Majin Tantei Nougami Neuro
201
Person[human]
-> RTS Page for Majin Tantei Nougami Neuro 201
[tn: Final edit- as always a huge thanks to Elkin for taking time to go over everything, and super awesome thanks to Lintwhite and microlm for already throwing some corrections my way!]
tn: = translation note
oh: = off-hand note (because this chapter is filled with so much fan service not to nosebleed at some point)
MTNN 201
Page 1
Yako:[死ね…]
[Neuro is…]
[ネウロが]
[going to die]
Zera:同じ魔人だからわかりまさァネウロ様
Because we’re both demons you understand Neuro-sama,
地上においてそこまで弱ったら再回復の見込みはゼロだ！
That if weakened the prospect of recovering again in the world up here is ZERO!
あんたは干からびてくたばるんだ!!
You will dry up and die!!
それが運命!!
That is your fate!!
Text:最悪のびじよん未来が!!?
The worst vision of the future is!!?
Title:人[にんげん]
Person[human]
ゲ――――ッゲゲゲゲケゲ
ge-----gegegegekege
Page 2
Zera:ゲボァ
GE-ACK!
Neuro:ゼラ
Zera
貴様の口は小うるさいだけではない
You mouth isn't just a tad chatty
魔界へと通じている
it leads to hell
もう少し拡張しても裂けなさそうだな
If we expand it a little by tearing it wider
あと魔人１人分は
it’s enough for one demon
Page 3
Neuro:ヤコ
Yako
我が輩は
I’m
帰るぞ
going back.
Yako:[……
ネウロ]
Neuro]
Neuro:出来るか…？
Can you do that..,?
ゼラ
Zera
Zera:へ
Ye
へいへいへい出来さあ!!
Yeshyeshyesh I caaaahn!!
[tn: I’ll just make a brief note here that Zera has a weird way of speaking- Mostly he extends any ‘a’ sound at the end of sentences or ends nouns with ‘saa’ on the end. I tried to express it here with extending the ‘a’ in ‘can’. I think he’d talk like someone with an overbite or lisp due to the tear in his mouth.]
ただ…
but…
口を広げるのに時間がかかる
my mouth will take some time to expand
半日は必要でさ
I’ll need half a day
Neuro:よろしい
Very well
下の空き部屋で準備しろ
Make your preparations in the vacant room below.
Page 4
Zera:…だが
…but
正直ホッとしてまさネウロ様
I’m honestly relieved Neuro-sama
いまいましいが
Although I hate you,
あんたまどの魔人が地上なんぞで死んでいくのは…
If a demon of your calibre were to die up here...
同じ魔人として見たくはありませんや
As a fellow demon, it's nothing I want to see
強者は強者らしく
The strong are strong
弱者は弱者らしく
The weak are weak
…それが運命でさ
…that’s how fate is
魔界に生まれた者のあるべき姿だ
to those who are born from hell
…夜明けまでには準備できまさあ
…by dawn preparations will be set
Page 5
Yako:……
あんた以外の魔人って初めて見たけど
This is the first time I've seen a demon besides you, but
…変わった人だね
…he’s a strange person isn’t he
まるで従うために逆らってるみたい
It seems like he's defying you so he can obey.
Neuro:魔人は大体あんなものだ
Demons are as a whole such beings.
生まれついて力の差が大きく寿命が長いため…
born with various powers having incredibly long life spans…
可能性の追求を早々に諦め
They abandon the pursuit of possibility early on,
「運命」という言葉で解決したがる
And settle it with the word 'fate'.
[oh: NEURO’S WORST “FATE”: DEATH BY GIANT CAPYBARA. If any MTNN fan knows, it’s that this vicious beast is Neuro’s most disliked animal.]
Yako:……
Page 6
Yako:帰るんだね
You’re returning, aren’t you
魔界に
to hell
Neuro:1回だけ深呼吸に戻るだけだ
With just one deep breath I’ll be back
だがその選択のリスクは大きい
but that option has a big risk
魔界と地上は次元も時間軸も異なりすぎるのだ
Both the dimensional and time axes differ greatly between Hell and the world above.
Page 7
Neuro:仮に戻って来れたとして
For example when I come back,
それは一年後か千年後か
it could be one year, or it could be a thousand years later
はたまた並行世界の地上やもしれん
Or it's even possible I'll end up in a parallel universe's world above.
再び来れる保証が無いのだ
I can’t guarantee I’ll come back again
これもど素晴らしく混沌として可能性に満ち…
To a place filled with such wonderfully chaotic potential as this...
「謎」に満ちた世界に
a world full with “mysteries”
Yako:[迷っているネウロ]
[You’re hesitating Neuro]
［私のかける言葉は決まっていた］
[I’ve decided what words I’ll use]
Page 8
Yako:早く帰れバカ魔人
Quickly return stupid demon
そんでさっさと戻って来い
and then come right back
[oh: I would just like to say…that Neuro’s expression here in the second panel is epic. We’ve seen every other character in the series with the expression of utter shock or surprise…and now finally at the end of this series…is Neuro’s. And it was by Yako’s words, and given only to Yako.]
何余計な心配してんのよ
What? Don't worry too much.
自分の体が死にそうな時だってのに
After all, your body's on the brink of death.
[oh: hahaha notice in the next panel here he’s turned his head away to stare at the ceiling? Btw, I never noticed they had so many books in their office…that’s enough to be a small library…]
Page 9
Yako:わかってるよネウロ
I understand Neuro
あんたの体は魔界じゃないと生きれなくても
Even if your body needs to be in hell in order to live,
あんたの脳は地上じゃないと生きれないって
your brain can only be put to use in the human world.
Neuro:……
Yako：でもね
But you know
戻って来た時人間が変わる事とか
When you come back it’s not like humans will change
「謎」が減ってるかもしれないとか
or that “mysteries” will have decreased
そんな心配しなくていいよ
you shouldn’t worry about that
Page 10
Yako:人間の世界は変わらない
The world of humans won’t change
変わらない欲望で進化を続けて…
their unchanging desire to evolve will continue…
未来を作り「謎」を作る
Forging the future, creating 'mysteries'
ネウロと一緒にいて出して答え
This is the answer I have found while with Neuro.
私も同じ
And I too,
Page 11
Yako:約束するよ
Promise with you
私ももっともっと成長する
I’ll grow much much more too
あんたがいつどこに帰ってきても…
So that no matter where you return…
すぐに私を見つけられるぐらい輝くから
because I’ll shine, you’ll immediately find me
あんたに護ってもらわなくても
You don’t need to protect me
もう私は
Because I’m already
人間は
humans are
大丈夫だから
all right
[tn: ie- they’re safe because Sicks is dead]
Page 12
Neuro:フハハハハハハハハハハハ
FUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
[oh: /fangirl nosebleed]
よくぞ進化した
How admirably you’ve evolved
もはや貴様をナメクジなどと呼べんな
I can't call you a slug anymore
「ザ。ナメクジ」と呼んでやる
“Top. Slug” is what I’ll call you
[tn: as in the slug of all slugs…the top of the slug chain…]
Yako:結局最後までその程度!!
Even at the end, this is the only level I can achieve?!
[oh: This panel shows a slug with legs and sparkles around it LOL.]
Page 13
Neuro:［人間は我が輩の命を救うほどに強くあり］
[Humans were strong enough to save my life]
［この娘ももう我が輩の保護など必要無い］
[This girl didn’t necessarily need my protection as well]
[tn: …musume = girl here and not daughter righhht?]
［我が輩は何と愚かな心配をしたのだろうか!!］
[Just what was I foolishly worrying about?!!]
[oh:…so..so close to kissing adsfjkm; ]
Page 14
Neuro:留守は任せたぞ
Take care of the place while I’m gone
Yako:うん
Yeah
Neuro:相棒
Partner
[oh: ahhhhh “partner”!! And I cry [DELETED SCENE] in-between last page and this one LOL]
Page 15
Yako:［－その日の夜から夜明けまで］
[-That day from night until dawn]
［魔人ゼラが地上と魔界をつなぐ門を作ってくれるまで］
[While the demon Zera was still making a gate between here and hell]
[oh: this panel..is..so..gross.]
［２人で］
[The two of us]
［ぽつりぽつりと］
[passed the time]
［何とことない雑談をして過ごして］
[chatting over nothing really important]
［会話が切れた時には］
[Our conversation was broken]
［ネウロトラップにかけられて］
[when Neuro caught me in a trap]
［－また話して］
[-again we talked]
［－またトラップにかけられて］
[-again I was caught in a trap]
Page 16
［ふと目が覚めた時は］
[And suddenly, when I snapped out of it…]
Page 17
Zera:お口の中にあんなズケズケ踏み込まれて…
He stepped into the inside of my mouth so forcefully…
もうお嫁に行けない
I’ll never be a bride
Yako:大分雑に使われたらしい
It’s like Neuro to be so rough…
というより女だったのか
and what the hell, Zera’s a girl?
[oh: I still say Zera’s an okama.]
［来るとき］
[When you came]
［来てから］
[Because you came]
［嵐のようにイソパクトを残したのが嘘のように――］
[As if the whirlwind of impacts he left behind was a but a lie---]
Page 18
Yako:［魔人探偵脳噛ネウロは］
[Demon Detective Nougami Neuro]
［あっさり地上から消えていた］
[simply vanished for the world above]
［魔人とは何なのか］
[Just what is a demon?]
［魔界での生態とはどんなものか］
[Just what sort of ecology does Hell have?]
［それは知ろうとするだけ野暮な事だ］
[It’s senseless to try and understand it]
［地上の常識を越えた存在］
[An existence that surpasses the common sense of this world above]
［－それだけでいい］
[--that alone is enough]
Page 19
Yako: ［大事なのは］
[The most important thing]
［受け取った私が］
[that I've received]
［人間が］
[Humans received]
［その怪物が地上に残したもの］
[is what that monster left this world]
［どう変わっていくのか］
[How will we change?]
［進化…］
[Evolve…]
Elkin and I are still back and forthing over the final four lines to this page so it's subject to change
Page 20
Creepy warden:アヤ
Aya
今日も沢山手紙来てるわね
Today you received a lot of letters again
トゲが枝別れするほど嫉妬しちゃうわ
You’ve made me jealous enough to split my spines
Aya:ありがとう
Thank you
歴代総理がどんどん増えてわ
They seem to increase by each successive leader
皆つかれてるのね
It’s worn everyone out hasn’t it
Envelope:桂木弥子
Katsuragi Yako
Page 21
Text:――次号、感動のクライマックス!!!
---next issue, the exciting climax!!!
[－３年後]
[- 3 years later]
[桂木弥子…19歳]
[Katsuragi Yako…age 19]
[tn: Ahhh! Friday and the final chapter to MTNN will be out... what will happen!? Yako is 19! Will Neuro find her? And if so after that...then what? I'm sad to see it end but this chapter at least- no matter what happens in the last one later this week- has been well worth the journey/read!
Hope everyone enjoyed their Easter!! :)]
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まるで従うために逆らってるみたい
In order to abide by the rules, it seems he'd break the rules. [lit: disobey]
This is what I translated that as originally, when I first read the chapter. I don't know how close or right it is but that's what I got. Thought I'd at least suggest it?
［この娘ももう我が輩の保護など必要無い］
Instead of "daughter" how about "girl"? "Musume" can also mean "young, unmarried woman", apparently.
Hope this helps and I'm sorry I couldn't help anymore. I got stuck on some of the same lines you did. /o\
Haha- stuck on the same lines? d'oh. Matsuei-sensei always words some things very difficultly- it's hard to make up a translation that stays true to the japanese but also makes sense in english.
Thank you again :D I appreciate the help, no matter how small <3
Long essay is long, but GJ as usual! You're improving :)
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貴様の口は小うるさいだけではない
Your mouth isn’t just hard to please
"You mouth isn't just a tad chatty."
T/N: an alternative translation of 小うるさい would be 'naggy'. it doesn't quite make sense in this context.
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もう少し拡張しても裂けなさそうだな
even if just by a little expansion in the tear
"If we expand it a little by tearing it [wider]"
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下の空き部屋で準備しろ
I’ll provide a vacant room for you below
"Make your preparations in the vacant room below."
T/N: shiro is more of a command verb form
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あんたまどの魔人が地上なんぞで死んでいくのは…
if you as a demon were to die up here…
"If a demon of your calibre were to die up here..."
T/N: anta HOdo, not MAdo
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同じ魔人として見たくはありませんや
That we’re both demons, it isn’t something I want to see
"As a fellow demon, it isn't something I want to see."
T/N: just a grammatical tweak :)
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長者は長者らしく
A millionaire acts like a millionaire
"The strong behave like the strong"
T/N: 強 not 長
弱者は弱者らしく
A weak person acts like a weak person
"The weak behave like the weak"
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あんた以外の魔人って初めて見たけど
With you being an exception this is the first time I’ve seen a demon but
"This is the first time I've seen a demon besides you, but"
T/N: again, a grammatical tweak
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まるで従うために逆らってるみたい
In order to abide by the rules, it seems he'd break them.
[tn: change suggested by Lintwhite. thanks <3]
"It seems like he's defying you so he can obey."
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Neuro:魔人は大体あんなものだ
For demons, who as such are beings
"Demons are as a whole such beings."
生まれついて力の差が大きく寿命が長いため…
born with various powers having incredibly long life spans…
"Their in-born powers vary greatly. In order to extend their lifespan,"
可能性の追求を早々に諦め
the likelihood of pursuing an early defeat
"They abandon the pursuit of possibility early on,"
「運命」という言葉で解決したがる
in conclusion, the word “fate” is what they’d say it is
"And settle it with the word 'fate'."
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魔界と地上は次元も時間軸も異なりすぎるのだ
the world above and hell’s dimension and time axis differ
"Both the dimensional and time axes differ greatly between Hell and the world above."
T/N: a little confusing, so I rephrased it
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はたまた並行世界の地上やもしれん
and not even to this world’s parallel universe
"Or it's even possible I'll end up in a parallel universe's world above."
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これもど素晴らしく混沌として可能性に満ち…
to this wonderful chaos as to be full of potential…
"To a place filled with such wonderfully chaotic potential as this..."
T/N: kore HOdo, not MOdo
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何余計な心配してんのよ
No matter how much it worries you
自分の体が死にそうな時だってのに
After this time your body is on the brink of death!
[tn: Wasn’t sure if I should translate this first line to “No matter how much it worries me” but as she’s saying Neuro is hesitating- it’d be directed towards him]
"What? Don't worry too much."
"After all, your body's on the brink of death."
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あんたの体は魔界じゃないと生きれなくても
Your body doesn’t need hell in order to live
"Your body needs to live in Hell,"
あんたの脳は地上じゃないと生きれないって
and your brain doesn’t need this world to live
"While your brain needs to live in the world above."
Lit: Your [body/brain] cannot live if it's not [hell/world above]
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未来を作り「謎」を作る
making the future create “mysteries”
Forging the future, creating 'mysteries'
T/N: add a comma :) It's actually quite useful to look at the line breaks in the bubbles, since it seems to be the convention that they don't put in the necessary punctuation at the end of their sentences.
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ネウロと一緒にいて出して答え
The answer I have found with Neuro
"This is the answer I have found while with Neuro."
私も同じ
is the same
****? – do these two go together?
"And I too,"
T/N: no, they don't. This line links to the next page.
Yako:約束するよ
I promise you
"Promise with you."
私ももっともっと成長する
I’ll grow more and more
"I'll grow much much more too."
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もはや貴様をナメクジなどと呼べんな
you’ve already gone from being a slug
"I can't call you a slug anymore."
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Yako:結局最後までその程度!!
After all that rank is the final one!!
[oh: This panel shows a slug with legs and sparkles around it LOL.]
"Even at the very end, this is the only level I can achieve?!"
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［この娘ももう我が輩の保護など必要無い］
[As well, this girl didn’t necessarily need my protection]
[tn: …musume = girl here and not daughter righhht?]
T/N: hahahaha yes, 'young woman', not 'daughter' XD. Also, 'as well' usually goes at the end of the sentence rather than the beginning :)
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［我が輩は何と愚かな心配をしたのだろうか!!］
[What foolishness has made me worry I wonder?!!]
"Just what was I foolishly worrying about?!"
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［ふと目が覚めた時は］
[And when I snapped out of it…]
"And suddenly, when I woke up"
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［嵐のようにイソパクトを残したのが嘘のように――］
[Like a storm, the impact you left behind was unbelievable---]
Yako:［魔人探偵脳噛ネウロは］
[Demon Detective Nougami Neuro was]
［あっさり地上から消えていた］
[just as easily above, now gone]
"As if the whirlwind of impacts he left behind was a but a lie---"
"Demon Detective Nougami Neuro"
"Simply vanished from the world above"
T/N: these three link together. Sort of took a little liberty with the first time, since "As if the storm-like impact he left behind" sounds rather inelegant.
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［地上の常識を越えた存在］
[Our sense of existence limits us to this world]
［－それだけでいい］
[--just that is ok]
"An existence that surpasses the common sense of this world above"
"----That alone is enough."
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Page 19
Yako: ［大事なのは］
[I’ve taken on]
［受け取った私が］
[a very important task]
［人間が］
[Humans are]
［その怪物が地上に残したもの］
[what that monster left to this world]
［どう変わっていくのか］
[How will I change?]
［進化…］
[Evolve…]
T/N: !! seems like you've rearranged the lines, which changes the meanings greatly. The actual order is: 1, 4, 2, 3, 5, 6. Also, I'm not entirely sure how to TL 受け取った. She could either have received knowledge of what happened, accepted a task, or acknowledged the fact that Neuro's gone.
"What's important is,"// "How will the things that the monster left to this world-"//"I, who knows,"//"And humans-"//"How will we change?"//"And evolve..."
Lit: What's important is//The things that the monster left to this world//I who understood//Humans//How will they change?//Evolve...
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歴代総理がどんどん増えてわ
They seem to increase by each successive leader
"The number of succeeding prime ministers have increased a fair bit."
T/N: I'm guessing she's saying the government leaders keep changing
also how is this for page 19? It's still not in the order you're looking for but it's about as much MORE sense as I could pull out of it. Let me know what you think. XD
Yako: ［大事なのは］
[The most important thing]
［受け取った私が］
[that I've received]
［人間が］
[Humans received]
［その怪物が地上に残したもの］
[is what that monster left this world]
［どう変わっていくのか］
[How will we change?]
［進化…］
[Evolve…]
The problem I have with that translation is that it doesn't quite fit the grammatical structure. Going by your translation, the Japanese equivalent should be something like:
私を,人間を受け取った大事なことは,その怪物が地上に残したものだ。
I'm not 100% sure about the structure, but it should be fairly close. In this case どう変わっていくのか would be a separate sentence. However, we have
大事なのは, 受け取った私が, 人間が, その怪物が地上に残したもの, どう変わっていくのか
If we disaggregate it, we have:
大事なのは:
1. 受け取った私がどう変わっていくのか
2. 人間がどう変わっていくのか
3. その怪物が地上に残したもの, どう変わっていくのか
From which you'll get my translation. I'd break it down more and explain it, except I don't know all those grammatical terms like particles and copulas >.>
most important thing:
1. acknowledge how will I change?
2. How will humanity change?
3. that monster who left the upper world to us, how will he change?
Ah haaaa. (I think? haha) I guess the main confusing thing is the word "recieved" in the second line.. so. it's more like:
This is the most important thing
I must acknowledge
Humans
and that monster who left the world above to us
How will we all change?
Evolve...
FFFFffff- ... do I get a cookie this time? XD Or is it back to the drawing board LOL
I'd tag an 'is' on the end if that. Personally, I translate this as 'Most importantly', because it flows better in English.
Here 受け取った acts as a sort of adjective for 私, i.e. 'I, who have been acknowledged/have received'. It's just like in one of the earlier lines:
You would interpret it as 'the time when our conversation was interrupted', rather than 'when time interrupted our conversation'.
Hence I was having trouble deciphering exactly what Yako means when she says '受け取った'. What exactly is she referring to?
maybe if we arranged the first two lines together-- like so:
私が大事なのは受け取った
The important thing is that I received
followed by:
Humans received
an upper world without that monster
(that monster left behind the upper world ) <-- I'm speculating here that Yako is referring to Sicks as monster...because she would call Neuro demon or by name?
then the last two lines are just
How will we change?
Evolve...
ow my brain.
Firstly, once you rearrange it this way, the translation becomes: 'I have received the important things'.
Secondly, the remainder of the sentence would become 'the things humans and that monster left behind in the world above', which doesn't make sense. Humans haven't gone anywhere at all >.> In order to get what you said, we would need to tag '人間が' at the beginning of the sentence as well. If the mangaka really did mean what you said, then he'd have arranged the text very differently.
Sorry for not pointing this out earlier, but this bit is very definitely referring to 'the things left behind by that monster'. 'An upper world without that monster' would be 'その怪物が無いの地上'.
Yako: ［大事なのは］
[But the thing that's important]
［その怪物が地上に残したもの］
[is what that beast left here.]
［受け取った私が］
[Him taking me in, and how I,]
［人間が］
[and the humans,]
［どう変わっていくのか］
[will change from here on out]
［進化…］
[evolution…]