

page 14

1. ...Who's there?

2. Is it them High Schoolers?

page 15

1. AH...

2. AH...

3. AH__...

4. ...What?! / What is this?!!!

5. AH_...

6. AH...

page 16

1. S-

2. STOP...

3. NO!...

4. SFX: RIP

5. They're so much bigger than me.

6. So many male boys

7. are grabbing and

8. pushing on top of me...
TL note: I am pretty sure this is just a euphemism for rape

page 17

page 18

1. GAH!...

2. oo...

3. ....

page 19

1. LET

2. ...!!

3. GO!

4. LET GO!

5. .....! / .........

6. Hah

7. Hah

page 20

1. Hah

2. Hah

3. Hah

4. Hah

5. Kiri...!!

page 21

1. ...It's all perfectly okay. / Kiri is only just being mindcontrolled right now.

2. His spirit is right here.

3. ...I'll keep it with me.

4. You mustn't cry, Iwai.

a. Guh

5. There's no mistaking it... I'm under attack by the power of a Killing Good.

6. The Vice President pushing me off... And that letter...

7. That bloody President must be the Author of the Good...!
TL note: not a typo... Since it is the Vice president who is the author, and the president is the Instead

page 22

1. I'll somehow return you back to your senses. I'll find a way. / and then we'll make our escape...!

2. ...So wait for me. / Kiri.

page 23

1. Back there,

2. I attacked a bitch.

3. Just who was that bitch?

4. Hell... Why did I even do that in the first place? / Oh, My body is moving on its own.

5. Everything is so messed up...

6. I remember coming to the high school cabins, then all of a sudden I got caught in a brawl.

7. ...Umm / Just who the fuck called me up in this shizzit?

page 24

1. ...Fuck. I can't remember. / I'm so tired. My legs are so heavy.

2. I hear some bitch's voice.

3. I have to obey it. / I can't think of anything else.

4. That is okay.

5. It feels good...

page 25

1. ...HAHA

2. This has worked better than expected.

3. I was extremely cautious when I heard he was a blood relative of the infamous Glayland,

4. ___...

5. but I guess he is just a normal boy like the rest of us.

6. --..-...

7. He's pretty much mentally gone. / The Killing Good did not leave a trace.

page 26-27

1. My name is / the Pet Whip of Submissive Butchery
TL note2: Yeah, I know it is a Horse Whip... But pet whip is what it says.

2. My power is "Domesticated Whipping"

3. Whipping a man at serveral places will kill his mind / and domesticate him to obediency.

4. ...Its power is limited to men. / But, the results are amazing.

5. You are obeying this as well, right? / "Externally," I merely act like a submissive young lady.

6. ...Ruka. / I'm different. I'm not under the Good's power.

7. I only wish to do as you say... That's my true feelings.

page 28

1. Hit me

2. Curse me

3. Trample me.
TL note: ah... the infamous japanese foot fetish... Though I got to admit... Some of those softcore foot fetish videoes I have come across in my time had some really nice feet. Umm... Those videos were all purely for translational/educational purposes... Of course.

4. I take pleasure in having you rule over me.

page 29

1. I am your Instead.

a. SFX: Whack

page 30

1. ...Deep down

2. You're a really obscene man.

3. ...Right.

4. There was one thing I would like to ask.

5. ...Why are you doing all this?

6. Why not lock him and the good queen in a room.

7.Then it would be the simple matter of whipping him with that whip to kill her, right?

page 31

1. ...I like control.

2. I want to be greater than anyone of all time.

3. That'll be my wish for killing the queen.

4. That's why

5. Before I kill her, / for that "certain thing" known as the "Queen,"

6. I should at least make her angry, no?

page 32

1. With all of my might,

2. I will abuse her without end.

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 10

Wed, 27 Apr 2011 01:03:13 +0000

//read only//

personal message to ruggia: If you ever need raws... just come and ask me.

In this chapter I saw the name "Naruto" and the first thing I thought was, "Didn't I call him Narudo in a previous chapter?" Then, of course I went oh shit. But, yeah... if I did TL'ed his name as Narudo in a previous chapter... sorry for that.

One important note for this chapter is that this tl is for the mag raw. The tanko differs much more in this chapter than in every previous chapter. I have marked off where it differs. I did not provide a translation for the change in the tanko because I like to think that if you have the tanko, then you would know at least somewhat how to read Japanese. Unless, it is requested for some reason... If it is requested, then I would have to ask why someone who can't read Japanese at all would buy a Japanese book...

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 10
Title: Break & Through

page 1

1. Sorry, Kiri...

2. For dragging you out here to cut my hair.

3. It's fine.

4. I enjoy doing this.

5. Ye-Yeah...

6. ...This really is no trouble at all.

7. Iwai...

page 2-3

Title: Break & Through

1. ...You've gotten

2. quite used to this, haven't you?

3. ...Yeah, it's because I cut your hair almost everyday.

4. Like this / snip snip

5. Hm

6. Snip Snip

7. Snip

8. Snip...

page 4

1. I really like this sound... / Even though I lamented it as a symbol of the "Impossible" before.
TL note: sound is the sound of hair being cut. If PR feels "this sound" needs to be more specific, then please do so... Because I'm 50/50 on this
TL note2: I am not completely sure if lament is the correct word here, it should be something more to the meaning of, "to feel not comfortable with"

2. Heheh.

3. Have you changed your mind about watching the stars as well?

4. About that...

5. Eh?

6. Don't all girls like the stars? / I always thought that as a given.

7. ...Sigh, / and here I thought you would understand.

page 5

1. Before I met you... I couldn't even take one step away from my house.

2. So, when night fell, all I could do was watch the stars.
TL note: you think they have a tv or something in that mansion...

3. ...It simply brings back all those memories... / ...Of when I was all alone...

4. I see... Sorry.

5. Does Kiri...

6. Like it?

7. Eh? / Oh, you mean stars?

a. Today sure is cloudy...

8. ? Yeah...

9. No, it isn't my cup of tea either... / Those elementary school science lessons were all so tedious and boring...

page 6

1. Everyone in class can't wait to see them with the person they like.

2. I can't help but think if it really is different seeing them together.

3. Ms. Hitomi said it as well.

4. ...Ah?

5. Um...

6. Wait, what the hell is this?... / This isn't good...

7. I wonder

8. if I had such a person, would I...

9. ...Huh?

page 7

1. What was that uneasiness just now?...

a. IF I HAD?

2. But... well,

b. SFX: pat pat

3. ...I don't know.

4. I became so engrossed about asking the person I want to be with all of the sudden, haven't I?...

5. I, you see, haven't even lived my current life for more than a few months. / I don't think it's time for me to think about boyfriends...

6. ...Ah / Umm, I...

c. Wait a second, my role...

7. Ah, Kiri.

8. YES?!

page 8

1. Thanks for listening to my story about the stars.

2. I'm sorry to be a bother, but please cut my my hair tomorrow as well.

3. It sure was great to have end up in the same school, isn't it? / It saves so much time for this.

4. Speaking of which, I haven't thanked the professor either...

page 9

1. ...By-by the way, / Kiri... about the stargazing, do you have...

2. ...Huh? / Kiri...?

3. ...?

4. Hey... Kiri?

page 10

1. Hey... You.

2. is something wrong?...

3. Not really.

4. I don't know why I expected everything to just fall into place.

5. I don't do anything for her except cut her uncuttable hair.

6. ...But, even then I believed that would be enough to develop a good relationship. / I... I...

7. will happily cut her hair. / For I am the convenient friend...!!!

8. ...Gi-...

page 11

1. Girls / can all just go ROT IN HELL!

2. ...Wha?!...

3. What in hell happened to you?

4. Aha! He must've got rejected when he went to confess his love.

a. Ah... Of course

5. This is a school field trip. There is a lot of confessing happening.

6. Yeah, but who does Kiri have to confess to?...

7. ...It's probably Iwai.

8. Probably.

9. Umm... That tiny little girl?

aa. ?

10. What's so great about that little kid?

b. Umm...

11. She is cute, I guess...

12. I don't see it...

c. I just want to pet her.

page 12

1. There's no one better than Mizumi... / She's friendly and she's beautiful.

2. Eeh? Mizumi...?

3. The class president is umm...

4. She is pretty but... / yeah... pretty but...

5. For some reason, I'm feel a little sorry...

a. For Kashiko...

6. Ah-Choo!

7. ...Kashiko, did you catch a cold?

8. No... This is something else...

9. Though, while I was in the restroom, there was this huge moth that sent chills down my spine...

b. *Self-Control
TL note: probably this is just short for "have some self-control"

10. S-S-Stop!

page 13

1. ...Say

2. Weren't you with someone earlier? / Did that person walk back before I met up with you?...

3. Eh...

a. Ah, she means Kiri...?

4. ...Speaking of which, he didn't say anything before he left...

b. I wonder why?

5. Y-You must've imagined it. / Well... We're back...

c. Hmm?

d. SFX: Clatter Clatter

e. SFX: Rattle Rattle
TL note: d and e are really the same thing.

page 14

1. Stop that! Nigi! / It isn't summer yet!
TL note: I guess the japanese only tell scary stories in teh summer?

2. Eeh?

3. It's fine! This is about camping. / So, he swung the blood-stained weapon at her, okay?...

4. SSTTOOPP

5. ...Kashiko, Nigi is such a weird girl...

a. How are you sleeping, Byouinzaka?

6. Aah... Right, this is your first time being in the same class with her...

page 15

1. Nigi Ubusato, 15 years old, female.

2. My favorite genres are SciFi, thriller, and horror.
TL note: I translated this by matching them to the list of movie genres on wikipedia. Original is "occult, splatter, and horror."

3. Favorite character is...

a. Yes YES

4. Hannibal Lecter
TL note: or if you rather stick to the original japanese: "Dr. Lecter"

5. And actor is...

b. Well...

6. Tobin Bell!
TL note: the man who played Jigsaw in the Saw movie series

7. If it's favorite person in terms of history,

8. then that's easy! It's Norma Grayland!!
TL note: the original author of crime edge

page 16

1. You have to forgive us, Nigi... / Can't you do like a normal love story?

a. Honestly, I want to go to sleep already.

2. Yeah, you have a boyfriend.

3. Hah? Who?

b. Damn

4. That Naruto guy. / Your childhood friend, right? How lucky.

5. Eh? Is this true?

c. First I heard of this.

d. About Kotarou, right?

6. Oh, you didn't know, Iwai?

7. Naruto and her are next door neighbors.

8. Naruto is quite tall, isn't he? / He's always lazying around, but when he is praticing Iai, he gets 30 times cooler!

9. Heeh?

10. Then, I'll tell him for you.

11. Don't..!!

page 17

1. It's fine.

2. We're not going out.

3. We just played together as kids.

4. That's all and nothing more.

5. We are merely just

6. Childhood friends.

page 18

1. ...Well, I guess.

2. I don't really see her as a girl so much since I knew her since we were kids.

a. I mean I can't even comprehend her hobbies.

3. ...Hmm...

4. Why did you ask me this?

5. No reason, it was just on my mind.

6. Ki- / Kiri isn't here, huh?

7. Well... / I wonder who he is going to watch the stars with tonight?...

b. Well no, there's no hidden reason behind all this.

c. What a little kid.

8. ...That guy is sulking in bed back in the cabin, / so I think it's better to just leave him be.

page 19

1. Eh? Why?...

2. Well, umm...

3. Ah! / Naruto, Kashiko.

a. Ah

4. If I have to guess...

b. See, he's here.

5. Hey

6. ...Yo.

7. Um, hey.

8. About the star gazing event tonight. / What are you going to be doing?

page 20

1. ...What about you?

2. I asked you first.

3. ...well...

4. I guess I'll just watch it with some group...

5. Other than that, I don't have anywhere to go to...

6. Heeh?

a. What's with that "heeh?"

b. Oh, nothing.

page 21

1. Is that... / the high school vice president?

2-6. (bubbles of dots or of nothing)

7. Yeah, that's Shihoudou. / She really is popular, huh?

8. She sort of shines, don't you think?

a. She always there for the president though.

b. How wonderful...

9. She's pretty and smart. / She ranks high in grades, the vice president of the student council, and humble as well. Makes me want to be a fan too.

10. That was quite detailed.

c. They're high school. I don't care.

11. I just don't see you two as friends.

d. Geez, boys...

12. Doesn't something seem wrong?

page 22

1. M-Ms. Vice President!

2. Pardon us, but won't you come hiking with us?

3. To the cycling course as well.

4. Yeah, I want to go all together!

5. Thank you, I would be happy to, / but, I'm sorry. The president said to not make any side trips.

6. The president, again?

7. Aren't you always with him? And, since today is a rare moment when you're all by yourself...
TL note: to complete the sentence: "won't you please come along with us?" or something along those lines

8. Eeh... But...

9. ...That guy is just working you like a dog. / Yes, yes. Forgive me for this, but he's rich, so he just gets all cocky and stuff...

page 23

1. That guy / isn't fit to be president...

2. ......

3. ...You... Do you know just who Romeo is?

page 24

1. You

2. You shouldn't argue. You...

3. ......

4. Wah!

page 25

1. Excuse me.

2. Eh?

3. EH?!

4. I'm going on a little date with this girl, okay?

5. ......

page 26

1. ...Hey, / I heard he's childhood friends with the Vice President like you guys.

2. ...Heh?

3. Who is?

4. Student Council Preseident Zaiga. / They're always together.

page 27

1. I heard there was a student whose hurt. / I've come here to confirm that.

a. Not good.

2. I wouldn't go that far. / I'm fine.

3. ...Is that so? Alright. / Then you won't might coming with me to the High Schooler's cabin later.

b. I guess I've been too comfortable

4. There's work to be done for tonight's events.

5. Understood...

6. ......

7. You / were treated cruelly, weren't you?
TL note: interesting note, in the tanko, starting here, the scene is completely different until the next scene change with iwai and the boat. Meaning, the lines and pictures are completely different

page 28

1. ...What makes you think that?

2. Aah, nothing. It would be great if I'm wrong, but

3. ...You entered this school from a rather far away elementary school, right?

4. You are the only one from your school, so I don't hear your name a lot.

5. ...You, having no relation to anyone else.

6. ...Was that

7. hard for you?

page 29

a. It's the scissor boy! The murderer!

b. Kiri, so you say you hate the neighborhood children again...

1. I am

2. a bad person.

3. I'm not "normal," so... / ...If I'm not to be normal... I must control it. I must.

4. But, / if there is another person out there in the world for me... / Someone who can accept the "evil" me as I am.

5. I never threw away my scissors because in the coner of my heart, I wished it to be true.

page 30

1. Then Iwai appeared. / I thought that she was the one.

2. But, that was just wishful thinking.

3. I believed it when she thanked me. / But, it differed from my imagination.

4. She thought as a girl.

5. Obviously, there is someone else.

6. I should stay positive. / But, no matter what it was, right now, I'm...

7. simply embarrassed how I was on cloud nine all by myself...

page 31

1. Really, those guys were such a pain... / ...Thanks for this. I'm imdebted to you, Mushiyanokouji.

2. Ah, no. / It was I who...

3. Wait.

4. How did she know my name?

page 32

1. All I could think of was / die die die...
TL note: or "kill kill kill" would probably be more to what it supposed to be

2. Simply, those guys just do not understand a girl's feelings / at all.

3. Honestly...

4. Men can all go rot in hell.

5. ...Wh-

6. Why?...

page 33

page 34

1. You think that as well, don't you?

2. "Hair Queen."

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 9

Wed, 27 Apr 2011 00:53:45 +0000

//read only//

Yeah... I've been working on academic stuff that isn't Japanese related. You know those stuff... The stuff that's important and will help you get ahead in the future. The important stuff.
I like to put these tl here since once in a while I come here, look at my tl, then I go, "hey... that doesn't sound right..." I actually put my tl in many places... This is just the one public place. Yeah.

Okay, so brief general idea of what happens in this chapter. The beginning of the School camping trip arc. Or rather, my name for this arc...

Spoiler: Click to Show/Hide

Heh.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 9
Title: Before the Game

page 1

1. You come quite often now, don't you?

2. I really like Ms. Hiromi's piano.

3. And also... / I like talking with you since I never had a woman to look up to before.

a. FuhFuh

4. That makes me happy.

5. Oh right!

6. I have news! I'm going to have a sleep over!

page 2

1. A sleepover?

2. My school is having an orientation for 2 nights and 3 days.

3. Aah!

a. How nice.

4. We'll be hiking and boat riding...

5. I get it, I get it. You'll be watching / the stars at night around a campfire...

6. Ah...

7. ?

8. Do you not like stars?

9. No, it's just...

10. It's not that I hate them but...

11. ...It's hard for me to explain, I guess...

12. I guess I'm jealous of everyone else's enjoyment...
TL note: come back to this

page 3

1. What if / someone asks "Come watch with me?"

2. Eh?

3. I could not see the stars, but / the time spent with my friends was very fun.

4. You as well, should try inviting "the person you want by your side." / Then perhaps those gloomy thoughts will be blown away.

page 4

1. You only have to ask.

2. With just that, your world will change.

3. ......

4. ...So, going to ask a boy?

a. Kyah

5. My goodness, what will you do?

6. Eh? EEEEEEEH?!

page 5
TL note: remember, I go top-down, then right to left, though hopefully with the pictures there, the tl will be pretty obviously where they should be

Title: Before the Game

a. --Tokusa Private Middle School Class 3-B #21 Kiri Haimura's belongings--

b. Hiking Boots

c. Backpack (Everyone prepares a big one)

d. Thermos

e. Toothbrush - Bug Spray - Aspirin
TL note: it doesn't exactly say aspirin, but the other word is too long...

f. Orientation Handbook

g. Handkerchief - Tissue

h. Cold Weather Clothes

i. Cellphone

j. Jersey and Track Suit (The usual school designated ones)

k. Writing Supplies

l. Scissors (Personal Item)

m. Towel - Gloves

n. Underwear (For all the sweating)

page 6

1. So,

2. I met the Rulebook that night.

3. Ms. Zenigata quickly regained consciousness.

4. Ah, umm...

5. Ms. Zenigata...?

6. Ugh...

7. I'm really sorry for all this!

8. How you had to carry me all the way to a hospital!

9. No, no, it's okay...

page 7

1. I'm just glad nothing happ...

a. Haha...

2. I umm... Now, how can you say that? / I thought it felt pretty good when I lost consciousness.

3. A while back, after I failed to escape from a choke hold in my police judo training... / Now how should I say this... Even though I blacked out...

b. No, nevermind. It's too embarrassing.

c. Woah
TL note: right of Kiri

4. Ah!

5. Huh? What?!

6. You don't feel the same?!
TL note: reCheck

7. I don't want to know.

page 8

1. I can't help that I like it...

2. Ah, umm... / Anyways, thank Ms. Byouinzaka. / She's the one who showed me the hospital...

3. (skull)

4. ...Hey, you, / why did you call me?

5. Because I didn't know anyone else who knew more about the goods than you...

a. And the Professor didn't want to talk about it.

6. B-But, I'm your enemy!

7. S-Sorry!

b. (But, you did helped her though)

8. Well, I have something I want to say...

9. You

10. You're Rulebook's "Instead," aren't you?

page 9

1. ...Is that perhaps

2. related to the Killing Goods?

3. ...The higher ups in the police department have a connection to the group "Gossip." / I know they are helping him...

4. I heard they were originally an organization

5. Simply for the upper class.../ With the world leaders as its center.

page 10

1. That's about right.

2. Gossip is an / "observation" group.

3. They don't directly do anything to the Authors. / They administrate any information they can to encourage killing the Queen. / That's all. And for that reason...

4. they disgust me.

5. ...I see, so you are all

6. connected to this somehow...

page 11

1. Justice Nakajima's bizarre power

2. His "Rulebook of Sentencing and Execution" Killing Good

3. is activated by the terrible crimes of murders and thieves. / Like the start of a trial

4. But, there's another requirement that favors him... "Flagrant Observation."

5. "The judge sits front-row"...

6. In order to have an Author commit a crime before him, / he'll be using it somewhere even now.

page 12

1. In addition... / He's no longer getting the same high as he did when he killed criminals.

2. ...The human mind is not that strong...

3. That's why I chase him.

4. I will do whatever it takes / to stop him...

page 13

a. Sorry... May I have a tissue? My nose is running...

b. Hey

c. Here

1. I failed to mention any of this to Iwai.

2. And time went its course.

3. ...It's now the start of Golden Week

4. Hah

5. Hah

6. ...

7. Hah

8. Hah

9. Done...

page 14

1. It's the middle of orientation.

2. Only the high schoolers get the bus... / We all had to walk from the base of the mountain...

a. Uaahhh...

3. It took around three hours...

b. You okay?

c. yeah...

4. You don't look tired at all, Kotarou...

c. Amazing

d. I'm not tired

5. because I work out.
TL note: okay... "I train" sounds odd to me here. He does practice the Iai arts... so, I don't know if that is included in the "work out" verb.

6. As expected from the ace of the Iai club.
TL note: Iai is the art of sword drawing.

7. Oh.

page 15

1. Good job, under-classmates!

2. We have Barley Tea here for all of you.

a. Oh!

b. Wah (heart)

c. Their reactions are so strange

d. It isn't strange at all.

3. Okay, what are your numbers?

4. We're group 4 of 3-B...

e. Ugh

5. If the entire class is here, then line up according to your groups. I'm going to give an introduction to the facilities.

6. ...It's not food time yet?

7. ...Don't think we'll let you eat that easily!

8. ...Hey...

9. Wait... Time out...

page 16

1. Aren't you treating your underclassmen kinda bad? / huh? Mr. Upperclassman? HUH?!

a.. Aah?!

2. Well, the general idea behind this training camp is something along the lines of "teaching you how unfair the world is."

3. Because we were treated like this two years back, / you too will experience the same torment.

4. This is bullying!!

5. It's a never-ending spiral of evil!!

b. So, we prepared the curry like you said.

c. SFX: growl
TL note: stomach growl

d. Thanks

page 17

a. SFX: I really rather not have this SFX TS simply because it doesn't translate well into english... Also, I'm only 50% sure what it is.

b. Ngh.

1. ......

2. ...Who was the one who invited her to our group?

c. SFX: Sip Sip...
TL note: I like to think he is drinking the water

3. I did.

d. She would've been all alone if I didn't...

4. How come you aren't with Iwai?

5. Er, she was braiding hair with the other girls...

6. Ah, I see...

page 18

1. It was Iwai

a. SFX: Sip Sip...

2. that said she was embarrassed to be together at school though...

3. Sigh, to be lonely is to be alone.

4. Oh right, I wonder if the teams on the opposite side made it up yet.

5. It is getting dark...

6. However...

7. Kiri / Kiri!

8. Ah, you're here.

b. I didn't expect you to make it since you're so small.

9. Hey, Kiri

10. You didn't forget it, right? You are prepared, right?

page 19

1. Later today, you see...

2. At night... Okay?!

3. 'Kay.

4. Text me the place later.

5. I have a promise with a girl today.

a. See you later!

6. That is the only thing on my mind.

page 20

1. So much preparations...

a. You finished your task?

b. Yes!

2. Tomorrow is the main event. / I wonder if the preparations will be enough, Ms. Vice-President.

3. ...Mr. President... Do you mean

4. the star gazing?

5. Or perhaps, the Queen's death?

page 21

1. There was a very suspicious letter sent by "Gossip," but... /more surprising is how they are this close to us now.

2. Tomorrow will be the Queen's final day.

3. That sends shivers down my spine just thinking about it.

page 22

1. To do something like this

2. It must be irresistible, / isn't it?
TL note: for TS, rearrange to fit better as you see fit

page 23

1. The brutal murderer, whose referred to as the "lord of the pigs" by the newer generations, was a Meiji era noble. / The death of a loved one changed him.

2. Many guests were invited to his mansion, but all of their existence were erased. / ...And, almost all of them were later found in horrendous states.

3. Because of hunger and disease... The victims were tied up in the basement of the mansion. / and only given little food and water, and a raggedly rug.

4. They were raised like livestock.

5. They became submissive like pigs

6. from being struck by master's whip.

page 24

1. The path to domination will start here.

2. Turn compliment by being struck. / Gain power by striking.

3. Once a human hears the crack of the whip, / that sound

4. will turn a him into a pig.

page 25

1. I want my shoes licked

2. by the pigs / By the pigs...

page 26

a. Hoo... Hoo...
TL note: owls

b. SFX: Wiggle
TL note: um... I could be a SFX for the blanket being flapped up. Or... something else, I'm just guessing here. Or it could be what I have... meh...

c. Oooh!

d. Oh Oh Oh

e. Whoa! Her boobs are huge!

f. Wah, isn't this stuff inappropriate for kids? / L-cup...? This magazine is amazing!
TL note: Before this I didn't know there is a L-cup, also the first hit on google for "L cup" has a pretty model in it :D... and... (insert bra jokes here for Luna). Or you know... It could just mean "Large"... Meh
TL note2: this line was long but was 2 or 3 people speaking. The dash for this line is for the difference speakers.

g. I am interested in that though...

1. I'm

2. I'm going to use the toilet.

page 27

a. It's a little cold

1. A little past 12

2. My personal main event

b. I'm hiding on the side of the road across from the plaza

3. Under the night sky,

c. Iwai....

4. With just the two of us, / hidden from the rest,

d. Iwa...

e. SFX: Wiggle

page 28

a. Camouflage...

b. Kiri, no one

c. saw you leaving, right?

1. ...is the ultimate situation!!

2. Well, Iwai, / Let's cut your hair!

Translation: Yumekui Merry 8

Sat, 22 Jan 2011 01:03:20 +0000

//read only//

Okay, because of what happened last time. Let me say this. You see the 2 words up on top there that says "Read Only" ? No? Well... Let me say it again.

Read Only

One more time?

Read Only

Okay, now that that is done. Let me say why I put those there. The translations I put on mangahelpers are usually either reserved or a first draft that I don't want to see it popping up anywhere I don't like. If I don't put such a sign on the translation that means it is not reserved and I don't care what happens to it, but don't come asking me for translation checking since they are still quick drafts.

Anyways, I know I said I wasn't picking this up. And I'm not. But, I liked the title for this chapter. I'm not doing anymore since the next chapters aren't latin phrases. I will delete any messages requesting anymore chapters of this manga translated.

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Yumekui Merry
REM 8: Cogito ergo sum
TL note: see page 2 line a

page 1

1. Regret

page 2

a. REM 8 Cogito ergo sum
TL note: or if you don't like the original latin phrase: "I think, therefore I am" however do note that the japanese omits the "I" in the phrase.

page 3

1. 383 rounds, 383 losses...

2. Yu-Yumeji, one more round! Just stay for one more round!

3. Those words say we can win!

4. How long do you think we've been playing this?! I have had enough of this!

5. Ah!

6. -ll then, next is entertainment news!

7. The center of teenage popularity, the singer-songwriter YOKATO has accounced an unexpected pause of all activity!

8. You have misplaced one of the songs you like to sing. Can you please elaborate on that?

a. YOKATO accounced an unexpected pause of all activity
TL note: tv screen box thingy

9. When he will return is unknown. As for the company office...

10. Aha...
TL note: he actually says: "Acha..." but that's really more of a japanese thing

11. Isana is going to by devasated...

page 4

1. Whoa... This is beyond what I thought will happen.

2. I've suddenly lost sight of myself.
TL note: reCheck bolded

3.
TL note: hm... Is she reciting that guy's lyrics? maybe...
TL note2: I'll come back to this later. Possible I may forget to TL. So, will definitely be tl by 2nd look.

4. I'm sorry, Yumeji. Please go dinner shopping in my stead... / I don't have the enery...
TL note: the second half of the bubble, in the japanese, it literally cuts off like this: "My energy to move..." However, that sounds either stupid or confusing in English I believe.

5. Wha?!

6. I don't know what to do! What should I buy?!

7. No worries since I wrote down all the important items. / You can also show where the store is to Merry.

page 5

a. (music)I.am.by.your.side.
TL note: left side

b. by.your.life.(music)
TL note: right side
TL note2: reTL: come back to this to make it make better sense.

1. You're very good!
TL note: merry commenting about the lady's cooking

2. Any family household will enjoy this kind of flavour.

3. The White Radishes that are hollow...

4. Hollow?

5. Yumeji!

page 6

1. I'll carry that basket!

2. No, it's alright. Isn't it a bit too heavy for you?

3. Don't you know?

4. I am very strong!

5. Ah, okay okay. / Since you insist.
TL note: on carrying it

page 7

1. Is this good?

2.

3. So, what's next?

4. ...You seem to be enjoying this.

5. .......... / You can tell?

page 8

1. ...Nah... This is simply the first time I'm in this kind of place.

2. Since all I have been doing is chasing after Nightmares.
TL note: I forget what we called the dream guys... Nightmares or Dream Demons as gg-fansub so translated it as.

3. Oh yeah.

4. How long has it been since you came "here?"

5. A month? ... Or could it be a year?

6. Hmm?....

7. I think this is the 10th time I'm seeing this.

page 9

a. Eh... That means...

b. 10 years...?!

1. Well, I was always searching for those guys who I had no idea when will appear.

2. Is that all?
TL note: reCheck, assumed yumeji is talking

3. I don't remember too well myself.

page 10

1. There wasn't anything else I did except that.

a. Yeah.

b. I can't even imagine something...
TLnote: reCheck

2. You're thinking that it must've been lonely, aren't you?

3. Heheh.

4. I'm not so weak-hearted.

5. You have often said that you cried though.

page 11

1. There were times when I didn't know if I was really able to go back or not though. / There would be nothing left if that was taken from me.
TL note: reTL to clear up vagueness

2. ...But because of what you did for me.

3. ........

4. You treated me as you would anyone else.
TL note: reCheck, reTL, reEverything line 2,4

page 12

1. Thanks.

2. O...Oh.

3. But you're the one who insisted! You're only here with me to return me "over there!"

4. ...I'm correct, aren't I?
TL note: of course you can just shorten to "am I wrong?"

page 13

1. You promised!

2. Ye-Yes mam! I'll fulfill it at once!
TL note: reTL, don't like wording

3. ...No abnormalities! Mam.
TL note: you can remove the mam if you want. It's there for politeness.

4. Peace is best.

page 14

1. This

2. This is SO COOL!

3. Wait, Yui!

4. Did you find another weird doll again?

5. Aah, Be aware of these people's ideology. What a handsome look... / Surely, it must've been hard to have transversed the sea... / Welcome to Japan.

6. The Yui-theatre has started again.

7. Yoink

8. How about this one? / This one is similiar toYui's funky style, isn't it?

9. Not quite. / You don't understand. Nao simply does not understand at all.
TL note: I'm going to assume that girl's name is Nao.

10. I don't get Yui's worldy perception.
TL note: reTL, wording

page 15

1. Well, Yui also... with me...

2. After becoming a high schooler, this is a bit you see...

3. Being interested in this is well... You've changed.

4. I've changed?

5. Till a little while ago, you collected them on your strap with a keyholder.
TL note: keyholder? keychain? meh...

6. Now, you're satisified if it isn't this big...
TL note: reCheck

7. That's not what I meant...

8. (><)

9. I do want it... But it's pretty expensive.......

page 16

1. Hey Yumeji! We've finished so let's hurry back!

2. Hey, come on now. Look where you're walking.

3. I'm fine. I put an "eye" behind me.

4. No, that "eye" is closed. Hey!...

5. Ah!

page 17

1. Ah! Sorry...

page 18

a. Hi-Fu-Mi.... Eh?

1. That was lucky. It's still okay from the drop...
TL note: reTL

b. This good-catching pervert!

c. Damn this generation!

2. S-Stop, Nao! It wasn't a big deal. That couldn't had been avoided.

3. You're talking as if he's an elementary school kid! You always downplay these things!

page 19

1. We are really

2. Sorry!

3. Sigh... Nao is quick to jump to the wrong conclusion. / It must've hurt, huh?

4. But I thought he was a molester...

5. NAO!

6. Before, you did see 'Sana and me naked as well, right? / Does Yumeji like to do that sort of thing?
TL note: author might have did a typo and left out the I in Isana or he is giving merry an accent... whichever

7. I-Idiot! You say that now?! That was also an accident!

8. Besides, isn't it your fault for all that had happened here?!

9. I wasn't paying attention either. / The doll is okay so let's let this go.
TL note: hm...

page 20

1. But that was amazing! / Do you play some sort of sport?

2. My Grandpa is a master of Kabudo... I'm kidding.
TL note: Kabudo = Okinawan weapons fighting

3. I don't know Kabudo. / I'm just a guy who gets special powers at a scene of a fire.
TL note: reCheck

4. Rather than someone in the middle of a fire...

5. If that had broke, my money would be all burned up...
TL note: okay, she does not literally say that. In the japanese, she says: "...my purse will go into a finanical crisis." but japanese and their punning joking speech... Which is why I said "money would be all burned up..." so to relate to the fire...

a. AHAHAHA

6. Hahah?

7. Forgive me, Yui. I just remembered that I have something I need to take care of.

8. Eh? / Ah, okay.

9. You shouldn't be doing that sort of thing. Your girlfriend is right there!

10. What?! / NO! She isn't my girlfriend...

11. Hey, good luck!

12. ?

13. ?

page 21

1. Then, we'll be going as well.
TL note: you know... I'm still not completely sure who was speaking in page 20 line 7 so, reTL

2. Ah.

3. Umm.

4. Would it be alright if I have your name?

5. Hm, my name?

6. I'm not going to etch your name into a voodoo doll or anything!

7. I'm Yumeji... / Wait, voodoo?!
TL note: okay there is a slight problem in this line. You know how in japanese you say your last name first... well, since this is a english translation, you say your first name first. Which causes a translation problem. In the japanese, he says his last name first which is "fujiwara"

8. Yumeji, let's go!

9. Sorry, see you later.

page 22
TL note: I count the first frame as the top bubble. line 2 and 3 will be the bubbles in the box with the girl in it

1. Your heart rate is rising. What's wrong, Yui?

2. Nothing at all.

3. Rather, are you okay?

4. Aah, I'm recovering. / How are you doing?

5. I'm fine. In the beginning, it was hard, but I guess I'm used to this by now.

6. Well,

7. Shall we begin?

8. Let's review. Right now, I can cause an opening of the "boundary" door to anyone within 50 meters of me. So, if those guys are within that radius...

9. We'll expose any Nightmares clinging to a human and kill them. Am I right?

10. ...When I'm "over there," I will make sure you'll remain safe. I don't want you getting dragged into this, Yui.

page 23

1. Let's go.

2. Engi.

page 24

1. Me... / Merry!

2. A "Daydream," huh? Lucky me.

3. Is a Nightmare trying to take over someone again?

page 25

1. I sense multiple Nightmares.

2. Don't you... kill as well?
TL note: reCheck

3. Ha-Hah?

4. I foolishly let myself be taken in by you just to satisfy my rage...

5. Don't you kill Nightmares as well?!
TL note: reCheck, hm... something is off

6. I'll never forgive you!!

page 26

1. Hey, Yumeji, what is she talking about?...

2. Eh-Hey, she's coming!!

page 27

1. I've shown you the difference in our strength.

2. Know that resistance is futile!

3. My name is Engi Sleepies.

4. Answer me. Your boss.

5. Falce Hércules
TL note: that accent marker is important

6. Where is he?!!

Translation: Yumekui Merry 7

Sat, 08 Jan 2011 11:33:52 +0000

//read only//
I am not picking this up. Well, I was but then I decided not to after about halfway through because of the time that I will need to translate a chapter.
Anyways, Hyuver will sooner or later finish and release chapter 6 of yumekui merry that has been left untouched and basically 3/4 completed for the last year. That is something to look forward to I guess.
Anime is good though. Not awesome just yet. Good though. Like the opening song. But, the anime has yet to reach awesome just yet.

EDIT: Oh look... someone decided to take my translation and use it for a scanlation without even asking. I'll be sure to leave random pages untranslated the next time I post on mangahelpers, okay? <3

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Yumekui Merry
REM 7: Dream Eater's Job

page 1
a. REM 7 Dream Eater's Job

page 2

1. Tuna and Black Olive Cream Spaghetti. / ...and for dessert, Ice Coffee and Mango Custard, please.

2. Could-Could you repeat your order? / Ice Tuna-peghetti and for dessert, Oliver... Bustard? Am I correct?

page 3

1. What is that? You got it all jumbled up. / Though my dad would've made all of that.
TL note: as in her father would've cooked all of that nonsense.

2. Ah, geez!

3. (><)

4. Why do you have to use these complicated names?!

5. Wouldn't it be better to have Spaghetti as Spaghetti and Pudding as Pudding?! / This way, we can take away all the differences in taste.

6. No way.

7. Even the donuts you like so much / have many varieties, you know.

8. So, try your best to remember them! Okay?

9. There's no dream or hope.
TL note: I like to think she means "not a chance" but she says it like that...

page 4

1. Oh? You finished rather quickly.

2. Yumeji

3. Thanks for today.

4. So, how is the summer bootcamp going?

5. A new menu was created.

6. I don't understand.

7. Wel-Welcome.

8. Come on Merry, show the results of your training!

page 5

1. I want a large serving of 88 sets of vanished tree forests.

2. Forest?! We have such a thing?!

3. On the menu it says everything is allowed. / There's a lot more to this resturant than it looks.

4. So it's a code.

5. It's a code.

6. Trees from a forest...?

7. Hey, Isana, I want to talk with you for a bit.

8. What about?

9. About summer vacation, there's not much of it left, right?

page 6

1. So, I beg of you!

2. Please let me copy your homework!!

3. No way, Yumeji.

4. I predicted that would be your answer.

5. Work shifts, a pastry boy, I'll do anything.

6. Ah, that's not the problem.

7. That's not the problem.

page 9

1. Isana was planning to look at yours.

2. What was that?!

3. That's the problem...

4. I didn't see this coming. / I thought Isana would be the type to finish everything in July!

5. Ugh... / Saki-chan said the same thing...

6. Okay, go!

7. Just because they're empty plates, if you're careless, I'll "boom"... got it?
TL note: see the finger action, that's what the "boom" is, it is like he says the SFX

8. O... Okay Master.

page 10

1. Relax.

2. Wah!

3. Wa / Wah/ WAH!

4. Hey, are you okay? / Slow down.

5. Thank... Thank you...

page 11

1. Hey, Yumeji.

2. Back when we were kids,

3. Back then, you / saved me like that as well.

a. Snap your wrist when you use the broom, 'kay?

4. Ah...

5. You mean "that" time?

page 12

1. In the park, I slipped

2. but you caught me.

page 13

1. Because of me, your right hand was injured. / I remember being so scared of all the blood that was coming out.

2. I wasn't in any pain because of how loud you were crying.

3. This is my blood of justice and it never runs out, so I'm alright!

4. I said this sort of thing, right? / It wasn't a good story.

5. You did. You did!

6. That wound from that day is completely gone. / Not even a scar remains.

7. That doctor was really amazing, huh?

page 14

1. Being a waitress is easy.

2. This is quite nostalgic... I don't remember that story well.

3. Wasn't that a major part of your life? Don't go forgetting it!

4. Ugh... / I honestly don't have any memories of this except for the injury...

5. What... Are you joking?

6. Ah...

7. What are we going to do about the homework? There is a lot of it this year...

8. Should we try calling Taka-kun and Saki-chan for a study group?

9. We can go ahead and give that trick a try. / We'll probably end up messing around though. Mostly me.
TL note: reCheck

10. ...Yeah...

page 15

1. Spill it. Where is that person?

2. I don't know. / I'm only to met that jerk once when 'm came in here.
TL note: yeah... you have no idea how hard it is to keep things non-gender specific... I also don't know who they are talking about. Though if I had to guess...

3. ......

4. So, what's going to happen to me? / Am I to... die? ...Ow...

5. Please forgive me.

page 16

1. Your actions were the same. / Accept your fate.

2. Hah! HAHA! That's true, isn't it?!

3. I never did get even a taste of that damn pure hearted bastard!
TL note: reCheck bolded

4. You're hesitating?!
TL note: okay... he doesn't really say that exactly, but I like this better than just "feeling scared"

5. Just stare at me like that from up there!

6. The view from there just divine, isn't it?!

page 17

1. Ow... / Damn it. I never heard of someone not being able to return to the dream world.

2. If I knew how, I would never come back here.

3. Damn that bastard for speaking ill of a good thing.

4. In any case... That bastard ain't never coming here.

5. So fuck... / ...you.
TL note: okay, it isn't really screw you presay... Not exaclty anyways but it fits. I would've like to go with fuck you... You know what? Screw "Screw you." Let's go with fuck you.

6. ...From the start, there was no going back.

7. None.
TL note: ...well, I had to put something in this bubble. This is a line that requires careful planning or something.

page 18

1. You are all

2. coming with.

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 8

Mon, 13 Dec 2010 03:28:20 +0000

//For reading purposes only//
WHEEEE!
~~~

Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 8
Title: Isolation Inhibitor "2"

page 1

1. We held our breaths

2. The smallest sounds vanished

3. In the silence

4. In the silence, we focued our ears.
TL note: or strain our ears

page 2

1. SFX: Squeeze

2-7. Ba-bump

page 3

title: Isolation Inhibitor "2"

page 4

a-f. SFX: clap

g. oo

h. hah

1. aha / aha

2. I'm so embarrassed

3. Ahaha, are you always the one playing?

4. Yes, but / there's no need to clap so much.

5. ...boring.

page 5

1. ......

a. The orders have arrived
TL note: can maybe shorten to just "Your orders."

2. hmm...

b. SFX: chew chew
TL note: or whatever the sound you make when you eat ice cream!

c. Food items are expensive

3. Right now... You stopped in halfway, didn't you?
TL note: halfway of the music piece

4. My.

5. You know music?

6. ...Why did stop there?

7. A little further and it would've finished...

8. hm... / That's because...

page 6

1. Did/ Did someone like this just come in he...!
TL note: incomplete because she bit her tongue

page 7

1. Ah... Eh... You bit your tongue?

2. Isn't that that guy just now?

3. Are you alright?

a. water

4. Who are you?...

5. Auh Auh, pardon me...

6. I am Kozakura Zenigata...

7. A police officer...

b. EEH

c. No way!

page 8

1. I'm chasing after that person... But... But!!

2. He got away againin...
TL note: not a typo >_>

3. Stop crying.

4. ...Is she really a police officier?

5. ...Police?

6. What?...

7. This is making me quite uneasy...

page 9

1. Long ago,

2. there was a judge named Garibaldi.

3. On his last days, he commited the crime of killing 20 people by hanging.
TL note: recheck

4. He's a bullshit philanthropist in any era who kindly hanged criminals

5. Because of them, he never allowed anything less than the death penalty for the garbage of society.

6. That was his "justice" for society.

7. ...Justice, / What of it?
TL note: fuck... see page 10 line 2 >_> I'm going to need to Englishify a name...

8. Mr. Cutting and Severing?

9. Kakakah

page 10

1. Justice is whatever it may be.

2. It's my name. / I'm Justice Nakajima.
TL note: sigh... all that build up wasted on a stupid pun

a. Hello.

3. Whatever, anyways... / I'm not an enemy. I just wanted to say hello.

page 11

1. ...Eh?

2. "Once I have killed the Hair Queen, / I am entitled to have my wish granted."

3. Do you believe in this saying or are you enticed by the queen?

4. In either case, holders of the goods gather around that girl.

5. ...I have no interest in any wish. So, there's no worries.

6. I only wish to judge the crimes of the gathered murderers.

7. That is my passion.

page 12

1. ...So,

2. have you / killed?

3. He hanged an ordinary man.

4. This man / is executing criminals who can't be made public.
TL note: reCheck

5. So, in essence, he is a hit man.

6. ...Police rather like having a cooperator's approval. / How many times have I said that?
TL note: reCheck

7. Even so, / what you're doing is clearly a crime...

page 13

1. ...I will

2. not overlook thissSS-ssss...

3. ...Even though you're such a scary-cat,

4. you would kill again?...
TL note: yeah... reCheck "kill"

5. Misuse of authority.

6. Next, parking on the curb.
TL note: okay... it said parked on the street... But... that's not a crime... is it?

7. Those are your crimes...

page 14

1. Kick her support.
TL note: okay this one is weird since you know how when people hang themselves they have something to lift them up, like a stool or something? That is "what" is being "kicked"

2. "Rulebook of Sentencing and Execution."

page 15

1. Ah...

2. Ahh...

3. Hah

4. Uh...
TL note: this is the one that is in both frame 1 and 2

5. Hah...

6. Gah...

7. A...

8. Ah....

9. ......

10. Pzz!!
TL note: sound of rope breaking... if you got a better sound...

11. ......!

page 16

1. My power is "Conditional Murder."

2. "To judge what I consider a crime a capital offense or not." There is a condition. / If the conditions do not match, then the rope will break.
TL note: reTL

3. ...If that happens, / you'll faint like this girl here.

4. I'll leave her to you.

5. Eh?!

6. I hate cleaning up.

7. My power is this boring thing.

8. I want to have something with more evil.

page 17

1. ...Hey now, / I'm justice, no?

a. Caio

2. ...I wonder...

page 18

1. Ah

2. Kiri, you're back.

3. What were you doing? / Where's that person from before? Did he come back?

4. ...Ah...

5. He went home... I guess...

a. What was all that about?

b. ...Who knows...

c. Yeah...

6. Ah... Eh? / Ah, whoa! I didn't ask for any food, didn't I?

7. Oh this? / This is a gift! / Pasta with cheese!

d. Here, Kojima

8. Yeah, what a great shop.

9. ...You didn't look like you brought any money... / So, a student discount just for today.

10. He spoke!

page 19

a. The cheese is really good.

1. I was really afraid when I came in here, but

b. SFX: whisper

2. I understand now why Father liked this place.

3. ...Yeah, and the recital was great too...

4. ...I forgot.

c. Hm?

5. The problem earlier.

6. In every piece I play, I like to leave a little part at the end out.

7. Hoping that you will want to hear it again. / Hoping you will continue to come.

page 20

1. You'll be here to play, won't you?

2. Of course

3. So, won't you come again?

4. ...But

a. Come with money next time

5. You certainly want to hear it, don't you?

6. Till the end...

7. ...Forgive me.

8. It's part of my habit.
TL note: for not finishing a song

page 21

1. I want to see you again. / So, I cannot finish the song for you.

2. ...6 minutes, 46 seconds. / That is how long

3. it will take to finish the song from where I left off. If I do...

page 22

1. ...What's wrong?

2. SFX: gee

3. SFX: gee

4. Hiruma's girl...

5. had very... glossy hair.

6. It seems, we've / met with the "Hair Queen."

7. ...How revolting.

8. SFX: GGEE...

9. I don't believe you'll get a wish if you kill the queen.

10. ...But, the man with the book today, / there's a lot like him whose trying to force participation in the game.
TL note: reCheck

11. Haha

page 23

1. ...If this Gossip person hadn't been snooping us,

2. we wouldn't have had to invite him to a special concert.

3. SFX: FLUMP!

4. Honestly, corpses are creepy silent.

5. Heh

a. Honestly, corpses are creepy silent.

b. Heh

6. I'm deaf so

7. I wouldn't get such a joke.

page 24

1. ...Then

2. I'll play for you. / A music even you can hear.

3. I wonder if you'll listen to the end today as well. / Houichi.

4. My Instead.

5. The night is long. / I'll listen for as long as you want.

6. Sing a Psalm.

7. "Pianissimo of Symphonic Ecstasy"

page 25

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 7

Fri, 26 Nov 2010 02:23:29 +0000

//For reading purposes only//
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEBOOOOOOOOOOOO
Yeah, I'm bored.

Dansai Bunri No Crime Edge

Title: Where's the guest?

page 1

1. This scissor is called the "Crime Edge of Cutting and Severing."

2. This is the only tool in the world that can cut Iwai Mushiyanokōji's, this small girl's, hair.

3. And

4. This belongs to a type of cursed weapon called Killing Goods who were owned by a bloody murderers.

5. With this thing, I will cut up all foes.

6. This girl belongs only to me.

a. Ah!

b. Hm?

page 2

page 3

a. Class B

b. Class C

c. We're together again!

c. Yeah!

1. So long, Kashiko!

2. I'll never forget you!

3. This is Kiri Haimura speaking.

4. It's april now.

page 4

1. ...Every year,

2. before the start of the holidays, we have the orientation for 2 nights and 3 days / in combination with the high schoolers.

3. This year, we plan to rent the Dake Kagami Institute for this.

a. The president's so cool! (heart)

b. yeah! (heart)

4. While in the presence of mother nature, I wish for all the third year middle schoolers / to deepen their relationships with the high schoolers for the upcomming year.
TL note: I guess it is a outdoors institute thing...

5. Tokusa is a combined middle-high school.

6. That is all.

7. We can all go into the High School without any sort of tests.
TL note: The actual literal is like, "we all go to high school in an escalator ritual" sorta... It just means they can all enter the high school without any restrictions such as a test. In japan, you need to pass exams to get into certain schools. - I don't expect this to be needed to be ts since I changed the TL so much to make it clear as to what he means.

8. Thank you for listening.

9. Aah... She must not be able to see...

c. The president.

d. Ngh!

e. Ngh!
TL note: ngh are above iwai. Cleaner will probably not have cleaned this, but hopefully s/he will.

10. High School president, Seito Zaiga, everyone.
TL note: okay, so he doesn't really say everyone, but I need something to make it sound more natural. You know how people say the person's name of who was speaking at the end of that person's speech? Yeah, this is that. Like how at the end of a speech, someone else goes to the mic and says: "President Barrack Obama, everybody!" and then everybody claps... This isn't the same tone as my example though. It's more dull.

page 6

1. I only chose this school because it was so close to my grandfather's house, but

2. it turned out for the better it seems.

a. There's nothing to worry about.

3. There wasn't any attacks by an Author of a Good after Sledgehammer.

4. ...During Spring break, I went back to my parent's house.

5. Besides that I always walked to see Iwai as much as I could.
TL note: he isn't talking about his break anymore is what that beside is for.

6. To cut her hair.

b. How are ya?!

c. Professor?!

d. Why are you here?!

7. Yeah, it was all in all pretty peaceful.

8. Everyday passing by peacefully...

page 7

1. or so I wanted to believe.

2. So... We're in the same class...

3. So it seems.

4. It is hard to be around with the younger Byouinzaka sister...!

5. Wait, this is a time to be vigilant, not a time to rest...

6. ...It's okay.

page 8

1. Just do as you have been.

2. Try not to worry if you can.

3. About yourselves and others...

4. I'm not normal so... / I'm shunned by others anyways...

5. Speaking of which, Kotarou also isn't that popular.

a. Hey, you shouldn't associate with that gloomy girl.

b. I heard she killed someone.

c.

d. Hm...

6. I think it'll only be hard at first...

7. ......

8. ...If you don't try to get along with anyone, it'll be hard to talk to anyone.

9. Since no one in the school have heard of the Goods, / wouldn't it be better to not think of yourself as abnormal?...

page 9

1. ...Yes, maybe...

2. ...It's only what I believe though.

3. ...I'll / try my best to...

4. ...That was
TL note: reCheck

5. the basis of a right-minded girl.

a. Finally...

6. Kiri...

b. Hah

7. And... Ah... Byou...?!

page 10

1. In the same Class...

2. It's a pleasure.

3. Ah.

4. Eh.

5. Ah.

6. ...Right...

7. ......

8. Recently even since the SlegdeHammer incident,

9. Iwai has become quite timid toward anyone affilated with the Goods...

a. For this sort of thing though, it can't be helped (sweat sweat sweat)

10. Iwai... You should unwind a little.

11. You have somewhere you want to go to, don't you?

b. Break Break
TL note: between iwai and kiri

12. ...... .......

13. ......

c. Eh, Um... Ugh...

page 11

1. ...One thing.

2. I have to apologize.

3. We weren't the ones who killed your father. / You were misled by us this entire time, but / believe me when I say it was another Author who did it.

4. It took me this long for me to tell you this, but...

5. ...Thank you.

6. ...Kiri.

7. I thought of a place I want to go to.

page 12

1. My father was an antique seller, you see.

2. He brought and sold antiques from around the world, / so he was always very busy.

3. But, there was a place we often went to, you see.
TL note: I think I like the phrase: "You see" with Iwai... It seems to suit her, at least I like to think it does.
TL note2: note that it actually says "store" and not the english generalization word "place"... but store in japanese is just a generalization for resturants and... stores.

4. The atmosphere and flavour was always very nice.
TL note: probably it is more like, "we always said the ambience and flavor (of the store) was very nice." - PR's choice here to which tl you rather use. If PR doesn't choose... TS's choice!

5. Sounds good. / It is close by?

6. It's a bit far but within the city.

7. I think I still have the address written down at home...

page 13

1. Then, shall we go once school is over?

2. Okay, got it. / I'll go change.

3. ...was that alright?

4. To say?

5. I know her father was killed by a Killing Goods Author.

6. ...So, if you pursue after that person, / you two may meet with another enemy...

page 14

1. ...I already decided to protect that girl.

2. That's all I want to do.

page 15

1. Then

a. This is my first time around here

2. Why is everyone else here too?!

b. Today sure is warm.

3. Eh?

c. SFX: Yawn
TL note: left to boy's name I forget

4. Well, it's more fun with more people...

5. What's wrong, Kiri? Do you not want me to come along?

6. N-No... That's not what I meant...

d. What are we going to do?

e. We're eating out (heart)

page 16

1. By the way...

a. Hm?

2. Why is the adjacent class' Kashiko here?

b. Ah?!

3. Are you trying to pick a fight, Nigi?

c. Hey...

4. Well, I guess it doesn't matter...
TL note: maybe it meant, "There is nothing I could do(about this)"

5. ?

6. Ah, here.

d. Shows you the address only

7. This building...

e. Ping Ping Ping

page 17

1. Hey, whose the one who suggested to come here?

a. Sake?

b. BAR

2. Iwai?

c. What's the meaning of this?

3. I-It should just be a resturant or a café...

d. It matches the address...

4. What should we do... Should we go in?

5. Yeah... / But are we allowed to?

e. To this sort of place.

6. Such tiny... Nerves, you men...

7. I'm going!

8. Whoa, wait??!

9. Wait, stop Kashiko.

10. What? I'm not doing anything wrong...

11. My word.

page 18

1. ...How rare / to have such young guests as these.

2. I'm sorry, this place prohibits minors, doesn't it?

3. Hm? It's alright.

4. We have a lunch menu. / Come in if you like.

5. ...Umm, to make sure... / This address is this place, right?

6. This?

7. Which? / I don't know.

8. Eh? / No, I said...

page 19

1. I'm sorry.

2. My eyes are blind.

a. I want to try some sake!

b. They'll report you, idiot.

3. What will you be having?
TL note: this is the waitress speaking

page 20

1. Ngh... Ngh...

2. ...I'll have a cola.

3. Black Coffee

4. Eh... Umm... / Black tea...

5. Ngh... Then, vanilla ice cream please.

6. Master? Did you get all that?

7. SFX: Ching

8. Okay, then if you please.

9. ...One more... / What about you?

10. Eh? / Ah... Sorry.

11. ...Is something wrong?

12. No...

13. A white... / Piano... It's rare to see one...

page 21

page 22

1. Would you like to hear it?

2. Eh? / You can play?

a. Bloody mary sounds like a special attack move.

b. ...Yeah.

3. I can.

4. I am here / for that reason.

5. She is a musician.

6. At night, she often plays here.

7. Unfortunately, we don't get as many guests anymore.
TL note: yeah, he doesn't say that in so many words but the original would be: "Unfortunately, customers don't come here very much."

page 23

1. Now

2. I am this piano's tuner...

3. Are you done?

4. I'm done. / You can play whenever you want.

5. Well,

6. then...

7. Escort me.

8. Houichi Koisumi.

9. Of course.

10. Hitomi Karuko.
TL note: Hm... This name is weird. But, I'm going to go by normal japanese convention which means last name is first... so translated it would be what I got (aka... first name first).

page 24

1. Their form when they took eachother's hands

2. and when I touched Iwai's hair...

3. For some reason I had a moment of déjà vu.

page 25

1. ...The performance is about to begin, now?

2. Well, My Queen, / how fortuitous it is to have you as bait again.
TL note: This line makes sense once you consider the previous chapter and the next chapter

3. You must forgive me.

4. See through this false display. / And indict them without delay.

5. Kichiri and I shall judge.
TL note: I have no idea who or what this Kichiri is.

page 26

1. Take a look

2. inside this "Rulebook of Sentencing and Execution."
TL note: it's a Good

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 6

Tue, 19 Oct 2010 08:35:05 +0000

//For reading purposes only//
This is totally a real translation. Totally.

Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Title: Lights, Camera, Akushon!
TLnote: akushon means action

page 1

1. Sledgehammer attacks Iwai...!!
TL note: magazine box on left

2. Iwai! Tatte! / Wait, don't...
TLnote: Tatte means stand

3. Kuh...

page 2

1. SFX: Crack
TL note: like the sound of cracking knuckles but... for his neck

2. Ha.
TLnote: Ha means hah.

3. Hah

4. Hah

5. Ha

6. I can't believe it... When did he get here?

7. He smashed the Kabe without so much as a squeak so quickly...
TLnote: Kabe means wall

8. It's a...

9. Killing Guzzu...
TLnote: Guzzu means Goods

page 3

1. Each Good process its own unique nouryoku.
TLnote: nouryoku means ability

2. "The power to turn things brittle..."

3. That's why it's called the "Crushing Disintegration."

4. Iwai...

5. You...

6. In the kurayami,
TLnote: kurayami means darkness

7. she was quietly shivering in fear...

page 4

cut06: Lights, Camera, Action!

page 5

1. Stop whining, Cutting and Severing.

2. You're with the Joou, aren't you?
TLnote: Joou means queen

3. Your little sister downright lied to me.

4. The satsujinki came...
TLnote: Satsujinki means murderer

5. She messed up.

6. Yamane said the wrong thing. / I sincerely apologize.

7. ...But more importantly.

8. Protect that ko.
TLnote: ko means girl

page 6

page 7

1. Gomen.
TLnote: Gomen means sorry

2. I'm really sorry, Kiri...

3. That I got you wrapped up in this...

4. No...

5. I am here today, right now

6. all on my own ishi.
TLnote: ishi means accord

page 8

1. This should be something.

2. ...To what extent will Haimura go...

3. aruiwa won't go...
TLnote: aruiwa means or rather

4. He will protect her.
TL note: heavy emphasis on all words

page 9

1. An Instead is only half of an Author.

2. To lose that is the same as your own destruction.

3. So, / as for whose the "teki"...
TLnote: teki means enemy

4. Snip

5. Snip

6. Chokin
TLnote: Chokin means snip

7. Snip.

page 10

1. ...Snip.

2. Cuts like godou.
TLnote: godou means heartbeats

3. I want my heart to be like these iron hasami.
TLnote: hasami means scissors

4. and my soul to fear nothing.

page 11

1. To have the tsuyosa to protect this girl...
TLnote: tsuyosa means power

2. If it's for that...

3. If it is for that reason...

a. I will gladly become a satsujinki.
TLnote: satsujinki means murderer

page 12

1. Crack...

2. Crack

3. piki
TLnote: piki means crack

4. Crack..

page 13

1. ...I dodged / that..

2. That's hen.
TLnote: hen means weird

3. I expected it to end like that.

4. Nande...
TLnote: nande means why

5. Why is that...

page 14

1. I see. / So I'm not scared.

2. All I see is a akanbou
TLnote: akanbou means baby

3. flailing his arms.

page 15

1. nara...
TLnote: nara means if so

page 16

1. ......!

2. I'll cut off the tendons in your te next.
TLnote: te means hand

3. Forget about the Queen

4. or else I'll be your opponent.

5. Ki...

6. Kiri...?
TL note: Yes, I know it doesn't really say that.

7. I inherited the worst chi in history.
TLnote: chi means blood

page 17

I'm "Crime Ejji of Cutting and Severing."
TLnote: ejji means edge

page 18-19

page 20

1. The power

2. to cut people as easily as kami.
TLnote: kami means hair

3. The "Crime Edge of Cutting and Severing."

4. Will that thing's nature eclipse cutting hair as his true nature...?

5. If so...

6. Then Kiri is...

page 21

a. SFX: Swing Swing Swing

b. What?!
TL note: right of iwai

1. Daijoubu. / I'm still me, Iwai!
TLnote: daijoubu means I'm fine

c. That blood really doesn't agree with me!
TL note: Left of Kiri
TL note2: not meaning in the "don't fit" way but in the "I don't like it" way

2. .....

page 22

1. ...Hah? / So you didn't deal the finishing blow.

a. Tch
TL note: left of line 1

b. Omoi
TLnote: omoi means heavy

2. Well, anways, good work I guess.

page 23

1. So he escaped without the Hanma, huh?
TLnote: Hanma means hammer

2. The Good's dominance over him probably weakened.

3. This...

a. <- On alert
TL note: right of iwai

b. Umm...

4. really is a cursed tool, isn't it?

5. Did you experience its true nature? / It was brimming with an evil power, wasn't it?

c. <- Looks happy
TL note: right of the professor

d. This guy...

6. Aku power, huh?
TLnote: aku means evil

e. Though I did also get to see Iwai's change of clothes.

f. Please go home!

e. You didn't come here to help anyways!

7. Demo......
TLnote: demo means but

page 24

1. I protected her because of it.

2. Kiri

3. Snip, snip, cut my kami.
TLnote: kami means hair

4. My hair is all long and crazy now.

a. SFX: Wipe Wipe
TL note: right of Kiri

5. ...Ah, but my blood...

b. I'm going to rub a crack in this...
TL note: left of Kiri

6. It's ii.
TLnote: ii means alright

7. That blood is surely a gift.

8. I absolutely believe in that.

page 25

1. No doubt that is an evil power.

2. Besides, it must be better

3. to cut my hair than to cut down someone, right?

4. But if I am to be accepted by this kanojo...
TLnote: kanojo means girl

5. Iwai... You're acting like the bad guy.

6. You were much worse back then!

7. Then I wish to believe in the evil.

8. Yeah. / This is a damned monogatari.
TLnote: monogatari means story

page 26

1. Kiriiii

2. You slept overnight with Iwai??!!

a. What?
TL note: above unknown body

3. Eh?

4. No.

b. Nemui
TLnote: nemui means sleepy

c. Sleepy?

d. You didn't sleep?
TL note: right of double unknown body

5. We're not going to blinded by grief.
TL note: box

6. Hah?!
TL note: Kashiko's bubble

7. Seriously?!
TL note: what's her name's bubble the short hair girl

8. Hey, Kiri, what's the meaning... / oi!
TLnote: oi means hey

9. We're not going to give up hope.

e. Not good...
TL note: between kiri and iwai last frame, ignore if not redrawn

page 27

1. We play as

2. an unusual murderer and an unawared queen
TL note: unawared that she herself is a queen... I'm trying to keep things short

3. in an awkward manner.

page 28

1. Yes...

2. Yes...

3. ....

4. Thanks...

5. Hammer is dead.

6. It was already too late by the time Gossip's doctors found him.

7. ...So, that is Haimura's first...

8. It seems he didn't die from a shikketsu...
TLnote: shikketsu means blood loss

9. It was sucide.
TL note: In the japanese it says sucide by hanging

10. He hanged himself?

//if you don't the joke by now, then you don't get the joke//

Translation: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 5

Sun, 15 Aug 2010 10:06:44 +0000

//For reading purposes only//

I saw this manga randomly from somewhere...
Then I go "why did no one tell me about this manga..."
Then I go... "I hope someone translated this because i just want to enjoy the pretty art..."
Then I go... "Sigh... okay... no big deal..."
Then I go... "I know, I'll translate this because I know I'll run into some words I won't know and if I'm going to go look them up in a dictionary, I might as well transcribe it as well..."
Then I go... "What the hell is that girl saying..."
Then I go... "Oh fuck this..."
And then somewhere along the line, it ended up here.
The hardest part in here... finding a suitable name for the original hair queen... I looked up germen, french, and italian... You think the author would go to those languages for a foreign type name... But no... It is even more made up than that... So, I just went with silver because it is the cleanest word that sounds sorta like it... Everything else is like a tongue-twister.

~~~~

Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Title: To Cross the Thunder Clouds

page 1

1. I think... / he probably won't appear.

2. Don't inject us!

a. Why are we together on the bus again?
TL note: left of kiri

3. I only do what my sister tell me.

b. It's a coincidence.
TL notE: that's she's on the bus together with them

4. Did you mean the escaped convict? / Was that crazy bloody scene in town yesterday done by him?

5. The "Sledgehammer of Crushing Disintegration."

6. That item is only suitable for a murderer.

7. ...Since you're as good as dead because of the Good...

page 2

Title: To Cross the Thunder Clouds

Name:
-------------(Does not use a Goods)

Unit:
Hair Queen

Author:
!Iwai Mushiyanokōji
<-original
"Hair Queen" Silver

Skill:
!Spell Charm Protection <- Tips:
Invalidates any extenal changes to the "hair"
!????
!????
!????

page 3

1. ...A while back, the Professor showed us.

2. Even though he became an Instead, a man who controlled his impulses...

3. he broke down as a human being due to the accumulated damage to his mind.

4. If I didn't have my sister with me, I think I would've became like that as well...

5. ...That's why the reason for targetting the queen is so...

6. I get it...

7. I'm relieved a little. / Well, see you tomorrow, Kiri...

page 4

1. Ah...

2. Be that as it may... / You may need to prepare yourselves

3. to hurt a human...

4. Though you're used to that already, aren't you?

5. Ah...

page 5

1. SFX: Zah

2. Haah?!

page 6

1. What was that?!

2. I said tell my mom that I'm staying over at your place!
TL note: I don't remember if kiri has a mom or dad

a. Call my home!
TL note: left-bottom sticking to bubble of page 6 line 2

b. AAH?!
TL note: right of that karate guy's head

3. Why should I? Where are you right now?!

4. It doesn't matter!

5. Hey, Kiri?!

6. Shhh!

7. Eh? Iwai?! Kiri... You....

8. Well, I'll leave it to you! Beep.

9. Honestly... Why are you staying over?

10. ........

11. Because you looked like you were scared, / Iwai.

12. that's why.

page 7

1. Was...

2. Was there homework today...?

a. SFX: Twist

b. SFX: Twist

c. SFX: Twist

3. ...Why?

4. Nothing... Just...

5. ...What/ are we going to do all night...?

d. Being all alone together

e. Half soaked from the rain, behind closed doors

f. And at least ten hours till morning.

6. What do boys do at night?!

7. D-Do they play games?!

g. I don't have DragonQuest!
TL note: that is the only game acryomn I can think of

8. W-What does Iwai always do?!

h. Ah, well...

9. Do you read? Or something? You give off that image...

page 8

a. <- UNO (2) ->

b. <- Formal sitting ->

1. Is

2. Is this like some sort of school trip?

c. But we can't stop...

d. Also, we're still in uniform...

3. Aaah, we're going to end up playing shiritori at this rate...
TL note: Add a note saying "Shiritori is a Japanese word game"

page 9

1. Ah! / I left the hot water running in the bath!

a. I turned it on a while ago.

2. I'll go in first!

3. G-Go ahead...

b. Finally a break.

c. ......

4. Her clothes...

page 10

page 11

1. SFX: Rattle

2. Iwai... / You forgot your clothes so I brought them for you.

3. I'm not touching any of it!

4. ...Thank you? What?

5. ...Well, / I'll be going now...

6. ......

page 12

1. Don't go, / Kiri.

2. Stay here. / Talk with me.

3. ......

4. So you really are scared.

5. I have always cried

6. when you're not with me.

7. It'll be fine. / I'm... here for you...

page 13

1 Oh... / Oh really...?

2. What's with that anxiety?!

a. Even though you told me to do so?!

3. That's because...

4. Didn't you also say you were afraid? / Of the possible attack...

5. Have you heard about / Grayland?

page 14

1. Norma Grayland.

2. I was told he is my grandpa.

3. My ancestor is a... murderer. / The original CrimeEdge.

4. Grayland... Gray.....

5. Haimura...?

6. Your last names are differfent.

7. Seeing my face as it is now, you wouldn't believe it, but

8. My great-great grandfather was a foreigner.

9. Really?

10. It's true.

11. He could not stay in his own country because he was related to a criminal. / So he fled to Japan.

12. No way...

13. What do you suppose that person did to warrent such an act...?

14. ......

page 15

1. He murdered over 200 people.

2. He left his name in history as the greatest serial killer ever.

3. It was the birth of a great horror, a story of a terrifying demon.

4. The "Greatest of all Muderers."

page 16

1. Kiri... / That's kinda scary...

2. sorry.

3. It's just...

4. If I have the blood of such a great monster running through my veins, / then I should be able to defeat anyone no matter how dangerous they are...

page 17

1. Ah... / AAH!!!

2. Eh? / A black-out?!

3. I...

4. Iwai... / In this position... / Sorry...

5. It's okay... I can't really see in the dark...

6. Even so...! / Please...

7. Ah.

8. ah...

page 18

1. It's like some midnight magic

2. that drapes it over her body. / Like with Cinderalla.
TL note: He is referring to the midnight magic in cinderella and not the hair.

3. Is this how it grows?

a. Wow...

4. I'm always asleep at this time, so...

5. this is the first time I seen this myself...

page 19

1. This girl, holding onto me like a quivering puppy...

2. ...I shouldn't but, this is making me want to bully her a little...

3. Hey, may I cut your hair?

4. Eh?!

5. What are you saying?! Do it later! Hey, don't look!

6. Well, it's just getting a bit tempting...

7. So, no?

8. S-Shut up / You idiot! / You pervert!

9. Even bullying felt good.

10. I want her all to myself.

11. I don't want anyone to take her away.

page 20

1. These wonderful moments...

2. This relationship, I'm partly bewitched to...

3. ...Ah...

4. My heart is racing... (Heart)

page 21

1. Kiri...!

a. It's damp

b. Am I mistaken, Kiri...?!

c. This situation... You're not getting aroused now, right?

d. There is a naked girl here...

2. Ah, but... / But... / I want you to cut it gently...

e. Digress? Am I digressing?

3. A-Anyways! / NO WAY! at all!

4. Shut your eyes! Leave with your back turned!

5. Eh~

6. Don't Eh~ me! Get out already!

7. March!
TL note: I really have no idea what "DyaRi" is... But March is what I would say after all that...

page 22

1. Iwai...

2. Hurry and change your clothes.

3. Eh?

4. Just listen and hurry... / Hurry!

5. O / Okay...

page 23

page 24

a. Slegdehammer, attacks!!

Translation: Muramasa 6

Fri, 11 Jun 2010 11:06:17 +0000

There might be some missing TLs in this because I had a document problem...
And also this I'm uploading to see what happens to Kafuka (The IRC #mangahelpers bot) when I upload this! <3
EDIT: It took around 17 hours for kafuka to update to say that I uploaded this!!!

Muramasa
Chapter 6
Mother's Box

page 1

1. As long as you're alive,

2. FIGHT!!

page 2

1. Shiro-chan, welcome home...

2. !!

3. Mommy...

4. Your face... Again...

a. There There

5. Everyone hates me... They don't want to even touch me...

page 3

1. My dad must hate me too since he isn't here.

2. Everyone else has their dad but I don't, so he must hate me...

3. I told you about your father before, didn't I? He died when you were still very small...

4. But, we never once even went to his grave!

5. T-That is... umm... because it's really far away...

6. There There... You got yourself quite dirty...

a. Sniff Sniff Sniff
Tl note: etc etc etc. I can barely raed the characters so I will just assume it is his sniffing

7. Ah... S-Shiro-chan... I-I just...

8. Well, I'll just hate everyone too!!!

9. Shiro-chan!!!

page 4

1. Well, I'll see you later Murasaki-san. This way is to my house.

2. Ah...

3. Umm... Masakatsu-kun...

4. ?

5. Umm... Why don't I... Umm... accompany you to your house today...

page 5

1. Wha?! To my house?!

//Fantasy page//

1. So this is Masakatsu-kun's house.

2. There's no one home right now.

3. It's a bit hot in here isn't it?

4. Murasaki-san!

5. Ah! (heart)

//Fantasy page end//

2. Can't it really be that?!!

3. A trick?

4. No... If I recall the things up to now, it's probably not a trick.

5. Am I really going to ascend the stairs into adulthood?

6. I'm worried about you since I leaked out that you're cursed to those people yesterday.

7. Sorry my friends but I'm going to leave you all behind!!!
TL note: This means more like he is going to ascend into "adulthood" leaving all his guy friends in "childhood." I don't know how to phrase that properly here.

page 6

1. Well, Masakatsu-kun, I'll see you tomorrow.

2. Ah, yeah, okay... Good bye.
TL note: He doesn't say good bye. Instead after he says okay, he opens the door and using a japanese expression to say he is entering the home. It is kinda hard to fit that in.

3. It wasn't a trick, but

4. neither were they stairs to adulthood.

page 7

a. Shiro-chan warm it up before you eat it, okay? Mom.

1. Ah!...

2. !

page 8

1. Aah...

2. Bad luck... Now that I think about it, today has been nothing but bad luck for me...

3. I went to my office, forgetting it's my day off... / These didn't come cheap either...

4. Umm... may I lend a hand?

5. Eh?...

6. Thank... Thank you.

7. It's no problem.

8. Huh?

9. That uniform is the same as Shiro-chan's school's...

page 9

1. Eh? Shiro-chan...?

2. You mean Masakatsu-kun?

3. ...Hm?!

4. Why is my mom with Murisaki-san?!!

5. Moreover, why isn't she at work...?

6. M-Masakatsu-kun?... That... No way...

7. Eh?... Eh?

8. Excuse me?

page 10

1. Thank you!!

2. !!

3. You're friends with Shiro-chan, aren't you? That's it isn't it? Right?! Right?!!

4. A trick? This isn't a trick, right?!

5. No one can touch Shri-chan because of a curse that won't let anyone touch him whose not being perverse.

6. That was the conclusion I drew when I tried to touch him. And because of that, my Shiro-chan could never make any friends!!!

page 11

1. I'm-I'm so happy...

2. Ah... Umm...

3. I know!! Go to my home!! I want to show my thanks!!! You're Shiro-chan's friend, right?!!! / Right? / Right?!!

4. Eh... Ah... Yes...

5. Come on, come in come in.

6. P-Pardon me.

page 12

1. Hm? Shiro-chan?

2. One of your friends is here... Shiro-Chan!

3. !

4. ?

5. Ah... Umm... It seems Shiro-chan went out.

6. Sorry for dragging you here.

7. Ah... It's no problem...

8. What? Even though we came here together, when did he leave?

9. ......

page 13

1. Why am I hiding?... And in a place like this...

2. Umm... Since it seems Masakatsu-kun isn't here, I'll take my leave then.

3. Ah... Okay... Sorry for this...

4. Masakatsu-kun must've been found by the people aiming for the Youtou blades when he was alone.

5. It was my fault that Masakatsu-kun's was found out... Since I couldn't protect him with Ganari... But, where are you Masakatsu-kun? Even though we came here together.

6. Ah... Hold up a minute...

7. Yes?

page 14

1. She is a girl. Since they're both shy, they shouldn't have an intimate relationship yet, so they should still be just friends for now, but if they were to ever touch each other...

2. ?

3. Because of Shiro-chan's curse that doesn't let anyone touch him who isn't acting perverse, their relationship...

4. It's too complicated for a mother, but not so much for a girl. I'm impossible for me to be perverse to him...

5. If I can get her to take these many lewd items... Well, first I should probably start off with something small...

6. Mom... What are you doing with that box?...

7. You mustn't look into this box, k?!

8. I... I won't look!!

9. Since you said that, I may sure to never look inside, believing it had erotic things in it!! I didn't want want to look or hear about my parent's stuff...

10. ...When I look at these, it reminds me of that person...

11. Masaki-san, where are you now?...

12. !!

page 15

1. Who-Who is Masaki?!!

2. M-Masakatsu-kun?!

3. Ah...

4. Shiro-chan?!!

5. Wah!...

6. W-Watch out!!!

7. Oh no... I touched Masakatsu-kun when I'm not being perverse... This horrible feeling...

8. B-But... I mustn't let go...

9. I can't let go, but... If this keeps up, I'll...

page 16

page 17

1. Murasaki-san... Y-You're not wearing a skirt?

2. If you're saying that, that means you can't see it from that angle...

3. I-I am!!

4. So you are.

page 18

1. However, I'm glad I saved you. Thanks to your mother putting this on me to make me perverse.

2. Though I wouldn't even had noticed if you didn't say something...

3. Eh? Perverse?... Do you perhaps... / know of Shiro-chan's curse?...

4. Eh?... Ah... Yes...

5. It really isn't all a trick!!

6. Eh? yes...

7. Umm...

8. Thank you! For understanding Shiro-chan's curse...

9. Hey... Mom, you know about my curse?...

10. Eh?...

11. If you knew about it, why didn't you tell me?! I only recently found out about it!!!

12. Oh... Then who told you about it?

13. Ah... I did...

14. AH... Then how do you know about the curse?!!

page 19

1. And who the hell is Masaki?! / I don't want some new father!!

2. Eh?!

3. What are you talking about? Did you forget that Masaki-san is your real father who died?

4. Ah...

5. Ah... I-I didn't forget. It doesn't really matter anyways...

6. ...Huh? I'm certain that she said... "Where are you now?"...

7. She wouldn't had said that if he's dead... Did I hear it wrong?

8. That's my report... Well,

9. if you'll excuse me now.

page 20

1. It seems you were able to find what you were looking for...

2. Masaki Yamamoto, sir.

3. Yes... I thought it would take longer to get back the Ganari blade... And Shiro was with it too, huh?...

4. That Shiro is the Youtou I created after all...

a. What does Masaki, the father, mean by that...?!

Translation: Muramasa 5

Tue, 08 Jun 2010 07:21:39 +0000

Anybody who has even talked to me about Japanese know that I only tl when I am extremely bored... Also when I get sick. Bet you guys didn't know that! I'm not sick by the way... Anyways, this project is just me doing something while I'm bored... And when I don't want to overheat my ps3.
Do note that the first 3 chapters were already scanlated and thus I will not translate those. Look them up.

Muramasa

Chapter 5
Wife Attack

page 1

Box: (summary. From this chapter forward, I will not even mention the summary box)

1. It's true. Even if you don't believe us, it's a kid named Masakatsu...

2. I believe you... / Masakatsu... I see...

3. eh?...

a. This is a work of fiction (blah blah blah)
TL note: I forget the exact phrase that's use in english

4. Masaktasu-kun!!

b. What does the enemy know about Shiro?!
TL note: side text.
TL note2: Shiro... Umm... that is the kid's first name? I forget.

5. If the Masakatsu you are talking about... / is the same Masakatsu I know...

6. An unarmed human... Then, the stories of the Youtou blades being broken by Shiro Masakatsu isn't a lie.

page 2

1. A human with the same curse as a Youtou!!!

2. The circumstances are made clear.

a. Unprecedented (heart) Love Action!!

page 3

1. The secret of Shiro, the cursed boy!!

2. You should've told me sooner!!

3. We been telling you, you just wouldn't believe us!!

4. W-w-w-what should I do?!!

5. Please!! Return safely. With only your own katana is fine!!!

page 4

1. I had you take care of things again, Masakatsu-kun.

2. Forgive me... There wasn't enough time to draw out Ganari. I instead ended up relying on you, Masakatsu-kun, again...

3. Ah... Well... It's cool!! Anytime!! They're awesome boobs!! / Ah... No... Umm... That's not what... Umm...

4. !!

5. An-Anyways... Let's quickly get away.

6. Eh?... Ah. Yeah...

page 5

1. Even though they can't use the Youtou-Kishibe since it broke...

2. They could call for friends with other Youtou blades, so before that...

3. ?!

4. Huh... What?

5. ? Murasaki-san?

6. I... Ganari is... What the? Where it go?...

7. !!!

8. You mean this Ganari?

9. Did you think you could relax when you broke Kishibe? You left yourselves wide open.

10. No... No way... When did you?

11. Although you broke Honey's Kishibe, with this, we're even... However...

12. In order to get the Ganari, I needed to seperate myself from Honey for this long...

page 6

1. Good bye, Auntie.

2. I'm sorry to put you through this everyday.

3. It's fine. I like doing this.

4. See you later.

5. How is it? Is it good?

6. I don't know...

page 7

1. When we accepted you for the position, there wasn't any problems, but... Umm... When you were only one.

2. Is that lady going to be with you while you work?

3. yes, what of it?

4. Ah... Nevermind... It's fine...

a. Quiet down.

b. Ceh.
TL note: last frame

page 8

1. It breaks my heart that we must go through this horrible event...

2. I have never once been this far away from Honey.

a. 1 meter

3. While I rather just cuddle with her at home instead of working or something...

4. However, I can't use this Youtou without feeling bad.

5. The cursed katana that can only be used when you're feeling horrible.

6. I'll become super fast with this. The Youtou-Itsutoku.

page 9

1. The end this horribleness soon.

2. The greater this feeling, the faster I'll be!!! Then I'll return to you Honey, my love!!!

3. Here.

4. Eh...

5. What?

6. Thank you, Masakatsu-kun.

7. Nah... It's all because of that old guy.
TL note: does it imply because he was talking to himself?

8. Again it's that brat!!!

9. Speaking of which, before when I tried to kill him with Kishibe, he broke it instead. What the hell is this kid?!! Though this time it was my fault...

page 10

1. Maybe he's cursed?

2. Cursed? / Honey? That kid? Like a Youtou?

3. No way, can't be, impossible.

4. How brothersome... No need to get snippy. It was just a thought.

5. That's... That's right!! Masaktasu-kun isn't cursed!!

6. Masakatsu-kun was affected by Ganari's pervert curse so if you're not perverse, you can't touch him.

7. So... Like that, he became completely resolute and couldn't be affected by Kishibe...

8. He's not cursed!!! Most definitely not!!!

page 11

1. You're kidding me...

2. Good job, Honey!! Right on the mark!!

3. It's annoying so I thought it would be better to not say anything.

4. No... No... Even after all that...

5. No... It was to be expected from that just now...

6. It got exposed... It got exposed but... Right now, somehow I must destory

7. the blade that's in front of me, the Youtou-Itsutoku!!

8. No matter how fast he moves, as long as I concentrate...!!!

page 12

1. !!

page 13

1. It was an afterimage...

2. A sour taste was left in my mouth when Kishibe broke... So, if I first deal with the Ganari girl...

3. Kuh...

page 14

1. Subsonic

page 15

1. Kuh...

2. It's no good... He's too fast!!

3. What the... Her outfit became so naughty in an instant. AMAZING!!

4. Wait, this is dangerous!! That old man, he's dangerous!!! What... What could I possibly do... My body can barely move!!!

5. It's over.

6. !!

page 16

1. What?!... What's this bad feeling?!! S-Shit!!!

2. ......!

3. This feeling... I can't use the curse like this. The same thing will happen if my Youtou is touched... This kid... Is he really be cursed?!!
TL note: double check

page 17

1. Strange... I moved despite being too scared to move.

2. But, it can't be helped. I move when there is an improper girl about...

3. Forgive me, Murasaki-san. i'll say this as many times as it'll take, but I didn't want to. I'm not lying!!!

4. M-Masakatsu-kun...

5. No!! That's it! If I stretch out my arms, I'll get to the girl's... / No... That's not right, umm... My body is acting on it's own.

6. Eh?

7. Eh? Ah... / What?! Umm... The one I'm holding onto right now is...

8. There's no boobs!... No, it's not Murasaki-san!!!

9. My body... Is this a joke? Don't move to this body... When you move, don't go to a man. Women, go to a girl...

10. S-shit... I'm losing my consciousness... Damn... How could he...

11. How... Could this kid...

page 18

1. How could this human be cursed...

2. Can't be... That Masakatsu is a kid?!

3. Certainly... No... It has to be... Masakatsu is a rare name. Also...

4. Masaki Yamamoto of the Yamamoto family swordsmiths who crafted the Youtou-Ganari.

5. Their names may be different, but Shiro Masakatsu has to be his son!!!

page 19

1. Masaki Yamamoto?!! That person is...

2. !

3. I failed to get the Ganari blade.

4. And Kishibe was...

5. Well... It's better that you came back safety...

6. However, it's great how you protected yourself from that cursed guy clinging onto you...

7. No, honestly, it got close, I almost...

8. !!

page 20

1. Don't touch him!!

2. Ah!

3. When I'm touch, Honey comes and save me.

4. Who said you can touch him?

5. For-Forgive me...

6. Masakatsu-kun, you saved me!!

7. Ah... You were hit, are you okay?

8. Yeah... I'm cool.

9. Thank you Miss Wife person for helping me seperate the two of us!!! If possible, I wish you had knocked away the memories of that too.

a. Strong wife!!

Translation: Muramasa 4

Mon, 07 Jun 2010 10:53:13 +0000

So... When I first read this from hyuugalegacy's edit of this a year or two back, I laughed. Firstly because it had a girl with a sword and I like girls with swords. Secondly because the girl had ridiculous boobs. Thirdly because the author set up such a stupid scenario to have the girl do crazy things. And because of all these things, I like the manga.
Will I continue trying to badly translate this manga? Maybe, maybe not.
What I do want is for c_k to get the rest of the raws so I can see what happens in the end. I'm looking at you c_k!

BokoLife points two fingers at his own eyes
BokoLife then points index finger at c_k

Anyways, some of the japanese in here was a bit weird for me. Especially the constant double and even triple negatives... I tried to stay true to hyuugalegacy's style of words but mixed in my own when I felt like it.

Muramasa
Chapter 4

Title: Look Look Good evening

page 1

a. The great destiny that began to encompass them...

b. The distance between the two beings to shrink...

page 2

a. Within the hanging dark clouds, this towering building is...?!

BOX: (This is just a summary. I am not going to tl this)

1. Don't you guys have any moviatation? How could you not get the Youtou-Ganari from Nozomi Murasaki?...

2. We even lost four swords too...

page 3

1. The curse of your Youtou-Araiwa cannot be use if you're not hungry... You're doing great at bringe eating!!
TL note: Umm... sarcasm here... I'm not good at putting sarcasm to words

2. The curse of your Youtou-Higurashi cannot be use if you're not sleepy... Don't fall asleep!!

3. The curse of your Youtou-Shuuzou can't be used if you're not hot blooded... Trim your eyebrows!!

4. The curse of your Youtou-Sorimachi can't be used if you're a not pretty boy... Damn... You do look as good as usual though...

5. We are here for one reason only! To get the Youtou blades!!

6. I'm a fool to have entrusted this to the likes of you underlings!!

7. With that, you're next!! I can leave it to you, right?!!!

8. Sure...

9. Well then, you're all fired.

10. Wha... Please wait. We'll do better. / Why are you so fixated on the Ganari blade anyways? / Let's first get all the other blades before we try for the Ganari!!

11. I'm angry...

12. Eh?

page 4

1. At Nozomi Murasaki... At her incredibly huge breasts / while still being so young...

2. The Youtou-Ganari's curse cannot be used if you're not feeling lewd.

3. I don't stand a chance against her boobs and youth!! I'm so angry at her!!!

4. Isn't she like two girls packed into one?!!
TL note: I have no idea...

5. N... No. America... No, this has nothing to do with America...
TL note: I really don't get this. Unless the guy is mispronoucing a word

6. Umm... There isn't only one person. Not only one.

7. ?! / Not only one? Nozomi Murasaki has someone else with a Youtou beside her?

8. Ah... Not a Youtou per say...

9. More like...

page 5

1. No!!

2. Ah... Umm... Forgive me...

3. Ah... It's fine!!

4. What are you doing to the customer?

5. Ah... I had this horrible feeling when touched his hand as I handed him his change...

6. A horrible feeling from a touch... What the hell...

7. Forgive me. Are you okay?

8. Ah... Yeah...

9. Whoa!! Don't touch me!!!

10. Ah... Sorry...

11. It's fine... I'm fine.

page 6

1. I'm okay... Okay.

2. I am totally okay.

3. I don't care if everyone hates me, find me disgusting, or don't want to touch me...

4. It's only because I'm cursed!

5. Cursed by not being able to touch anyone that's not being lewd!!

6. Masakatsu-kun?

7. ?!

page 7

1. Good... Good Evening.

2. You did some shopping at the convience store?

3. Ah... Mu... Murasaki-san...

4. I... I'm going to the SuperMarket over there. / Can you accompany me along the way?

5. ......

6. I'll do my best to be lewd, so
TL note: flashback

8. let's work together!
TL note: flashback

9. ?

10. Wait... Everytime I'm happy and rush into this, something weird happens. I should be catious...

11. I'll just speak naturally!! Good luck me!!!

12. Ah, Umm...

13. Yes?

page 8

1. When you said you'll be lewd... What did you mean by that?

2. What the hell did I

3. just say?!!!

4. Umm... To work hard at being lewd... Umm... It's... In order to... Umm... Use Youtou-Ganari.

5. Umm... That's what......

6. When someone comes to steal Ganari, is it wrong to protect like that?

7. Ah... Though Masakatsu-kun is here too...

8. Masakatsu-kun has the same curse as Ganari...

9. Eh... I'm here?!! Because I'm here? To say that...

10. Is it a trap?! ...No, but...

page 9

1. !!

2. !!

3. I-I couldn't see his blitz-like approach.
TL note: approach... Dash? I dunno...

4. Masakatsu-kun, please becareful.

5. ?

6. Masakatsu-kun?

page 10

1. My clothes... I see... That Youtou is...

2. Darn!! Only her sleeve?!!!

3. No way!! Did he cut it? I can't believe he only cut her clothes.

4. Hm?

5. ?

6. Eh? Wha? My meal?!! How?...

page 11

1. He had to had cut it, right? But... To had cut it like this...
TL note: It says to cut it all DeroDero like... I have no idea what derodero is.

2. It's was only reduced...

3. Eh?

4. That katana is the Youtou-Kishibe.

5. The curse of the Youtou-Kishibe cannot be used unless you have no motivation!!

6. To be cut by Kishibe

7. is to lose your moviatation!!

8. Lose moviatation?!!

9. Oh!!

page 12

1. I see. When her sleeve and my meal lost their motivation when they were cut.

2. her sleeve and my meal lost themselves, right?!!
TL note: okay, this is actually kinda hard to explain... It's like... They lost their will to hold themselves together... To keep being a sleeve/meal... Btw, it doesn't really say sleeve/meal, but it's more specific/english-friendly to refer to them as that.

3. !

4. Wa..What? He disappeared.

5. !!

6. When did he get behind us?!!

page 13

a. When did he get behind us?... He's really fast... Even though you can only use it when you have no motivation, how did he...

1. !

2. Ah!...

3. Masakatsu-kun... Doh.. Don't look...

4. Eh? Ah... Well... I'm not looking.

5. !!

6. Masakatsu-kun. NO!...

7. Eh? Ah... Me too... Ah... This is whoa...

8. Anyways, you with no motivation... You really have a lot of motivation!!
TL note: I had to pick one word to consistently describe his power and keep with the gag... I'm not sure if motivation is the best word, but that's what i decided.

9. Eh? Ah...

10. Umm... But... That katana is... certainly...

11. Honey, I'm out of place. But you were fabulous. Just a little longer!!

page 14

a. Annoying. Everything and anything is just annoying.

1. It's another person!! She has such little motivation that it's amazing!!!

2. Though she talks a lot, it's a bride with no motivation!!!

a. You're beautiful, Honey(heart)

b. It's annoying to change clothes.

3. Though we're still newlyweds after three years, we hate to work. / Anyways with Honey, we're pretty much a perfect match. We're kill this intruding boy, then we'll go after the Ganari!!!
TL note: I am not sure about this line

c. Oh... Oh... Whatever you want.

4. !! ...Did he say newlyweds for three years?...

page 15

1. Couldn't be cut by a Youtou?

2. This Masakatsu guy whose with Murasaki?

3. A human who can't be cut by a Youtou... I see...

4. Yes.. It's like that.

a. HmmHmm

5. Die you!!

6. Wah!

7. Too fast... I can't draw Ganari fast enough...

8. So, then I'll use Masakatsu-kun!!!

page 16-17

page 18

1. Clinging to a half-naked boy half-nakedly... If I do this, I'll keep Masakatsu-kun from harm...

2. By me doing this perverse thing...

3. Oooh... T-The feeling on my side...

4. It's... It IS

page 19

1. Such a guy can't exist!!!

2. Don't make excuses for your broken Youtou blades!!

3. Don't lie!!

4. It's not a lie! It's true!!!

5. Then what? Since that Masakatsu guy broke your Youtou blades,

6. then there is a human whose cursed like a Youtou?!

7. If such a human exists...

page 20

1. Ah!!!

2. ......

3. ? / What's wrong?

a. What does Odeko-chan (arrow) know...?!

4. I see... Masakatsu...

5. If the Masakatsu these guys are talking about is the same Masakatsu that I know

6. It's likely there is a human who is actually cursed like a Youtou...

7. To have broken Youtou-Kishibe instead, what are...

8. ...you...?

9. Umm... Masakatsu-kun...

10. Eh? Ah!... I'm sorry!! / They're amazing breasts. Amazing!!

11. !

12. Ah... No, that's not what I...

13. Yeah, you're talking to yourself.

14. Masakatsu-kun. NO!

15. No... I meant to say... A-America...

Translation: God Does Not Play Dice 9

Mon, 31 May 2010 02:55:12 +0000

reserved

And that's it for the public raws.
With this, I guess I have to drop this project since no more raws seem to be available. Sad though since there only seem to be like 5 more so more chapters left till the end. This manga officially either ended on may 2010, or was dropped by shounen ace on may 2010... One of the two...
Okay! That's that.
I'm also trying to get the other chapters though the editing phase but you know... lack of decent people blah blah blah. And decent for this kind of manga is very very low too...

Chapter 9
Men's Crusade

page 1

1. Teacher... Wanna read some erotic books? There's plently to go around.

a. Oh!

2. How is now the time for that?! / ...And you can read it in front of people...

3. You guys sure are noisy for a bunch of insurgents.

4. Which angency are you from? The PTA?

5. I told you we're not insurgents!! / Hurry up and let us out of here!

6. You don't seem to get it so go get me someone from above!!
TL note: meh... I changed stuff here and there... still has the same meaning... I think

b. What? They're held captive?!
TL note: side text

7. It's not "You." It's "My Queen"!!

8. Then get me the King!

9. Even if she's the Queen, / I don't think the person above is the King.

page 2

Chapter 9
Title: Men's Crusade

a. Men fights for their dreams, love, and pride!!

page 3

1. 2 Hours before.

2. There's a Caramel Dice in this H Village, right?!

3. Once I get it, I'll be one step closer to my actual physique! / To a tall, big boob body!

4. Yeah, I'm so excited, being this is sacred ground and all!

5. Sacred ground?

6. Teacher, you don't know?!

page 4

1. H Village is a Erotic Book Village.

2. Hah?

3. This H Village produces 92% of this country's Erotic books.

4. The H in H Village was not an initial?!
TL note: Okay, there needs to be a note or something here explaining H = erotic/ecchi in japanese. I am not remaking the entire joke to fit to something more english friendly...

5. If Hollywood is the movie capital of the world, then H Village should be called Erowood! / The Seagal of such a village should be destoryed.
TL note: you know... steven seagal

6. While we're at it, you've always called erotic books, ecchi books... Here it is more common to refer to them as "erotic books," so / try to adjust your perception for the different usage.

7. I will adjust.

a. Really?

8. You don't want to confuse yourself with a Pencil Book after all.

9. How can I?!!

10. ...... Ah, whatever.

11. Let's get some info about the dice.

page 5

1. Caramel Dice?

2. Never heard of it.

3. Dice?

4. All I know is "Sukebe Isu"
TL note: and there is that word again... Go look at chapter 5 page 11 line b... In any case, it is sorta like "lewd chair" but much much worse...
TL note2: also there is a pun here... Dice = DaISu... You see the isu there? ya... >_>

5. Forgive me, I do not know. Please punish me like the naughty pig that I am.
TL note: Okay, she doesn't actually say that word for word... but heh, it's funnier that way.

6. What a dumb girl piggy.
TL note: again, she doesn't say that word for word... but hehe.

7. Aah(heart)

8. That voice... My long lost sister?!

9. No, I'm not. Your sister would be sad if she can see what you're wearing.

10. That voice... Little sis?!

11. The sister!!

12. I couldn't get any info.

13. ...Hey, what's up with this village?

a. Snap
TL note: photo snap

14. You think this place would know anything?

page 6

1. Pardon us.

2. Hi

3. Welcome to H Village.

4. Are you sightseeing?

5. No... We're not...

6. Then you're prospective models for the H book, right? Or, you're just horny, right?

7. Well, let's do a simple test.

8. Eh?

9. Television anime boobs / and middle school drop outs,

10. what do they have in common?

page 7

1. Can't see any.
TL note: 3 part meaning. First meaning: she doesn't see anything in common. Second: You don't see any nipples in animes. Third: middle school drop outs can't see anything in their future.

2. Correct! You got it!

3. You didn't get it!!

4. We're not sightseeing, model prospects, or horny.

5. None of them?!

6. Then are you an enemy?!

7. Surround them!!

a. SFX: Angry

8. Eh?!

page 8

1. Gaaah!!

2. Why must you lock us up?!!

3. It's because you been charged on the child pronography law, right?

4. Charged on that?! Even though I'm 23 years old?!!

5. Ah

6. You guys got locked up too?

7. Yeah.

page 9

1. Why are you here? / How did you know there was a dice here?

2. How? It was when we read Hakase's second diary together.

3. Oh?...

4. In the Diary

5. I went to H Village to leave a dice there. / That village is awesome! H Village maintains the peace in Japan and my reason to live!
TL note: diary start

6. It cannot lose to Shibuya as the youth culture hub. I will pray for it's prosperity. / Shibuya youths don't seem to eat much. How I want to kill them!
TL note: diary end

7. That Thing is the same as usual, huh?

8. Don't call it, That Thing.

9. You're too NOISY! / If you don't be quiet, I'll ship out a book without any censors!!
TL note: I'm going to assume she means the porn books.

10. Got it?

11. I really don't care.

12. My Queen, we've caught another suspicious person.

13. Good grief. Today sure is busy. I can't get a break!

page 10

1. You, from before!!

2. Ah, it's Kanau Shimei and that weird girl!!

a. Weird?!

3. This is perfect-su!!

4. I'll get your dice as well now-su!!

5. That's it! If you don't be quiet, I'll close all the erotic books with super strong tape instead of the convience store tape!

6. You want the pretty covers to get ruined?!

7. Okay!!

8. HoHo. Are these the insurgants, Miss Yamaguchi?

9. Ple-Please call me, My Queen, Chief!!

10. Pardon me, Miss Yamaguchi.

11. I told you before that we're not insurgants!

12. We came here to look for the Caramel Dice!!

13. The Caramel Dice that's said to grant whatever wish when you collect all 6?

b. Call me

c. My Queen...

14. Yeah, those!!

page 11

1. Forgive me. This village has a lot of enemies within the PTA and the feminist organizations.

a. Those feminist hags

2. By the way, Chief... From what you said before...

3. This village has a Caramel Dice, right?

4. I do have a dice, and I am willing to hand it over to someone, but...

5. I have one condition.

6. A condition?

page 12

1. I want you to increase the sales of erotic books with the power of the dice.
TL note: I omitted out the part in the beginning where it says, "When you collect all 6 dice,..."

2. You three also know that for years, erotic books have declined in popularity, right?

3. No, we did not...

4. It's not commonly known.

5. Nowadays, with cheap erotic DVDs and the spread of the internet,

6. Everyone has stopped buying erotic books.

7. Particulary because of the internet,

8. They can easily and freely look at porn. It has no class!

9. Moreover, strange virus can infect your computer. / Fake bills and spam mail flood your mail box. / You want some erotictism from a beautiful widow, whom you paid to go to the meeting place, but she doesn't come.

10. Gaah! The internet is my villages's greatest enemy!!

11. You're just suck!
TL note: All the things the guy listed at line 9... All happened to him.

page 13

1. Anyways... If you take over the world, I want you to create laws that will vitalize the erotic book industry,

2. or if you get your hands on a lot of money, I want you to send some support to the village.

3. I... I absolutely promise to do those things. So, give the dice to me!

3. I also will do those things, so give it to me!

4. Me too-su!!

5. Wow... If all of you young girls will make tat sort of promise... / then surely you must all love H Village... What lewd girls!

6. (angry)

7. However, we can't have three.

8. I got it, we'll have a contest to decide!

9. A contest?!

10. Hey, could you stop reading those erotic books and get out here?

11. In a minute.

page 14

1. Okay! Now begins the Caramel Dice Contest!!

2. Let me introduce you to the competing teams!!

3. First is the Rug Rat team!!
TL note: I couldn't think of a good way to say little kid... then I looked up the word and saw rug rat <3

4. Whose a rug rat?!!

a. Rug Rat
TL note: team sign

5. Next is the Miss Bunny team!!

6. I'm kinda nervous...

b. Miss Bunny
TL note: team sign

7. And lastly is the Bird Head team!!

8. How did it end up like this?

c. Bird Head
TL note: team sign

page 15

1. The contest will be an erotic book trivia showdown!! / Who among these have knowledge and love for Erotic Books? They'll compete to see!

2. The team who shines to the top will get this black gross square thing as a prize!! / By the way, I am your host! Everyone's loving Queen!

3. Good job, Miss Yamaguchi!!

4. That was great, Miss Yamaguchi!!

5. As expected of Miss Yamaguchi, the former class president!

6. Call me, My Queen. Gaaah!!

7. These three are the judges!

8. I'm known for my publishing of my own Erotic Books! / I'm Satou, the editor in chief of erotic materials.

9. I'm known for my mother learning and sobbing over my job! / I'm Suzuki, a cameraman specializing in nude photography.

10. I'm known for handling the sneak previews on magazines! / I'm Kogure, I'm in charged of the orginal uncensored materials.

11. Okay, so whoever wants to speak, press the button and you can speak!

12. I don't know anything about Erotic Books.

13. Me neither...

14. SFX: Ping Pong

15. Eh?!

page 16

1. Erotic Books are erotic-su!!

2. A preemptive attack from the Bird Head team! 5 points!!

3. What?! You can say that?!

4. Then I will... / Umm...

5. They're rectangular!!

6. Book stores sell them!!

7. E----h? There's no merit in saying the obvious. / Those are invalid answers.

8. You two get 0 points.

9. Eh?!!

10. What should I do?.... If this keeps up, I'll lose.

11. In this world, there are men and women.

page 17

1. When a Erotic Book battle comes, please leave it to me, a man.

2. Shijou.

3. Big Sis! You know we've read Erotic Books all our lives.

4. Please leave this to us!

5. You guys.

6. Don't say something so cool to me.

7. Well, if the other two teams don't quickly provide an answer,

8. then we'll crown the Bird Head team as champions!

9. SFX: Ping-Pong

10. Yes! Rug Rat Team!!

a. Rug Rat
TL note: the half of the team sign

11. What?! They know more than what I know-su?!

12. There's a lot to know.

page 18

1. The little photo in the DVD's cover makes you more horny than a magazine spread!!

2. Yes Yes! With that you get 22 points!!

3. You'll make people angry if you have bring a erotic book to an open air cafe in the nude!!

4. That's orginal! 24 points!

5. You're pretty good.

6. You too.

7. You can't put up a poster by gluing it!

8. You become an adult by putting one of those up! 22 points!!

9. It's better to be caught by your beautiful teacher than your mother!
TL note: you fill in the dirty blanks yourself readers... >_>

10. I wonder what will happen after that! 18 points!

11. It hurts to wax your legs!
TL note: ugh.... okay...

12. That's true! 20 points!!

13. It's not suited to be an engagement present!

14. No, it isn't! 26 points!!

page 19

1. Well, right now Miss Bunny Team leads by 24 points! / Can't win against an experienced reader, little boy?!!

2. You can't read Erotic Books before the age of 18!!

3. By the way, the Bird Head team has completely fell back.

4. I can't keep up with them-su.

5. We're empty... / like an empty red ball.
TL note: no clue what the 2nd part is so I tried my best and fit the 1st part with it.

6. I'm done too...

7. Don't give up, Shijou! Aren't you a man?!! / Didn't you tell me to rely on you?!!

8. Yeah, that's right, Teacher... I'll try a little harder. / If I give up here, I won't be able to face the Erotic Book God.

a. Boobies

b. Boobies
TL note: that old guy on the top left

9. SFX: Ping Pong

10. What?! That boy has more knowledge of erotic books?!

11. Yes, Rug Rut Team!!

12. Eh...

page 20

1. This is a story of a time when I was still in elementary school.

2. Eh?

3. One autumn day, the young lady next door showed me an erotic book.

a. It's an erotic book(heart)

b. The horny girl next door (heart)
TL note: book title.
TL note2: I omitted/changed 2 things. One the extremely form the extremely horny. and Older from the older girl.

4. What are you trying to say?

5. For some reason, the young lady showed an erotic book to my elementary school self...

6. seemingly to just see what my reaction would be.

7. While I was in amazement of my first look at the erotic,

8. the young lady said this:

9. Nozomu, you want to see a pari of real breasts?
TL note: What... The... Hell... Man...

page 21

1. I answered with a quick "yes"... / She then started unbutton her pure white blouse

2. very slowly to tease me...

3. Nozomu, what do you think of my breasts?

4. They're really... really beautiful.

5. You can touch them

6. if you want(heart)

7. However, before that

8. why don't you take off your trousers.

9. Once she said that, she slowly took off

10. my trousers with those long white fingers of hers.

page 22

1. I'm so jealous of those past experience stories when I read them! / Since I can't go back to being an elementary school and theres no horny young lady living next door either!
TL note: I know! fuck those bastards!! Damn them to hell!!

2. I get so sad that I cry a little!!

3. I know. I know.

4. I want to be an elementary student.

5. My Lady! My Lady!

6. 10 Points, 10 Points, 10 Points! A big turn around with a perfect 30 points!!

7. And the champions are the Rug Rat Team!!

8. Yaay!!

page 23

1. Heh, good job.

2. Nice going there you.

3. No, it was a close match.

4. He's a good man.

5. If I were to live next door to Shijou-kun...

6. Uugh... I failed my mission again-su.

7. Well, as promise, I'll give this dice to you. / I trust I can leave the future of erotic books to you.

8. Please leave it to me. Erotic Books will be enternal.

9. Heheh, I'll do whatever I want once it's mine.

10. Are you really a teacher?

11. Hold that dice!!

page 24

1. If you don't want to get hurt,

2. you'll hand that dice over to me.

3. Senpai!!

4. Who are these people?!

Translation: God Does Not Play Dice 8

Mon, 24 May 2010 07:43:42 +0000

Blah Blah Blah... What the other translations said in the top of the page.

Raw ends in the next chapter. I'm not going to bother myself in trying to find the continuing chapters. If no raws of chapter 10+ somehow drop into my lap, consider this manga dropped or something by me.

Anyways, school final tests are always fun... It's summer break for me now, which mean I will probably go hunting for a random manga to translate instead of this considering my above statement. Well, that is if ikcud(from kono-basho) doesn't restart a very delayed/on hold project that I was suppose to do. But chances of that is slim. I think...
Anyways, enjoy, I had a bit of fun in this chapter but I'm looking forward to doing chapter 9 more simply because it looks funnier.

Chapter 8
Truth of the Dice

page 1

1. You should know that those dice hold

2. a frightening true power-su.

a. Is she speaking the truth?

3. That was what she said, but / what's this true power?

4. I have no idea about that.

5. Hey.

6. Heheh.

7. I know what it is.

8. Eh?!

page 2

Chapter 8
Title: The Truth about the Dice

a. Clarifying the True Power of "God's Dice?!"

page 3

1. Any wish can be granted once all six Caramel Dice are gathered together. / Up till now, that is all we knew about them.

2. However, now, the secret true power in those dice is now made clear!!

3. These dice are hard, no? They can be use like a weapons to kill if you throw them at someone.
TL note: Blunt weapons

4. That is the terrifying true power!

5. You're a mega-idiot!!
TL note: sigh... here comes the relentless jokes that I am not that fond of translating

6. Aren't even flower vases and ash trays like that?!

7. Right! Flower vases terrifying true power is also the power to kill!

8. Every item in the world, their terrifying true powers are hidden, right?

9. So, it's not necessarily wrong.

page 4

a. For example... The drinking water in PET bottles, depending on how its used, it can be used to drown someone.

1. Gurgle Gurgle GoGahGah
TL note: I will assume the last one is of him trying to say something but I don't quite know what it is.

2. Don't just look in my room!

3. How could you with wives...
TL note: son has a wife/older woman fetish

4. Right!! You need to go after young girls!!

b. Erotic DVDs can break apart family relationships.

c. The more you simulate love in gal-games, the further you distance yourself from true love.

5. Real women are scary...

6. All the choices were disgusting...

7. And also, if a high school student who porn, he'll fear the book store's beautiful store clerk... / Ah! That just now was a happy power.

8. Totally!

9. Basically, the dice's true power is something like that maybe right?

10. I see, so it's like that!

11. There's only idiots here.

12. Generally speaking, if it's a frightening true power in a manga,

13. if the villain uses it, the world will be destroyed probably, won't it?

14. Wah! That's too stereotypical!

page 5

1. Bad people often say they will destroy the world, but it makes you wonder what makes them want to do that, huh?

2. I wonder about that too! / Destroying the world would destroy all the erotic book factories as well which will be very troublesome...

3. Bad people are idiots.

4. You guys are idiots.

5. But, we're not bad, so there's no need to worry about that.

6. Because what's bad is your head, right?

7. Also, there is a lot we don't know about the Caramel Dice.

8. Like why even though they're named the Caramel Dice, the dice have eyes on them. / I don't quite understand how once you collected them, it'll grant whatever wish you want.
TL note: yeah... doesn't really say that. I like to think its, "... the first dice only has one eye and the second... etc etc..."

9. Also, I don't understand the point of them being named the Caramel Dice either. / But, about the legacy of the super-ancient civilization, what is the super-ancient civilization in the first place?

page 6

1. If you wish to learn about the super-ancient civilization, wouldn't it be best to hear it from a person from the super-ancient civilization?

2. If you say it's best...

3. BAM!!

4. GUAH! I been completely hurt!

5. What are you doing?!

6. TADA! The highly anticipated big encore, Miss Super Ancient Young Wife's second appearance!

7. Enough of the narrating like back in chapter 2.

8. Is Shijou okay?
TL note: Kanji says Shijou, the furigana says body

9. He's fine, just unconcious.

10. He can still hear what we're saying, but / it's still pretty dangerous to be unconcious, huh?

11. Are you okay?!

page 7

1. Anyways, how long are you girls going to keep being so indecent? / Is that normal?
TL note: like normal as in you always do it

2. Ah.

3. In order to fight the enemy before, we had to strip off our heavy clothes.
TL note: Like in dragonball z! remember how the clothes they wore seemed like weigh 50 tons or something?

4. What sort of fighting manga is this?

a. What? That's just embarrassing.

5. Moreover, the clothes we were wearing disappear, so what should we do?

6. Hmm...

7. Ichirou, Jirou, get some clothes for us.

8. Panties' terrifying power is / to be arrested while stealing.
TL note: while stealing panties obviously.

9. A new power is welcome, so we'll bring them right away!
TL note: meaning they can touch them without being in trouble or something I guess.

10. Don't bring back any weird clothes.

11. Understood.

12. Is it okay to leave it to those two?

13. They're adults. They won't bring back anything weird.

14. I wonder...

page 8

1. A bra on top... Complete nudity below... What's up with that?

2. It's my style-su...

3. Good grief... What an outrageous exhibitionist. And, you're still so young too...
TL note: okay, she doesn't say exhibitionist, but instead says female pervert, but who in English say the words "female pervert."

4. I am not an exhibitionist-su! / Though it did felt good sorta-su... / But that is only 'cause its summer-su!!

5. Eh? It felt good?

6. No way! You're an enthusiast-su?

7. No, that's not it! / ...Anyways, the Shimei resident phone number... / Tell me how good it felt.

8. Are you really not an enthusiast-su?!!

page 9

1. You see, I was actually once an idol.

2. haah?...

3. My stage was the New Year's countdown concert at the Budōkan.
TL note: budokan is a concert hall in japan... somewhere

4. The seats were of course packed.

5. During then, when people stripped, since I was a elementary kid, I just thought, "I wonder how it felt."

6. In other words, when you were an elementary student, you were a pervert-su, right?

7. That's why you have to tell me in full detail!

8. Should you really be an police interviewer-su?

9. U~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~gh

10. You're really troubled!!

11. There's no need to listen to her.

page 10

1. Sister Kouji-senpai and Kashiwa!!

2. Hey-su!

3. Nice try on the job.

4. What's this? You! / Even though I finally decided to listen to the feeling of being exposed now!

5. Ah!

6. What? That look is amazing! / Do you already have a third? Let's form a band!

7. I am this.

8. T-That's a...!!

page 11

1. A badge from an organization by the codename DAF, whose under the direct command of the cabinet, the crisis managament agency!!

2. S-sorry for my rudeness!

3. It's fine. But, this is confidential, okay?

4. dream of a Naked Girls Band has ended!!

5. ---So, Shinmachi, / how did it go?

6. That...

7. You know, this and that happened and...

8. Well, it's all good. There's also a dice the way I'm heading. The other parties aren't going for it yet, so / just succeed the next time.

9. Yeah!!

10. By the way senpai, what is Boss going to wish for once he collected all the dice?

11. He's not going to wish for anything.

12. Eh?

Page 12

1. Once he completes the set,

2. he's going to seal them away.

3. Hold... Hold on a sec!!

page 13

1. Why the heck did you bring us this sort of clothes?!!

2. We only brought what look we thought matched with each of you...

3. They don't match! Especially mine!!

4. Man... Even though we went through all that embarrassing trouble to bring those...

5. Was it embarrassing because old grandpas are the ones who buy these kind of cosplay clothes?

6. No, that's not it.

Page 14

1. You see, when we were going to buy the clothes, a cute young girl lost something...

2. Young Miss, you misplaced this item.

3. Ah! I did! I unknowningly misplaced my skirt!

4. Thank you very much(heart).
TL note: "...For returning it."

5. This skirt is a very important momento from my father. / As thanks, how would dinner later sound for you two?

6. Well, We'll partake on your offer once the interview with Obama is over.
TL note: okay... it really says obama... and unless that is actually a word in japanese, I will assume they mean obama... ... >_>

7. Let's go to a hotel after too(heart)

8. When we thought about how great such an event would be, / the store clerk said to us, "Please don't speak when you're fantazing."

9. Your very existence is embarrassing.

page 15

1. Oh right! Shijou-kun said my previous outfit was funny.

2. But, what about this outfit? Is it cute?

3. Hey, Hey, how do you feel about this outfit, Shijou-kun?

4. You are just a bit too

5. old.

6. AH!! Right, you changed into a woman!! / Also, I'm not old!!
TL note: she and she-jou(this is what I'm going to call female shijou :P) says "out" and in japanese that basically means "fail" instead of old. It makes sense in japanese...

7. What the hell are you anyways?! Go away already! Give Shijou-kun back his body! / What has happened to that body?! Especially his crotch area!!

8. Is it big? Hey is it? Or isn't it?!

9. Big Sis, calm down.

10. Secret(heart)

11. Aah, I really hate this person.

12. Stop that already!

13. We've completely diverged from the topic! What happened to the topic about the dice?!

14. Ah, I forgot.

15. Don't forget!!

page 16

1. I want to hear this from a Super-ancient civilization person.

2. What is the Caramel Dice's true power?

3. I don't know.

4. Eh? You don't know?!

5. Just because one is a super-ancient civilization person, does not mean one would know everything there is to know about the super-ancient civilization!

6. I bet you guys don't know everything about the present time either! / You don't know anything about the true power of the Miss Young Wife's naked apron either!!

7. Eh? What? What?! What's the true power?

8. Getting all rough on me will make the apron all wrinkledly(heart). / And, also it'll make me all confluzzed(heart).
TL note: confluzzed meaning she is all confused but excited... I asked a high school girl if confluzzed was a word, she said yes.

9. Why would I know that?!!

10. I see...

11. The definition of a true power has become really loose, huh?
TL note: loose as in the definition was beaten to a pulp to mean whatever you want.

page 17

1. Come to think of it, shouldn't Papa have wrote about the dice's true power in his dairy?

2. It's written here.

3. It is?! Why didn't you say anything?

4. Because you didn't ask. / I couldn't answer any questions Teacher didn't ask, right? Such as the color of my panties. / Or do you answer even if you aren't asked?
TL note: last line is probably referring to the color of her panties

5. Muh... I don't have anything to reply back to agrue against something so off topic.

6. What is this?

7. Umm... Surely it's after "The Rankings of which Local High School has the Shortest Skirts Chapter"...

8. The diary is as weird as usual...

9. Papa...

10. Found it!!

11. I have wrote everything I observed concerning the Caramel Dice in here.
TL note: Letter start

12. Before you wish for your wish after gathering all the dice, prepare for the terrifying ordeal you must face.
TL note: letter end

page 18

1. "But, since I used those pages for the Skirt Rankings,"

2. "To be continued in the second volume."

3. What the hell?!!

4. ...Say, there's a second volume.

5. Where can it be I wonder?

6. Heheheh. I see.

7. The first to find that book will get both the dice's secret and the remaining dice.

8. I am certain that book is in my room. / Since a lot of Hakase's books are there.

9. We found it so quick!!

page 19

1. This room is the room where I first found you, right Mikage?

2. You lived in the school? / and in this room?

3. Yes! I'm fine with no power or heat.

4. An accountant would get angry if he heard you say that.
TL note: Don't really get it... but do accountants not get heat or power in their work?

5. Here is Hakase's bookshelf.

6. Let' see...

page 20

1. Ah! It's a naughty bookshelf!!

2. As to what sort of person the owner of this bookshelf is, / what do you, the daughter, think?

3. SFX: Sob Sob

4. Are you crying?

5. There's a book of proverbs here.

6. There is! Go papa!
TL note: She is exclaiming how proud she is about her father for having a book of proverbs

7. Heeh, now let's take a look.

8. "Orginal Proverbs for the Future"?
TL note: proverbs her father created and wants to use for the future/children

page 21

1. Master says, "I give panty fonture telling, so lift."

2. Lift.

3. Yes.

4. What master?!!

5. I found it! This is the second volume.

6. I'll read.

7. "Although they're named the Caramel Dice, they are in fact not sweet."

page 22

1. The Caramel Dice are also referred to as God's Dice. / The second name is not because it could grant your wish.

2. But because it is God.

3. Like how the shrine gods demand offerings, / the Dice God demands a reward for his wishes.

4. I cannot say what the god demands. If you were to anger the god, then...

5. Then?

page 23

1. The world will be destoryed?!

2. The Super Ancient Civilization fell into ruins because they used the dice. / Since they angered the Dice God.

3. That's what the boss said.

a. I'll tell you the "true power" so please don't go!!
TL note: don't go back home. I'm assuming where the boss is is not the girl's home

4. We collect the dice to lock them away, / so that no idiot in the world can use those dangerous dice.

5. No idiot in the world-su, huh?...

page 24

1. I wonder what is God's demand? Is it to just win at ChinkoChinkoChin with the dice?
1. I wonder what is God's demand? Is it to just win at CruddyCrudCrud with the dice?
TL note: Chinko means penis

2. You mean Chinchirorin?
2. You mean Craps?
TL note: Chinchirorin is a japanese dice game.
TL note2: For page 24 line 1 and 2, then second tl line is the changed joke to fit a more English oriented society.

3. Big problem, senpai!!

4. Right now, there is an idiot with two of the dice!!
TL note: hey! she got over her dumb speech ending thing!

5. Well, it has no bearing with the rest of the world!

6. I will fulfill my wish!!

7. Aah... A sign of the end of the erotic book factories.
TL note: see page 5 line 2 for reference

8. I will absolutely get the dice from THEM!!

9. Good luck!

Translation: God Does Not Play Dice 7

Sun, 07 Mar 2010 08:56:33 +0000

reserved for kuu-scans

So... I guess I should say a word of caution... I'm not sure of what's mangahelper's policy on this but... Meh, better safe than sorry.

Warning

The following translation involves an implicit sex scene translation. Please do not read if you feel such a scene would mentally scar you.

Warning

Okay! Now that that is there... Remember, I warned you, let's go on with my normal ramblings.
I'm really busy with school. I noticed the raws for most if not all the shounen ace titles have stopped appearing, which is bad since this is a shounen ace title, and truthfully, I do not care enough about this manga to bother try to search for other means for the raw or actually buy it myself. So, I will state this now, I stop where the raw stops.
Anyways... That's it.

Chapter 7
Song of the Idiots

page 1

1. Wha

2. What is this?

a. Back to this wonderful scene once more (music)

3. What is the meaning of this?!

4. Skin-color everywhere (heart) / Dream-color everywhere (heart)
TL note: they are actually saying "lots of (color)" but I think everywhere conveys the meaning better

page 2-3

a. A tidal wave of sexy girls play
TL note: it doesn't actually say tidal wave but I think it is close enough =P

b. Hold on to the [Caramel Dice] that grants wishes!!

c. dice battle!

Chapter 7
Title: Song of the Idiots

page 4

1. Hmm...

2. (spirl)

3. Meow

4. Umm.......

5. How did it become like this in the first place?

6. Let's try to calmly reason this out.

page 5

1. Yahoo! Eeboo! This is everyone's favorite, Kanau Shiemei! (music)
TL note: the Eeboo part is just me going... whatever... she literally says "inpoo" whatever that is.

2. No bra! I'm being lewd!

3. Hah Hah. I wonder if someone will come in and see this.

4. Hah

5. Hah

6. SFX: Creak

7. Waah! Someone came! Look at what I'm doing!

8. If you were Kawori Manabe, you'll be cute even with a face full of pimples. / Hello, I am the super ancient robot, Mikage.
TL note: Kawori is pretty cute.

9. Oh? Did I accidently wandered into a pervert room?

10. How good of you to come here. Heheheheh

11. Since it is bothersome, I will try stripping down too!

page 6

1. However, you have bras and panties? / You're still can't step into my domain.
TL note: she literally says something like: you still have your top and bottom underwear
TL note2: the second part confused me. I like to think it was something like the metaphor: "you can't step into my shoes"
TL note3: from seeing line 3, I now think it is like "you are not as good as me (in being perverted)."

2. That is as far as Gandhara.
TL note: reCheck

3. It can't be helped if you're an amatuar.

4. Since you'll get hurt if you go all out from the start.
TL note: she is talking about how mikage still have her bra and she will get hurt if she strips completely

5. I also did stupid things when I was young. Broke a few ribs here and there.

6. The pain turned my nipples pitch-black.

7. Like Makkuro Kurosukes.
TL note: "Makkuro Kurosuke" are those dark dust balls from the 1988 animated movie "My Neighbour Totoro" and the 2001 animated movie "spirited away" by Hayao Miyazaki as described from the point of view from the main female characters.
TL note2: literally translation is "Pitch-Black Blackie"

8. However... Nothing can beat this pleasurable sensation of being shown bare.

9. I'm tired, I'm going to sleep.

10. Guh~~~

11. That's my simple reasoning as to how this came to be.

12. Your imagination is not simple!

a. Since my nipples are not black!!

13. Well, listen up since there is more to come.

14. If so then let's hear it.

15. you're so submissive.

page 7

1. Sweet-su! I would like to introduce you to a greater pervert-su!

2. Did you say greater?!

3. Hah!

4. You exposed your lower half?!

5. SFX: Suu Suu
TL note: wind sounds

6. Fuhahahaha! I feel a draft-su!

7. If the choices are Hama-chan or Suu-chan

8. Then it has to be Suu-chan-su!
TL note: umm... I don't really get the joke mostly cause I don't get what hama is referencing to here in this manga but... Hama-chan and Suu-chan are both japanese actors...

9. I... I lost...

10. That was without a doubt a top class pervert attack.

11. As per the agreement set by the Pervert Organization, the incapable pervert shall have a gun and a cute cat gun pointed at her-su.

12. Meow

13. MEOW

14. Aah. Watch me as I violate you with my round eyes.
TL note: I'm not really sure if she is talking about her own eyes or if she means something stupid...

15. Stare at me with those scornful eyes~(heart)

page 8

1. So,

2. It became like that. Shijou-kun got knocked out because of something or another.

3. After rescuing him, he'll because of something or another marry me, and become a charismatic husband, while I...

4. You'll thinking too far ahead!!
TL note: This is more literally like "you're thinking away from the present!!"

5. What's the something or another-su?

6. Whatever, it's fine. / Since there was no fighting exactly.

7. Eeh?

8. Even though I still haven't got to the Battle for the Spirit World part yet...

9. Well, we'll continue this online

10. while searching for [Lewd Picture]
TL note: this is like a joke, he is adding words to the bunny girl's mouths

11. Imagine it yourself.

12. Like hell I will!
TL note: She literally says: "I won't imagine it." but I like that one better because it sounds louder

13. I won't either-su! I cannot bring myself to imagine any Lewd Picture-su.

14. That's not what he meant!!

page 9

1. Let's skillfully search for Erotic Books.

2. Wow, cool (heart)

3. I see......

4. I understood the gist of what went on.

5. For now let's notify the police. / Guns are dangerous.

a. SFX: Beep Boop

6. What's the number for "Nine Hundred Eleven?"
TL note: since this is a japanese manga, she literally said "one hundred ten" but I like to assume more americans read this than anyone else from other countries so I will use the american police number

7. It's 90011

8. Wait! If the police come here while we look like this, they will assert both me and you!

9. Why would they assert me too?

10. No matter how you look at it, that outfit of yours make you very suspicious!

11. Why?! It's very stylish!

12. Meow

page 10

1. Ah! My stylish clothes...!!

2. What are you doing?! I'm not involved in this!!

3. SFX: Boing

4. SFX: Boing

5. Now you won't be able to run away as well-su! Which means... / You will assist me if you do not wish to be shot by this gun now-su.

6. Assist?

7. Firstly, get Kanau Shimei's Caramel Dice over there

8. for me-su!

page 11

1. Hmph... This is bad.

2. It's bad enough I'm at a disadvantage, but if that stupid bunny were to use her partners, she may very well take the dice away.

3. Hey, Stupid Bunny

4. I'm not stupid!

5. If you take our dice, Shijou-kun will hate you for it.

6. !!!

7. Hmph. That will be bad! / Lower half exposure girl! I will not do as you say!!

8. Why-su?!

a. Treat that with care.

9. Do as I say-su! Can you not see this gun-su?

page 12

1. Can you not see that this gun actually no longer have any more bullets?!

2. What are you saying?!

3. Ah

4. Hahahaha, idiot!

5. Now there is no reason for Stupid Bunny to be on your side!

6. Now, let's the two of us defeat this stranger!

7. There's no reason for me to be on your side either.

8. Wha!!

9. That's correct.

10. Then, we'll do this-su!

page 13

1. We'll have a contest and whoever wins will be allowed to have Ms. Bunny here as an ally, how is that-su?

2. A contest?

3. Hey! Don't so casually use me as some sort of prize! / It's rude!!

4. A prize is something that is good that everyone wants.

5. Then it's okay (music)

6. Big Sis... / You're too easy...

7. Okay then! I won't know how strong I'll become when I make these guys my allies, but

8. It's a contest!!
TL note: this line is sort like "It's on!!"

9. In order for the contest to be fair, we'll let Ms. Bunny decide on what we'll do-su!

10. You'll probably pick something stupid.

11. I am able to choose something approriate! / Umm...
TL note: This is sorta more like "I am able to choose something approriate... you know what that sounds better...

page 14

1. Even if you say it has to be a quick contest, nothing but rock-paper-scissors seems to come to mind...

a. Hmm?

2. Why is that?!

3. You can't taste true excitment since they were both over so fast-su!

4. That reply is all wrong!

5. If this was a card battle manga, we could do a card battle...

6. I attack you with this rare card, an anime character card that I wasted my youth to get!!

a. I spent 100000 on this card!

7. Guah! I may have lost the battle, but I won in life!!

8. What is that game?

9. Only useless people can imagine something like that, huh-su?

10. That went beyond my imagination.

11. We'll do something where you'll be at a disadvantage!

12. Geh?!

13. I've decided!

14. The contest will be doM!!
TS: Please TS a note saying doM means" extreme masochism"

15. doM?!

page 15

1. Boss... Why did you entrust Shinmachi the job this time?

2. Taking a dice from a civilian, that girl should be able to do it.

a. Ping Ping Ping
TL note: actually makes the sound "piko piko piko"

3. She should be able to do it...

b. There is no way.

4. By the way, Boss... I have something I want to ask.

5. What is it?

6. The "True power" of the dice you talked about before the job, what is that?

page 16

1. Also, why do you wrap yourself with those bandages? / Did you draw those eyes yourself? / Why do you show your mouth? Is it suppose to be cool?

2. That's a lot of questions!

3. I drew the eyes myself. It is cool! / My buddy said I wouldn't be able to eat any snacks if I covered my mouth.

4. And, the true power of the dice...

5. Checkmate.

6. Eh?

7. I checkmated you.

8. It's not a checkmate. That's a body double.
TL note: like a fake king here.

9. Then, where is the real one?

10. The real one is already gone... / This is the dead lord's funeral battle, so it is a battle to the very last man.

11. Isn't it a tearful tale?

12. Speaking of lords, women who tells men they are gentlemens are pretty sexy.

13. I took all your knights.

14. "Soldiers are the remains of a dream..." / "Remains of a dream" are like the rubber remains of a panties?
TL note: hmm...

15. It's time already. I'm going back.

page 17

1. Sorry.

2. I was mistaken.

3. Not doM but Poem. / Thinking about SM earlier, I mixed them up...

4. Thinking about...

5. It happens all the time for girls-su.

6. A poem battle, huh?...

7. Since you're a language teacher, you should be good at creating poems, right?

a. Guh...

8. What's with that expression?!

9. It's because poems; they are embarrassing. They make me feel like I stink of Daffodils, so it's impossible. / They're not interesting nor do they have punch lines.
TL note: reTL

10. But, aren't you a language teacher?!

page 18

1. The rules are within one hour from now, the person who creates a poem that'll make my heart all emotional wins!

2. Within that time, you can make however many poems you want.

3. Okay, now start!!

4. Yes-su!

a. First to strike, wins-su!!

5. Oh! Quick! Okay, Ms. Triangle glasses

Poem1:
Sunflower
Sun flower blooming, toward the summer blue sky, blooming together majestically, despite the heat, you're such deligent warriors.

6. A perfect score is 100 points. You get 2.

7. So low-su!!

8. Why? It was a invigorating good poem-su!

9. Being invigorating did nothing to my heart.

10. No way~~~

a. SFX: Mumble Mumble

b. Stop eating. It taste bad.

page 19

1. Idiot. You do it like this if you want to move the heart.

2. Listen carefully.

Poem2:
Sunflower
Sun flower blooming, toward the summer blue sky, blooming together majestically, despite the heat, you're such deligent warriors.

3. Isn't that the same as mine-su?!

4. There's still more.

Poem2 continue:
Moreover, in addition, why have I been picked up for questioning by the police in the nude?... "Sorry. Please don't call my mom." --I want to die...

a. Small

5. What was with that supplemental-su?!!

6. I don't really get it, but since it made me cry a little, 10 points!

7. Low! / Even though I combined sunflower with my original!!

8. However, it's higher than mine! / With that.

9. I understand now... A beautiful poem by itself won't move the heart.

10. If that's the case, then I'll go too.

page 20

Poem3:
Chicks
Chicks, even though you're children, you stare at anuses. Splitting by gender. While you're young, your games are to stare at anuses. If you ever realize your strange habit, it will be very bad. Male friends especially...

1. How was a bird poem like that any good-su?

2. Are you an idiot? This is both our problem!

3. This looks like its my victory.

4. Since I also have always worried about that, 30 points!

a. Male friends especially (heart)

5. This girl!!

6. Wait, isn't this unfair? They have two people but I'm all alone.

7. That is true... Well, I'll let you use these two.

8. I don't want these guys!

9. Well, you can decide once you see our minstrel skills.

page 21

Poem4:
Breasts
When staring at breasts, you forget all that is bad. Like debts. With a knock knock knock, the debt collector comes. In front of your eyes, the adult video package you vacantly stare. At the picture's actress. Depressingly. We tried ryhming, but the debt collector has yet to return home. When beautiful women want to step in heels.
TL note: I'm tired and This is a dumb poem anyways. Also note that the poem actually sorta ryhmes in japanese.

1. I don't want these guys!

2. Well, decide when you hear the score.

3. 0 points.

4. If its teacher's allies, shall I lend a hand then?

5. Shijou-kun, you woken up?

page 22

1. You're not Shijou-kun. Who are you?!

2. I am the super ancient young wife!

3. ?

4. ?

5. Regrading the super ancient young wife... / The super-ancient young wife's soul that was placed in the super-ancient panties and the super ancient apron that Shijou is wearing, borrowed Shijou's body.
TL note: eh, I skipped some of the grammar in the end.

6. Read chapter 1 for full details.

7. Starting from chapter one, the set-up was there, but its thanks to him fainting that I finally came out!
TL note: set-up as in... umm... Look if you don't understand what set up means in this context then I can't help you.

8. From my building frustration, I'll recite an amazing poem!

page 23

Poem5:
Newlyweds' night
"Dear... Today I want to try on this outfit(heart)"
"Oh! Tonight is a train conductor, huh?!"
"Well, I'll check your ticket now."
When I said that, my husband whipped out his crotch ticket while sticking out his tongue.
"It's so much bigger than normal! It's a special-express ticket, isn't it?"
"The embankment's tunnel has already overflood, hasn't it?"
"Sir, that's a big problem! Quickly, quickly, please go through it."
"Then, I'll enter through the b-ack."
"Aah. On account of the shaking, please firmly hold onto the F-cups."
Nnewlyweds' night is this sort of experience everyday(heart).
TL note: ... ... ....... >_> I'm not correcting anything in this!

a. SFX: Ahha(heart)

b. Eew

1. I don't get it.

2. Then, I don't get it either!

3. Then?

4. It greatly relied heavily on figurative speec, and since it didn't properly follow the main situation, / 10 points.

5. I wanted to know the situation. / The erotic situation...

6. Heheh. For virgins without any this kind of experience, you're rather unaffected by it. / I wish you would get more aroused.

7. Go away already, you.

8. I understand. In the end, it's fine if you remember only this much.

9. The good feelings of the imagination of the newlywed's roleplay game (heart).
TL note: literally says "costume play" which is the long way to say "cosplay"

page 24

1. Okay!! I'll remember it!!

2. I'll do that if I get married (heart).

3. Learned so much from

4. the awesome composition.

5. Ugh... My head is pounding.

6. It's pounding even though this is Shounen Ace.

7. Shijou-kun, you're back?

page 25

1. Shijou-kun, try creating some sort of poem, erotic ones are fine with me. / If you do that,you'll win. Using one of your memory of me.

2. Ah! Miss Boobie.

3. You're changing the point of this game!!

4. However, if it's one of your poem, that girl will probably give out a high score for you so just make up whatever. / I'm losing right now to one of Himiko's poems!

5. Hmm... Then,

Poem6:

Miss Boobie
Bunny ears are cute but, ultimately, I think they look funny.

6. Funny?!

7. What's the score?

8. I didn't listen to his poem.

9. Eeh??

a. SFX: Sob

10. If this continues, I'll lose... Unless I do something.

11. Please leave it to me.

12. Mikage!

13. Did you finish charging?

page 26

1. There are very few pages left, so I tried my best to wake up.

2. I wish to tell the readers that anything is possible if you do your best. / Do your best, you worthless people.

3. Okay, I believe you told them.

4. Now, do your best on a poem.

5. I'll do my best.

6. It has been one hour, time's up. / Himiko's poem wins!

7. It was no good even though I did my best. / You, worthless people, please abandon hope.

8. Heheheh. Now Miss Bunny is my ally, right-su?

9. That's how it is.

10. Then, take Kanau Shimei's dice immediately-su!!

11. That would be bothersome...

page 27

1. If Shijou-kun is bothered, then I'll stop being your ally (heart).

a. SFX: DunDunDun
TL note: yes... I know it does not literally say that
2. EEH?!!

3. If that's the case, then nothing can be done-su.

4. Nothing can be done so it's over?!

5. I'll go back this time with just this much-su, but...

6. It's best if you remember that those dice

7. have a frightening true power-su!!

8. What?!

9. That girl...

10. is going home looking like that?

11. Anyways, let's call 911.

Translation: White Lover Oneshot : White Lover

Sun, 21 Feb 2010 23:40:56 +0000

Reserved for the guy who has the worst taste in mangas ever

This is more or less a first draft. I didn't really go too much into nuisances and etc etc.
Oh and if you are not absolutely sure I believe you have the worst taste in mangas ever, then this translation is not reserved for you.
Yes, it's you suou

White Lover Oneshot
By: Mirura Yano

page 1

1. Nao!

Side Text: Magazine debut! Mirura Yano-sensei's warm fuzzy love story(heart)

2. What happened?!

3. Hey, Nao!

4. "A fire, they said."

page 2

1. "Parents seemed to had been slow to run away."

2. Mommy / Daddy...

3. Nao...?

4. "Treated badly from the father..."
TL note: I would double check this line

5. "To become so heartbroken while you're still so small."

6. "Her hair turned white due to shock..."

page 3

a. A pure white present from Kahou
TL note: I'm not really sure if kahou is a name or not but... I like to think it is.

Title: しろいこいびと
Title: White Lover

b. A special non-serialized story!

Author: 夜野みるら
Author: Mirura Yano

page 4

1. -kun

2. Nao-kun

3. Nao-kun!
TL note: the name is correct. The boy's name is Nao.

4. Don't sleep in the hospital's smoking area!

5. It was all some sort of dream...
TL note: More like: "It seems what I saw was some sort of dream..." or something...

a. ...It's no good. I can't remember anything from it.

6. My purse was stolen...
TL note: hmm... I just noticed some of the bubbles don't have arrows pointing to who is talking... That could be annoying later...

page 5

1. Again this girl each day has none.

2. Just one. You finished your exam?
TL note: medical exam

3. Nao-kun, get cancer!
TL note: I will assume she means from smoking

a. NO!

4. This is a hospital. Don't say something so distrubing.

5. Aww... Look, if you're lonely, / how about I keep you company...?

6. I'm under 30. I refuse.
TL note: I think he is trying to say she is too old for him.

page 6

a. <- 28 years old

1. Quickly come to the shop once you're done smoking!

2. ....

3. Such a thug...

page 7

1. My prefered tabacco is "Piano."

2. Red tea to coffee.
TL note: She prefers red tea(Black Tea) to coffee

a. What...?

b. She doesn't look like a lost child...

3. Hello, Nao Kasugano-san

page 8

a. White hair?!

page 9

1. I am a tabacco fairy!

2. Today, I will follow you, Nao-san.

3. Is this some sort of new punishment game...?
TL note: punishment game as in "loser has to do such and such"

a. Fair... Eeh?

b. Doubt

4. You don't believe me?

c. Punishment game?

5. I'm right in front of you, so please believe me.

6. Wait. Ow! What are you planning...

page 10

1. It's a couple's love retreat!

a. I don't get what you mean!

2. Right now I have my part-time job!

3. Then, let's go there!

4. Haah?!

5. It sounds sorta fun.

6. I work! Work!!
TL note: okay he doesn't really say that. More like, "Work!! I" <3

7. Piano-chan, huh?

8. Working
TL note: middle of the part-time job

9. She really followed me...

a. Such an adorable name...(heart)

b. Thank you very much.

page 11

a. SFX: Nya Nya
TL note: yes... nyanya are cat meows... >_>

1. Such a cute girl to be with Nao-kun.

2. I'll say it now, she's not my girlfriend.

a. No need to be shy

b. Say what you wish...

3. Oh by the way, which school do you go to?

c. You're a student, right?

4. Eh...

5. Ah... Umm...

a. If she is doing this for a game, she won't say her school name.

6. Fa-Fairy!
TL note: you know, I'm not really sure what she is referring to

page 12

1. Fairy...?

2. That's-That's it. She's being trained to be a voice actress.

a. SFX; Rub Rub

3. Then, you're an actress in the making?! Wow!

4. Eh! Eh?

5. She came here to work on her acting.

6. Follow my lead

7. O-Okay!

8. That's right. I'm looking around serveral places and...

9. Won't you work part-time here while you're studying?

a. Hm

10. Haaah?! What am I saying...

11. I just want to put the uniform on this cute girl.

12. Moro, this is one of your hobbies, isn't it?!!

page 13

1. Well, so here's the uniform, change into it.

2. You're serious?

3. Eh, Ah, Yes!

4. ...What did she mean?

5. I believe Nao-kun simply wants to be lovers with her.

6. I said we're not lovers!

a. SFX: Sniff

b. You're pissing me off!
TL note: It literally says: "Angry face"

c. Geez!

d. <- Eyedrops

7. You're truly a child who doesn't understand the woman's heart.

8. Even though she has grown so accustomed to Nao-kun's side.

9. I do strangly miss that but...

page 14

1. Umm... I changed.

2. Oh!

3. Is this okay...?

4. It really does suit you!

5. Well I'm going inside, so take care of things here.
TL note: omitted: "...things here later."

6. Stare at this girl with delight. This is Nao-kun's job as well, no?

page 15

1. I won't!!

a. SFX: Bam
TL note: door slam

2. (><) Kyah-

3. ~~~~

page 16

1. Fin

2. Finish...

3. Work is fun, huh?!

4. Already changed back.

5. I have to close later, so go home now.
TL note: by "close," its meant to close the shop which involves cleaning up and etc etc. Although he literally only says clean up.

6. I'll help as well!

page 17

1. So-Sorry...

a. SFX: Clink
TL note: sound of the cup cracking

2. Just stop it!

3. If you're here, the amount of work will increase.

4. If you obstruct any more than this, then leave already.

5. ...... Sorry.

b. Did I say too much to the kid?...

6. ...My bad.

page 18

1. You have beautiful hair... PoSo
TL note: I have no idea what poso is

2. It's the same... as that time.

3. Eh?

page 19

1. Wha...!

2. Today was fun!

page 20

1. Thank you. / N.a.o-k.u.n.

2. SFX: Ding-Ding
TL note: bell chime

a. That girl...

3. Can you read this?

page 21

1. Nao?
TL note: I like to think she means, "you said Nao?"

2. Nao...

3. Nao was it?!

4. You have the same name as me!

5. Did you hurt yourself again?

6. You're always hurting yourself...

7. Your hair is also all messed up.
TL note: could mean wet too but... hmm...

page 22

1. ? / Let's go to where my big sister is.

2. Since you have pretty hair.

3. Sis, lend me a comb.

page 23

1. Ow!

2. I told you to knock, didn't I?

3. So... Sorry.

page 24

a. SFX: Sneak

1. Wah!

2. Hyah?!!

3. ...Nao-kun.

4. Yo.

page 25

1. It's. Been. A. While.

2. !

3. Even though I forgot who you were till yesterday.

a. SFX: Twist...

4. ......Sorry.

5. Even though you came for me then,

6. I... didn't have the courage to see you...

page 26

1. It's fine.

2. Nao-kun is awesome!

3. Owowowowow

a. SFX: Pull

b. What?!!

4. Even though you forgot, / since you behaved the same as in the past...! Sniff

5. That's my bad.

c. right?

6. That beautiful girl is such a close friend with you...

d. Sniff

7. Haah?

page 27

1. The Cafe's manager.

2. It seems there is some sort of misunderstanding, but...

3. the manager is my sister.

a. Sister?

b. His Sister...?!!

c. This

d. Plain

4. Before

5. After

6. My sister changed her style into that.

e. Gah gah
TL note: She is in shock

7. Women are scary.

page 28-29

a. SFX: Rummage

1. ...Either way,

2. The one that I like is Nao.

Side Text: What stopped during their childhood, the couple's time moves again!

b. NyaNya
TL note: yes... it is the meows again...

3.
(sigh... I'm tired... go learn japanese and finish the rest of the manga yourself.)

Translation: Yoru Naku Suzume Oneshot : Yoru Naku Suzume

Sun, 17 Jan 2010 08:06:29 +0000

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This translation is not permitted to be used by anyone that does not have my personal approval.
This manga I have been trying to get scanlated for months now... Seriously, months. I don't even remember when I first started trying to translate it. Hopefully, though, it won't be too much longer before it is done cleaning.
It really is a very nice one-shot.

Credits to Cerpintaxt of Kuu-scans for proofreading

All tlnotes were placed in the first draft and was never removed in later drafts.

IMPORTANT NOTE: I have included every and I mean every SFX in the manga in this TL. Now, the problem with that is that some of those SFX will be pretty hard to TS/doesn't make any sense. Those SFX should be ignored.

second note: I will use double letters for out-of-bubble text that I missed but found in my second run through

One-Shot
Yoru Naku Suzume
The Night Singing Sparrow

page 1

a. (This is simply the title. I will only say and include this once. Any instances afterwards of this appearing, I will ignore.)
TL note: should not be changed in TS

b. SFX: Waah...

c. The one watching over the children...
TL note: left-side text

1. If you stray for too long / you'll vanish.
1. ながくまようと / きれてしまう

2. One day definitely, / you'll vanish.
2. いつかきっと　/ きれてしまう

d. SFX: Ahahaha

e. SFX: Yeah!

page 2

1. Hide your doubts.
1. まよいかくして

2. Forever...
2. いつまでも

3. Another child has gone missing?

page 3

1. That’s the thirteenth one... / This is unsettling...

2. Hey, what do you think? Master.

3. It’s a mystery.
Proofer: “Well” doesn’t really cover the point, so I went with this if that ends up being too long try “Who knows.”
TL note: Literally: more like "I don't know"

4. Anyways, Aya.

a. SFX: Clink

5. Give this to that child there.

page 4-5

a. The curtains rise on this retro-romance fantasy story!!
TL note: change the "curtains raised" into just "begin"? Literal v meaning

b. Original story by: Yu Aikawa Art by: Atsushi Suzumi
TL note: I am putting first names first.
TL note2: If xtch did not redraw this, just TS above or below it

c. Atsushi Suzumi of "Venus Versus Virus" presents a special story!!
TL note: I rearranged the grammar. Literal: "A special story presented by..."

d. The Night Singing Sparrow
TL note: Title - so TS not really required here

page 6

1. Here, Runt!

2. SFX:Clank!
TL note: sound of the cup hitting the table

3. What is it?
TL note: Literal: Wha~t?

4. Someone you know?

5. Hm...?

6. Move it along, Aya.

7. Eh?

page 7

1. That child is still our only guest, you know.

2. ...

3. Haah?

4. Honestly...

aa. SFX: Grr

5. I'm always running errands 'cause of you.

a. SFX: Gulp Gulp

6. Ngh...

7. .. Geez.

8. I guess I'll be back later.

9. I'm going out for a bit!

10. Do you...

page 8

1. perhaps know of the Night Sparrow?

2. The Night Singing Sparrow has dark wings.

3. Would you happen to know something of it...?

4. Sigh...

5. Granny-

6. Sparrows are birds who sing in the morning.

7. There are no sparrows out at night.

8. Assuming one did exist, / Isn’t it…

9. Possible that it‘s one those things in our world that has yet to be discovered?

10. Who are you...

11. I / work there.

page 9

1. If you want, I'll listen to what you have to say.

a. SFX: Ring...

2. Welcome.

b. SFX: Smile

c. SFX: Lift

3. Hey, make way, make way. / Give the special seat to the guest!

4. Hmph...

d. SFX: Shuffle Shuffle

e. SFX: Shuffle

f. SFX: Lick

page 10

1. Umm... / That child is...?

2. Aah... She's just a homeless orphan.

a. SFX: Gaze...

3. Someone so small is...?

4. My master is the head here but / sigh, he's too nice to people...
TL note: Literal: ".../..., he's tends to spoil others"

b. Come

5. (heart)

6. Thanks to that, we're like this, but we’ve never missed a meal.

7. Well, don't worry too much about it.

8. Please, just consider us as the town's alley cats.

c. SFX: Shuffle Shuffle

9.　...

d. SFX: Ngh!
TL note: the sound of the little girl struggling to get up on the stool

10. Oh...

page 11

1. Truthfully, I also

2. Have a daughter like her...

3. Is that what you're worrying about?

4. That daughter of yours?

5. I named her Kinu.

6. From the start, that child tried to escape the eyes of others.
TL note: Basically very shy... which the next line says

7. She was always very shy...
TL note: I just noticed the lady speaks very very politely... A tad annoying for me

page 12

1. Whenever a guest came to the house, / even if they brought a playmate,

2. She would only go hide somewhere...

a. SFX: Rattle

3. Hey, go introduce yourself.

4. . No... / It's scary...
TL note: unclear if intro or the child is scary... I'm going to assume both

5. Scary...?

6. That child abnormally saw everything as scary...
TL note: every? any?

7. Being like that, she couldn't attend school. / Neither could I send her out as a bride on her own.

8. Complaints came from my husband because she wasn't disciplined.
TL note: I'm going to assume the father and not a lolicon husband
TL note: It is really more like "she didn't listen to what we said"

9. Then I would try to scold Kinu...
TL note: punish? PR! help! basically she is saying punish but in a very gentle way

10. Then finally, one day…

11. She stopped speaking.

12. ! / To you and your husband?

13. Yes / She wouldn’t even acknowledge my own voice...
TL note: she stopped talking and listening

page 13

1. The only thing she wouldn’t part with, not even for an instant, was a western-style doll my husband/ received from a famous doll maker in the capital.
TL note: It can really spilt anywhere... It doesn't matter all that much.

2. She doesn't acknowledge anything else.
TL note: omit: "...in the world."

page 14

1. She hardly even touches her meals.

2. Like a doll, she only stares out the window not moving a single inch. / When I took her to the doctor, he couldn't find any cause for it...

a. SFX: Nod
TL note: nodding her head down to take a sip

b. SFX: Clink...
TL note: sound of the teacup landing on the ceramic mini-plate

3. Furthermore...

4. We’ve started to notice something terrible.

5. SFX: Gulp

page 15

1. Night after night…

2. She seems to travel somewhere.

3. ...Eh?

4. No way... someone other than that runt.

5. To think such a little girl is wandering all alone at night!
TL note: unsure if line 5 is from bartress or not

6. And if she's going in the middle of the night…

7. Then she must be completely obsessed with something . / To leave her bed, abandoning her sleep...
TL note: Again, I'm not sure who is speaking

8. Of course, I tried to stop her.
TL note: Literal: "I tried to detain her."

9. I tried everything. / I even tied her up on occasions.

10. Even so... / That girl...

page 16

1. She hurts herself just to get out...

2. As a last resort, I tried to follow my daughter.

3. But I would lose sight of her and / couldn't locate where she was going, no matter what...

a. SFX: Do-Dip
TL note: Water dropping into standing liquid sound

4. I want to know.

5. Where my daughter is going. / What she is looking for.

6. And, if I can... / I want to hear Kinu's laughing voice again.

page 18

1. According to what I heard, / the Night Sparrow lives in this town.
TL note: Tricky... she is rearranging her sentence. I am trying to keep the same syntax as her.

2. A bird that's said to be able to solve all of the world's enigmas...

3. If I meet the Night Sparrow, then…

4. Surely my wish will be granted.

5. Believing that,

6. I came to this town.
TL note: remember, she talks very very politely... Which I cannot express into words

7. ...... ......

page 18

a. SFX: Glance

b. SFX: Snicker
TL note: I'm not really sure what this is...

c. SFX: Ding-Ding

1. Thank you. / Now if you will excuse me...

2. Umm.

3. Please don't look so sad.
TL note: Literal: "Please don't be so depressed." or something like that

4. I can't say any more except this, but…

5. The bird that can grant your wish,

6. has seen that which you have wished for.

page 19

1. That's why, wait.

2. For the sparrow of the night's song...

3. SFX: squeak

page 20

1. The girl called Kinu...

2. Perhaps, there is an epidemic of sleep-walking going around?

3. Hey, Master...?

4. Where the heck

5. do you think all those children went?

6. Who knows.

page 21

1. Maybe they went to the dream world...
TL note: world of dreams?

page 22-23

a. Pop
TL note: sound of her dropping down quickly

1. SFX: Buzz
TL note: I have no idea... I just copied that off of a SFX dictionary.

page 24

1. SFX: Ho-

2. SFX: Ho-...
TL note: Owl sound

3. SFX: Thud
TL note: Sound of landing?

a. SFX: Floosh
TL note: sound of a single quick motion

b. SFX: Swish
TL note: wind

page 25

a. SFX: wobble

b. SFX: wobble

c. SFX: wobble

d. SFX: wobble

1. ......

e. SFX: wobble

f. SFX: wobble

page 26

a. SFX: Click

b. SFX: Click
TL note: walking sound

c. SFX: wobble

d. SFX: wobble

e. SFX: floosh
TL note: sound of falling

page 27

1. Finally.
TL note: Literal: "....... ...Arrived." or something

page 28

1. SFX: knock

2. SFX: knock

3. SFX: creak...

4. Welcome…

5. You, little lady, lost your voice too, right?

6. ......

a. SFX: creak

7. Come. / I'll find you some suitable clothes / to replace that strange outfit.

page 30

a. SFX: Rummage

1. Oh! / Found it! Found it!

2. How about this red long-sleeve kimono?

3. I think it suits you, little lady.

b. SFX: Shake

4. ...

5. ? / Would a dress be better?

c. Shake-shake-shake

6. ...? You're okay like that?

7. SFX: Rattle...
TL note: the sound of the bookcase moving

8. Then... come.

c. SFX: Click

9. SFX: Clang

d. SFX: Click

10. SFX: Clonk
TL note: I don't know I guessed... hell I guessed most of the sfx

11. SFX: Plop

page 30

a. SFX: Te-Te-Te-Te
TL note: sound of fast walking

1. This night,

2. the number of companions have increased again...

3. SFX: Ku-Click

4. SFX: Ku-Click

b. SFX: Squeak
TL note: turning sound

c. SFX: rattle

d. SFX: Rattle

page 31

1. ...

2. Found~ya

page 32

1. Well now,

2. It's time to wake up.

a. SFX: Roll Roll

b. SFX: Guh...

3. No...

4. Stop

c. SFX: Shake

5. Don't... interfere...

6. I am a doll...

page 33

1. I annoy my father and mother.

2. Hearing nothing, saying nothing. / I wanted to remain lifeless like that...

3. Thus,

4. if I'm like that,

5. how would anyone be able to hate me?!

6. How can being hated be good? / That's how I felt...!!

7. SFX: Waaa...

8. SFX: aaah

page 34

1. ...Oh?

2. You two kids are going to go back already?

3. To that dreadful world...

4. I...

5. It's very hard for me to like people. / Being hated is scary...
TL note: huh...

6. But, / I don't know what I should do...

7. The people around me too, what should they do about me? / I found it so confusing.

8. It was getting hard to breathe...

page 35

1. I might as well not breathe if I were to be loved. By becoming like that doll.

2. That's what I thought...

3. Every day, I wished for that.

4. Then one day, one of the doll's shoes suddenly came off.

5. I drew a map to that place, and

6. felt like I told my doll, "It will be alright if we went there..."

7. But, I can no longer

8. SFX: Twist

a. SFX: Wipe

9. go there anymore, can I?

page 36

a. SFX: Shu

1. SFX: Ton
TL note: ball bouncing

2. SFX: Ton

b. If you stray for too long, you'll vanish.

c. One day definitely, you'll vanish.

3. SFX: Ton

4. SFX: Ton

d. Hide your doubts.

e. Forever.

page 37

a. Keep them locked away within.

b. SFX: Pat

c. SFX: Fuu

1. SFX: Sii..

d. The depths of your heart.

Page 38

1. Hey, come on!!

2. What happened? / Where did little Kinu go?
TL note: Changed: "Kinu-chan -> Little Kinu" This is the one and only name suffix that appeared in this one-shot and so I decided to remove it.

3. Where did all the children vanish to?!

a. SFX: Gulp

b. SFX: Gulp

page 39

a. Gaah~~

1. And that's why, Aya,

2. Certainly to children,

3. women are enough of a secret world.
TL note: I think it is like "children are only a mystery to females" I think...

4. But Master!

a. Grr...

b. Giggle Giggle

5. The secret world has

c. Another child who embraced the darkness in her heart is lost...

6. Eh?! Another cup of milk?

7. ngh
TL note: a grunt meaning yes

d. SFX: Lift
TLnote: the cup sound... Lift is just a guess

8. Our business will be ruined 'cause of you. Gah!

9. yet to be destroyed... huh?
TL note: line 5 and 9 are 1 sentence

10. Fin

Translation: Manekare Zarumono Oneshot : ManekarezaruMono

Fri, 15 Jan 2010 03:22:14 +0000

~~Say thanks to Haneul: http://haneulnim.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/manekare-zaremono/~~
Nevermind... It looks horrible. I don't want to look at it.
I want to make it very clear right now, I have no affiliation with H3.
Close enough... http://haneulnim.wordpress.com/2010/01/24/un-uninvited-people/

Free to use, whatever, I don't care.
I'm really surprised no one cared to do this one since it seemed up there on the list of things people like. By which I mean, there is neat little action scenes, a bunny-girl, a loli, and a pervert. Whatever... I wanted to do this one-shot myself but no time...

招かれざる者
ManekarezaruMono
Uninvited People

page 1

1. Linked to a parallel world,

2. Creatures invade from there

3. Sending those "Uninvited People"
TL note: maybe consider changing uninvited people to it's japanese roomaji if you're into that

4. back to their world

5. is the job of the "Gate Keepers."

6. All the battles, from here they began...!

page 2

a. 招かれざる者
a. (Title)

b. マネカレザルモノ
b. (title in katakana)

c. 期待の新鋭が贈るバトルアクション！！
c. Battle Action offering promising newness.
TL note: newness, freshness... whatever

d. 蓮羅ヨシノソ
d. Yoshinosu Hasura

page 3

1. (music)

2. Target located

3. SFX: Kak Kak

4. Let's go!

5. Roger!

6. Gate open!!!!

7. !!

8. A "gate" ??!!

page 4

1. I'm deporting you home!!!!

2. Bring it!!

page 5

1. ......

2. A "Deportation Gate" ?!

3. It's time...

4. Now!!

5. To deport...

6. Photo Chance!!!!

7. Ee~~~~~~h??!!

page 6

1. Wah...
TL note: crying sound

2. Please don't take pictures...

3. ngh...

4. Gya-!!!!

5. Close Close (music)

6. I have said it before, / in order for you two to become official "Gate Keepers,"

7. you have to capture me, the examiner for this Gate Keeper Exam, / by tomorrow's sunset.
TL note: TS should make his/her own decision on where to split

page 7

1. Oh look! I'm running away~~~(music)

2. Wait...

3. Calm down, Mamori.

4. Patience. / The examination area is this ghost town.

5. You'll tired yourself out recklessly chasing her.

6. Mondo Kadokura (8th grade)

7. However, your eager face sure is cute.

8. Geez... / Please be more eager, Mon-kun!!
TL note: changed "mou..." to "geez..." Why? because I want to.

9. We failed the exam / nine times already.

10. Mamori Konoe (5th grade)

11. The Gate Keepers Association's rulebook states that / if you fail ten times, they decide that you have no talent.

12. Oh! / Your angry face is also good~!!

13. I'll never become a Gate Keeper!! / There is no next time!!

page 8

1. Together with a pitfall. / I, Mamo, will guide the target to it...
TL note: Her nickname is Mamo

2. During that, you will / draw the gate and deport the target back home.

3. But you always

4. just take weird pictures instead...

5. Like these?

6. ?

7. It's your Growth Journal. / I'll never go back. I am devoting myself to your youth.

8. How... How were you in my house and school...??!!

9. This... This kind of thing should be disposed of!!

10. SFX: Close

page 9

1. !!

2. Gates...

3. When did he...?!

4. I predicted what you were going to do.

5. SFX: Gulp
TL note: the loli is scared

6. Secret maneuvers. / I am a genius.

7. The same as when / Gate Keepers corner their prey with traps.
TL note: reTL

8. And, "Gates"

9. SFX: Swoosh
TL note: sorta like a really fast movement sound.

10. are connected to a companion gate.

page 10

1. Special attack: "Gates of a Thousand Hands" !!!!

2. Mamo is not prey~!!

3. Why can't you use

4. this power to help me~?!

5. There are other uses

6. for this sort of handy power?!!!!

7. Please use it to deport.

8. SFX: GehGuh...
TL note: basic sound made when hurt

9. What's so fun about harassing kids?!

10. Guh... I... want to see it...

page 11

1. To see the anguish, distressed, humailiated / pathetic appearance of pure-hearted girls!!!!

2. That is my pleasure!!!! / My hobby!!!!

3. What was that you say?

4. That's just...

5. I am a genuine pervert!!!!
TL note: pervert here means more like "sick bastard"

6. REMEMBER THAT!!!!

7. ..........

8. It's still a thousand years too early to lecture me. / Fool.

a. Oh! Nice look!!

9. Cough... Cough... Forgive m... Mamo is...
TL note: the single m is just me trying to replicate the unfinished word.

page 12

1. Even though I am a part of the guard family that was known as the Konoe family a long time ago,

2. this is the way things are now...

3. Please don't worry, Father.

4. I, Mamo, will somehow take care of the debts.

5. I am a child, but / I'll be a partner. I found a really good one.

6. They say Gate Keepers' work gets lots of rewards. / Mamo will do her very best.

7. Monzou
TL note: I'm going to assume that is the name of the place

page 13

1. Ti... Tis... / This time is my real...

2. Gee... Greek... Greeting...

3. ...Honestly, I do not have any interest in your family's ruins.

4. Eh?

5. Complete Harmony. / Since I'm satisfied with most of the things.
TL note: reTL

6. U-Umm... I may still be a child, but

7. I will do my very best!! / Therefore...

8. !

9. If that's the case, will you believe in me? / Mamori?

10. Ye... / Yes!!!!

page 14

1. We'll start at once. Do you believe / that I have x-ray vision?

2. X-ray...?

3. Is... Is this a test...?

4. SFX: Uh... Uh...
TL note: Okay, that SFX is really "shyness sounds" whatever that means... Change it to whatever

5. But... He can't possibly have X-ray...

6. SFX: Uh... Uh...

7. But but... Those eyes really do look like they can see through...

8. MOMMY

9. SFX: OGya-

10. As expected... You were brought up as a guard...

11. No hesitation to the eyes... my eyes...

12. For... Forgive me... for what I...

13. Seems fun (heart)

page 15

1. Father, / Mamo is doing her best!!

2. Since I will definitely become a Gate Keeper and / make you happy!!

3. (music)

4. Mamori, / use your legs more!!

5. Legs, your legs!! Spread them out more!

6. Don't stop moving!!

7. Please be serious!!

page 16

1. Are you sad, Mamo?

2. You're such a little child... / Come on, curl up here.

3. Please don't lure me like you're my mother...

4. If you're going to sleep, then sleep by yourself.

5. Right... Even though I was going to read you a book!!

6. Please don't treat me like a little kid!

7. That time... / Manta's hand swiftly to the flower garden wet from the penis...
TL note: or something like that... I don't want to keep thinking about it.

page 17

1. Geez... That time when I noticed you in the street,

2. you were such a gentleman. / Why are you so different from that...?

3. If my true self is shown,

4. I will get arrested!!

5. Gentle but firm, / my persona is perfect.

6. ...........

7. ...........

8. Actually... / Actually, what is it that you want to do...?

9. I believe... / that Mon-kun really will be a Gate Keeper...

page 18

1. All I can do is to believe in you.

2. If that's the case, then tomorrow

3. please act properly.

4. Mamo~... / I'll give you a billion, so give me your panties.... SFX: Mumble Mumble
TL note: It really says one hundred million but that is kinda long

page 19

1. Ugh...

2. I-I... I fell asleep...

3. Am I tied up in the nude again...

4. SFX: Rustle

a. Ufufu... Mamo is really such a bad girl... To do that in this sort of place...

page 20

1. Only a little while till sunset...

2. Okay to let it burn away? A flood above ground?

3. Mon-kun, please WAKE UP!!
TL note: guy's name is mondo, mon is short of it. I ignored it before but I guess I will go back and edit them back in. - done

4. Kiss... Mamo, Kiss...(heart)

5. This sure is bor~ing...

6. Should I just run around from place to place...

7. (music)

page 21

1. Please do so!!!!

2. That's the spirit!!
TL note: no clue on this.

3. (music)

page 22

1. Hah...

2. It seems exhaustion caught up with you...

3. Hah...

4. Hah...

5. Hah...

6. Are you going to let it end at sunset?

7. .......... / I will deport you...

8. before that happens...

9. But still...

10. Isn't that your vital partner...?

11. Sure is desperate...

12. Anyways, do you get it?

13. Eh...?

page 23

1. From the beginning, I did not believe that boy can become a Gate Keeper.

2. Shouldn't had chose a brat for a partner to entrust your life to.

3. You can only mock him.

a. Oh wow~!! This is unbearable.

b. I believe you will succeed your family...

c. Will you believe in me?

4. ..........

page 24

1. Mamori believes / in Mon-kun
TL note: reminder edit... those weren't "Kimi" they were "kuns" I am an idiot for only noticing it now. Second run through, you should edit all instances of you when refering to Mondo to Mon-kun. - done

2. ..........

3. I don't hate kids like you, so I thought I'll get you to give up on him, but

4. it seems it had the opposite effect...

page 25

1. But still...

2. up till now, you weren't able to deport me.

3. ..........!!!

4. There are different kinds of "Uninvited People"...
TL note: you know how sometimes in tv shows/movies, people say "there are (insert noun), and there are (insert same noun but with more emphasis)"... yeah, same thing here.

5. They are cannibals and homicidal maniacs / is mostly all true.

6. SFX: Drip
TL note: okay it is really a "lick" sound but English doesn't have a lick sound

7. Guh...

8. I can't win...

9. I was invited as a part-time job.

10. !!

11. It sucks, but / if I'm deported, do I not get paid?

page 26

1. Mon-Kun!!

2. They said nothing about not killing.

3. I'll just have to resist till sunset.

4. ..........

5. Kuh...

6. Utterly shameful

7. Mamori, look to your right!!

8. Eh?

9. !!

page 27

1. It's secret maneuvers. Mamori!!

2. Gate Open!!!!

3. H-How?!

4. SFX: Ba...
TL note: I have no idea what that is...

page 28

1. Mon-Kun is a genius!!

2. SFX: Flap...
TL note: again... sfx... I pretty much just make them up half the time

3. No!! / I am a pervert!!
TL note: omitted the word genuine

4. That's how you see yourself...?

5. Speak!! Scold me violently!!

6. SFX: Flap

7. Kuh...

8. ....tsk / In the middle of photographing...

9. all the while, making gates...

10. Aah. / It was all in order to take secret pictures of Mamori.

11. He's kidding. It was our strategy.

page 29

1. You are already within my territory. / Prepare yourself!!

2. Sniff... Mon-kun is so eager...

3. ...Hey

4. While I was being emotionally moved...

5. SFX: Clank

6. Ah! There you were!!

a. Fish?!
TL note: that kanji looks like "fish" to me... though I won't rule out that it could be wrong.

7. H-How?!

8. It's my prediction to your behavioral pattern.

9. Since I always looked it over in the forecast.

10. Don't... Don't look with those eyes...

11. SFX: Shake... Shake...
TL note: sound of timidness

12. P-Please make a note... / Those eyes have X-ray vision...

page 30

1. To look like this in front of that pervert...

2. Sorry. SORRY.

3. Your actions are completely not apologizing!!

4. I have no interests in your nakedness.

5. What was that?! This damn brat

6. is anything but charming!!

7. I can't get aroused by anything except little girls!!!!

8. Remember it!!!!

9. I'm fully prepared to go to jail snapping those pictures!! / Damn you for breaking that precious camera.

10. He gets angry because of that...

11. This...

page 31

1. preverted pair!!!!

2. You grouped us together!!

3. That's right. You're a pervert-girl. / Aah, how embarrassing!!

4. It's strange... To open a single gate requires a huge amount of energy.

5. To do it so easily... / Why is that boy still an examine?

page 32

1. Reckless. / Always remember that the position from behind is simply and honestly not reckless.
TL note: I'm not even sure I got the meaning correct here...

2. What are you talking about...?

3. We failed the exam because Mon-kun so suddenly came out of a strange place...

4. I can't concentrate...

5. Naturally. / A surprise attack appears by first doing something surprising.

6. You said it that time while acting like an idiot...

7. This damn mole girl!!!!

page 33

1. !!

2. SFX: Shut

3. Again!! / How does that little girl know where the gates are?!

4. Did that boy drew them everywhere?!

5. Hah...

6. Hah...

7. Hah...

8. Hah...

a. Fighting... I cannot lose...

b. If I can recall all the gate's location up to now...

9. What are you doing? / Stand up, Mamori.
TL note: my personal favorite line

10. Hah...

11. Hah...

page 34
TL note: favorite page of this manga

1. Stand up and capture her.

2. The you now can do it.

a. Is it possible that...

b. up till now, in all the exams...

page 35

1. The young girl is at her limits.

2. If I can survive the next attack...

3. it'll be my victory!!!!

4-12. SFX: Bang
TL note: sound of gates opening

13. !!

14. A feint?!!

15. Where are you?!...

page 36
TL note: the first frame in this page... My favorite frame

1. Appearing where least expected. / That is how a Gate Keeper fights.

2. Even if you lose to strength, if you use surprise,

3. you'll capture them.

page 37

1-7. Hah...

8. ...I got her.

9. ...Now...

10. Mon...

11. Ku...

page 38

1. My My My, how cute / that little body tried so hard.

2. SFX: step

3. But, still / you seriously had me there.

4. Now you're going to fail (music)

5. Well then, later

6. Wait

7. .......... Yes?!

8. If you leave the two of us alone, don't you know what may happen...?

9. Who cares? Do what you want!!

10. Heheheh...

page 39

1. Doing what one intended.

2. You believed in me, it's your victory.

3. 3 more seconds

4. till sunset!

5. 2!!

page 40

1. 1

2. I have already said it.

3. You are within my territory.

4. Gate Open!!!!

page 41

1. What... What the hell??!!

2. ??!!... The ground?! / Did Mamo die??!!

3. That's right, Mamo!! / Bad girls go to hell.

4. SFX: Click

page 42

1. Don't believe him!! This is my world!! / Deporting me by opening the village...

2. That's cheating!! My hundred year supply of carrots!! / When did you drew that gate?!

3. Probably then...

4. From the beginning, Mon-kun

5. SFX: GyaGya

6. SFX: Kya (heart)

7. always had the ability to become a Gate Keeper.

8. Mamo was the bad one. / It was me from the beginning.

9. Even though we passed, / I was easily beaten in combat...

10. You learned all that on those ten exams?! / What the hell. / Putting all your faith in that guy like that...

a. That's about it
TL note: I have no freaking clue

11. SFX: Gyah

page 43

1. But

2. He is a really smart pervert.

a. Their battle, from here on

3. Wrong!! Insult me more dirty!! So I can see some filth!!

b. I knew it, they are a perverted pair.

4. You were awake?!

5. ........!

6. Good, Mamo, that's the face!! / A shocking confession!! Mamo is a pervert-girl, trashing about with no panties on!!!!

7. What are you wearing it on your head?!! / I knew it, you did do something to me during the night, didn't you?!

8. I knew the whole time (music)

9. Mondo Kadokura Mamori Konoe Gate Keeper Exam Passed

c. To be continued...?!

Translation: God Does Not Play Dice 6

Wed, 13 Jan 2010 02:30:14 +0000

reserved

So, I stopped translating A girls since someone is scanning it. I just did it because god does not play dice is hard... Speaking of which, it has been a while since I posted a tl of this manga, it wasn't because it got too hard or I moved on to something else but... Wait no that's it, I moved on to something else and that something is a ps3. Yah.
Anyways, if your name is zollber or is a member from menudo-fansub, please contact me by getting zollber to contact me through the usual method you used. If not, then ignore what I just said.
If you read Kuu's release of the air gear tanko... then I have good news since that is being revived. Which is bad news for me and anyone reading this manga. I am also trying to push a couple of one shots through but I'm having trouble finding someone to clean it properly. And... that is that I guess.

Chapter 6
A mysterious transfer student

page 1

1. According to Kashiwa, this girl have the Caramel Dice-su!
TL note: stupid little cute speech/accent thing that makes things more complicated...
TL note2: Author tends to use names as a joke, "Kashiwa" could mean "chicken" so I assume it is that bird on her head. Though it is a real name...
TL note3: After looking ahead... It really is the bird's name

2. I see... Kanau Shimei, 23, a high school teacher, huh?...

3. Probably... She's collecting them because it's said they'll grant any wish once all six are together...

4. Without knowing the

5. Caramel Dice's true power
TL note: crap...

page 2

1. Shinmachi-kun... / I order you to take back Kanau Shimei's dice.

2. Roger-su!!

3. I don't care how.

4. Depending on the circumstance,

5. you have my permission to kill.

page 3

a. Something terrible is brewing!!

Chapter 6
Title: A mysterious transfer student

page 4

1. Okay, be quiet

2. Before class starts, let me introduce a transfer student.

3. A boy? A girl?

4. She's a girl.

5. Is she cute?

6. Please see for yourself everyone.
TL note: Literally: "...see and judge for yourself..."

7. What color is her underwear?

8. Please see for yourself everyone.
TL note: see page 4 line 6

9. Now enter.

10. But it's very hard for me to enter-su...

11. It's fine

page 5

a. An island girl
TL note: changed from: "She looks like she's from an island" or something like that

b. Ooh! Cute!

1. Okay, introduce yourself

2. Y-Yes! Umm... Umm...

3. Are you nervous? Will you be okay?

4. I'm-I'm okay-su! Because I have battle panties today-su! / You can't see them though-su!

5. Are you really okay?

6. Try chill yo' kewl.
TL note: BokoLife slaps BokoLife for something so horrible.
TL note2: Original and not mangled translation is: "Try and take a deep breath" which has a part that says "shinko kyuu" in it which sounds like "Chinko Q"
6. Try and take a deep breath?
TL note3: Okay, I rethought it and now I believe the first tl I did is just plain stupid.

7. A Chinko Quiz?
TL note: Chinko means penis in jpn - of course - Don't ts note.
TS: please input a tl note saying something like "language barrier caused lost of the pun." or something...

8. What kind of quiz is that?

page 6

1. It's this kind of quiz.

2. Yamada-kun states that "the words 'Pure phimosis' comes from 'Holy phimosis' so therefore a phimosis is a blessing." / How should you response?

a. Ooh

b. As expected of the class rep

3. Don't give a Chinko Quiz!

4. Leave it as it is-su?

5. Correct!

c. Yeah!

6. Don't answer either!!

7. Sigh... Just your name will be good enough, so go introduce youself.

8. Yes-su!!

9. My name is Shizuku Shinmachi, / And the one one top is Kashiwa, my pet-su.
TL note: I changed the tl a little so the name wouldn't be the last word to avoid confusion.

10. It's a pleasure to meet you all-su.

11. A pleasure!
TL note: bird... talks...? >_>

12. Wow! The bird talked!!
TL note: ...

page 7

1. It's because Kashiwa is very bright-su. She can do anything-su.

2. That too.

3. Also before, she perfectly carried out a reconniance mission-su.

4. Mission?

5. Idiot! Stop babbling!

6. Is it possible that this school prohibits birds-su?

7. No... They're quite all right.

8. There's also a robot who is somehow a classmate.

9. I somehow became one.

10. Well, Shinmachi-san, take the seat next to Shijou-kun. / The one next to that panty-apron guy.

11. Ooh! That's simple-su.

12. This outfit is very trendy.

13. Now, I'll begin the lesson.

14. Page 62 in your modern language textbooks.

15. "The phrase 'All mouth woman' is kinda arousing,'" a judge said first calmly to the defendant.

16. "Objection!" "Overruled!" He sharply supressed the procestor's words, "I do not wish to speak to the naked you."
TL note: ... what?...

page 8

1. After-School

2. Kashiwa, welcome back-su.

3. How did it go-su?

4. Aah, it went perfectly!

5. Kanau Shimei is in charged of three rooms. / This classroom, the data storage room, and the student counseling room.

6. If there are dice, it'll be in the other two rooms, the staff rooms.

7. Then, let's begin the job now-su!

8. Misson start-su!!

9. Shinmachi-san.

page 9

1. Ughmm.. What-su? Even though we already bothered to establish that you're cool-su.

2. As the class rep,

3. I believe I should show you around the school.

4. Is there a place you want to see? / Like the boy's bathroom or the boy's locker room.

5. What's with those places?!

6. They're both hard to refuse-su.

7. Wao!
TL note: ugh... I'm not really sure if this is a "Hey" or if the bird just says "wao"...

8. Come to think of it, that boy is a friend of Kanau Shimei! / He'll be a hinderance to the mission!

9. But, maybe I can extract some information out of him-su?

10. That is true but...

11. That interests me a little-su.

12. Undoubtly... You can't help but think... / he is teacher helping panty boy...

13. Oh! The boy's locker room-su!

14. That place, huh?!!

page 10

1. Surely, to have seen the place where boys change, / this school is one step closer to a huge paradise-su.

2. I think so too. / Is there anywhere else you would like to see?

3. Ah, right-su...

4. I want to see the data storage room-su!

5. Why the data storage room again?

6. Eh...Umm... Because I like data-su.

7. Such a weak excuse.

8. Data is good, huh?! Such as a gravure's three sizes! / The principal also said in the morning to relax when you see data that says "70% of all Japanese have phimosis."

9. What kind of principal is he?

a. This kind
TL note: shortened from: This kind of principal

page 11

1. Wow, it's amazing-su.

2. This here is like the legacy of a super ancient civilization. / Just saying it gets me all titillated!

3. Do you like history-su?

4. Yes!!

5. I love hearing about how back in the Edo period, women wore no panties!

6. All boys are like that-su, huh?

7. Would it be alright if I looked around for a bit by myself-su?

8. Sure, tread carefully.
TL note: so to not break anything.

9. Come to think of this, this ancient civilization looks a lot like headquarters-su, huh?

10. Searching through all this stuff for the dice looks hard.

11. That young man will be a problem when we start looking for it.

a. Oh!

12. Heheh. If that's the case, just leave it to me-su (heart)

page 12

1. Disguise

2. Complete-su!!

3. Hey Hey, is that okay? In that kind of disguise / only an idiot would fall for it. / I feel like this sort of thing has been done already by someone.
TL note: I think he is talking about how they don't really look that much different after disguising themselves

a. The someone

4. Muh! Who are you?

5. Good thing he's an idiot.

b. Good thing-su

6. Shijou-kun, / you really strike me as an obstacle in our search for the dice...

7. so can you go to sleep for a little bit?

8. Really like me so go to sleep? You sure are daring.
TL note: This is one of those awful puns. "Really Strike" and "Really Like"(Best I can think of) I know it is awful and if I didn't say anything no one would get it, but... ... ......

c. Treat me with care

9. That's-That's not it-su!!

10. Anyways, just go to sleep-su!!

11. Gyah!!

page 13

1. However, last time, they were just brutes. / I can't believe that stupid group had a dice.
TL note: by brutes, I believe she means someone really dumb

2. Yeah.

3. But, there are also other people that know about the dice.

4. Since you can conquer the world with something that will grant any wish,

5. dangerous groups may have set their sights on it as well.

6. People who will kill a teacher to obtain it...

7. This isn't some stupid old anime.

8. All things considered, Shijou-kun is late, isn't he? / Even though he said he'll come today.

9. Go look for him, Mikage.

10. Okay.

page 14

1. After all that... There wasn't a dice in that data storage room-su.

2. Aah... / Next is this place.

3. SFX: Ka-Cha
TL note: I'm going to assume it is door opening sound... Whatever that is in english...

4. Aha, that was quick, Mikage.

5. Ah, there was someone here-su.

6. Eh? Who are you?!

a. Cosplay?

7. Hey! There are dice!

8. Ah! There are!!

9. Wa...Wait a second. Who are you! Barging in here like that.

page 15

1. Eh?! What?

2. Hand over the dice if you do not wish to die-su!
TL note: haha... I made a funny. Die-su... Dice... It's not in the japanese, but... Okay I have a stupid sense of humor. It's why I even bother to try to translate this manga.

3. Die?!

4. What? What? Those lines don't fit with this manga, you know? / What kind of development is this?

5. People who will kill a teacher to obtain it...

a. Ah...

b. That before.

6. You have till 3 to hand it over-su.

7. 1,2,3

8. Fast! Too fast!

page 16

1. Teacher, trouble!

2. A dangerous person...!

3. Shijou-kun!

4. Oh, you woke up already?

5. Teacher, this person is dangerous!

a. SFX: Flap

6. I'm in the middle of that danger right now.

7. That person does not know moderation. She's a SM-girl! / She express her love with a bat!
TL note: Moderation may not be the best word here... But, I don't understand the word moderation enough to know a better word. It's sort of like, "This person does not know how to take things easy." or something...

8. Was all this also a play?!
TL note: A play by which I think she means... you know... role playing in SM stuff... Okay, I know minors somehow end up read these notes so I'm not going further into this. Though if minors are reading this manga then I guess I don't need to explain any further :P

b. A bisexual?!
TL note: I had a fun time with this one... Took me a little while to understand what this word was describing in those porn sites...

9. I am not a SM-girl-su!!

10. If you move, I'll shoot-su!

11. Oh wow, a pistol?! / She really knows no moderation!!

12. However, this time, in order for me to not lose in that play, / I have also brought a weapon.

page 17

1. This!

2. What is that? / A toy?

3. I found it in the data storage room just a moment ago. / It's a device that'll stop someone's movements!
TL note: generalized enemy to someone

4. You can do whatever you please with this.

5. SFX: Meow
TL note: I think it is a meow... looks like a cat doesn't it?

6. Like a stun gun? / Whatever is fine! At any rate, shoot it at that woman!!

7. Okay!!

8. SFX: Meow

page 18

1. Kya-su!!

2. Guah!!

3. Idiot!! Why did you shoot me?!!

4. SFX: Meow

5. Ugh, it's hard to aim.

6. But nothing happened from being shot-su, huh?

7. Ah!

8. Idiot! Look at yourself! / That teacher as well.

9. Myself?

page 19

1. Kya-su!!

2. Why am I down to my underwear?!

3. This is a device that stops someone's movement with embarrassment after vaporizing her clothes.

4. What was that?!!

5. Don't fire that then!

6. Teacher was the one who said to shoot...

7. Explain how it worked in the first place!

8. Muh... There's no doubt that I can't move because of embarrassment...

9. Particularly since I did not wear any panties...

10. Why didn't you wear any?

11. It's because today I wore my battle panties-su.
TL note: It's more like "today is battle panties day" but I like this better.

12. ?

page 20

1. Because there was an article in a special edition of a women's magazine that said, "The ultimate battle panties is no panties at all-su." / Today is a battle day-su.
TL note: I added the "at all" bit

2. UWah, to have this kind of an idiot aiming for my life...

3. You're not wearing a bra-su! Why is that-su?

4. That, you can guess on your own.

5. I get it! I guessed why-su

6. Don't guess why!!

7. Wow... She really is wearing no panties. With this, I'm afriad I lost the battle.

8. Hyah... It's embarrassing so I wish you wouldn't look too much-su.

9. It's fine.

10. Don't look, you idiot!!

11. Gyah!!

a. SFX: Meow

12. (spirl)

13. Why did you knock out your one ally?

14. Ah!!

page 21

1. You can fight with your lower body shown now that there is no longer any male eyes.

2. With a fellow woman here... It's still embarrassing to show the lower half of my body-su.

3. Hmm.........

4. Since I can't possibly run outside looking like this... What should I do?...

5. Oh! Is today a Nude Festival involving some sort of perverted ritual?

6. Mikage!!

7. You came at a good time!! Go beat these guys up! / They're Shijou's enemies. He was defeated!!
TL note: the 血祭り part is kinda confusing since it literally means "a sacrifice." So, if I had took that part by itself literally, it would say, "He's a sacrifice." But, that doesn't make much sense... But if you consider that this manga doesn't make much sense half the time, then... I really have no idea.

8. Another person came! What should I do-su?

9. SFX: Meow

10. I'll stop your movements with this as well-su!

11. SFX: Meow

page 22

1. Ooh?!

2. With this, you can not move, right-su?

3. How so? I can still freely move.

4. Eeh?! Don't you have any sense of shame-su?

5. This is bad!!

6. You can't tickle a man's fancy when the woman has no sense of shame! / Without it, such a character is bad!!
TL note: umm... joke line. I think I got the meaning not the grammar... I think

7. Where are you thinking from-su?
TL note: she is talking about from what point of view the bird is talking from.

8. Okay, Mikage! Beat them up!!

9. SFX: Beep
TL note: its literally "Piiiiiiii" which sounds like beep... no?

10. What's that beep?

11. Once my energy drops to a certain point, I enter Sleep Mode. / Good night.

12. Guh...

13. Don't leave me so fast!!

page 23

1. No one else is coming-su, right?

2. You mustn't be careless.

3. Hmm, since all the members have came already, no one is coming to help. / I would be embarrassed if someone came while I looked like this though.

4. If those particular people came, it would be a problem. / Since the number of enemies would increase.

5. FuHahahaha!! We're coming in!!
TL note: We're barging in... or entering with the intent of being rude... whatever...

6. Coming in!!

7. in

8. Uah! The problem came!!

page 24

a. SFX: Guh~
TL note: I know that isn't what he really says... but it is the sound of someone knocked out so I tried for a low grunt

b. SFX: Snooze Snooze

c. Someone else came-su

d. Geez... What did you come here for?

1. What is the meaning of this?!

2. Is this heaven?
TL note: Yes, I know he literally says paradise

3. A heaven dimension!!
TL note: sort of like a world of paradise... something...

Translation: God Does Not Play Dice 5

Wed, 11 Nov 2009 22:57:45 +0000

reserved for kuu-scans

Longest chapter yet... wow...
EDIT: I edited a few obvious mistakes

Chapter 5
The Deplorable Gentlemanly Acts of Adults

page 1

1. Kanau Shimei - Teacher

2. She's 23 years old despite what she may look like.

a. a grown woman!

3. Her father kept her looking like a child

4. by using the power "Caramel Dice" which are said to grant any wish if you collect all six together.

b. Okay, here's a review.

5. This story is a record of Kanau's and friends' struggle to retrieve the lost dice,

6. in order to recover Kanau's true form which she lost.
TL note: mangaka is a bastard... "Kanau" means "Wish" if you guys didn't noticed from chapter 1

7. But Teacher, for a woman, it's not height or a big chest that matters. / It's whats inside that counts.

8. Her insides are bad is why she is enduring this punishment.

9. They're not bad!!

b. Are they really friends?

page 2

a. A hot spring in a hot summer... What'cha you think, everyone?!!

Title: The Deplorable Gentlemanly Acts of Adults

page 3

1. Hey, why is Ms. Shimei's group here?!

2. Did we stay in the same hotel?

3. Bumping into them here, since it'll get complicated if they find out who I really am,

4. I better quickly check-out!

a. I wanted to take a morning bath...

5. What would be complicated is...

6. This girl, Inori Imadegawa, is a member of the Bunny Squad, who, like Kanau, wants the Caramel Dice.

7. She is a teacher in the same high school as Kanau Shimei.

8. If her true identity was revealed, it'll turn into something rather confusing.

9. Human relations are difficult.

10. Ah! I wonder if Shijou-kun is in the hot spring too...

11. She's also a naughty person whose in love with a student despite being a teacher.

12. Sh... Shut up you!!

page 4

1. Geez, why isn't this hot spring stocked with coffee milk?!
TL note: coffee milk is a real drink... Who knew... Official drink of Rode Island, USA...

2. Fruit Milk is a bad?
TL note: a milk drink made out of various fruits. Drank by children.

3. Coffee Milk is good! Coffee! / I am an adult!!

4. Hmm... So adorable.
TL note: or cute or whatever

5. I'll go buy some at a convenience store! / There was one nearby!

6. I believe it's about 50 meters away.

7. Please don't become a lost child, okay?

8. How can I get lost with only 50 meters? / I'm an adult you know.

9. Please take care then when you become the injured person / who decided to act on her own in the beginning of the story, okay?
TL note: split whereever

10. Don't... Don't say scary things...

page 5

1. Gyah

2. Gyah

3. I'm lost.

4. Boobies...

5. ?!

6. Boobies...

7. that are small...

8. Eh? What?

9. is nothing to fret over~~~
TL note: to worry over/whatever

10. Gyah! Something came out!
TL note: That's right folks... It is THAT kind of chapter.

page 6

1. Isn't small good as well?

2. For example, panties that are small are cute and popular.

3. Speaking of which, areolas too!
TL note: If you didn't know, like me... areola is that circular area around the nipple

4. Who

5. Who are

6. these guys?!!

page 7

1. Teacher is late, huh?

a. Fresh Juicy! Juicy Pineapple

2. It seems she really got lost.

3. Can't you use those antenna to find where Teacher is?

4. Right... I'll try it.

5. I shall restrict the search parameters to: "23 years old" "Female" "Flat-Chested" / and "A person who while sleep talking yesterday said, 'The president's decree are the only things you shouldn't lis-Ten yen!'"
TL note: the original has her saying one thousand yen which is "sen en" and one of the first japanese verb endings you learn is ~ma... what now? =D

6. A 23 year old woman has such interesting sleep talks...

7. I shall begin the search now!

8. Oh?!

page 8

1. I had a reaction to a Caramel Dice within this island!

2. EH?!

3. What was the point of restricting the parameters?

4. We didn't find Teacher. / Maybe it's because she is so small.

5. Well, since we now know there is a dice

6. Let's go look for Teacher!! / Since she'll whine later if we don't tell her.

7. Okay

8. I believed that the final stage of hemorrhoids should be labelled as "illogical."

9. Everyone thinks that at least once.

10. Hm?

page 9

1. "Undies" or "Underpants," which do you think is the correct way to say it?

2. Since it's stretches out, I think "Underpants"
TL note: Okay the original joke makes more sense in Japanese with the different words for panties

3. Stop talking about stupid things...

4. We're studying language as teachers.

5. We're late in packing our things 'cause you two overslept, so / reflect on your actions a little!

6. We'll reflect.

7. I won't go to sleep after watching pay-per-view.

8. We are reflecting whether it's alright to constantly stare at it.

9. Just don't watch in the first place!!

10. Anyways, it'll be problematic if Ms. Shimei's group spots us, so / We're going home.

11. Yes, Big Sis.

12. What are you doing here, Ms. Imadegawa?

page 10

1. Oh? The principal and the vice principal is here together too.

2. Perfect as always! I'm the principal(star)

3. Today, we participated in bull-fighting! I'm the vice principal(star)
TL note: I have no idea why...

4. Could this be a trip of amorality?
TL note: I don't have a better word that keeps the meaning... at least sort of the meaning
TL note2: Amorality is used here to be subtle. If PR believes being subtle isn't appropriate, I suggest "trip of adultery" or "sex trip" if you want to just blantly say it.

5. No-That's not it!!

6. But I did see boobies last night (heart)

7. Saw it completely bare (heart)

8. It was on pay-per-view!! We were in different rooms too.
TL note: second line is small side-bubble text

9. Umm, that's... We just happened to pass by that's all!

10. In this isolated-island inn?

11. Why are you guys in this sort of place? / Are you looking for a big boobie drug?

12. We're looking for Ms. Shimei right now. / We have something we want to tell her.

a. The said thing
TL note: Literal: "The thing that is wanted to be told"

13. Did you see her?

page 11

1. Yesterday.

2. No, we haven't!

3. So, Ms. Shimei has become a lost child?

4. Yes, that's right. Though she's an adult, she looks like a child.

5. My appearance is that of a child! My brains are that of an adult!

6. However, I can't solve the current problem at all!

a. 'Cause it's really hard!!
TL note: meh... more like: "'Cause The situation is difficult!!"

7. I like to think Teacher looks like this.

8. She's like a useless person, huh?

9. Since my brain is that of an adult's, I know of a fair amount of erotic matierals!

b. The most recent vocabulary I learned is "Sukebe Isu"
TL note: Cough cough... It is literally translated as "Lewd Chair" and if you know what they use it for, you would also think that lewd chair is not an good enough translation of it... >_>

c. She really is useless

10. Ah yes!

11. I can use this to get plenty of personal information of Shijou-kun.
TL note: shijou is the panty boy if you forgot

12. We'll help in Shijou's Teacher search as well.
TL note: This one is weird. I like to think the author/typesetter made a typo and typed Shijou(panty boy) instead of Shimei(loli teacher) but just in case, I TL'ed it as that.

13. Really? Thank you!

page 12

1. Well, the Principle and the Vice Principle, go bring back some information!

2. Yes!

3. Hey Hey, "Pee-Pee" or "Penis"

4. which do you prefer to call it as?

5. What are you asking?!! / Moreover, go interview a witness!!

6. Hmm... I for some reason see / "Pee-Pee" as like a panda name, so then...

7. You're answering too?!

8. Wouldn't "Pee-Pee" be the better of the two?

9. That one?! You like that one?!

10. You guys quickly go find a witness then come back!!

11. Yes

12. Okay

page 13

1. It's great that we're finally alone, but / what should I say?

2. Ms. Imadegawa

3. Yes?!

4. I been thinking about this.

5. Can it be a confession?!
TL note: Literal: "It can't be! A confession?"

6. I thought that the Vice Principal was going to lecture about nipples.

7. What are you talking about?!

8. But, since you sprang into action earlier, you are the teacher, right?

9. What?!

10. A-Any-Anyways, Shijou-kun, do you have anyone you like?

11. Nope.

12. Really?!

13. Yay!(heart)

page 14

1. But that also means he also doesn't like me...

2. I'm like lumped together with the trash there...

3. ?

4. Umm... Do you like older ladies?

5. Someone whose big-chested, has glasses, and wears a white blouse...

6. Like teacher?
TL note: Okay... The joke doesn't really work without this line and it isn't possible(at least for me) to TL this line to work in the joke in English.
TL note2: The basics of the joke in this line is that, "sensei" could mean "teacher" or could be used as a way to address a teacher or in this case the booby teacher. Booby teacher is thinking panty boy is talking about her while he is talking about teachers in general.

7. Damn it! Was I too forward?!

8. I've leaked out that I like Shijou-kun!

9. No! It's too embarrassing!!

10. I like... teacher.

11. Eh?

12. EEEEEE

13. EEEHHH?!!!

page 15

1. I always like to download the full video if there's a female teacher in the sample video in a porn site.

2. EEEEEEEEEEEEH?! The "Teacher" genre?!!

3. NOOO!! It is bad for students to watch that sort of thing!

4. I have to do it.

5. Though as living beings men know it's bad

6. there are times where we have to break rules and panty hoses.
TL note: ...

7. Kuuh! I can't response to something that cool. / I also like to break them.

8. There are two idiots here too.

9. WAAH! You scared me!!

10. I found out where Ms. Shimei is.

11. It seems that a strange group led a small girl to a nearby deserted house.

12. That's kidnapping?!

page 16

1. wow

2. good

3. petite

4. good

5. wow
TL note: line 1-5 is from furthest right to furthest left.

6. What's this?

page 17

1. I forgot to introduce myself. I am the commander of the Flat-Chest Lovers Association, the "Delicious Flat-Chest Squad."

2. Flat-Chest Lovers Association...?

3. Ah!! That word appeared once before!! / It's real?!

4. Your chest was just divine how it was extremely flat, so we just had to invite you to our hideout. / It's just a really wonderful flat-chest.

5. Are you making fun of me?

6. Absolutely not! We simply love small breasts and flat chests! / "Our love for them is as high as the chances the theory "woman wearing red is a nympho" is true."
TL note: or something like that... complicated line this was...

7. The chances are pretty low for that...

8. REALLY?!

9. But such people do exist, I guess.
TL note: she is talking about the flat chest lovers, I think...

10. I thought all men loved big breasts though.

page 18

1. Big breasts?! Those are like the same as a fat man's chest! We won't be aroused by trying to grope such a thing!

2. We have only groped men's big breasts before, yet we weren't aroused!

3. You groped them?

4. We, the Delicious Flat-Chest Squad, are an organization for the purpose of changing the world's view that big breasts are good,

5. and to encourage women who feel inferior about themselves.
TL note: Literal: "....who has a inferiority complex"
TL note2: Encourage as in cheer up

6. Wow.

7. That is a very nice idea.

8. Well then, try to make me not worry over my lack of big breasts.

9. Certainly! For that is why we took you here! / In order to snap a picture later.

10. Idiot, you're going to snap me?

11. Well, allow me to tell a small folktale.

12. A folktale?

page 19

1. Long ago, there existed a girl somewhere who was troubled by her lack of breasts.

2. E~h... I'm ashamed 'cause I don't have breasts.

3. I can't even stick a lighter in my cleavage...

a. Cleavage Lighter

4. That girl spoke to a passing gentleman.

5. I am also ashamed. Since I am a 42 year old umarried virgin.

6. Wow... You did well to live this long.

7. Amazing! I feel better by being able to look down of you! (star) / Marry me!

8. Now now, was that necessary? I'm excited since everyone is watching.

9. Good things like this happened because of no-breasts, so okay. / Then they lived happily ever after.

10. How was that? You stopped caring about your flat-chest, huh? / We're all 42 years old and able to marry!

11. Did you make that up, idiot?!! / ...wait, you're all 42 years old?!

12. We're not some ordinary 42 year olds, we're 42 year old gentlemen. / We're extremely rich men that just wasn't able to marry.
TL note: Omit: "...Like the man in the story."

13. So really, why do you guys like flat-chests? / Even though you can't grope them.

page 20

1. That's because girls with big breasts won't let us grope them...

2. You just lost so much creditability!! / You guys are the worst!!

3. If women don't have confidence in themselves, other than the popular long lower part of the body, / they should aim to be the 2nd place small size, right?
TL note: Long lower part is more literally "legs" but it involves a joke. see line 6.

4. I don't choose my size!!

5. ...wait, that was the entire story right?

6. Of course! / Right now, the ones who thought about pee-pees are perverted women.
TL note: The penis part is referring to page 20 line 3 "long lower part of the body"

7. It's somehow becoming quite interesting, huh?

8. I thought about pee-pees...

9. Well... Even if we're the worst, soon this world's women / will all have small breasts.

10. What are you talking about?

11. Hahahaha

12. We currently possess a power to change the world.

page 21

1. With this!

2. That's the?!

3. The Caramel Dice!!

4. It's rumored that if you use this, any wish will be granted.

5. So with this, we'll make all the world's women have small breasts.
TL note: Evil Evil Evil man~!!

6. Do you know how to use it?

7. That's where the problem lies.

8. We have been praying to it everyday, but there's still big breasts.

9. Makes you wonder if the rumor was a lie.

page 22

1. Hmm... I wonder if I can somehow get him to give that dice to me...

2. Yeah, let's try it this way!!

3. Hey, may I please have that?

4. No

5. Damn, a frontal attack was no good? / I'm at a loss.

6. Teacher... Was that intended to be a plan just now?
TL note: "plan" is like "plan of attack" but more like just "attack"

7. What?!

page 23

1. Are you okay, Teacher?

2. You guys! And some teachers as well?

3. Why are you here?

4. Ah! It's big breasts! Two people with big breasts are here!!

5. Calm down, members!

6. Big breasts are among us but don't fret because it's not scary. / Besides, if we keep saying we only have interest in small breasts, / then aren't you a true member whose in love with small breasts? Thus, you're okay!!
TL note: Wha...?

7. That's right! We're okay!!

8. These are people in trouble...

9. Is Ms. Imadegawa on a trip of amorality? And with two people too... No one can match you.
TL note: first part: look on page 10 line 4
TL note2: The last part where it says: "No one can match you." is like "You have no equal" in sex...

10. There was no equal(heart)

11. No equal, a boobie-packed festival of female teachers.

12. That's pay-per-view too!

13. Hey, how can I get him to give me that dice?

14. I have a good idea.

page 24

1. Mr. Commander, I'll give you this person's private photo, so may I have that cube thing? / An old picture is okay, right?

2. Eh?! You did such a thing behind my back?!

3. We have already taken plenty of peeping photos though.

4. You have?!

5. You can see the nipples here(heart)

6. What?!

7. What?!

8. Idiot, what are you saying?! Even under normal circumstances, the world harasses us, so though we always behave like gentlemen...

9. Won't it be worst for us to have such a photo?!

10. Even if the photo is erotic. It's of a child.

11. Then it is okay for a gentleman!

12. That was really simple...

13. Then... Here is the photo.

page 25

1. WHOA! AMAZING!! SEXY!!!

2. But aren't they a bit too big? But I can feel that this is authentic!!

3. Hard to tell, huh?

4. Then, I'll give you this. We'll treasure the photo.

5. You better quit when your children are troubled.

6. Hold it! I don't approve this trade!

7. You took that photo without my knowledge!!

8. It's fine... The photo is really......

a. Whisper Whisper

9. ?!

b. Thank you! See you later!
TL note: omit: "Thank you for the good thing" - I thought that would be too long

c. I'm going to see you again?!!

10. That's good, huh? Getting a dice...

11. I don't quite agree. / More importantly though...

page 26

1. WHY couldn't they tell the difference between mine and Shijou's chest?!!

2. They called it sexy(music)

3. Would you want me to explain?

4. That's fine!

5. The dice was taken from us, Big Sis.

6. I rather have that photo than that thing(heart)

7. Big Sis...

Translation: A Girls 13

Sat, 07 Nov 2009 07:30:42 +0000

In an effort to finish this off...

Chapter 13

page 73

a. Chapter 13

page 74

1. You tricked us...?

2. Yep, I tricked you!!

3. Why, dad? / That's cowardly!!

4. It certainly was cowardly...

5. But, this was the quickest method to take out the star player.
TL note: wording...

6. Huh?!

page 75

1. Y-You bastard...

2. Sorry, Tanaka-san

3. S-Seize that man!!

page 76

page 77

1. SFX: Hyaho!!

2. I may not look it, but I am 3rd degree black belt in karate.

3. I could make money fight if I was a little younger.

4. W-Whoa...
TL note: Literal: S-Strong...

5. B-But, why...?

a. SFX: Ugh...

6. It was to trick these guys.

7. To get info about where the island is. / So we can save some time.

page 78

1. Amazing dad!!

2. I see.

3. Wow...

4. Experience makes a man big.
TL note: wording... sigh...

5. The day will come when Kazao will be like me.

6. Don't try to talk big when you're unemployed!

a. Ah! Good kick!!

7. Oh really?

8. ........

9. Well then... / Before we leave...

10. Could you make a call for us?...

page 79

1. Yes, secure her. / Escort her back home.
TL note: I'm confused here...

2. Understood. I'll observe her for the mean time.

3. ........ I believe the two Eiko's want to try to meet each other...

4. But that is far too dangerous......

5. Since this island houses all the world's test subjects....

6. If everyone happened to learn the truth, then the project would end...

page 80

1. This is the smell...

2. The wind carries the island's scent...
TL note: Dog boy!!

3. I can sense the other Eiko as well...

page 81

1. The island is close....

2. That's right!! / From here, we'll be going by boat!!

3. On this gorgeous cruiser!

4. We're going to borrow it for a little while.

5. That person...?

6. When morning comes, a fisherman will find him.

page 82

1. Anyways, dad, can you drive this?

2. Just leave it to me!!

3. Umm... This is the accelerator? / The brake is...

4. ........

page 83

1. You're not hungry?

2. Eh?

4. You're looking quite pale...

5. I been feeling uneasy...

6. It's almost as if a typhoon is drawing near...

7. The weather is fine.

8. Tomorrow will probably be sunny too.

page 84

1. ......

2. Sorry... / I take back what I said...

page 85

1. Look!

2. The stars are like falling!!

3. I want to go to the wharf, but / if I go any further than this, the people on the island may notice, I fear.

4. That's why, from here, you two will go by raft.

5. Since the shore is only a night away. If anything happens, feel free to come back.

6. Yes!! / I owe you a lot.

page 86

1. Why is there two of Eiko and I?...

2. I will definitely find out why!!

page 87

1. Take care!!

2. Okay!!

3. Yuu....

4. W-Would it be bad if I come... / as well...?

page 88

1. This is my problem...

2. This is Eiko's problem...
TL note: and not yours blah blah blah

3. Even so, I...

4. I... want to know... everything about you...

page 89

1. You can only say good-bye!!

2, !

a. Yuu... It was all because of Yuu that I was

b. able to adjust to living in this city...
TL note: what a dirty guy...

page 90

1. Thank you, Yuu... For being my friend...

2. Only your friend? / But we kissed...

3. EH?!

4. Even then...

5. Eh?

page 91

1. Even then, Yuu is my friend.

2. My very important friend!!

3. ...We're always be friends!!

4. Yeah!!

page 92

page 93

1. Take care!!

2. Return safety!

3. ........

4. Kazao... What are you feeling now?

5. Eh?

6. Do you want to quickly see...

7. the one that isn't me... The other Eiko..?

8. I want to see her, but...

9. there's more to it...

10. ........

page 94

1. I'm scared...

2. .......

3. I know...

4. No, you don't, Kazao...

page 95

1. Eh...?

2. Because you're only one person again in this world,

3. while I'm not...

4. ........

5. .......

6. ?!

7. ?!

page 96

1. We're here.

2. This is the island where I grew up...

page 97

1. Eiko...

2. Kazao...

3. Eh?

4. Share... / your courage...
TL note: "...with me"

page 98

page 99

page 100

a. Come to think of it, during this sort of night...

b. I would kiss Eiko...

c. I feel Eiko nearby...
TL note: either sense or feel...

d. Right now, I...

e. with Eiko...

page 101

1. ........

2. ........

3. Shall we go?....

4. Yeah...

page 102

1. Though so...

2. This is the only place that is never locked...

3. I used to sneak out at night and stare at the stars...

4. Where are we going?

page 103

1. To Eiko's room first!!

2. Okay

a. Huh?!

3. Eiko, Hide!!

4. Eh?!

5. Whose there?

page 104

1. Cowering in fear in the place of no return...

2. Can they recall their courage with their lips shriveled up?

Translation: Yousei Ningyo Shoujo Kurumi Oneshot : Yousei Ningyo Shoujo Kurumi

Tue, 03 Nov 2009 08:28:51 +0000

Say Thank to H3: http://haneulnim.wordpress.com/2009/12/15/yousei-ningyo-shoujo-kurumi-2/

Okay, this should've been up here like a long time ago... Like 3 days after spiritovod uploaded this one-shot... But then I started playing final fantasy 12 and let's just say I have a lot of catching up to do in a bunch of stuff online and off...
Anyways... One day I'll hopefully get someone to edit this one-shot but until that day, this translation is free for anyone wanting to use it, but I should note that this was simply like the first draft so I left a few lines here and there alone that I felt awkward about. Okay that's all.

Yousei Ningyo Shoujo Kurumi
Fairy Doll Girl Kurumi

page 1

1. Fe~ugh...

a. (Title) + Coppélia Maestro

2. I couldn't even give my one letter!

3. ......

b. My weak self... so shy... couldn't had even give to a friend
TL note: reCheck

c. In the crucial moment... I couldn't bring out my courage at all.

4. Just one word... Just a little courage

5. No matter what... No words came out no matter what...

Left side text: The bit shy girl is...?! Out from Block Toys, a special non-serialized story!!
TL note: I have no idea wtf this is talking about

page 2

1. I'm so... pitiful.

2. I got this picture book when I was really small...

3. Since then... I've always opened this book whenever I was sad.

4. The picture book was written of a troubled foreign land... I still don't really understand the contents, but...

5. Kurumi... This is a magic picture book, you know.

6. It'll give you the power of courage when you read this book. (music)

page 3

1. However... Even so, I was also awfully intrigued with the book's main character, the tiny protagonist.

2. To the point where it was like I was the one laughing and crying...

3. In the finale... As a reward for being able to muster up a tiny bit of courage,

4. by the fairy's magic, she was given the body she wanted, an adult's body. Definitely... This sort of story I still believe in.

5. SFX: Fue... Hic! Uh...

6. SFX: Sniff......

7. I also... want to be... strong.

8. I wish... I'll could be reborn with courage...

page 4

1. ...ake up!

2. Wake up you!!

3. Huh... Did I fell asleep...?

4. That's right. It's morning already!

5. Well then! Go freshen up!

6. Today too, we're going to do our best!!

7. GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

page 5

a. Love and Courage and Maybe Some Nudity?!

b. A special fantasy battle story that's a little bit H(heart).
TL note: H means rated-x sorta...

page 6

a. SFX: Snap!

1. Morning

2. Morning(music)

3. Insulting!

4. Within this academy, right now...

5. A Coppélia other than me has appeared!

6. Eh....? That's rare.
TL nore: or unusual... I'm not sure if coppelias are common or not in this world.

7. Do you understand? This school is our private flower garden, you know...?

8. I know(music). "Vermins" are...
TL note: confusing when they just cut off like that.

page 7

1. So basically...

2. Ms. Fairy came out of this book...?

3. I'm not a fairy! I'm a Coppélia!

4. My name is Chestnut, a Knight Coppélia!!

5. A knight... huh...

a. I was certain you were a rabbit...

6. It was all 'cause of Kurumi that I was summoned...

7. by chance through that book to the human world!

page 8

1. The spirit world's inhabitants, the Coppélias, can appear in the human world once summoned by strong thoughts and dreams from a human...

2. Spirit World

3. Excessively strong dreams!!!

4. Human World

5. And then, in exchange for allowing that human to use them...... is how a Coppélia can operate in the human world!
TL note: reCheck 1st half

6. It's not easy to do at all. It requires great skill. (music)

7. Constantly... Resiliently... In order to open the "door to the parallel world" you must've constantly prayed a truly sincere wish to that book!!

8. Constantly... Resiliently...

9. The results of continuous prayer...

10. Wait! Kurumi... This looks odd!!

page 9

1. W-What... are these "flowers?" The school... has been completely covered...

2. Look!

3. ?!!

4. They don't look injured, but...

5. What in the world could've happened?

6. ?

page 10

1. GYAAAAAAAAH

2. Watch out!

3. TYRAAAAAAAH!

4. Are you okay? These things aren't the main culprits...

5. Stay alert! Somehow...

6. an "Enemy" seemed to have appeared!

7. An enemy?

page 11

1. Are you that Coppélia's "Maestro?"

2. Ah... You don't need to concern yourself with them.

3. My ability put them all to sleep... It's mutually beneficial like that, no?

4. ...Huh......? ...Was there such a kid like this in my school? ...Were you very inconspicuous or something...?? / I am "Aria Yajou," what's your name?

5. Eh?! Umm... Kurumi Hiiragi...

6. Oh, and this is Chestnut.

7. What arrogance...

page 12

1. Oh(music). Well, Kurumi(heart)

2. Let's go(heart)(heart)

3. Eh...?

4. You transformed?? Moreover that's... a Coppélia?!

5. Ah? Could it be... that this is your first time?

page 13

1. Heheh(music) Stay calm...(heart) It's not scary(music)

2. My "Coppélia" is very gen~tle...

3. S-Shit! Transform as well! Kurumi!!

4. Eh?

5. Take my love(heart)(heart)(heart)

page 14

1. ?!! ?!! ?!!

2. Wah! Dah!

3. Yah!!

4. "Protect-Hex!!"

page 15

1. Okay! Now we can fight on equal terms!!

2. NoOO! W-What's this? C-Cosplay?! / ...Wait, Eeeeh? Am I suppose to fight?

3. Eeeeh? I-Isn't it obvious?

page 16

1. Ready, Kurumi?

2. Though this is a battle, it's not some struggle for one's life.

3. In the human world, the power Coppélia has is "possession"... In other words,

4. Power in the spirit world

5. Possession!

6. Shown in the human world!

7. My power changes into "clothes" and you're required to wear them.

8. Another way to say it is that you can only use your power while wearing those clothes...

a. The battle's outcome is very simple! Basically

b. The victor is whoever that can completely strip off her opponent's clothes!!!

page 17

1. Eh?

2. T-T-Ti-Ti... Time-Time out! Eh? Eh? What was that? Strip? Did you say strip??

3. EEEH?! Did you say completely strip??

4. It's-It's fine! Even if all you're left with is only your panties, you'll win if you're the last one remaining!

5. EEEEEH?!! O-Only my panties?!!

6. Umm... Then, what about only having that fluttering apron-like thing left...

7. NOOO! N-Nude apron??

a. Everyone, please

8. ......

b. wake up

page 18

1. You shouldn't look away(heart) Kurumi!!!

page 19

1. I don't know this power! Try to avoid it as much as possible!

2. ...Seeds?

3. T-This is fine... I still have strength!!

4. Hah

5. Hah

6. Zeh

page 20

1. Kurumi! You're hit!

2. It's... It's sprouting!!

3. GYAAAH
TL note: okay the "an" at the end is an embarrassment sound

4. Heheh(music) The seeds that sprout becomes flowers and then scatters...(music)

5. NOOO! L-Like this... I'm... already...!! I can't!!

6. Hey! Calm down, K-Kurumi! You were just a little stripped!!

page 21

1. NOOOOOOOOOOOO

2. NOOOO... EK! ....! NOOOO

3. KYAH!

4. Kyah!! Noo!

5. K-Kurumi! You can trust me so... Calm down!!

6. Hyaah! Y-You can see it

7. !! I-Idiot!! Don't lose your focus!!!

8. Dodge them! KURUMI....

page 22

1. Chestnut!!!

page 23

1. She was a very admirable Coppélia, wasn't she?(music)

2. Hah....

3. She died in your place, Kurumi(music)

4. Chest...

5. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

6. Wha?!

7. This girl! She took the clothes from herself...?!

page 24

1. I'll give you everything I'm wearing as well!! So!! So! SO!

2. Come back!

3. Open your eyes!!

4. ...What a frace!

5. Yea, so stupid. / Is this enough? I should end it now, right?

6. I'm sorry, Chestnut... Because I didn't have any courage...

7. Because of me...

8. I've always looked up to you.

9. Ever since I was little... You've always encouraged me.

10. You were constantly giving me courage.

page 25

1. So... This time, I'll give it... I may only have a little bit, but...

2. Courage and power, I have them now...

3. So... Open your eyes.

4. Live...

5. ?!! W-What?!

6. This... This is...?!

page 26-27

1. ....She... She revived?

2. Be-Besides that... What with this ridiculously huge sword...?

3. Kurumi!

4. Thank you... The courage you poured into me... I definitely received it... And so I transformed!

page 28-29

1. Ver...! Vermin's status in society!!

2. Insulting!!!

3. Let's win this, Kurumi!!!

4. No way!

a. All of my seeds on are on the sword?!!

5. Together now!! / We'll return the favor!!!

6. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

page 30-31

1. Damn...! Damn it!! / They're entangled around me now... They're... They're sprout-...

2. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

page 32

1. Kurumi! Look!

2. ......

3. Thank goodness! Everyone woke up!

4. Everyone! Thank... Thank... / Huh?

5. This means...

6. ........ ........ ......Um...

7. Uh... Ugh...

8. No... NOOOOOOOO N-Nude Apron!!

a. Please look forward to Mikoshiro Mitoiri-sensei's next work!

9. End

Right side text: Courage. Friends. Victory!... Nude Apron?! Will she use true courage from now on?!

Translation: A Girls 12

Mon, 05 Oct 2009 02:18:07 +0000

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Chapter 12

page 37

1. Kazao...

2. It's me... / It's me, right?...

3. Eiko!

4. You'll catch a cold!

5. Don't!...

6. Kazao...

7. Kazao... Which one will it be?!

page 38

1. ......

2. ......

3. ......

4. ......

4. Kazao...

page 39

a. Chapter 12

page 40

page 41

1. Kazao...

2. E-Eiko...

page 42

1. You wimp!!

page 43

1. ......

2. S-Sorry...

3. You didn't do anything wrong... This way we won't be embarrassed...
TL note: Don't know a good wording for this

4. That... Sorry...

5. That's why...

6. Even though I'm on the way to mustering some confidence...

7. Right now, I'm still...

8. ......

9. I understand... Though the other Kazao has gone to heaven...

10. There is clearly another Eiko with me...
TL note: yeah... wording is getting harder and harder...

page 44

1. Yes... Though there are two Eiko's...

2. I am only one person...

a. Kazao... Which Eiko would you choose...?

3. ......

4. ......

page 45

1. Hey Kazao...

2. Hm?!

4. Is Luna... Your type...?

5. Eh?

6. I wonder... I wasn't concious when I was with Luna...

7. Then, what if you, not the dead Kazao, met Luna instead of Eiko?

8. Well... I don't know...

9. ......

page 46

1. Then a more simple question!!

2. Suppose... What if you met Yuu instead of the island Eiko?

3. Eh?... Yuu...

4. ......
TL note: funny funny guy... and I love the girl for asking such funny questions

page 47

1. It's okay... / Well then, one final one, an even more simple question.

2. ...Suppose...

3. ...Suppose... What if the Eiko you met in the beginning...

4. was me...?

page 48

1. T-That is the hardest question of them all...

2. Besides...

3. I... met the Island Eiko...

page 49

1. ......

2. ......

3. Hah~~~ That was intense...
TL note: Literal: "... was intense what I saw..." or something like that...

page 50

1. No need to worry since those two haven't done it yet!!
TL note: Yes... that "done it"...
TL note2: He is referring to sex... for you less knowledgable folks.

2. How do you know that?
TL note: How? Why? hmm... I can't really decided which is better here.

3. My instincts from my many years of being a detective!!

4. Hah?... / We can't rely on some low-grade detective instinct...

5. Can't you speak a bit more nice?... This girl... / You hurt papa, you know...!!

6. Anyways, forget that. / Shall we go?!!

7. ?!

page 51

1. Yo! / Sorry for keeping you waiting!!

2. Y-Yuu... Why...?

3. You made your choice, right? / Well, why don't we plan our next assualt while we eat breakfast?
TL note: Okay the first half is a japanese proverb literally meaning: "A ship already boarded." I looked it up to get a better understanding and I still don't really get it how he is using it here...

4. Come on! Get in already!!

5. ...For now, let's accept the ride?...

6. Let's... Since we didn't decide where we would go after riding the bus...

7. Then, go in, go in!!
TL note: Literal: "Then, please without any hesistation!!"

8. P-Pardon me... / ......

page 52

1. So, what you going to do now?

2. ...I will go to the island!!

3. But, you're no longer welcomed in the island...

4. ......

5. I will also go to the island!!

6. You want to meet the other Eiko, right?

page 53

1. Why are there two of / me, Eiko, and everyone?...

2. We want to know.

3. Yeah...

4. But in my investigation, / information on the island is strictly controlled...

5. Well, I don't know why, but...

6. It seems you guys were test subjects for some sort of secret experiment...

7. And it has been in the works for a long time... / along with all the preparations needed...

page 54

1. A-Am I also a test subject...?

2. Probably.

3. E-Even so...

4. Even so, I am going!!

5. Okay then!!

6. So, where is said island in question?

7. Ugh... W-Well...

8. Japan is fairly large, you know.

page 55

1. However, by putting together what you have said... / A warm climate. / With a gentle sea. / And it takes about one hour for a ship to reach the mainland...

2. With those in mind, we can make this general assumption!!

3. The Inland Sea...?

4. That's pretty vague...

5. Well, from this, we should head west toward the coast. / After that, we'll put our faiths into navigating useing Eiko's radar...

6. My radar?

7. You could say it's your sixth sense...

8. The Eiko's can sort of feel each other.

9. Then it is settled!! / I'm gonna go to the toliet for a sec.

10. O-Okay...

page 56

1. Hello...

2. I secured Kazao and Eiko.

3. Ah, understood. Let's arrange for the hand off. Later...

4. I will arrange the assistance of that investigator in guaranteeing those two for us.

5. I'll trust it to you...

page 57

1. That clumsy investigator... can do it...

2. ......

3. The plan has already deviated.

4. Something that wasn't expected is happening...

5. Should I be happy about this?...

6. or should I be sad?...

page 58

page 59

1. Did you see something?

2. !

3. The sea looks the same where ever it is...

page 60

1. That's such a calming though...
TL note: Literal: breaks the tension?

2. I was becoming uneasy...

3. Don't worry... We'll getting closer to the island.

4. It's faint but I can feel Eiko...

5. It seems Eiko's radar is helpful, huh?

6. ...... I still don't get it...

7. ......

page 61

1. Wait here, I'll buy us some drinks.

2. Okay...

3. Wah! Kazao, come here, look!!

4. Hm?!

5. What's up, Yuu?

6. Look!

7. Wow...

page 62

1. So pretty...

2. Yeah.

3. Hey... Mind if I play it here?

4. Go ahead!!

page 63

page 64

1. ......

2. ......

page 65

1. Nice tone...

2. Yeah... This tone is penetrating into me more than usual...
TL note: I thought I add a more naughty tone to it... heheh. I was bored...

page 66

1. So, did you two do it?
TL note: okay I lied... I wasn't bored

2. Eh?!

3. W-What...?

4. You did!! when you stayed at that love hotel...

5. W-We didn't! We didn't!...

6. ...Well more like... We couldn't...

7. Why's that?

page 67

1. It can't be...

2. You couldn't get it up?...

3. N-No! That's not it!!

4. R-Right now, I... I can't decide which to choose...

5. ......

6. ......

7. L-Let's go... I think your dad should be back by now...

8. Yeah.

page 68

1. I would've forced you if done it with me...
TL note: hmm...

2. Eh?!

3. Hm?!

page 69

1. T-This is...

2. Shit... We're trapped...

3. It has been a while, Kazao...

4. ?!

5. You are...?

6. Dad! Trouble!! / This is terrible!!

7. Really? I'll hurry then!!

page 70

1. Good job.

2. As promised, I have brought them.

3. No way... / It can't be...

4. ......

5. You tricked us...?

page 71

1. Yes!!

2. They shouldn't have depended on the presented map, but instead on themselves...

3. It is as you say!!

4. What was waiting for them was a false goal...

5. They once again embark on an adventure...

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