Shitsurakuen
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失楽園
Shitsurakuen
それは子供の頃誰もが聞いたことのある とても 単純な物語
That is a very simple story which everyone heard when they were a kid
永遠に語り継がれる王女と騎士の物語・・・
It's a story of princess and knight that's been handed down for eternity...
Box: A beautiful princess
Box: A demon king as a villain who kidnaps the princess
Box: And someone who protects the princess from the demon king
Box: A knight of justice's story
Box: The demon king kidnaps the princess countless times
Box: And everytime that happens, the knight will always go and save the princess
Box: No matter what the demon king uses as obstacles//temptations
Box: Nothing can stop the knight
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Box: From saving the princess
Utopia is inside the maidens bond
The story of despair and the fight of the maidens!!
Chapter 1: Utopia Academy
Shitsurakuen
(Lost Utopia)
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Bubble: Vroom
Sora: Private academy Utopia
Sora: Only selected students from all over the nation gets special invitation into the school and get a special education//it's a super elite school...
Sora: It's wonderful!
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Sora: That means they finally acknowledged the value my existence in this world, right!?
Tsuki: ....Yeah, you should be quiet while on the bus
Sora: Ah, sorry sorry
Tsuki: ...What?
Tsuki: What's wrong Sora...
Sora: Eh? I was just thinking, I'm so happy that I finally meet Tsuki and//go to school together again~~
Sora: You entered this Elite school since middle school
Tsuki: Yes, they have integrated middle and high school
Sora: So, we haven't meet each other in 3 years
Tsuki: Well, we live in a dorm and on top of that, the academy is on a man-made island too, so it's like we're being isolated from the outside world
Sora: Do want to eat Tsuru no Ko*?
Tsuki: ...Maybe later
*Kyushu's specialty cake
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Sora: Hmm but why suddenly they sent me the school entrance's invitation
Sora: I don't get it//I think I'm just a normal girl with no special talent
Tsuki: ...yeah
Boy: Haha is that even possible?
Tsuki: !
Sora: A, are you ok? tsuki!?
Tsuki: Ugh..I'm fine
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Boy: Let's sit here
Boy: Ah, and then!
Sora: .....!!
Ahahaha...
Sora: HEY!!
Sora: Don't you have something to say!?
Tsuki: !
Tsuki: Sora! It's ok...
Sora: You just collided into my friend just now, didn't you!?//She almost fell down you know!!
Boy: Huh...?
Boy: !//Oi...
Bubble: grabs shirt
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Bubble: Tsk
Boy: ...I'm sorry
Boy: ....
Sora: ....good!
Sora: Walk carefully from now on
Tsuki: ....You haven't change huh? Sora
Sora: Eh?//...Ahh, that?
Tsuki: Yes...
Sora: Hehe well...//It's like the story I read in the past//"A knight of justice who protects the princess"//....And
Sora: that's my dream!
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Tsuki: I see...but if there were a real knight around, I would've been saved before he collide into me
Sora: Ughh I'm still learning
Sora: ...AH!//I, I get it...
Sora: That's why they accepted me into the academy....
Sora: And also that's why my uniform is short pants...!!
Tsuki: ....huh?
Sora: In short they acknowledged the value of my dream, to become a knight that protects girls!//This uniform is the proof!!
Sora: The uniform sent to my place is a short pants, while Tsuki wears skirt!//In other words, they want me to act as a knight in the academy...
Tsuki: Please be quiet when on the bus
Sora: Oww
Text: sorry
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Sora: Ah, but when I recieved the packet...
Sora: In there were the uniform and//a strange white glove in it....
Driver: Next is//the academy front gate...
Tsuki: Ah....
Tsuki: We're getting off at the next stop, Sora
Sora: Ahhhh//I wanted to push the stop button...
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Sora: ...I heard about it but//This is huge//my new school
Tsuki: Yes, but this is just just the front...//entrance
Sora: Are you serious!?
Text: This is the super elite school...It's really on a different level
Text: Now I have to get used to this school...!!
Sora: By the way...
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Sora: Is it just me or....//All of the girls look depressed...
Tsuki: ....That's right
Sora: EH!? why did you have to agree with me...
Tsuki: Just follow me, Sora//If not, you'd get lost
Sora: Y, yes...//...Hm?
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Sora: Ooh//I've found the gathering of elites! I wonder what....
<dash>
Tsuki: Listen to me
Boy: Hurry up
Boy: Break time is almost over
Sora: !
Sora: !?
Text: Gu...gun and sword!? I guess they're not real
Text: This must be somekind of survival game or something...
Sora (thinks): Huh? I've seen that glove somewhere...
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Boy: You see?//There is no way you can win using dagger against a gun
Boy: Now hurry up and hand over your weapon!
Boy: ....hmph
Boy: You don't have to tell me that
Girl: Ah...
Boy: I don't want this weak weapon...//anyway!!
Text: Ah, he broke the dagger...
Girl: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
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Sora (thinks): The dagger vanished...!?
Boy: Wow, No mercy, huh?
Boy: That girl won't wake up for a week
Sora (thinks): Wha....what's going on!?
Boy: You shouldn't give me after you broke it...
Boy: Shut up, stupid
Sora (thinks): Ah! This must be some kind of play or a magic show...//Yeah, I'm sure of it, this must be some kind of event...
Sora (thinks): That girl is just//acting...
Boy: HEY WAKE UP!!
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Boy: Ah, the break is over
Boy: Hmm that was not a very good match
Boy: I wonder who will play next time
Boy: Ah, why don't we play?
Boy: From now on, I will OWN AND PROTECT you.
Girl: ....Ugh//Ah...ye...s, than..k//yo.......
Boy: .....Hm?//tsk she passed out
Boy: Hey, carry this girl
Girl: .....Yes
AHAHA....
Tsuki: ....Are you satisfied watching the game?
Tsuki: ....Now let's go...
<Inhales> Suaa...
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Tsuki: Hey, you have to listen to me
Sora: Let me go, Tsuki!! I have to help that girl...//That was too cruel
Tsuki: Don't move around without knowing the situation//...I will explain it to you, but first you need to follow me
Sora: But...
Boy: H, hey you...!
Boy: I never see you around before, are you a transfer student?
Boy: I, if so, why don't I OWN AND PROTECT//you!?
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Sora: OWN!? what's that!?
Boy: Uwa
Sora: Why noone helped that girl!?
Sora: WHY
Tsuki: Sora!
Boy: Wa
Tsuki: ....Forgive her for her rudeness//This girl still doesn't understand anything
Sora: .......ugh
Tsuki: Male chauvinism//That's this academy's general rule
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Sora: Wh, why!?
Tsuki: Do you know this academy's administrator is the "Iwahijiri Group"?
Sora: Eh? ah..yes//If I'm not mistaken they make computers, games, cars, medicines and have their own bank//It's a big corporation, right?
Tsuki: That group's president is this academy's board chairman for generations//and he's an ultra-male chauvinism ideologist
Tsuki: That's all
Sora: That's the reason!?
Tsuki: ...it may sounds like a stupid reason
Tsuki: But the result is tragic
Tsuki: To compare, oppress and show that females are inferior to males//They made this a co-ed school...
Tsuki: Because Iwahijiri has huge influence in the world//so noone dares to oppose him
Tsuki: The boys in this academy are all promised future with in the corporation//So they happily do whatever Iwahijiri wants
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Sora: No way...
Tsuki: The game you saw earlier//that's called "Exaclan"
Tsuki: A battle type virtual reality game where the whole academy island is the field
Tsuki: It's a new game invented by the Iwahijiri group
Tsuki: As an attempt to make it as the male student's amusement
Tsuki: And also to increase the oppression against the female students. They brought in the game in to the academy around 3 years ago.
Tsuki: The rule is simple
Tsuki: First, the girls inside the field all can provide all sort the weapons
Tsuki: However only he who "vows" to "own and protect" her is able to use the weapon
Tsuki: Then that male student uses that weapon and enjoy the battle
Tsuki: The winner of the battle gets the loser's weapon...in other words, they get to own that girl
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Tsuki: So if he keeps winning, he'd get more weapons...girls. In other words, it'd be a wonderful harem situation for him
Tsuki: Also, the more weapons he gets, the stronger he'd become
Sora: WHAT IS THAT!//Ownership and stuffs...//Girls are not objects!!
Tsuki: No, girls are objects//in here, girls are weapons
Tsuki: Because of this game, they splendidly demoted the girls from "human" to "object"
Sora: ......//that's terrible.....
Sora: Whether it's for harem or to get stronger...//I don't see how this game is fun...
Tsuki: ...Well, that's not the only purpose
Tsuki: At least that's what the student council think....
Sora: Tsuki?
Tsuki: ...Nah, nevermind//But there is one good thing this game brought for the girls
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Tsuki: I told you about the ownership right?//Other than the owner himself, nobody else is allowed to touch the girl
Sora: Eh?
Boy: Hey! don't you mess with my weapon
Boy: Ah, I'm sorry
Tsuki: If you take or break someone else's things//that would be a crime, right? the same goes with the girls
Tsuki: Before that, all boys could oppress one girl
Tsuki: Thanks to this game//the girl only has to endure the oppression from her owner alone
Tsuki: Well, in a sense....
Tsuki: The boy, who owns the girl and
Tsuki: protects her from other boys, is like...
Tsuki: "A knight of justice who protects the princess"
Tsuki: ...perhaps it's like that
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Sora: That's wrong
Sora: That's not a knight...!!
Tsuki: ...you're right
Sora: OK I get it!!//Now it's time for me, the real knight (apprentice), to show those boys....
Tsuki: You still don't understand anything, do you?//YOU IDIOT
Text: Ouch...it hurts, mainly my stomach...
Tsuki: Noone other than the owner can touch the property//that's the rule
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Tsuki: This rule is "absolute" to keep the game's fairness and stability//try to break the rule and Iwahijiri would give you penalty as punishment
Sora: Th, that's fine with me!//If I can save the princess, I don't mind...
Tsuki: Unfortunately the penalty will be given to the girl as well//also the owner
Sora: Wha...
Tsuki: That means, "the snatcher", "the owner"//and the "object" which is the [cause] of the incident are all wrong
Tsuki: If you want to help, then you'd have win the Exaclan....
Sora: !//How can I join the game!?
Tsuki: .......
Tsuki: I don't know...//It's impossible for girls...
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bubbles: bla bla (noise of students talking)
Sora: ....hmmm//I can really feel the boys despises me and looking at me as their target...
Text: This must be...
Text: because I still don't have an "owner"
Text: Just like what Tsuki told me earlier...
Sora: By the way, why Tsuki isn't here anyway!?//and all the other girls look depressed, it's hard to talk to them...
Sora: IT'S LONELY! I WANT FRIENDS!!
Boy: Hey//You're the transfer student, right?
Sora: !
Boy: I want to talk to you...
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Girl: Ah...
Boy: You bitch...
Boy: DON'T INTERRUPT ME TALKING!!
Page 27
All: !?
Boy: The transfer student!? What are you thinking!?
Boy: Calm down, stupid!
Boy: Don't mind the transfer student, but that girl has an owner//do you want to get punished!?
Boy: And if I'm not mistaken her owner is student council's...
Boy: !
Boy: Tsk...
Sora: ...Ugh
Girl: !!//A...are you OK!?
Sora: I'm not OK, please be my friend...
Girl: Huh!?
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Sora: Ahhh~~//I wanted protect you with a more stylish way~~
Girl: ...No, that was cool enough!
Sora: I'm Himoto Sora! The transfer student
Sora: Nice to meet you
Girl: Ah...I'm//Izaki Koharu
Koharu: Thank you very much for protecting me...!
Text: She's cute...she looks like a real princess
Bubble: hand shake
Koharu: Ah...is your head ok?
Sora: It's fine, fine! Don't underestimate me, I'm strong you know//That's why, if you have any problem, just tell me
Sora: I will protect you!
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Koharu: But...//that's...
Sora: Hm? what's wrong?
Koharu: ......
Koharu: Ah....It's nothing!
Sora: Really? then, it's a promise
Sora: Let's do yubikiri*~~...
*Yubikiri is linking little fingers to confirm a promise
Koharu: ......
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Koharu: That's all about the transfer student, Himoto Sora...
???: ...Hmph
Koharu: Kyaa...
???: Tsk how annoying. If they're so interested in that transfer student//they should've went and checked on her themselves...
???: Those student councils...//Thay asked me to do stupid things like this...
???: I'm also one of the student council staffs, you know!?
Koharu: ......
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Text: I
Text: will protect you...
Koharu: ......
???: What's wrong with your right hand?
Koharu: N, no, it's nothing..
???: Ah...really?...
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Koharu: !!
???: Are you stupid?
???: I also observed that transfer student, you know!?
???: Obviously I also saw your intimate moment with her...!!
???: Hey Koharu//Who's your owner?
Koharu: T...the student council...
???: That's right, in other words, you're the student council's, our object//...but!
???: Might as well//make you mine alone right here!
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Sora: TSUKIIII
Sora: Geez where is she?...
Sora: This academy is too huge...
Sora: I might get lost...
???: ..........
???: .....
Clank clank (weapons sound)
Text: They're at it again....that terrible game....
Sora: What was it again? Exaclan?...
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Box: I really want to go there and stop them....but
Bubble: "If you want to help, then you'd have win the Exaclan....."
Sora: But, how on earth//.....hm?
Sora: Ah...that glove again...
Box: Perhaps.....
Text: This glove....
Koharu: ...
Koharu: No.....//Help
Sora: !//That voice....Izaki-san!?
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Sora: Izaki-sa....
Sora: !!
Koharu: Hi...moto-sa...
???: You...//that transfer student...!?
Page 36
Sora: Let's go, Izaki-san!
Koharu: Ah...
???: WAIT!!!
???: Come//Koharu!!
???: I definately won't forgive you....!!
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???: I don't know if it's allowed to use this outside the game
???: ....But I don't care! I'll punish you!!
Sora: !!
Sora: Ah!?
Sora: Izaki-san...!?
Koharu: ....I'm sorry
Koharu: I can't disobey my owner
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Sora: What are you saying!?//You shouldn't obey that kind of guy...
???: "Utopia is....//here!!"
Sora: !!?
Page 39
Sora: ......!!!
???: Let's see....
???: Now
???: Let the cat burglar hunt begins!!
Page 40
Sora: .......Wha//it can't be
Sora: This is....//virtual...!?
Page 41
???: WAHAHAHAHA RUN, RUN ANYWHERE YOU LIKE!!!
Bubble: The girls provides all sorts of weapons...
Sora: So that's what she meant....
Sora: Hahaha....
Sora: .......DAMN IT
Page 42
Sora: !!?
???: HEY!! WHERE DID YOU GO!?
???: Hiding is useless, you know?
Sora: .................
Text: Who...?
Text: Who helped me...
Sora: .........!!?
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Sora: Ugh!!
Box: I'm being protected
Box: Right now, I'm
Box: being protected by this girl
Bubble: To become
Bubble: "A knight of justice who protects the princess"....that's my dream
Bubble: ....It's a promise
Text: I will protect you
Box: I'm not protecting her
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Box: I'm not protecting her
Box: I'm not protecting her
Text: I'm not protecting anyone at all
???: .....//protect them
???: Protect them......
???: Use me//to protect the girls....
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Sora: .....//....I want to protect them
Sora: I want to protect them......
Sora: I want to protect them...
Sora: But.....
Bubble: "If you want to help, then you'd have win the Exaclan....."
Bubble: "I don't know...//It's impossible for girls..."
Sora: BUT....!!
Sora: ...That's right
Sora: I'm//not a princess
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Text: I'm the Knight of justice
Text: Who protects the princess!!
???: ...That's right, Sora//That's why I will provide your weapon
???: Now//say the "Vow"
???: Say that you "own and protect" me...
Sora: .....No
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Sora: ....I will not "own" the princess//But more than that
Sora: I will treasure you
Sora: And I will always be by your side and protect you!
Sora: ...I will give you Utopia
Sora: "Utopia is//here"
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???: .....Wha
Page 49
Sora: ....This is//all solely
Sora: For the princess
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???: Hey, what the hell happened!?
???: An error!?//Is there a bug in the system!?
Koharu: I/I don't know...
Both: !!
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Page 52-53
Sora: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
???: WHA
???: S, STAY AWAY FROM MEEEEEE
Page 54
???: ........!!!
Page 55
Sora: .....
Sora: It's gone
Sora: ......
Koharu: .....Ah
Sora: ....YES! I still don't understand it but...//ANYWAY I WON!!!
Sora: Ah, it's alright now, Izaki-san!
Sora: This bad guy won't wake up for some time (a guess)....
Page 56
Text: ....It was painful for her....
Sora: Izaki-san...
Koharu: Thank you, Himoto-san....no/Sora-sama!
Koharu: Following the Exaclan's rule//From now on I vow that my heart and my body are yours!!
Bubble: "The winner of the battle gets the loser's weapon...in other words, they get to own that girl"
Sora: ....AH//no//I'm not doing this for that purpose....
Koharu: I will do my best to serve you, Sora-sama!!
Sora: Eeeh?
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???: That Kajiwara-senpai//it looks like he just lost
???: Obviously, we also lost one of the student council's weapon
???: Who is that transfer student!?//Also why that girl has the "glove"!?
???: I wonder why
???: What are you going to do, pres*...
*Student council president
???: Call me El
???: ......//what are you going to do, El!?
El: ....let's see
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El: Report this to angel* as a bug//when that's been taken care of, she'll be just an ordinary woman
*They call the server manager here as Angel
El: ....Well, while waiting for the debug*
*yes the manga says debug
El: Let's all have some fun with her
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thanks for the great tl as always
But either way, thanks! I can't proofread today because of irrelevant reasons, and besides, I wasn't a licensed proofreader to begin with. Hope someone proofs this.
every fridays i stay up all night due to medaka box
if no body cleans this by this friday expect it scanslated by me
anyhow thx alot expel for translating this awsome series
this could be a perfect chance for someone to proofread it tho >_<
ouch, 50 + pages again lol, i'll try to have it out friday/saturday
my english is not good... but... i can understand it and traslate english-spanish...