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Translations: Gintama 490 by kewl0210

One Piece 733

Mr Soldier's Desire

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+ posted by cnet128 as translation on Jan 11, 2014 23:10 | Go to One Piece

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Chapter 733: Mr Soldier's Desire
[Insert text: Rebecca battles with vigour!!]
Rebecca: !!! // *pant* // *pant*
Announcer: And there goes Suleiman~~~~~~~~!!!
Crowd: Go get her!!! // Die already, Rebecca~~~~~!!
Announcer: Once hailed as the hero of the Sea Battle of Dias, now on the run from his own country as a war criminal!!! / Today he is well known in the underworld as a terrifying Man-Slicer!!!
Crowd: Take her head off, Suleiman~~~~~!!!

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Announcer: His stance is almost lifeless... // Like an accursed spectre!!!
Suleiman: Everything I did, I did for my country. // I loved my homeland.
[Text: A-Rank War Criminal of the Sea Battle of Dias / Suleiman the Beheader]
Rebecca: *pant*... // *pant*...
Suleiman: What about you? / With the hatred they rain upon you, it must be painful for you to even draw breath in this land...
Rebecca: ...............!! // I don’t care how painful it is!! // And I don’t care who hates me!! // I just want to live together with Mr Soldier!!!

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Announcer: Including the detestable Rebecca who just won’t give up the ghost... // There are around 30 contenders still left in this D Block battle!! // Ah, but wait! It seems another man...er, beast...has been defeated!!
Orlumbus: Nguoooohhhhh!!
[Text: Adventurer / (Commodore of the Great Yonta Maria Fleet) / Orlumbus]
Announcer: Just now!! The famed gladiator lion Agyou, who has claimed dozens of victims and painted the ring with their blood...

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Announcer: ...has fallen at the hands of Orlumbus’ whip!!!
Crowd: So strong~~~~~!! // Commodore~~~~~!!!
Announcer: Will a mighty warrior live up to their odds? // Or will a dark horse betray our expectations?!!
[Text: Pirate / Cavendish // Arsonist / Damask // Shaman / Mummy]
Announcer: There’s just one place left in the big final!!! // Who will be the one to take the head of King Riku’s granddaughter?!!!
Rebecca: (Mr Soldier... // Where are you right now? Please, don’t die...!! / I ask for nothing more than that!!!)

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[Box: Beneath Dresrosa - The Underworld Trading Port]
Usopp: Ehhhhh?!! // That soldier guy isn’t here any more?!! Isn’t he the Captain?!!
Leo: Our Captain has a great duty of his own to fulfil!! // The moment our SOP Operation succeeds, he will use that opportunity to eliminate the distracted Doflamingo!!
Usopp: ..................
Leo: As such, he is on his way to the Royal Palace with a few of our Tontatta comrades!!
Dwarfs: Good luck, Captain~~~!!
Leo: As for us, we have the hero Usoland on our side!! / We would be most honoured, Usoland... // ...if you would take command of the operation to disable Sugar!!!
Usopp: !!! // (Th...That’s the most important part!!!)

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[Labels: Underground Passage // Lift // Factory // Trebol / Sugar / Officers’ Tower]
Leo: This is where we are right now!! // All of the bridges you can see are movable bridges! // And the building you see over there... // The one that looks like a sea anemone... // That is the Officers’ Tower!! // That is where we will find our target, Sugar!!!
People: Hm? // Hey, who’s there? // Someone slacking off back here...?
Usopp: ?!!

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Usopp: Aaaaghhhh!! I’ve been found~~~~~!! It’s all over~~~~~!!!
SomeGuy: ?!
Leo: Rampo!
Rampo: Yeah!
Robin: !
SomeGuy: Hey, you people... / Which ship are you from?!
Usopp: No, no... I’m just a random passerby, er...
SomeGuy: You should know it’s forbidden for anyone but negotiators to leave their ships... / Hm?? // Guahhh!! // Ehhh?!! The fairies have struck!! // All our clothes are gone~~~~~!!!

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Dwarfs: Tontatta... // ...Combat!! // Tail Hammer!!!!
People: !!!
Usopp: ............Th... They’re buried in the ground!!

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Dwarfs: Change into these clothes, Usoland, Robiland!
Usopp: !
Dwarfs: And may I just say... / That was quite the quick thinking you did there!! So clever to distract the enemy by pretending to be frightened!!
Usopp: A...Are all of you guys as strong as that??
Dwarfs: Yes, more or less! // But we are no match for the descendants of Norland, of course!! We have heard that your clan can even kill Sea Kings!!
Usopp: (What kind of monster do these guys think I am?! But even so... // At this rate, I might actually be able to win this without fighting myself!!!) // All right, men! I, Usoland, will take command of this operation!!!
Robin: ..................
Usopp: Our enemy is a little girl!! Let’s go gang up on her and scare her to death!! Follow me!!! / ...Actually, you guys go first!!
Leo: Of course!!! // To the Officers’ Tower!!!

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[Box: Linking the Royal Palace, the House of Toys and the Trading Port...]
[Labels: Royal Palace // House of Toys // Trading Port // Factory]
[Box: The Connecting Lift]
People: Hurry and get inside!! // There’s an intruder in the House of Toys!! // Apparently it’s one of those Straw Hat Pirates!!
OneLeg: .................. // (That will be Fraland...)
People: The intruder is engaged in combat with Señor Pink at the Eastern Door!!! // His target is the Factory down here!! // I heard a rumour there’s a bonus up for grabs to whoever takes him out! // Seriously?!! How much?!!

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People: Let’s head on up!! // Well, he’s got a massive bounty, so... // Seriously?! // Nice rumour!♡ // This info better be for real...
OneLeg: (At this rate, we’ll just be going back and forth between the House of Toys and the underground. // We need to take over this lift!! / You guys stay inside...!!) // Surrender at once!! This lift belongs to me now!!!
People: ?!! // This guy...!! // He’s the Thunder Soldier of the Colosseum!!! How did he get in here?!!

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People: ?! // He dodged?!!
OneLeg: Much too slow.
People: ! // Guahhh!!! // Why, that little...!!!

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People: !!!
OneLeg: Too slow!!!
Flashback!OneLeg: Too slow!!
Flashback!Rebecca: Waaaahhhh!! Mr Soldier hit me!! It’s domestic violence!!
Flashback!OneLeg: This is not domestic violence!! / Do you think I want my attacks to hit their mark?!
Flashback!Rebecca: Well, you could stop them before they do!!
Flashback!OneLeg: One cannot achieve growth without any sense of danger. // You must concentrate, Rebecca!! // The human instinct is a far more powerful force than this!! // You must draw it out from within yourself!! / Believe in the power of humanity!!
Flashback!Rebecca: But you’re a toy!!
Flashback!OneLeg: Don’t be pedantic!!
Flashback!Rebecca: Aghhh!!

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Flashback!Rebecca: I don’t want to learn to fight any more!! // You can just keep on... // ...protecting me, Mr Soldier!!!
Flashback!OneLeg: ...I am a toy, Rebecca...!! / Exposed to the elements, my joints will rust...!!
Flashback!Rebecca: ...............?!
Flashback!OneLeg: I do not know when I might reach my limit. // So stand, Rebecca!! // You must become strong!!!
OneLeg: !! // This body is not meant for fighting. Perhaps all toys are made to be broken before the children they serve grow into adults!!

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People: Gyahhhh!!
OneLeg: (I am sorry, Rebecca...!! // Strength is the only thing... // ...your foolish father can teach you!!) // *pant*... *pant*...
People: Whoaahhh!! // I didn’t think this guy would be so strong!!! // What’re you after, eh?! What could a toy want around here?!!
OneLeg: A peaceful country where my child can live in happiness... // That is what I desire!!! // (And for that sake, I would gladly give my life!!) // Dresrosa must be returned to the House of King Riku!!!
People: ?!! // King Riku~~~~~?!

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[Box: The Corrida Colosseum]
People: ?!!!
Announcer: What just happened?!!
People: Huh?
Someone: That was pretty fast...!!
Bartolomeo: What the heck?!! I couldn’t see a thing......!!
Someone: I had heard rumours, but......!!
Announcer: Wha...?! // Incredible!! All the remaining contenders have fallen to the ground~~~!!! / All these mighty warriors who have survived to the last stages of the D Block battle... // ...have simply toppled over... / ...leaving not a single contender standing!!! How can this be?!! Is this even allowed?!! // Who did this?! And how?! / This incident that has assaulted D Block... // ...was all too sudden to comprehend!!! // But wait... // It looks like somebody may be standing back up!!!
[Insert text: Who stands victorious...?!]

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#1. by yieps (Registered User)
Posted on Jan 13, 2014
There are several mistakes
Quote:
give up the ghost??? to the ghost?

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claimed many tens of victimstens of what? Maybe, dozens or countless?

Quote:
your foolish father can teach youcould

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He’s the Lightning Soldier of the ColosseumThunder

I also would say it's pyromaniac rather than arsonist, but since the used word stands for both in Japanese and in we know nothing about his personality it's debatable.
#2. by cnet128 (MH's Best Translator)
Posted on Jan 19, 2014
- No idea what your problem with "give up the ghost" is, it's a perfectly common phrase.
- You're right, "dozens" does sound much better than "tens", I'll edit that one.
- The "can"/"could" is debatable, but seeing as it's present-tense in the Japanese and One-Leg is reflecting on his own nature, I think "can" is probably more appropriate.
- As for "lightning" versus "thunder"... "Kaminari" is the most general word in Japanese for the phenomenon of "thunder and lightning" as a whole. It does have a more specific sense referring to just the "thunder" part, but I don't see any indication that such a distinction is intended here, so I think it makes perfect sense to use "lightning", which I'd say is the more general word than "thunder" in English. Plus "lightning soldier" just sounds much nicer than "thunder soldier".
#3. by yieps (Registered User)
Posted on Jan 19, 2014
Ah, sorry, I didn't recognize the "give up the ghost" saying.

Thunder Soldier was written in English on his wanted poster
#4. by cnet128 (MH's Best Translator)
Posted on Jan 26, 2014
Okay, I guess Thunder Soldier it is! (That's some tiny text and I'm impressed anyone even spotted it O_o)
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