Fairy Tail 158

I know that you didn't ask, but please don't be angry at me if I say...I'm actually tempted to translate the thing just to correct up your mistakes (am not the type who'll withstand seeing the English translation for a pretty easy-to-translate manga with too much mistakes in the interpretation part...partly because I'm actually worried for the international translators who'll be using this)...though cnet would probably bring the light out anyway in some while...

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”不思議”発見！！　きっと魔女が、ご機嫌ナナメなんです！？
Miraculous discoveries!! Surely this is what makes a female mage happy!?
Don't know what you mean by the "miraculous discoveries" (since 不思議 just means "strange, mysterious" and 発見 is "discover"...would say something more like "'The Mystery" is found" if I am to do it myself, but...-_-") However, I believe you get the "Surely this is what makes a female mage happy!?" the other way around? ご機嫌ナナメ actually means "rotten mood"...so should it be "Surely, this is what makes a female mage in a bad mood!?" (if you want to keep your original sentence structure...)

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運がいい奴はついでにゼロも殴れる…でしょ？
Lucy: It’s a good thing that Zero didn’t finish us off….Right?
"And whoever is the lucky one will have to take down Zero as well...right?"

急がなきゃ…シャルルとウェンディのギルドを守るんだ
We need to protect Charlie and Wendy’s guild.
Sorry for being picky, but...where is the 急がなきゃ part gone to? -_-"

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頭の中に僕が送った地図がある
I’ll send all of you a map before that happens….
Don't know if it's the English or the Japanese, but...he already sent the map to them (it's 送った with the past tense), so I doubt "I'll" is the right word to use.

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ここから一番近いと香りが教えている
It’s the closest one to where I am, I can tell all of you where they are with my
perfume magic.
One thing is...he didn't offer that he'll tell them where they are. Everyone already know where each of the Lachymas is from the map and he knows that. All he's saying is (he pretended) that it's his perfume that tells him where they are, that's all...

教えてるのは地図だ
Erza: Just use the maps.
She just gets back at him. "What's telling you (that that Lachyma is the closest) is the map."

そんなマジでつっこまなくても…
Ichiya: No way, this was my time to shine….
Don't get where you got the "this is my time to shine" part. Indeed, he did somewhat bluff about how his perfume can tell him about anything, but all he's saying there is Erza actually didn't have to interfere in like that...

おかげ様でな
Thanks to a certain someone.
Don't know if it's just me, but..."Thanks to a certain someone" sounds sarcastic...especially when it isn't supposed to be sarcastic...-_-"

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とにかくちゃんと6人いるみたいだ
Happy: Anyway, the 6 of you have to do this perfectly.
The sense of the sentence doesn't come out to be like an order. "Alright, you all, do this thing properly, OK?" Happy is just saying that they finally have 6 people on the job. (Something like "Anyhow, we finally get all 6 people."...and just that.)

行こう！！
So go already!!
More like "Let's get going!!"...again, Happy isn't giving out order exactly...-_-"

ゼロに当たったら各自撃破！！　みんな　持ち場があるから加勢はできないよ！！
Zero’s attack will crush everyone!! Reinforcements aren’t coming so it’s up to all
of you!!
First sentence first, Zero's attack won't crush everyone. Zero is in just one place (well, he might move later, but let's just leave that aside...-_-") All the sentence is saying is "If you hit into Zero, then crush him right then and there." Second sentence, you miss out the "みんな　持ち場があるから" (All of us has a place we have to go to, so (reinforcements aren't coming...or rather "no one will come to help you out."))

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絶対に裏切るわけにはいかんのだ！！！！
Even if it’s impossible I can’t allow myself to fail!!!!
Where did you get the "even if it's impossible"?

息切れ…なんか…してないぞ…
I’m already….out of breathe….
A thing is...he's trying to comfort (rather, lie to) himself...that he can still go, since he says he won't fail everyone's expectation. "I...am not...out of breath..." or something like that... .-.

私はまだ若い！！！
Even though I’m so young!!!
"Even though" gives the sense of contrast...which isn't right in the context, since he's trying to lie to himself that he's still young, aka full of life and can go do the job. I would say just take it out... ._."

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何しに来た？
Just what do you think you can do this time?
Won't say thing regarding the length, but...all he's saying is "what're you doing here?" or "for what have you come here?"...he didn't challenge Natsu or anything.

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壊れんのはオレかおまえか
I’m going to destroy you,
どっちだろうな
That’s why I came here.
Well...now you get the challenge into a statement... ._." What he's saying is, "Let's see who'll go down first: you or me?"...He didn't give the reason for why he come here or even say that he'll destroy Zero (directly)...-_-"

あいつは鼻がいい
Erza: He probably found his scent,
わかってて”１”を選んだハズだ
That explains why he wanted to go to that one.
Nothing major about this, but...one thing is Erza is kind of explaining (even though I think all Dragon Slayers have good sense of smell anyway, so Wendy should've already know this) that Natsu has a really good nose. He must've known that and choose "1".

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壊れんのはどっちかって！！？
Weren’t you going to destroy me!?
てめえに決まってんだろうが！！！！
I suppose this is the extent of your resolve!!!!!
First sentence recite what he said earlier (which you would get it right if you didn't get the first line wrong in the first place...-_-") Second one is his answer to it. "You asked who'll go down first!!? Of course, it would be you!!!"

As I said though, cnet would probably end up bringing the light afterwards anyway (not saying that his translation is totally perfectly, but doubtlessly, his translations hardly have problems with the Japanese part. Most of his mistakes come from stupid typos and stuff...-_-") I won't say that my interpretation is 100% correct. If you want to have someone else recheck it, then do it. I'm doing this just to make me feel a little bit more at ease (since seeing this, I won't calm down if I didn't either translate the chapter again myself or do a t/c for you.) Up to you if you want to take my stuff or not, since it's your rights to choose now...

Like I said in my profile, I'm not that good at translating yet so I tend to make some mistakes here and there. Sorry about that, usually there's another translation out by now that I use to check for mistakes but since there's not I just released it as is.

I actually appreciate the help, if you don't mind I'd like to add in your corrections to my translation.