Wild Life 28

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Elder: Let's give up, Samuel....
SFX: DODODODO

Elder: Let's abandon the village... For now, it's better to evacuate to the neighboring village...
SFX: SHHHHHH

Samuel: You should be happy! Thanks to you, the village will be left to the hippos for the taking!!
Samuel: All the farms that we risked our lives for will be left to them!!

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Samuel: AHAHAHAHAHA!! You should be happy!
Seno: !

Tessho: Shut up jerk!!
SFX: DOOOOO...

Tessho: My "Absolute Pitch" can distinguish it! // Since the hippos got in there, the sound of the river has slightly decreased... Right now, the current has started to flow slowly!


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Tessho: Thanks to the hippos for eating those large quantity of water plants!!
SFX: DOON

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Samuel: What did you say!?

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Samuel: That's impossible!

Samuel: With the amount of water plants blocking the flow of the river…
Samuel: there’s no way they can eat those that easily!!

Tessho: Nope!!

Tessho: A hippo is capable of eating 45 kilos of plants within one night!!
Tessho: With that, the hippos somehow manage it!!

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Samuel: ...can somehow manage it...

Elder: I see...

Elder: Perhaps he's right....

Elder: Originally, hippos are creatures that live from eating the water plants.

Samuel: Eh...?

Elder: Also in the olden days in this river bank~~~~~~ when poaching started, the number of hippos had been decreasing rapidly... // It was due to the hippos’ eating large quantity of water plants that has kept any floods from happening.


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Samuel: Is... Is that so....
Elder: Samuel!

Elder: Let's work hard on it one more time!

Elder: Just like what that guy said, if we hold out a little more, we might be able to keep the village.

Samuel: ~~~~~~...

Elder: Everyone!

Elder: It's too early to abandon the village! // The women and children should evacuate to somewhere safe, and the men should hold out a little longer here!!
Elder: One way or another, we will protect our land!!


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Villagers: Alright!!
Ryoto: ........

Ryoto: Just as Tessho said, thanks to the Hippos, there's still some hope left...

Ryoto: However, we don't know how long it will take for this rain to stop.

Ryoto: At any rate, if the rain continues to pour like this, no matter how many plants the hippos eat, the river will overflow....
Ryoto: Is there nothing we can do for this place.....
SFX: DO DO DO

SFX: DOSHHHHH

Seno: .......tss.......

Seno: Ops.....

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Ryoto: Seno, you should stop now and take refuge somewhere already!!
Ryoto: Women were told to leave this place already!

Seno: ...don't want to...

Seno: Saving people's lives is a noble act that anyone can do!!
Seno: It doesn't matter if you're a man or a woman!!

Ryoto: ......

Ryoto: .....I understand...!


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Ryoto: Well then, come with me!
Seno: Eh!?

Seno: But everyone is helping out here....
Tessho: Just listen to me and hurry!
Seno: O...OK!

Ryoto: But.....

Ryoto: To be concerned with life is something I'm not that familiar with....

SFX: SHHHHHH

SFX: PSSHH PSSHH

Samuel: Hey Japanese!!


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Samuel: At any rate, there are no signs of this rain from (delete) stopping!!
Samuel: Saying such an irresponsible thing! // The hippos might have helped prevent the village from being destroyed, but it's already too late!

Samuel: The other Japanese are already leaving! // Aren't you gonna quit and leave as well!?
Tessho: .........

Samuel: BWAHHH!!
Tessho: !

Tessho: Damn it! Hey, the sandbags got torn down!
Tessho: Help out! Let's hurry and put them back...!!
SFX: DOSHHHHH

Samuel: Shut it! Enough with this hypocrisy!
SFX: GASHH

SFX: GISHHH

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SFX: BASHHH
Samuel: !

Tessho: Shut up jerk! // Stop spouting nonsense; hurry and help out already!!

Tessho: You've said it yourself! You won't forgive the hippos for ruining the food for the kids here!! // For that purpose that you've threatened us before, right!!
Tessho: But what's with you right now? When the opponent got bigger, you gave up so easily!! // You're the one who's being a hypocrite, jerk!!

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Tessho: Moreover!
Tessho: My companions are not running away!

Tessho: Because Ryoto is a double-edge sword; he would not get scared that easily. With his unknown age, he's a bit of a slacker...
Tessho: He's also extremely good at brainwashing other people!

Ryoto: What an awful thing to say.... (should I stop now...)
Dog: Woof?
Seno: What's the matter, Dr. Ryoto?

Tessho: .....however, he's a great guy! He definitely wouldn't run away.
Tessho: I also wouldn't even think about it!! // So, don't give up yet!!

Samuel: .........

Villagers: WAHHH, it's over, let's run away~~~~
Villagers: The river is breaking down already!!
Samuel: ........



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Samuel: I understand...!

SFX: BASHHH

SFX: BASHH

Samuel: I'll believe in you!

Elder: Samuel!

Elder: The river~~~!!
SFX: DAOOOSHH


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SFX: GASHHH

Samuel: WAAAAAA!!
Samuel: !!
SFX: BASHHH

SFX: ZUSHHHHH
Samuel: ....tss!!

SFX: KABASHHH

Samuel: Japanese!!
SFX: DODODOOOO


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SFX: DOOOO...N
SFX: ZUZUZUZU
Villagers: !!

Villagers: Hehh....What was that!?
Villagers: An explosion!?

Samuel: Japanese!!

Samuel: You...you saved me...!!
Villager: Hey Samuel!

Villager: Look!
Villager: The water is decreasing...!!
SFX: ZUZUZUZU...

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SFX: DOOOOO....

Villager: We're saved...
Villager: It's a miracle...

Samuel: ......
Samuel: How come!?

Samuel: The rain is still pouring hard, so why is the water in river dropping....

Tessho: Uhmmm...

Tessho: Uhm...

Samuel: Hold yourself together Japanese!



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Infobox: Next Day~~~ Saura Municipal Hospital

Elder: My words are not enough to express our gratitude to you all.
Elder: Your bone was even fractured by the water pressure just to save the village...

Elder: We're very grateful.
Tessho: !!

Tessho: No...no.. What I did was nothing!
Tessho: It was all thanks to this great guy, Ryoto!

Tessho: He created a branch by blowing up the river!
White text w/ black background: Wharf
Text with X: Explosion
Text with arrow: Created Branch
Text with houses: Village

Tessho: But, how did you manage to do that explosion~~~ // in the middle of that confusion, you were able to prepare the necessary provisions.


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Ryoto: Ahhh, that. I simply made the nitroglycerin that I've been using for medical treatment into a bomb... // You see, I always carry it with me.

Ryoto: Ah, see, I still have one here.
Villagers: ..........

Samuel: However....

Samuel: Japanese are really weak-minded race...
Elder: Stop it Samuel! You're being rude again!

Samuel: Hideyo Noguchi and you too... How can you sacrifice yourselves for the sake of other people and animals?
Samuel: That is something that I can't comprehend!

Tessho: Well~~~ you see...

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Tessho: That's because each life is significant!!

Flashback Tessho: It's not true that keeping them alive has no meaning!
Flashback Tessho: I'll prove that to you!
Samuel: .......

SFX: PANSHH
Tessho: !

Samuel: You win.

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Elder: Hu hu hu... Actually, yesterday, this guy gave some of his own crops to the hippos secretly.
SFX: susususu
Tessho: Eh~~~~?

Samuel: Elder, you promised that you weren’t gonna tell anyone~~~

Infobox: Thus~~~~

Infobox: The villagers started working together to protect the hippos~~~
Infobox: The people and the wild animals started to co-exist in a symbiotic relationship.

Infobox: To protect the farms in the community, they put up guards that will look over the fields every night.

Infobox: However~~~
Infobox: Just as we return to Japan.... a strange thing has started.

Infobox: That is~~~~

Girl: Wow, what a huge river~~!
Samuel: Japanese....


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Samuel: You're Japanese tourists, right?
Guy: Yes...

Girl: After the river cruise, we thought of seeing Noguchi Hideyo's memorial.

Samuel: I see. Therefore you better look at this too. // This is the latest tourist spot.

Girl: ?
Girl: What is this?

Samuel: This is~~~

Samuel: Tessho Iwashiro and Tsukasa Ryoto's Statue~~~
Samuel: Excellent Japanese doctors that are as commendable as Noguchi Hideyo.