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Area no Kishi 28

The Organization versus Everybody

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+ posted by Dark-san as translation on May 8, 2009 14:23 | Go to Area no Kishi

-> RTS Page for Area no Kishi 28

*RESERVED ONLY FOR CHIBISUKE-SCANS*


Chapter 28: The Organization versus Everybody

// = panel change
------ = page change
A new dialogue = new panel
(s) = Small text

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Commentator:

Enoshima High’s Football Hobby Club to begin the offence!

It finally started!

Sfx- Peep

//

Sfx – Peeeeep

//

Commentator:

The ball has now been passed over to Midfielder (Centre), Number 8, Hyoudou Makoto.

//

Commentator:

According to the data I have at hand, it seems like the average SC’s height is 10cm taller than FC’s average.

How are they going to pit themselves against an opponent physically larger than themselves?

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Kakeru:



Even though you are not here yet, Araki-sempai...

//

Kakeru:

You will definitely return to us if we are to win this match.

This means that we …

//

Kakeru:

We can’t afford to lose this match!

Sfx- Dash

Commentator:

Isn’t it too early for the strikers to make a move?

Number 9, First year, Aizawa makes a forwards dash towards the right!

//

Kouta:



//

Kouta:

Kakeru …

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Commentator:

SC’s Number 4, Left Back, Fudou- san

And Number 5, Defensive Midfielder, Sakamoto Shuuji, whose height is around 183 cm, surges forwards to defend.

//

//

Oda:

Don’t allow them to pass the ball to Number 9! Force him to the side!

//

Commentator:

The FC captain for this match, Midfielder Hyoudou Makoto,

Is slowly dribbling the ball and waiting for an opportunity to pass it.

Makoto:



//

Makoto:

!

Sfx- Slide

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Makoto:

Whoa!

//

Yuuji:

Aren’t you a striker, Hyoudou- san? Hasn’t Araki returned?

Makoto:

There is no need for your concern, Sawamura- san. Even without him …

//

Makoto:

!
//

Makoto:

Our firepower …

//

Makoto:

Has risen from last year!

Sfx- Wham

//

Sfx- Slash

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Kakeru:

!

Sfx- Twist

//

Shuuji:

Damn …

//

Shuuji:

Fudou, pay attention to the passing route!

Fudou:

Yes!

//

//
Kakeru:



//

Commentator:

The two defensive players have enforced their defence

and have intercepted the ball that was intended for Aizawa...

Sfx- Bam

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Sfx- Po-n

//

Commentator:

Number 7, Midfielder Centre, Matoba,

Uses his legs to divert the direction of the pass!

The next person to collect the ball is …

//

Commentator:

Number 11, the speedy forward, Hino Junpei!

Hino:

For now it is the same as the training, isn’t it Coach?

//

Iwaki:

That’s right! Kakeru’s actions alerted the defenders and he pulled them to his side with the intention of having the defenders guard him.

This would mean that Hino will be able to attack from the weaker side of the defence.

//

Iwaki:

But the real problem starts from here.

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Iwaki:

The fact is that SC …

Had left 189cm Takase behind.

//

Iwaki:

The rest of the 9 players are being lured into our half.

Under these conditions, it is not easy to break apart their defence and scored a goal.

//

Iwaki:

If only our left side had another attacker …

//

Iwaki:

Despite the fact that we already playing with FC’s most mobile player, Hino, …

Seven:

That’s right …

//

Iwaki:

At least, there is a slim chance.

We can open up a path as long as we hold them.

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Hino:

Damn! That’s quick!

Sfx- Hah

//

Commentator:

Can Hino- san break into their defence?

It will be a chance for them to shoot if they can break through!

//

Sfx- Pause

//

Hino:

It’s up to you, Makoto!

Sfx-Whack

//

Commentator:

Nobody expect that he would pass the ball!

Sfx-Bam

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Commentator:

Hyoudou brought the ball forwards

After receiving it.

But SC's defenders have already returned to defend.

The defence has strengthened!

//

Makoto:



!

//

Makoto:

Here it goes!

Sfx-Bam

//

Commentator:

The high pass, which was meant for heading, flew past.

Too bad nobody had paid attention to it!

… No wait, someone is on their way there!

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Commentator:

It’s Aizawa!

He is the only one that noticed the pass!

//

Seven:

Kakeru!

//

Kouta:

All right!

//

Makoto:

That is his inborn acute football sense.

It would become our trump card!

---------------------------------------------------

Kakeru:

Let it in!

//

Kakeru:

Hah!

//

Kakeru:

!?

Sfx-Wham

//

Kakeru:

How can it …

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Gou:

He’s tall! It’s Number 2, Defender Centre, Kaiouji Gou!

He headed the ball away before it could reach the striker!
//

Gou:

You’re too naïve, first year brat!

//

Kakeru:

I thought nobody was back here to defend it …

//

Iwaki:

Watch out!

Seven:

Huh?

//

Sfx-Bam

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Kakeru:

Oh no! The defence will be breached!

//

//

Commentator:

It's SC’s captain!

Number 10, Defender Centre, Oda Ryouma …

Kicks and sends the ball far!

Sfx-Charge
//

Commentator:

… No! This is …

//

Makoto:

Watch out!

//

Commentator:

It isn’t a clearance! It’s a long pass!

It is sent from the white team’s penalty area to Takase- san.

It is like an accurate pass sent in by a statistical machine!

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Seven:

He’s incredible.

He is able to grasp Takase’s positioning and send in a amazing pass from that position within an instant.

Iwaki:

Oda is the team’s pillar of strength!

//

Iwaki:

If he wasn’t there to seize the opportunity at that moment and make the right decision,

This team strategy would never work out.

//

Takase:

Nice ball, Oda- sempai!

//

Commentator:

But FC has many defenders there to mark Takase!

Who will be able to control this air battle?

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

FC defenders:

Don’t think it will go your way!

//

Seven:

All right, we saved the ball!

//

FC defenders:

!?

Sfx-Rise

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Takase:

Here we go!

Sfx-Whack

//

Seven:

It’s Takase. He's using his intimidating height to gain control of the air battle.
//

Commentator:

He passed the ball to Number 6, Right Wing, Sakurai- san.

He’s fast. He has already abandoned his marker!

//

Commentator:

But FC’s Mikami- san closes in …

//

Commentator:

Even as Sakurai- san is forced into a corner, he still sends in a cross!

Sfx-Wham

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Commentator:

It’s Takase again!

… No it isn’t him, he’s just the bait.

Sfx-Whack

//

Commentator:

It is sent to Kudou, who is in front of the goal!

//

Kudou:

Go in!


Commentator:

The Goalkeeper Kurebayashi barely blocks it!

Sfx-Wham (Kudou)

Sfx- Bam (Kurebayashi)

//

Commentator:

The ball mercilessly rolls towards the goal!

Just barely after 6 minutes, it looks like SC is taking the lead …

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Kakeru:



Sfx- Wham

//

Commentator:

It’s blocked! He blocked it!

Just when SC is about to gain a point, the forward Aizawa ran back

And blocked the shot with just a hair's breadth to go!

--------------------------------------------------------------------

Kurebayashi:

Nice … Nice block!

//

Kakeru:

Pant …

Pant …

With this, I guessed it would be time for us to throw the ball into the sea to restart.

//

Flashback:

Nice one, Mako! Change sides!

//

Kurebayashi:

That’s right! It will be our turn to attack!

Kakeru:

Yeah!

//

Takase:



This person …

//

Kouta:

Kakeru …

You’re really …

//

Iwaki:

Okay!

Seven:

Having no preference on the attacking position, the attacks from the shoreline up to the goal, the exchanges of attacks of the entire football field …

//

Seven:

And during the time at the beach, he cut down on his fear of getting hurt and built up his confidence while attacking aggressively …

Kakeru’s miracle save is the combination of both the results from playing beach football and some gutsy displays.

Flashback (Kakeru):

What?

Sfx- Dive

Sfx- Impact

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Kakeru:

You should be watching this match, Araki- sempai!

You're amongst the spectators watching us ...

//

Kakeru:

We shall win this for you! We will use Coach Iwaki’s ‘Happy Football’ and win it!

We will make Araki-sempai feel the urge to play football again!

//

Araki:



//

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#1. by TheBluePencil (Proofreaders)
Posted on Jun 27, 2009
Once again, the things I have had to correct are mostly to do with British v.s. American English and a few mix-ups with past, present and future tense. There are no big mistakes to worry about. :)

Commentator:

Enoshima High’s Football Hobby Club to begin the offense!
→ offence!

-----

Kakeru:



Even though you are not here yet, Araki- sempai …

//
Kakeru:

However, you will definitely return to us if we are to win this match.

→ Even though you are not here yet, Araki-sempai... // You will definitely return to us if we are to win this match.

OR

→ You are not here yet, Araki-sempai... // However, you will definitely return to us if we are to win this match.

//

Commentator:

Isn’t it too early for the strikers to make a move?

Number 9, First year, Aizawa makes a forward dash towards the right!
→ forwards dash

Note: When to use 'forward' or 'forwards' is very complicated. Normally 'forwards' is used in British English when describing a change in where someone is looking OR a change in their movement. 'Forwards' can also be used when describing someone's progress. All other instances (especially expressions, such as 'I am looking forward to your reply') usually use 'forward'.
Some examples:
He looked forwards. (Only when he is literally looking straight ahead.)
The rabbit jumped forwards.
We're on the way forwards to finding who the murderer is!

-----

Commentator:

SC’s Number 4, Left Back, Fudou- san

And Number 5, Defensive Midfielder, Sakamoto Shuuji, whose height is around 183 cm, surges forward to defend.
→ surges forwards

//

Commentator:

The FC captain for this match, Midfielder Hyoudou Makoto,

Is slowly dribbling the ball and waiting for an opportunity to pass the ball.

Maybe better to avoid repetition. → Is slowly dribbling the ball and waiting for an opportunity to pass it.

-----

Yuuji:

Aren’t you a striker, Hyoudou- san? Hasn’t Araki return?
→ Hasn't Araki returned?

Makoto:

There isn’t a need for your concern, Sawamura- san.
→ There is no need for your concern (sounds more natural)

//

Makoto:

Have risen from last year!
→ Has risen since last year!

-----

Commentator:

The 2 defensive players have enforced their defense,

And intercepts the ball that is intended for Aizawa ...
→ The two defensive players have enforced their defence and have intercepted the ball that was intended for Aizawa...

-----

Iwaki:

That’s right! Kakeru’s actions alerted the defenders and he pulled them to his side with the intention of having the defenders to guard him.

This would mean that Hino will be able to attack from the weaker side of the defense.
→ having the defenders guard him.

→ the weaker side of the defence.

-----

Iwaki:

The fact is that SC …

Had left a 189 cm, Takase, behind.

I think this is meant to be → Had left Takase, 189cm, behind. OR Had left 189cm Takase behind.

//

Iwaki:

The rest of the 9 players are lured into our half.

Under these conditions, it is not easy to break apart their defense and scored a goal.
→ are being lured into our half.

→ break apart their defence and score a goal.

//

Iwaki:

If only our left side have another attacker …
→ had another attacker...

//

Iwaki:

Despite the fact that we already playing FC’s most mobile player, Hino, …
→ Despite the fact that we are already playing against FC's most mobile player, Hino...

OR, if Hino is on their team → Despite the fact that we are already playing with FC's most mobile player, Hino...

-----

Commentator:

Can Hino- san break into their defense?
→ their defence?

//

Commentator:

Nobody expect that he will pass the ball!

If he has already passed the ball → Nobody expected that he would pass the ball!

-----

Commentator:

Hyoudou brought the ball forward

After receiving it.
But SC’s defenders have already returned to defense.

The defense has strengthened!
→ brought the ball forwards

→ But SC's defenders have already returned to defend. (?)

→ The defence has strengthened!

-----

Kouta:

Alright!
→ All right!

//

Makoto:

That is his inborn acute football sense.

It would become our trump card!

If Makoto means it is their trump card → It has become our trump card!

If Makoto means it will always be their trump card in the future, this is okay.

-----

Gou:

He’s tall! It’s Number 2, Defender Centre, Kaiouji Gou!

He headed the ball away before it could reached the striker!
→ could reach the striker!

-----

Kakeru:

Oh no! The defense will be breached!
→ The defence

//

Commentator:

Its SC’s captain!
→ It's SC's captain!

//

Commentator:

It isn’t a clearance! It’s a long pass!

It is send from the white team’s penalty area to Takase- san.

It is like an accurate pass send in by a statistical machine!
→ It is sent

→ like an accurate pass sent in by

-----

Seven:

He’s incredible.

He is able to grasp Takase’s positioning and sends in a amazing pass from that position within an instant.
→ and send in an amazing pass

//

Iwaki:

If he wasn’t there to seize the opportunity at that moment and make the right decision,

This team strategy will never work out.
→ This team strategy would have never worked out. (If they succeeded)
→ This team strategy would never work out. (If they are on their way to succeeding, but have not yet)

//

Commentator:

But FC has many defenders there to mark Takase!

Who would be able to control this air battle?
→ Who will be able

-----

Seven:

Alright, we saved the ball!
→ All right

-----

Seven:

It’s Takase. He uses his height’s intimidation to gain control of the air battle.
→ He's using his intimidating height to gain control

-----

Commentator:

It is send to Kudou, who is in front of the goal!
→ It is sent

-----

Commentator:

It’s blocked! He blocked it!

Just when SC is about to gain a point, the forward Aizawa ran back

And block the shot with just a hair breadth length to go!
→ And blocked the shot with just a hair's breadth to go!

-----

Seven:

Having no preference on the attacking position, the attacks from the shoreline up to the goal, the exchanges of attacks of the entire football field …

I am not sure what this is meant to say, but this is my guess → Having no preference on the attacking position, he attacks anywhere from the shoreline up to the goal, exchanging attacks across the entire football field...

//

Seven:

And during the time at the beach, he cut down on his fear of getting hurt and built up his confidence while attacking aggressively …

Kakeru’s miracle save is the combination of both the results shown of playing beach footballs and also some gutsy displays.
→ is the combination of both the results from playing beach football and some gutsy displays.

-----

Kakeru:

We shall win this for you! We will use Coach Iwaki’s ‘Happy Football’ and win it!

We will make Araki- sempai to feel the urge to play football again!
→ Araki-sempai feel the urge to play football again!

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