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Hanamaru Youchien 70

Hanamaru Onee-chan

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+ posted by Eru13 as translation on Jun 13, 2012 15:18 | Go to Hanamaru Youchien

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Hanamaru Youchien 70
//sd: side dialog, cd: corner dialog

p1
Box: Today the first and second year children will play together.
Tsuchida: Second years, take care of the first years.
Hii's sd: Roger!
Anzu: Ye------s!
Anzu: Play with Onee-chan over there!
Koume: Ah
Hii: Commander Hiiragi will guide you through a lot of places in the kindergarten...!
Boy's sd: Exploration?
Koume: Ah
Koume: ...
Koume(thinks): Today Koume is the onee-chan...
Title: Chapter 70 Hanamaru Onee-chan

p2
Koume: Umm...Ah, what's your name?
Mari: Mari~~ Onee-chan is?
Koume: Ko-Koume~~
Koume: ...
Mari: ...
Koume: Emm... Where do you want to play?
Mari: There~~
Mari's sd: Ya-------y
Koume(thinks): The Jungle Gym Koume's not good with.
SFX: *climb*
Boy's sd: The top!
Mari: Wow.

p3
Mari's sd: What about onee-chan?
Mari's sd: What about onee-chan?
Koume(thinks): Koume can't climb that high...
Koume: E-emm, the jungle gym is dangerous so let's play somewhere else...
Mari's sd: O--K
Koume: ...
Mari: Swings.
Koume: Ah, yeah.
Koume's sd: Let's wait a bit.
Koume: I-It's free...
Boy: Oh!

p4
Ryouta: Let's make our shoes fly!
Koume: E-Emm...
Koume: It's our turn...
Koume: ...
Koume: The swings are crowded so let's play somewhere else.
Mari: O--K
Koume: ...

p5
SFX: yay
SFX: yay
SFX: yay
Mari: Onee-chan, can you cut a heart?
Koume: Y-Yeah.
Koume: Sensei said that Koume's good using the scissors~~
SFX: cut cut
Mari: Wow~~
Koume: I-It's ok, we can fix it...

p6
Koume: It didn't go well again...
Mari: Thanks~~
Mari: Onee-chan?
Koume: ...But I can't do anything...
Koume: Koume isn't an onee-chan!

p7
Anzu: Koume-chan, what happened?
Hii: You alone...?
Koume: !
Koume: E-Emm...

p8
Tsuchida: Koume is helping sensei right now,
Tsuchida: Right?
Koume: !
Anzu: I see! Let's play together when you're done!
Hii: Good luck...
SFX: //not sure about this, maybe a hug
Koume: ...Koume doesn't want to be an onee-chan anymore...
Nanako: Mari-chan, what happened?
Mari: Onee-chan left.

p9
Nanako: Maybe it's hide'n'seek~~?
Mari: Maybe~~?
Mari: But Mari likes being with onee-chan better~~
Nanako: Then let's make something good~~
Mari: Make~~?
Koume: ...Koume thinks Mari-chan wants an onee-chan like Anzu-chan or Hii-chan...
Tsuchida: But Koume, you were taking care of her properly.
Koume: But...
Nanako: Koume-chan!

p10
Koume: Yamamoto-sensei...
Nanako: I have something for Koume-chan~~
Koume: ...A string telephone?
Mari: ...Onee-chan?
Koume: Mari-chan!
Mari: Yay, it's onee-chan, hello~~
Koume: Ah, Emm, umm... just now...
Mari: Umm, thank you for playing a lot with Mari today.
Mari: Mari was happy because you're like a real Onee-chan.
Mari: You see,

p11
Mari: Mari loves the kind onee-chan!
Mari: Onee-chan likes Mari?
Koume: ...Yes, Koume also loves Mari-chan...
Mari: Then we've finished playing hide'n'seek?
Koume: Yeah! Sorry, I'll be there right now!

p12
Koume's sd: Ah
Ryouta's sd: It's free!
Koume: It...It's our turn~~
Ryouta: Sorry sorry
Koume's sd: D-Don't be...
Koume's sd: Be careful~~
Mari's sd: O--K

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