Jojo's Bizarre Adventure 8

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Page: 169 / Chapter 008: The Battle on Ogre Street [Phantom Blood Arc 08]
Part 1, Jonathan Joestar: His Youth
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Title of the Chapter: The Battle on Ogre Street

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Butler: Master JoJo, what was that noise we just heard?

SFX: SLAM

JoJo: Father, I will go to London for two to three days. In the meantime I've asked this team of doctors to take care of you!

JoJo: And, please don't take any medicine unless it's directly administered by them!

JoJo: Father, please don't ask me the reasons why right now...

Butler: Ma... Master! Don't you trust us to take care of the Lord...? I'm so ashamed...

SFX: SIGH

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Lord Joestar: Hey...

Lord Joestar: It's alright... Let us do as JoJo says...

Lord Joestar: I don't know what his reasons are...

Lord Joestar: But I trust my son!

JoJo: Fa... Father!

SFX: COUGH COUGH

Lord Joestar: Uhm... Uhm...

SFX: RUMBLE

JoJo: It seems that Father's symptoms are getting worse. I may need an antidote...

SFX: GRAB!

JoJo: I will protect my father!

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Dr: I wonder what that was about... JoJo seems to have grown into a boy who's very responsible...

Dr: While in the past he wasn't very reliable... His features have also changed as well!

Lord Joestar: Yes... -COUGH- Because of his attitude in the past I got more angry at him than necessary...

SFX: WOOOOOOOOO

Dio: The howling of a stray dog...

Dio: In this cold winter... They too will stand trying to survive...

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SFX: BOOOOONNN

SFX: CHACK

SFX: CLACK

SFX: SWAP

SFX: GRIN

SFX: VRRRSSSH

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SFX: THUD

SFX: TONCK

Dio: That JoJo...

Dio: As expected, he must have taken the letter from my father and the oriental medicine with him when he left...

Dio: But I have other reasons to check his room!

SFX: BAAN

SFX: FLAP

Dio: Heh

Dio: All of his notes are recorded here!

SFX: FLAP

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Dio: That JoJo! He's researched the mask this much? Hahaha!

Dio: Seven years ago, my blood activated this stone mask!

SFX: GUSH

Dio: Perhaps JoJo must have thought he was the only one who noticed and got interested in this mask...

Dio: Why did the ancients create this device? Well, that doesn't interest me one bit...

Dio: ...Because knowing that wouldn't gain me anything...

SFX: PIK

Dio: But now...

Dio: ...I've thought of a way on how I can make use of this device!

SFX: CREAK CREAK

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SFX: SWING

Dio: If I can make these hooks penetrate into JoJo's brain, My dear brother would die immediately!

Dio: I can't kill him off with a gun or a knife!

Dio: Because the blame would fall...

Dio: ...On me...

Dio: But if forced to wear this stone mask...

Dio: ...Only JoJo's aware of its effects... And his notes are all in this notebook!

Dio: ...The police will think of an incident and close the case...

Dio: ..So, I'll never be suspected of murder!!

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Dio: JoJo! You'll die from your own research!

SFX: WOOOOOOOOO

Subtitle: London...

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Coachman: OOOH!

SFX: OOOOOHOOOO!

JoJo: What wrong? Why we're stopping?

Coachman: Si... Sir... I... I... won't go any further! I can't go any further!

Coachman: It's dangerous! continuing would be dangerous! this is not a place for gentlemen to enter!

Coachman: Maybe you don't know this, but it's been known for hundreds of years! That the people who live here are damned! And epidemics always start from here!

SFX: WOOOOOOOOO

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Coachman: And it is called Ogre Street!

SFX: CLACK

SFX: TAP

SFX: THUMP THUMP THUMP

JoJo: Finally I know!

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SFX: WOOOOOOOOOO

JoJo: I asked the university laboratory to analyze the medicine that Dio was trying to give my father to drink, but it couldn't be analyzed...

JoJo: Therefore there's a strong chance that this is an Oriental medicine... And because Dio lived in London... Only here you can find a substance like that... Only I can provide the proof that it's a poison!

JoJo: Thank you, from here on I'll continue on foot!

Coachman: Fo... forget it! UGH... this isn't a place for you, Mr. Joestar!

JoJo: I know that... but I have a reason to go, even if it costs me my right hand!

SFX: WOOOOOO

Dio: What? JoJo went alone and entered Ogre Street in London last night?

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Butler 1: I... I tried desperately to stop him!

Butler 2: We mustn't say anything to Lord Joestar...

Dio: Perhaps it's no longer necessary to use the mask... Maybe they've already killed him like a dog!! Hmph!

SFX: SWISSH

JoJo: Wh... what kind of neighborhood is this...

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JoJo: Another dead end! It's like a maze!

JoJo: Even the cracks on the walls look monstrous!

JoJo: UGH!

SFX: FWIP

SFX: WOSSH

JoJo: W-What's that...!? The snow is moving!!

SFX: FWAP

SFX: GROWL!

JOJo: UGH! The horror! That cat is eating a puppy!

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JoJo: HMPH!

SFX: TAP TAP TAP TAP

SFX: TAP TAP TAP

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Guy with the Face Paint: Hey, Tattoo! We'll leave it to your knife!

Tattoo: OK...
(TN: Tattoo is a fictional character played by Hervé Villechaize, From the hit TV show "Fantasy Island" of the 1970s and 80s)

Speedwagon: I'll slice this baby up nice!
(TN: Speedwagon's first three initials are R.E.O; REO Speedwagon is the name of an American rock band of the 1970s and 80s)

SFX: SWISH

JoJo: So, this is Ogre Street...!

Guy with the Face Paint: UUAARGH

SFX: WOSH

SFX: BAN!

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SFX: THUMP

SFX: SWAP

Guy with the Face Paint: URGH!

SFX: GRAB! PLIK PLIK

Guy with the Face Paint: Th... This is insane!

Speedwagon and Tattoo: He stopped the knife with his bare hand!

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SFX: CHITTER CHITTER

Guy with the Face Paint: My dear brave sir, what do you think would happen if I turned this knife a little? Your four fingers will fall to the ground!

JoJo: Just try it!

JoJo: But in the moment you do that, my rugby kick will strike you like a log smashing your rib cage!

Guy with the Face Paint: Eh?

SFX: GULP

JoJo: The reason I'm here is much more than the loss of four fingers!

JoJo: I'm here to save my father, and to protect House Joestar! I have reasons for your noble fight!

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Kung-Fu Guy: ACHAA! Who do you think you are!?

Kung-Fu Guy: I'll give you a taste of the secret Oriental discipline! This Kung-Fu kick will send you to another world!

SFX: SMASH

Kung-Fu Guy: ACHAA!

SFX: SWAP POW

SFX: FRRRRSSSHHH

JoJo: And now tell me... You should know... Where can I find someone who sells Oriental poisons!

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JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, Volume 01: "Dio the Invader" End
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TN: What's up, I never came to completing this Chapter so I did it today since I wasn't busy, Anyways, Yeah, Sorry for the long wait. Anyways, This Chapter was a really good one, JoJo really fucked up those hoodlums in that area. It goes just to show that Dio in fact was born as a Gangster of some sorts, Since he has such street smarts. Dio though is one maniacal son of a bitch, He'll go to any lengths just to destroy JoJo, It's almost like hes obsessed with him or something. Oh yeah, Well find out later on how "Obsessed" he really becomes with JoJo. Anyways, With JoJo destroying those hoodlums he's in search of an Oriental psycho who dealt that Poison to Dio, Well see what happens next! Here's a song that's good to listen to when reading this Chapter ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mz0Ruh8Zml0 ) Ghostface Killah - "Mighty Healthy"