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Otomentaru 1

Otomental ch1

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Otomental by Yokoyama Mayumi

Ch1
001
Title: Otomental

004
Title: Otomental
Panic 1 Girl’s mind on the edge

007
7.1
<Since it’s establishment, Ranman High’s sales point has been>
<Freedom>

7.2
<Not too strict, nor too loose>
<A peaceful High school life assured>

7.3
<In this peaceful paradise>
008
8.1
<My 3 year search for grand love begins

009
9.1
Otome: it’s the biggest school in the area/ big chances for a fateful encounter

Boy: look at that, looks like some punks entered this year

Girl: rare to see such obvious ones

9.2
Otome: n?

9.3
Tokio: Aa?
9.4
Otome: oh no

9.5
Tokio: Otome!

Tokio: Inazuma Otome!

010
10.1
Tokio: <Hey! Inazuma! Answer me!>

Girl: <what’s with the name

Boy: Sounds like a wrestler’s ring name

10.2
Tokio: AH! She ran away!!

10.3
Tokio:<Wait! Otomeeee!>

Otome: First, must remove love obstacles!!

10.4
Tokio: Where’d she go!?

Tokio: Search! She’s got to be around here…

10.6
Otome: You idiot idiot idiot! Tokio you idiot

Otome: Never call me by my full name in front of others!!

011
11.1
Tokio: That hurt/I’ts your fault ‘cause you didn’t come to the meeting point this morning

11.2
Otome: because I didn’t want to come to school with you guys

11.3
Tokio: Why? We’re the 4 people unit from Donguri-yama Onsen junior-high…
Otome: shush! That’s the problem!!

11.4
Otome: listen Tokio/ the reason I chose this school is because I wanted to get out of the so boring “donguri-yama

Block: that’s right

012
12.1
My home town is a rusted hot spring outside of town

12.2
Sign: WELCOME
Donguri-yam,a Hot Springs

12.3
During my dreaming puberty days/ surrounded by only idioic males

12.4
Tokio: <Hey Otome!come join our wrestling game, if you join we can have a match>

12.5
In all this

I yearned for love

013
13.1
How does it feel to love someone from the bottom of your heart/ how much fun the first date must be

How would it be to kiss with that someone

13.2
So I decided

Otome:<{it’s decided!/ this school has pretty loose rule, big chances of finding a guy and can enter with medium grades}>

13.3
Otome: I had decided that “once in High school I’ll fall in love”…

Otome: in very deep love

014
14.1
Tokio: So for that reason…

Tokio: you’re saying we should collaborate?/ I know, I too have a grand dream

14.2
Tokio: Dream of becoming a grand gang leader and taking over this school….

14.3
Tokio: Ok guys! Let’s get crazy!!

Guy: I wanna be sub leader!

Guy: cheater! Me too!

Otome: SO…

14.4
Otome: with idits like you around I can’t fall in love!!!/going over board is your problem but if a nasty senior(sempai) get7s their sights on you I’m not gonna help!

14.7
Tokio: I’ll make you sub-leader {don’t worry, we’ll let you in }

015
15.1
Boys: {ah come on Tokio! / what, you can’t listen to your leader?/ this guy}

Otome:<…must redirect their idio-hormons towards the right direction or else LOVE IS IMPOSSIBLE!!!>

15.2
Otome: Young boys…

15.3
Otome: Look at this!

Boys: oh!

15.4
Otome: yes that’s right! This is not your full of elderly donguri-yama, but a different world’s paradise!/ it’s a shame not to direct your healthy youthful energy towards towards babes like this!!! {come come}

15.5-15.6
Otome: now go/absorb yourselves in picking up girls and blind dates, and plese just be quiet for 3 years

016
16.1
Otome: Please… for the sake of my grand love!!!

16.2-16.3
Biy: …say Tokio/ you really gonna listen to Otome and “enjoy your healthy youthful energy”?

Boy2: using up 3 years for love isn’t bad but…{if it’s a girl like this one}

16.4
Tokio: hmmm

Tokio: n?

16.5
Guy1: <{sorry about that, you giving this to us?}>

Guy2:<{got quite a load}>

Guy3:<{we’ll see you again tomorrow}>

017
17.1
Tokio: A real man/ must get in the sights of a nasty senior(sempai)

17.3
Otome: what inauspicious clouds…{hope Tokio isn’t doing anything stupid}

17.4
Otome:<must get back on track and search>

Girl1: look, that guy…

Girl2: oh! It’s Touyou-kun

018
18.1
Otome: <for my grand love…>

18.2
Otome: who’s the pearl!?
Girls:<{who the heck are you!?}>

18.3
Girl:… you don’t know Touyou-sempai?

Girl: you’re not from here are you

Otome: eh..well..um

18.4
Girl: it’s ok, I’ll tell you. He’s 2nd year Bitou Touyou/ ultra popular since junior-high and famous around here

019
19.1
Girl: that girl sure hascourage, what’s she giving him {must be a 1st grader}

19.2
Otome: read her lips, she said “handmade cookies”

Girl: lips!?/ where are you from? {how much is your eyesight!?}

19.3
Girls: you better firget about going after him/ thet type of guy is everyone’s!!

Otome: no way, I was simply asking/never thought of chasing after him {sorry for intruding}

19.4
Otome:<chasing or not all depends on research>

19.5
Block: 5 minutes later

19.6
Otome:<I got your warning>

19.7
Otome: what could he be d oing in back of the school…

021
21.1
Otome: Wow…

21.2
Otome: Amazing

21.4
Otome:<oh no…>

022
22.3
Touyou: who are you?

023
23.1
Otome:<g..getting sucked in!!>

23.2
Touyou:<{never seen you before, a 1st grader?}>

Otome: <no wonder birds flock around him>

23.3
Otome:…n?

23.4
Otome: wha!!

Otome: aren’t these…the hand made cookies!?

23.5
Touyou: ah

Touyou: perfect for bird food

024
Otome: wha?{bird food!?}

Touyou: You a friend or something of that cookie girl?/ try fitting in my shoes getting some creepy hand made gift from some girl I don’t even know

24.2
Otome: ..wait a second…/ he’s good looking but no good!!!

24.3
Otome: n..not a friend but/ she said she tried her best

24.4
Touyou: …so you were listening?

Otome: yes I was listning!! More exactly, reading her lips from far away but…

Touyou: reading lips!? What are you…

24.5
Otome: shouldn’t matter who I am/ to someone cold enough to feed a girl’s love to the birds

025
25.1
Touyou: thanks for the sermon/Inazuma Otome

25.2
Otome: h..how do you know my name…?

Touyou: it’s written on your underwear

25.3
Otome: ack

25.4
Otome: silly grandma, I told her not to write my name/ I’ll be leaving now!!

Touyou: <{your funny}> wait

25.5
Touyou: I like you

026
26.2
Tokio: …ok

26.3
Tokio: punishment finished

26.4
Tokio: though I don’t like hiding my face, ut Otome’s just so noisy

Boy: dilemma

Guy: uh…

26.5
Guy: bastards…our leader won’t go easy on you…

Tokio: leader!?
Tokio’s head: ①Leader = gang leader ②beat up ③me gang leader

027
27.1
Tokio: too bad for Otome but looks like I’l be gand leader sooner than expected…

27.2
Boy: hey? Isn’t that Otome holding some guy’s hand?

Boy2: that true

Tokio: wha

27.3
Tokio: already in full bloom {she’s quick}

27.4
Otome: ..um…

Otome: why is there such an old building in this new school?(out of breath)

27.4-27.5
Touyou: it’s the grounds from the old school/ I like it since it’s not popular

028
28.1
Otome: <dragging me to this quiet place, could this mean…impossible!!>

28.2
Touyou: want some cookie?

28.3
Otome: same level as the birds!?

Touyou: what were you hoping for/ really expect me to feel like doing it after seeing your name written underwear

Otome: uh...

28.4
Touyou: <{gonna be a fun pass time}>

Otome: <”liking me” meaning treating me like a toy>
28.5
Touyou: Anyways, where are you from?

Touyou: which junior-high graduate?

Otome: that a.. well a…

On face: donguri yama

28.6
Touyou: looks like you don’t wanna say it/ gonna have fun making you spit it out

Otome:<he’s Ultra “S”>

28.7
Otome: ah

029
29.1
Otome: rain!

29.2
Otome: saved… {thought they looked like inauspiciousclouds}

Sound of lightning

29.4
Otome: wow lightning too…

030
30.1
Otome:<no way>

30.2
Otome: could it be…

Otome: <found his weak point!?>

Touyou: your dead meat if you say more…

30.4
Touyou:..shoot

Otome: <he really hates it…>

032
32.1
Otome: wha

32.2
Otome: whaa

32.3
Otome: Whaaaa

32.3
Otome:<s…startled me…>

Otome:I’m going home

Otome: <this gu’ power to suck in!!!>

32.3
Touyou: Inazuma Otome!!

Touyou: come again tomorrow

033
Otome: yes

Otome: <research finished. Love found!!

034
Grandma: welcome back Otome

Grandma: Did you find yourself a hunk?

34.2
Otome:{scared me}Grandma I’m home…

Grandma: you’re late. Tokio’s here/ he’s been waiting for you all along in the exterior bath (rotenburo), hope he didn’t get dizzy

34.4
Otome: shoot, his house has a bath, why does he come everyday to ous

035
35.1
Otome: Tokio…

35.2
Otome: eh
35.3
Otome: Tokio/ hey you ok!?

Tokio: nnn…

35.5
Tokio: Why you! Where you been so late

Otome: hey… what’s with you!?

036
36.1
Otome: what we do from now on doesn’t concern each other…

36.3
Tokio: that’s ttrue, Does not concern each other

otome: what’s that supposed to mean…/ no way, did you…

36.4
Tokio: don’t worry/ I only beat up mugging dirty seniors

36.5
Otome: I don’t believe you! After my pleading you to stay quiet!!

Tokio: impossible!! I’ll soon be fighting with their leader so live with it

Otome: still saying suh stupid things

037
37.1
Otome: because of you idiots/ what if everyone finds out I’m also some monkey from Donguri yama!!

Tokio: can’t hide it for ever

37.2
Tokio: if THAT GUY hates you for that, then he’s not a real man

37.3
Otome:…you saw?

Tokio: yeah

038
Tokio: doesn’t matter though

38.3
Otome: .. what was that

38.4
What was that!! From Tokio!
039
39.2
Otome: because of Tokio! Because of Tokio!

39.3
Otome: <and I was hoping on lingering upon the memory of my near missed first kiss/ totally destroyed

Tokio:<he’s not a real man!!>

39.4
Otome: though yesterday was all a bad joke by that guy(Touyou)

39.5
Girl: isn’t that…

Girl2: why here in the 1st year area?

39.6
Touyou: Hey Inazuma Otome

Otome:<wha>

040
40.1
Girls:<{who’s that}>

Otome: Why are you here!?

Touyou: I told you to come but you didn’t

40.2
Otome: but why…

40.3
Touyou: we almost kissed didn’t we

40.4
Touyou: take responsibility

Otome:<no way>

041
41.1
Otome:<Tokio has nothing to do with this>

Otome: Yes!!

41.2
Otome:<our long relationship ends>

Otome: <people change>

41.3
Otome:<I’m in the middle of my first love>

41.4
Otome: and suddenly going to have my first kiss

042
42.2
Otome: don’t leave me like this!!

Touyou: how can I kiss such an ugly face

Otome: <to Touyou I’m just a toy but>

Otome:<{but I was so prepared}>

42.3
Otome:< a new relationship/ has surely begun>

42.4
Guy: Touyou-kun,

Guy: sorry to interrupt

42.5
Guy: the guys who beat us up yesterday, we called ‘em out by the dumps/ some country-bred saying he’s gonna be leader or something

42.6
Otome:<wha>

42.7
Otome: <that’s..Tokio and the others!!>

Guy: we can beat them up right?/ we’ll only lightly put them in the hospital, so

043
43.1
Touyou: Go ahead

43.2
Otome: eh?

43.3
Otome: what was…/that?

044
44.1
Otome:<who/ is he?>

045
Tokio:< I’ll soon be fighting with their leader so live with it >

Otome:<no way…>

45.2
Otome:<no way>

45.3
Tokio: urgh

046
Tokio: Hey!

Tokio: that’s dirty!! (sneaky)

46.2
Guy: you’re the dirty ones!! Fighting while hiding your faces {so pbvious though with your logo marked towels}

Tokio: don’t want hear that from some dirty mugglers

Boys: That’s right! You chickens! Can’t do anything else than throw garbage!

047
47.1
Guys: we can make a meteorite attack

47.2
Boy: dangerous…! Tokio let’s run!!

Tokio: You dirty bastards, I’ll drag you down, just wait!

Boy: idiot! You’re bleeding!

47.3
Guy: getting us as enemies/you can’t survive here

47.4
Guy: ha…

048
48.1-48.2
Otome: I told you/ to stay quiet!!

049
49.2
Tokio: sorry

050
50.1
Otome: <what’s important/ sudden action taught me>

Otome:<{urgh, full of garbage}>
50.2
Otome:<even if that means loosing the chance to a first kiss>

051
51.1
Touyou: this is the reason you stood up my kiss?

Boys: ki/kiss!/

51.2
Touyou:to.. save that garbage?

51.3
Otome: …yep

Otome:<even though>


51.4
Otome: as stupid or dirtied up in garbage as they may be, they are my important friends/ whoever you are, if you plan on hurting them, I won’t forgive you

Otome:<that means my first love ending in failure>
052
52.1
Touyou: that means/ making me your enemy?

52.2
Otome: um..well..I’m not talking about enemies or allies..{not to such a point}

053
53.1
Tokio: you sure told him off Otome!/ This is war!

Otome:< just 1 inch away from falling off the cliff>

53.2
Otome: <my high school life just began>

☆Fin☆

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#1. by chiresakura (Scanlator)
Posted on Apr 19, 2008
Do you have a link to the raws for this? Thanks!!
#2. by Chiaki_ (Registered User)
Posted on Apr 28, 2008
Thanks for the translation and I was wondering the same thing about the raws...

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