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Translation: Koibana Onsen 14

Fri, 28 Aug 2009 08:42:42 +0000

Chapter 14
Aizawa: Moe-Moe (TN: Nickname for Moeka)
?: I have a favor to ask you. / Is that okay?

?: Hm? Aizawa...
Moeka: What? Ai-Maho. (TN again another nickname)

Aizawa: Can you come over here?
Moeka: Y- yeah.

?: Aizawa Maho and Moeka look just like twins.
?: Between the two of them, it's like elementary school.

Moeka: What was it / you wanted to ask me?

Aizawa: The thing is....

152
Koibana Onsen
14th Spring: Moeka's Valentine Operation

153
Akiyama: Oh- / Moeka-chan's friend is coming to Koibana Onsen.

Moeka: She wants to lose her virginity to her valentine./ It's so sweet huh.
Moeka: She said she didn't want her first time to be at a love hotel.
Akiyama: I- I see.

Moeka: But you know
Moeka: I'm shocked Ai-Maho is beating me to it.
Akiyama: Don't you have someone you like?

Akiyama: Why don't you give your friends / what you'd want if you came to Koibana Onsen?
SFX: Hahaha.

154
Moeka: Huh.

Moeka: That's it!
Moeka: I'll take special care of Ai-Maho! / I'll do my best.

Nonoka: You will? / Are you sure?
Fuuka: Well.. go ahead and try.
Moeka: Okay.
Akiyama: I'll help you too.

?: Excuse me!

155
Moeka: Welcome to Koibana Onsen, where love blossoms.
Aizawa: Wow! / A kimono! How cute!
Maeda: How do you do? I'm Maeda. / Thank you for everything today.

Moeka: You're from West High School, aren't you? / I'll take your bags.
Maeda: Ah.. thank you.

Maeda: I was in the same club as Maho-chan during middle school.
Moeka: Oh! So then you were a grade above?

Aizawa: Somehow, Moe-Moe,/ you seem different from when you're at school.
Moeka: What? / Really?

SFX: Twist
Moeka: Ah!

156
Moeka: Yelp!
SFX: Clatter, Crash

Moeka: Ouch!

Moeka: I'm SO sorry!

Moeka: But these...
Moeka: are amazing! / Do you really wear these!?

Aizawa: What are you-... just hurry up and put them back!
Moeka: Oh... I'm sorry!

157
SFX: Giggle
Moeka: I'll get you some tea.

Moeka: Maeda/ Ai-Maho is popular at school.
SFX: Pour
Moeka: They often say say that we look alike, / but unlike me, she's more reliable.

Maeda: Oh- / Really?
Aizawa: Not really. / Moe-Moe is much more popular....

Moeka: No way! / Ai-Maho is-
SFX: Clatter
SFX: Splash

158
Maeda: Ah!? / Ow ow ow.
SFX: Roll

Moeka: Oh- Oh no!!
SFX: Eek!

Moeka: Take off your pants!
Maeda: Huh!?

Moeka: It's okay! / There are yukatas and I'll wash and dry your pants.
(TN: A yukata is basically a bathrobe in this context)
Aizawa: Wait.... Moe-Moe!!
SFX: Slide
Maeda: I- if you do that....

Girls: Woah!

Moeka: your underwear came off too...
Moeka: heh heh

Moeka: I'll wash them both-
SFX: Slam

Both: Oh!

Aizawa: Eep!
Maeda: Uhm.

159
Moeka: Hm... / I screwed up again.
Moeka: I wonder if Ai-Maho is mad.

SFX: Sigh

SFX: Flash
Moeka: But!

Moeka: I'll make up for it!!
Moeka: What comes next is what counts!

Moeka: Akiyama- / help me-

160
Aizawa: Maeda/ I'm sorry.

Aizawa: I think Moe-Moe means well.

SFX: Haha
Maeda: I'm fine. / I can tell she's trying to do her best for you.

SFX: Thump, thump
Madea: You have a really great friend, huh?
Aizawa: Senpai...
(TN: Literally upper class men, particularly used with students in clubs)

SFX: Rattle
Moeka: The bath is ready- Ai-Maho come-

Aizawa: Uh.. / yeah.
SFX: Shock

161
Moeka: What!? / Maeda is going to Tokyo University this spring?
Aizawa: Yeah...

SFX: Scrub, scrub
Aizawa: That's why I want to make memories.../ I never want to forget him.

Aizawa: Even if he forgets about me...

162
Moeka: You're so lucky Ai-Maho
Aizawa: Huh?

SFX: Sigh
Moeka: Mine's one sided.
Aizawa: Moe-Moe, there's a guy you like?

Moeka: Uh!? Well.. yeah.
SFX: Drip
Moeka: Anyways, it's great that you guys both like each other! / You can always take the entrance exam to Tokyo University next year.

Moeka: Then you could live together? And get sticky and have sex all the time. / For the year before you can enjoy a long distance love affair?
SFX: Pucker
SFX: Tehee

Moeka: And kiss eachother goodbye on the train platform.

Moeka: And moreover, you'll give Maeda an unforgettable night tonight.
Moeka: Just leave it to me!
SFX: Squeeze
Aizawa: Ye- yeah.

163
Moeka: Onii-chan, / is can you take care of that?
(TN: Lit, older brother, used to refer to older male friends in a familiar way)
Akiyama: Yeah!
Akiyama: I can!

Akiyama: Is this okay?
Moeka: Yes / It's perfect!
Aizawa: Wow!
Moeka: Special Valentine's Plan / The flavor of love, chocolate bath!

164
Moeka: Maeda, / would you come to the hot spring please?
Maeda: Huh? / Yeah...

Maeda: Where's Maho-cha?

Moeka: She's waiting inside.
(TN curtain reads kashikiri, indicates that it's a private bath)
Maeda: Oh.. I see.

Maeda: W-what is that?
SFX: Squeak, squeak
Maeda: That sweet smell...

165
Aizawa: Senpai...

Maeda: M- Maho-chan.
Aizawa: Please...

SFX: Gulp

Aizawa: Please eat me.
Maeda: E-... / Eat you!?

166
Aizawa: I haven't given you...
SFX: Wipe
Aizawa: your chocolate for Valentine's day yet, have I?

Maeda: What!? / That's chocolate!?
SFX: Ba-dump

Aizawa: Won't you give it a taste?
Aizawa Text: Oh, this is embarassing....
Aizawa: Is this really a good idea, Moe-Moe!?

Moeka: It's perfect, isn't it, onii-chan?
Akiyama: (If I did it to Nonoka-san, she'd be in heaven.)
Akiyama: Yeah, perfect...

167
SFX: Kiss

SFX: Lick

Maeda: It's sweet.../ and delicious.
Aizawa: M-more... try tasting other parts....

168
Aizawa: Oh.
SFX: Thump, thump

Aizawa: Ah
SFX: Flick

Aizawa: Ahh.
SFX: Lick

169
Maeda: Maho-chan!?
SFX: Stagger

Aizawa: Maeda.../ your face...
SFX: Lick
Aizawa: is covered in chocolate...

SFX: Squeeze
Maeda: M- Maho-chan!
Aizawa: Ah...

Maeda: Maho-chan, are... / you ready?
SFX: Panting

170
(TN, all bubbles are ohs and ahs, and miscellaneous sex noises)
SFX Black: Panting
SFX White: Wiggle

SFX: Clench

SFX: Kiss

SFX: Smooch

171
Aizawa: Ahh.
SFX: Thump, thump
Aizawa: Ah / Ahhh.

172
Maeda: Thank you, Maho-chan. / That was the best Valentine's chocolate ever.

Maeda: I won't ever forget tonight.
Aizawa: Senpai.

Aizawa Text: Thank you Moe-Moe
Aizawa Text: I'm really glad we came to Koibana Onsen.

Akiyama: Hmm, I want chocolate like that too.

Moeka: Then...
SFX: Thump, thump
Moeka: Why don't I give it to you?
Akiyama: What!?

Moeka: I mean...

173
Moeka: Here, / onii-chan.
Akiyama: What? / For me!?

Akiyama: Thank you! / Moeka-chan
Moeka: It's a thank you for helping me.

Akiyama: I wonder if Nonoka-san will give me chocolate?
Moeka: Huh?

Moeka: Don't worry! / She'll definitely give you some.

174
Nooka: Here, / Akiyama-san

Akiyama: Wow- / Thank you! / Nonoka-san
SFX: Thumpity-thump

Fuuka: Hey, / here's some from me too!
Akiyama: What? / Fuuka-san!?

Fuuka: But I've got a favor to ask such a popular guy as yourself...
Fuuka: Clean the damn spa properly / so that guests can use it!!
Akiyama: Ack!?

Akiyama: What about Moeka-chan!?
Fuuka: She's so tired she passed out.
Moeka: Onii-chan...
SFX: Snore

[End]

Translation: Karate Shoukoushi Kohinata Minoru 20

Wed, 19 Aug 2009 09:30:07 +0000

*This Translation is reserved for Nonbiri Scans.*

190
Haruka: Hey! Don't jump straight back!!

Haruka: Use the side step!

Minoru: Osu!

Haruka: Like that... great!

191
Minoru: Osu!
Text: 20th Episode: Playing with Fire, A Face Off with Mutou

Text: This kid is amazing....
Text: In such a short period of time, he's already starting to make the foot work and defenses his own.

Text: It's almost time...
SFX: Whip

192
SFX: Slice

Haruka: It's only been ten days...
Haruka: yet you've gotten really good.

193
Minoru: R-
Minoru: Really?

Haruka: You just need too learn one more thing and it'll be perfect.
Minoru: Huh?

Minoru: Ah...eh...one more thing?

Mutou: The defense and foot work are merely a means to move to attacking,
Mutou: not as a means of dodging. (tiny) Just learning tae-kwon-do defensive moves is pointless.

Haruka: For a small guy like you to attack an opponent, you have to kick your opponent in the chest with all your might..
Haruka: And in order to do that you need...

SFX:
Mutou: guts (TN: "balls" would be okay, probably more in character with Mutou)
Mutou: yeah.

194
Mutou: Whether your opponent does kendo or anything else, it doesn't matter.
Mutou: In the end, who wins the fight comes down to whether or not you have guts.
Minoru: Mutou-san...

Mutou: First, try and get a good hit in on me.
Mutou: If you can do that, we might be able to pull this off in time.
SFX: Scratching
Minoru: O-... Osu...

Mutou: Attack me.

195
Mutou: What?
Mutou: Why aren't you attacking?
SFX: Menacing Aura

Minoru: What the hell...?

Mutou: If you don't hurry up, I'm going to kick your ass.
Text: By body feels weak and I can't move.

196
Mutou: Shithead!!
Mutou: I told you to attack!!

Minoru: A..
Minrou: Ahhhhhh

Mutou: Dumb ass.
SFX: Slam
Minoru: Ugh!!

197
Minoru: Uh-...
Mutou: You're eyes were shut, moron.

Mutou: Hey, stand up.

Mutou: I thought you wanted to get Mamiya back?

Text: R-... Right...
Text: I'm going to take Mamiya back...

198
Text: I have to defeat that jerk...

Minoru: Let's go again!!
Haruka: He he
Mutou: Yeah!!

Text: I can't strike straight on....
Text: I have to use the foot work like Haruka told me to...

Minoru: Ugh!?
SFX: Smack

199
SFX: Bang
Minoru: Ow!

SFX: Punch
Mutou: You need to believe in what you've been taught 100%.
Minoru: Ack

Mutou: Being able to believe when it counts is nothing more that what you learned when you coughed up blood.
SFX: Whack

200
Minoru: Ugh.
SFX: Crash

Mutou: What, are you done already?
Minoru: Sh-

Minoru: Shit!
SFX: Pound

Minoru: N- not.. yet...

201
Minoru: Ahhhhhhhhhhh!

Haruka: Oh my...
Minoru: Hayah!
Mutou: Why the hell haven't you hit me yet!!
SFX: Whizz, whizz
Text: This kid...

Text: They say that you can tell a persons true character...
Text: by their face after they've been beat down.

Text: At the every least...
Text: he is not a lamb. (TN: weakling)

202
Text: Shit... I can't get a hit in.
Text: What should I do...my punches are simply not working on Mutou-san....

Text: I have to think...

Text: What do I have...
Text: That that Mutou doesn't...

Text: That's it!!

Text: From my gymnastics training.
SFX: Bang
Minoru: Shahhhh.

203
Text: Jumping power!!
Minoru: Dyahhhhh!

SFX: Foom
SFX Bubble: Swish

SFX Bubble: Thunk

Mutou: Something like that isn't going to hit me, stupid.
SFX: Bang
Minoru: Ugh.

204
Text: Shit... it failed... It's taking too long to hit him.
SFX: Bang
Text: I need a faster more powerful kick...

Text: In that case!!
Minoru: Dyahhhh!
SFX: Whizz

SFX: Slam
Minoru: Ugh...

205
Text: Shit...
Text: That sucked too.

Text: Mutou-san doesn't let his guard down even for a spin kick from the side.
Text: How can I get his guard down...

Text: Shit...
Text: If I could only get a spin kick in on his shield at some point...

Text: Shield!?

Text: Okay!!

206
SFX: Thump, thump, thump
Mutou: Huh?

Text: I can probably only do it once...
Text: If this doesn't work....

Haruka: He he, looks like he's though of something...

SFX: Dash

Mutou: Little punk

Mutou: Bring it!

207
Text: Now!!

SFX: Flip

SFX: Ba- (split between this page and the next)

208
SFX: -ng (split)

209
Text: Do-mawashi!?
(TN: Karate move, rounding heel kick)

Text: Come on!!

Text: Punk ass...

[End]

Translation: Karate Shoukoushi Kohinata Minoru 19

Thu, 13 Aug 2009 07:52:07 +0000

170
Text: Karate Shoukoushi Kohinata Minoru
171
Text: Karate Shoukoushi Kohinata Minoru
172
Hayama: Wow!
Hayama: You're amazing, Minoru.

173
Text: 19th Episode: Early Morning Sparring Practice
Minoru: I can't believe I did it ten thousand times.
SFX: Wheeze
SFX: Pant

174
Hayama: I knew it! Minoru!
Hayama: You're my number one disciple!

Hayama: Ack
SFX: Crash
Nana: Minoru-kun!!

Nana: Hang in there Minoru-kun!!

Minoru: I'm okay....
Minoru: Nana-chan...

175
Hayama: B- but... you did great Minoru.You have really accomplished something.
Hayama: I didn't think you would.

Minoru: No.... My goal is wasn't to punch the makiwara ten thousand times...

Minoru: I haven't accomplished anything.

Nana: Minoru-kun...

Minoru: Mutou-san!!

176
Minoru: After this...
Minoru: You'll teach me how to fight, won't you.

Mutou: I suppose.

177
Mutou: After another ten thousand.
SFX: Thunk

Minoru: Huh-

Mutou: ...was what I was going to say

Mutou: but I guess so.
Mutou: I'm not trying to act like a jerk anyways.
SFX: Grin

Mutou: For the time being, do something about those fists by tomorrow.

178
Minoru: O-
Minoru: Osu!

Minami: Mutou...
Mutou: Yeah?

Minami: Are you serious?
Mutou: Heh... you don't like it?

Minami: Whatever...
Minami: I'm just not going to let you use this dojo to teach someone how to fight.

179
Mutou: You tightwad.
Mutou: Chill out. We'll do it somewhere else.

Mutou: Later.
Minami: Huh.. hey..

Minami: Somewhere else?

180
Text: The next morning, 5 am.
Minoru: Seriously, calling me this early... (tiny) I think he's definitely still sleeping...

Minoru: Ow
Minoru: Ouch. I ache all over.

Text: Gym # 3
Minoru: Maybe over here somewhere.
Minoru: Oh... maybe in here?

181
Minoru: Is Mutou-san really even here?

SFX: Rattle
Minoru: Ouch.
Minoru: Good Morning.

Minoru: M- Mutou-san
Minoru: Are you here?

Minrou: Huh?
Sign: Equipment Room

Minoru: Are you in here?
SFX: Rattle

Minoru: Huh!?

182
Haruka: Oh my.
Haruka: You're early.

Haruka: Hold on a sec, I'm just changing into my gi now.
Minoru: Wha-... wha...

Minrou: I- I- I- I'm sorry!!
SFX: Slam

Mutou: What are you doing?

183
Mutou: You little pervert.

Minoru: N- N- N- No. I- I- I- I-
SFX: Wave
Minoru: w-would never peep on someone like that....

SFX: Rattle
Haruka: I'm done.
SFX: Twitch
Minoru: Ha-

Haruka: Okay, then let's
Haruka: get started already.

184
Minoru: S-
Minrou: Start what?

Haruka: Isn't that obvious? Special training.
Haruka: That's why I took the trouble to get permission to use the empty gym this early.

Minoru: Huh?
Minoru: Why is Haruka...?

Mutou: The one who incited you to this was Haruka, right?

Mutou: So I though she should share some of the responsibility.

185
Haruka: What the hell? The one who called me out of the blue last night begging for my help was you, wasn't it!
Mutou: Ahaha, don't let him know that!

Minoru: Call...? Why does Mutou-san have Haruka's phone number?
Minoru: Wait.. why is he calling her Haruka?

Haruka: Okay, first let's see what you can do.
Haruka: I'll test you.

Minoru: Wa-.... Wait a second.
Minoru: I want to fight a guy in the kendo club, I didn't intend to learn tae-kwon-do....

186
Haruka: It's okay. I won't hit you to start off with...
SFX: Spin
Minoru: Huh?

SFX: Whoosh
Minoru: Ack!!

Minoru: Wh-

Minoru; What are you... all of a sudden...

187
SFX: Awe

Text: Oh...

SFX: Swish
Minoru: Ack!

188
SFX: Tap

Haruka: Why are your eyes closed?
SFX: Thump
Minoru: Ugh...

Haruka: He really is a beginner.

Mutou: Show a little sympathy. He's only go two weeks left...

Minoru: Two weeks?

189
Haruka: Yesterday, Seiji Mamiya's official request to withdraw from the club arrived at the Hyakubukai.
Haruka: Even if the captain of that club doesn't consent to the request to withdraw, he will officially be allowed to quit two weeks after it arrives at the Hyakubukai. (tiny) Well, two weeks is the period for the captains consent.

Haruka: You don't want to let Mamiya's little brother quit, do you?
Haruka: Then you have to put an end to this within two weeks.

Mamiya: Two weeks....!!

[End]

Translation: Karate Shoukoushi Kohinata Minoru 18

Wed, 12 Aug 2009 10:33:42 +0000

Chapter 18

152
Minoru: Please...
Minoru: Please teach me how to fight.

Mutou: Oh?
153

Text: 18th Episode Crash Course, Bloody Makiwara
(TN: A makiwara is a straw post used for training in kendo, karate, and kyudo.)
SFX: Scratching
Mutou: It's not like you to say something like that.

Mutou: Learning that middle of the road, friendly karate is good for your body.
Mutou: I mean, fights hurt.

154
Minoru: I'm ready for the pain!
Minoru: But still, there's someone I need to take down!!

Mutou: Ready, huh...

Mutou: Fine, I guess.
Minoru: Huh?

Mutou: Come with me.

155
Mutou:?

Minoru: What...?
Minoru: Is that?

156
Mutou: Whaaaat?
Mutou: It's simple.

SFX: Bang

157
Mutou: Hit it like this.

Minoru: I- I see.
Minoru: If I punch this a whole bunch, I'll get stronger.

Mutou: Huh?
Mutou: Doesn't matter how many times you punch this, you won't get stronger.

158
Minoru: Huh?
Minoru: Then why....

Mutou: You misunderstood.
Mutou: I haven't told you that I'm going to teach you how to fight yet.

Mutou: Just now you said that you were ready....

Mutou: I'm teaching you because I saw that you were ready.
Minoru: O- Osu!

Mutou: Now hit this makiwara as many times as I tell you to.

159
Mutou: Well...
SFX: Ping
Mutou: this many times.

Minoru: A-
Minoru: A thousand?

Mutou: No, ten thousand.

Minoru: Ten thousand?

Mutou: Are you going to do it or not?

160
Minoru: I'll do it!! Please let me!

Hayama: Minoru

Minoru: Here I go!

SFX: Tap

Minoru: Ow!!

161
Mutou: What. You can't even do shoken properly.
(TN: Shoken is a super basic karate punch)
Mutou: What the hell have you been practicing thus far.

Text: That's right. I forgot... even though Mamiya-kun taught me.

Text: Grip each finger firmly from your pinky into the base...

Text: Pull your arms in tight
Text: Imagine an enemy in front of you....

Text: From a close distance
Text: From dead center

162
Text: Thrust!!
SFX: Whip

SFX: Bang

SFX: Bang

SFX: Bang

163
Text: 2 hours later

Mutou: Hey. Only six thousand left!!

Minami: Are you serious? Ten thousand is not something an amateur can do.

Mutou: It's nothing but what will make him improve.
SFX: Bang

Minami: This isn't really like you, Mutou.
Minami: What do you expect from that shrimp?

164
Mutou: I wonder.
Minami: It definitely isn't like you.

SFX: Squeak
Hayama: Minoru...

Nana: Hello.

Nana: What's up?

165
Nana: What's that?
Nana: What's he doing?
Hayama: Um, well that's...

Nana: Oh...

Nana: Oh shit... Minoru-kun, blood...

Nana: Please stop!! Now how are you going to get into the buffet? You idiot!
SFX: Thwack

166
SFX: Snatch

SFX: Slam
Nana: Ow!

Nana: What the hell?
Nana: What was that for!!

167
Mutou: Shut up and watch.

Nana: Ku
Nana: What the heck...

Minoru: Nana-chan
Minoru: I'm sorry, but please don't interfere.
SFX: Crack

168
Nana: Huh?

Minoru: This is what I've chosen.

Text: This is my fight.

169
SFX: Twang

Mutou: You're not even half done! Come on!
Text: Minoru-kun...

[End]

Translation: Koibana Onsen 13

Tue, 14 Jul 2009 11:02:38 +0000

127
?: Akiyama, are you sure?
Akiyama: Yep.
Text Box: This is Koibana Onsen, where love blooms.

Akiyama: I'll take care of Nonoka,
Akiyama: Fuuka, Moeka, / please have fun.

Fuuka: But still...
Fuuka: I can't believe she caught a cold when we finally got time off.

Fuuka: All right, we'll leave it to you.
Moeka: And we'll get you a souvenir.

Akiyama: Come back soon!
Fuuka: Nonoka is sick, so don't have too much sex!
Akiyama: We're not going to!

128
Koibana Onsen
13th Spring: Nonoka catches cold.

129
SFX: Wring
SFX: Drip, drip

Nonoka: I'm sorry, Akiyama-san.
Nonoka: It's all my fault, / You wanted to go with them, didn't you?

Akiyama: I couldn't leave you behind when you're sick!

Akiyama: I mean, / if you're not there it isn't any fun.
Akiyama: So hurry up and get better.

SFX: Press
Nonoka: Akiyama-san...

130
Akiyama: You're just tired from the new year.
Akiyama: There aren't any customers for today, / and you can just rest easy.

?: Excuse me!
Akiyama: Huh?

Mr. Miyahara: Um, / we're the Miyaharas. We have a reservation.

Text: What? But there weren't any reservations today...
Akiyama: P-please wait a moment.
SFX: Flip, flip

Akiyama: Your reservation was for tomorrow.

131
Mr. Miyahara: What!?
Mr. Miyahara: But I'm sure I reserved for the 7th.
Akiyama: But it's the 6th...

Mr. Miyahara: Oh! It's the 6th!?
Mrs. Miyahara: It's the same thing every time...

Mrs. Miyahara: Why does this always happen with you!?

Mr. Miyahara: Well there's nothing we can do about it now, is there!? / You should have made the reservation to begin with!!
Mrs. Miyahara: What's that!? You're putting this on me!?
SFX:

Nonoka: Welcome to Koibana Onsen, where loves blossoms.

Nonoka: We don't have any other customers today, / The rooms are available, so it's okay.

132
Akiyama: Are you sure this is okay?

Nonoka: It's fine. / We'll manage without Fuuka and Moeka somehow.
Akiyama: That's not what I meant! / I was talking about your health!!

Nonoka: I'm fine. / So, Akiyama-san, please clean the baths!
Akiyama: But- / but...

SFX: Dizzy

133
SFX: Grab
Akiyama: Nonoka-san.

Nonoka: I'm sorry.
SFX: Panting
Akiyama: I knew it, you need sleep.

Nonoka: But the guests came all the way here.
SFX: Panting
Akiyama: Nonoka-san...

Akiyama: I understand. Please leave everything to me! / So Nonoka-san, please rest....

Nonoka: But what about dinner....
Akiyama: I'll manage.

134
Akiyama: Is what I said but...
SFX: huff, huff

Akiyama: Cooking rice on a stove is a pain in the ass....
SFX: Cough
Akiyama: Well, aside from rice...

Akiyama: she said it's a simple recipe even I can handle.../ but can I really?

Akiyama: There's no use worrying about it. / I have to hang on for Nonoka's sake!
Akiyama: Oh.../ and for the guests too!!

135
Mrs. Miyahara: This is delicious!
SFX: Sigh

Mr. Miyahara: The rice is good too.
Mrs. Miyahara: It really is delicious, huh?

Text: Nonoka was right!
SFX: Bubble
Mrs. Miyahara: Would you like some more alcohol?
Mr. Miyahara: Huh? Yeah!
Text: Even someone without any skill can make do with nabe.
(TN: Nabe is a stew made with all the ingredients seen in the picture. Basically anything vegetable or meat/fish/etc... can go in it, and it's stupid easy to make)

136
Akiyama: I wonder if Nonoka is okay.

Akiyama: Nonoka-saaan.
Akiyama: How are you feeling?

Akiyama: She's really out like a light....
Akiyama: How's her fever? / Seems like it's gone down....

Akiyama: She fell asleep in your kimono too, huh?
Akiyama: It looks like she's sweating, / She should probably get changed.

137
Akiyama: Nonoka-san / Nonoka-san / won't you change your clothes?

Akiyama: She won't wake up, huh.... Well I guess I'll have to do it.
SFX: Rustling

Akiyama: Huh?
Akiyama: What's up with this?
SFX: Rustling

SFX: Thump, thump....
Text: If Nonoka woke up right now, what would I say!?

138
Akiyama: I...
Akiyama: I...
Akiyama: should...
Akiyama: w-..
Akiyama: I should wipe off your body, right?

SFX: Wiping

SFX: Wiping

139
SFX: Ah
SFX: Squeeze

Text: What am I thinking at a time like this!!
SFX: Wipe
SFX: Rub
Text: I have to quickly finish wiping her off and put her pajamas on.

SFX: Tie
Akiyama: Sigh

140
Akiyama: Somehow, / I got through it.
SFX: Sweating

Akiyama: (Even still, I managed to withstand it!!)
Akiyama: I feel like going back to my room and "wiping" something...
SFX: Hot

Nonoka: Akiyama-san

Nonoka: Thank you.
Akiyama: D-did I wake you up?

Nonoka: Um... / How are the Miyaharas?
Akiyama: Huh?

141
Akiyama: I think they're in the outdoor bath, / getting along nicely.
Mrs. Miyahara: Ah
Mrs. Miyahara: Ahh

Mr. Miyahara: Koibana Onsen is the best, huh.
SFX: Squish
Mrs. Miyahara: Ah
Mrs. Miyahara: Ahh
Mrs. Miyahara: It really is the best.
Mrs. Miyahara: Ah
Nonoka: Really? / That's great.

142
Nonoka: I'm really / sorry.
Nonoka: I ended up pushing everything onto you.

Akiyama: No really, / don't worry about it. / I didn't think I could turn them away like that either.
Akiyama: And moreover...

Akiyama: I was really happy that they complimented my cooking, the first thing I ever made myself.
Akiyama: The nabe you taught me how to make was a big hit.

143
Nonoka: I.../ Even though I've never had a cold until now.
Akiyama: What!?

Nonoka: It's probably your fault that I caught the cold!
SFX: Bam
Akiyama: What!?
Akiyama: What did I do!?

Nonoka: Well, you're a reliable guy, so...
Nonoka: Since I have a reliable guy by my side, / I've felt relaxed...
Nonoka: I let my guard down.../ and caught a cold.

Nonoka: Are you spoiling me?
Akiyama: Huh?

Akiyama: I'm not spoiling you at all!

Akiyama: You're work so hard it's too hard, don't you think?
Akiyama: Rather, I think I should be spoiling you a whole lot more.

144
Nonoka: Okay then/ spoil me more today.
Akiyama: Huh?
SFX: Grab

Akiyama: Oh...

Nonoka: Thank you.
Akiyama: It's nothing...

SFX: Hahaha
Akiyama: this kind of thing, as much as you like.
Text: This is bad...

SFX: Rub
Akiyama: Ouch....
Text: It's so hard from before that it's painful.

SFX: Slide
Akiyama: Ack!!

145
Nonoka: Will you warm me up?

Akiyama: What? / You're cold!?
SFX: Squeeze
Nonoka: More....

Nonoka: Hold me tighter.
SFX: Panting

Akiyama: Nonoka, are you okay?
SFX: Panting

SFX: Pant

SFX: Ah..
SFX: Ahn..

146
Akiyama: We can't.

Akiyama: If we go any further.../ I...
Akiyama: I won't be able to control myself!

Nonoka: I can't..
Nonoka: control myself anymore either.
SFX: Tug

SFX: Uh..
SFX: Ah
SFX: Uh...

Akiyama: Is it really okay?
SFX: Wriggle
SFX: Nod

147
(TN: All of the bubbles are panting, and various moaning)
SFX: Slowly

SFX: Grab

148
(TN: Ditto above with the panting and moaning)
SFX: Twitching

SFX: Heavy heart beating (TN: across all the bottom panels)

149
Akiyama: Nonoka, / are you okay?
Nonoka: Yes.

Mrs. Miyahara: Ah--- / More!
Mrs. Miyahara: Ahh.

Nonoka: It's the Miyaharas, huh.
Akiyama: Yeah.

Nonoka: I want.../ more too...
Akiyama: Huh!?

Nonoka: Please spoil me rotten tonight.
Akiyama: Ye- Yes!

150
Text Box: The next day.

Fuuka: Did you say guests came?
Fuuka: That sucks.

Akiyama: Not really...
Moeka: I brought you a souvenir!

Fuuka: Nonoka, are you better already?
SFX: Tug
Nonoka: Yes! / All because Akiyama took care of me.

Fuuka: Then I'll have him take care of me when I get sick.
Moeka: Oh! / Moeka too!

Akiyama: What!? That's a little...

Fuuka: I knew it, you shoved an "injection" into her, didn't you/ that would work I bet...
Nonoka: Fuuka!

[End]

Translation: Koibana Onsen 12

Wed, 03 Jun 2009 09:56:09 +0000

Chapter 12

103
Announcer: Special Christmas Event
Announcer: Koibana Onsen, where love blossoms,
Announcer: Welcomes you to

Announcer: our matchmaking party!!

104
Text: 12th Spring: Christmas Matchmaking Bash
Koibana Onsen

105
Announcer: Now, we'd like everyone to introduce themselves / Starting with bachelor number 1-
Kobayashi: I'm Keiji Kobayashi. I'm 26 years old and I work at advertising agency
Text: This is bad.
Announcer: Next up, bachelor number 2.

Fuuka: Why do I have to participate in the matchmaking!??
Nonoka: Because there were too few female applicants...
Moeka: Besides, you're the one who planned this, so you have to face the music.
Text: Hahaha
Akiyama: Do your best!

Text: I wanted to wear the santa costumes too-
Nonoka: Next, bachelorette number 6.

Akiyama: It's Fuuka's turn!
Fuuka: Oh!/ Right...
Button: Fuuka Nonohara, 24
Fuuka: I'm Fuuka Nonohara. I'm 24 years old and I run Koibana Onsen.
SFX: Sway
Akiyama: Isn't she getting into it!?

106
Nonoka: So now you have some free time as you walk around the lake... / Knock yourselves out!

SFX: Sullen
Fuuka: Sigh

Fuuka: No one's talking to me...

Nonoka: Sis, Mr. Kumgaya is all by his lonesome.
Fuuka: Nonoka...
SFX: Plunk

Nonoka: Please go talk to him.
Fuuka: No way.. What a pain in the ass...

Fuuka: Hey, you. / Yuuto... Kumagaya?

107
Fuuka: Aren't you bored all by yourself in a place like this?
SFX: grin
Fuuka: Why don't you come over by everyone else?

Yuuto: I'm - / all right. I'm no good at these kinds of things...
SFX: drip, drip

Fuuka: What!?
Yuuto: Huh?

Fuuka: Then why the heck did you apply!? / I'm only in this to make the numbers even!! / If you hadn't come I wouldn't have had to do something so embarassing.
Yuuto: I- / I'm sorry. / I'm sorry.

108
Yuuto: My mother applied for me.. / I didn't have a choice.
Fuuka: Oh.

Yuuto: I'm not really looking for a girlfriend really.

Fuuka: Hey..
Fuuka: Do you really mean that?

Yuuto: I do!! / I like being by myself.
Yuuto: Not everyone believes that you have to be with the person you like / just because it's Christmas.

Fuuka: H- hey!
Yuuto: So leave me alone!
SFX: Thud, thud...
Fuuka: Oh, geeze.

109
Akiyama: So next is mixed bathing time!
Moeka; You can participate if you want to.
Nonoka: Us Santa girls and the Reindeer will wash your backs, so please come.

?: What? A mixed bath.
?: Let's go.
?: It'll be fun with everyone.

SFX: Grab.
Yuuto: Ack!

Fuuka: C'mon, let's go.
Yuuto: I- I'm fine!

110
Yuuto: Oh.

Text: Hahaha
Text: No way.
Text: Giggle.
Text: Ahaha.
Fuuka: They're slowly pairing up.

Fuuka: A few couples might even come of this.

Fuuka: I planned this event.

Fuuka: It's really worth it.

111
Fuuka: You're jealous aren't you?

Yuuto: I'm not jealous
SFX: Drip, drip
Yuuto: I can't get in a hot spring with this many people.

Yuuto: I mean look at my body / it's embarrassing.
Fuuka: Oh? Why? / It's a good body.
SFX: pat, pat
Yuuto: Ack
Fuuka: I thought you'd be more flabby.

Yuuto: I really like it though.
SFX: Shock

Yuuto: I- I'm going to the indoor bath!
Fuuka: Huh? Hey! / Wait up!

112
Curtain: Men

SFX: Rattle
Yuuto: Sigh

SFX: Rattle
SFX: Slip

Yuuto: Fuuka-san!
Fuuka: Yo.

Yuuto: This is the men's bath!?
Fuuka: Yep.

Fuuka: No other guys are coming, so
Fuuka: Since we're both partnerless, let's hang out.

113
Yuuto: Um.../ Aren't you embarrassed?

Fuuka: Wait, by that do you mean / that my body's not fit for others to see?
SFX: Shock
Yuuto: T-/ That's not what I meant?

Fuuka: I've really lost confidence, / lately.
SFX: Sigh
Fuuka: It's been nothing but guys that aren't interested in my body.

Yuuto: N-/ No way!

SFX: Scratch, scratch
Yuuto: At least with for me..

Fuuka: Thanks! / I'll wash you back as a thank you!
Yuuto: Huh!?

114
Fuuka: You're back is really big, / it's a big job to wash it.
SFX: Scrubbing
Yuuto: I'm sorry.

Fuuka: What a pain in the ass.
SFX: Flash
Yuuto: Huh!!

SFX: Rub, rub
Yuuto: Ack!
SFX: Close

115
SFX: Wipe, wipe
Fuka: How is it? / Does it feel good?
Yuuto: Ah.../ Stop...

Yuuto: Please stop!
SFX: Clatter
Fuuka: What are you running away for.

Yuuto: I'm sorry!/ This is the first time I've had a woman rub up on me...
SFX: Thumping
Yuuto: My hearts going to tear apart.

Yuuto: Doesn't it make you sick..
Yuuto: to touch me...

Fuuka: What? What's with that?

116
Fuuka: Have a little more confidence in yourself. / Your body feels good because it's stretchy.
SFX: Slide
Yuuta: What!?

Fuuka: Look

Fuuka: I mean my heart is pounding too.
Fuuka: Just the same as yours, right?

117
Fuuka: Be a good boy.
SFX: Kiss

Fuuka: If you don't start it, who will..

SFX: Shock
Fuuka: Anything is fine, why don't you try something appealing.
SFX: Slide

118
Yuuto: Hey/ are you listening?
SFX: Thump
Fuuka: H- hey...

?: Fuuka, you're over doing it!!
Fuuka: I'm sorry. I'm sorry...

119
Akiyama: Eek, he was heavy.
SFX: drag
Nonoka: Akiyama-san, are you okay?
SFX: Hahaha
Fuuka: You practically collapsed too, Akiyama.

Akiyama: You're "service" is a little bit too stimulating.
Fuuka: Really?

Fuuka: But he came all the way to Koibana Onsen, I wanted to give him a few good memories.

Fuuka: I mean depending on how open his heart is, / he could probably meet someone here like you two met.
Akiyama: Fuuka-san
Nonoka: Sis.

120
Fuuka: Oh!/ You okay?
Yuuto: Fuuka-san

Yuuto: I- / I'm sorry, I...
Fuuka: No,/ I'm the one who is sorry.

121
Fuuka: It looks like it was too intense for you, / but how was it?
SFX: Flop

Yuuto: It was wonderful.
Yuuto: It felt../ good.

Fuuka: Didn't it!? / So maybe you'll have a little more resistance? / And after this you'll try talking to girls...
Yuuto: But, / what would I talk about...

Fuuka: Anything is okay! Hobbies, or work, or there's other things, right? / Even if you've got no one else, I'm here. Don't worry!

Yuuto: Fuuka-san.

Yuuto: Umm.../ Do you know anything about doll houses?
Fuuka: Huh? What? / I don't....
Yuuto: Oh, I see...

122
Nonoka: It's time to drink!
?: It's time to relax and drink. / Please enjoy our cuisine, which we are very proud of.
SFX: All alone

Nonoka: Sis, Kumagaya-san is...
Fuuka: Let it be!/ Have a look.

Yuuto: Um... Um... / d- doll
SFX: Thunk
Yuuto: My hobby is building doll houses!!

?: You said...
SFX: Confusion
?: doll houses?

123
Moeka: Oh! I know!
Moeka: You build tiny houses and rooms?
?: Oh?
?: Small ones?

Yuuto: I- / I know this is me saying it but, / despite my size, my hands are really dextrous...
SFX: Drip, drip
SFX: Thump, thump
?: Oh!/ That's amazing!!

Girl: I actually really like that./ I've never made one before though.
?: Oh? What?
?: What's with that?

Yuuto: There's tons of them in my house, do you want to come and see them?
SFX: thump, thump

Moeka: What!? / I want to see them too!
Guy: Me too!/ I wanna see to!

Fuuka: Let's all go see them together, is that okay?
Yuuto: Yeah...

124
SFX: misc laughing
Nonoka: Kumagaya looks like he's having fun!/ That's great/
Fuuka: Yeah.

125
Moeka: It's confession time!
Nonoka: For the couples, we'll have you stay the night in the same room!

Guy: I like you!
Girl: Me too!
Nonoka: Congratulations!

Guy: I like you!
Girl: Yeah, I like you too!
SFX: Clapping

Guy: I liked you from the moment I saw you!
Girl: Me too!
SFX: Ooo.

Moeka: Great!!
Moeka: One after another couples are born!!

Nonoka: Last is Kumagaya-san.
SFX: Thump, thump
Yuuta: Y- yes.

Nonoka: The only girl left is Fuuka Nonohara. Will everyone couple up!?
SFX: Thump, thump
Text: I can't help it.. I'll be with him just for tonight.

126
Yuuto: Moeka-chan...
SFX: Shock

Yuuto: I like you.

Moeka: I'm an emcee, so I can't.
SFX: Collapse
Fuuka: I knew love wasn't that kind. / Come again next year!
Fuuka: I didn't just loose to Nonoka, but Moeka too!

[End]

Translation: Koibana Onsen 11

Wed, 03 Jun 2009 08:36:37 +0000

79
Text: 11th Spring: Because we're connected.... even though we're connected...
Koibana Onsen

80
Akiyama: Nonoka-san
SFX: Dip
Nonoka: Hmm..
Akiyama: Pant
Akiyama: Pant

Akiyama: Day
SFX: Squish
Nonoka: Ah..

Nonoka: Ahh
SFX: Grab
Akiyama: after day

Akiyama: doing this...
Nonoka: Ah-
SFX: Thrust

81
Akiyama: is it okay!?
SFX: Bang, bang....
All text bubbles in this pannel: Ah.

Akiyama: Oh.../ I'm going to...
Nonoka: Ah.
Nonoka: Ahh.
Akiyama: Come
SFX: Twitch, twitch
SFX: Squeeze
Akiyama: Nonoka-san!!!
Akiyama: Oh...

82
Akiyama: This again!?

Akiyama: What the heck am I doing? / Even though I did it with Nonoka-san...
SFX: Scrub, scrub
Akiyama: I'm still having wet dreams every night.

Akiyama: It's been a month since our first time...
Akiyama: we haven't been alone together since then....

Akiyama: Nonoka's smooth skin../and sweet smelll.
Flashback SFX: Lick
Flashback SFX: rustle
Flashback Nonoka: Ah
Akiyama: Soft breasts . that slick feeling, pressed together...

83
Text: I though that if I experienced it these feelings would calm down.
Akiyama: It's hard again...
Akiyama: Even though I've been masturbating quite a bit...
Text: Rather the opposite, I'm more excited.

Akiyama: Ah- / I want to have sex with Nonoka.
Akiyama: Even a kiss would be fine / I just want to be alone with her.

Fuuka: Akiyama...
Fuuka: He's in anguish...

Fuuka: What with the holiday season and the end of the year... / it sucks but, until the new year, I can't give him time off.

84
Nonoka: Good morning!

Nonoka: Fuuka... / You're up early?
SFX: Sleepy
SFX: Mumble
Fuuka: Oh, ah..
Fuuka: Good morning Nonoka!

SFX: Smack, smack

Nonoka: All right!
SFX: pang

Nonoka: I'll do my best today with a smile!
SFX: Whip
?: Oh!

Moek: But, Moeka is going to sleep a little longer.
SFX: Crash

85
Fuuka: Nonoka

Fuuka: After that one time, have you done it with Akiyama since?
Nonoka: Huh?
Nokoka image SFX: Slide

Fuuka: Uhm well, / what if you slept in Akiyama's room at night?

86
Nonoka: No way!

Nonoka: If we changed that, then Koibana Onsen wouldn't function properly.
Nonoka: At a particularly busy time like now, / if we don't get plenty of sleep we can't function.

Fuuka: Nonoka, in that respect you're really serious huh.
Fuuka: But Akiyama may have gotten the wrong idea.
Nonoka: What?

Fuuka: Was he really terrible? / It was his first time, you should just let that slide.

Nonoka: But... I don't really know.../ what's good and bad...
SFX: Shock

Fuuka: Did it feel good? / How big was it?
Nonoka: I don't know!!!!!

87
Nonoka: Everyone

Nonoka: is really
SFX: Thump, thump

Nonoka: lovey-dovey

Nonoka: today.
SFX: Panting

88
SFX: Panting
SFX: Thump, thump
Text: Again, what should I do...!?

Nonoka: Up till now I've caught glances of the customer's fooling around...
Around Nonoka SFX: Thump, thump
Nonoka: but ever since I had sex with Akiyama, I've notice it more / and ever time I see it I remember the time with him....

Nonoka: What happened that night

Nonoka: I have to keep it in moderation! / It won't just cause problems for the customers, but for Moeka and Fuuka too.
SFX: pang

Nonoka: But..
Nonoka: I really want have sex with Akiyama.

Akiyama: Nonoka-san
SFX: Dizzy

89
Nonoka: eek!
SFX: crash
Akiyama: Ow!

SFX: Slide
Nonoka: I-/ I'm so sorry!
Akiyama: No, it was my fault...

Akiyama: Nonoka-san
SFX: Thump

SFX: Thump
Nonoka: Akiyama-san

90
Akiyama: Are you okay?
Nonoka: Yes, I'm sorry.

SFX: Grip

SFX:Thump....

Customer: Um...
Guy: What time was it that we have the outdoor bath?

Nonoka: Oh, Mr. and Mrs. Iizumi, you're from 8 to 9.
Akiyama: Is that okay?
SFX: Poof

Guy: Oh, that's right.
Girl: See, I told you.

Nonoka: I'm..going to go prepare dinner.
Akiyama: Yeah.../ I'm have to clean...

91
Akiyama: Ah!
SFX: Scrubbing frantically
Akiyama: I just want one kiss!!

Akiyama: Nonoka-san

Text: Akiyama is about to break...
SFX: Smooch
SFX: Spin

SFX: Ack, hack, pew (spitting)
Fuuka: I wonder if Nonoka is okay...

92
SFX: Rattle

SFX: Rattle
Nonoka: Moeka? / You're late...

Akiyama: I'm sorry. / Moeka asked me to help you.
SFX: Thump, thump

Nonoka: What did Moeka do this time?
Akiyama: She knocked over a tray.

93
Nonoka: She's the same as ever.
SFX: Wish
Akiyama Text: hahaha

SFX: Thump, thump

Text: Alone together with Nonoka

SFX: Tremble
Text: this hasn't happened in a month....

Akiyama: I can't take it anymore...

94
Akiyama: Nonoka-san!!
SFX: Grap

Nonoka: Ah... Akiyama-san?
SFX: Kiss
Nonoka: We can't../ We have to keep it...
SFX: Slip

95
4 small bubbles: Panting
Akiyama: Just a little bit!
Akiyama: Just let me be like this for a little bit. / I've been wanting to touch you so badly I can't stand it.
Nonoka: Akiyama-san...

Text: This feeling... this is it...
SFX: Squeeze

Text: No! We can't!

96
?: Uh
?: Ah

97
Couple: Ah!
Nonoka: I'm sorry.
Akiyama: We'll hurry up and change the futons!!
Mr. Izumi: No, no.
Mrs. Izumi: Take your time.

Mrs. Izumi: Koibana Onsen sure is amazing, huh.
Mr. Izumi: Yeah, even the staff feel like having sex.
SFX: Smack

Nonoka: I-I'm so sorry.

98
Akiyama: Is she mad?

Nonoka: The customers saw us acting so shamefully.

Akiyama: I.. I'm sorry.
Akiyama: I got carried away!
Nonoka: No!

Nonoka: I felt the same way you did.
Nonoka: I'm really happy that you came after me.

99
Nonoka: But my work here at Koibana Onsen is important too, and
SFX: Sniffle
Nonoka: W- what should I do?

SFX: Pan
Akiyama: What am I doing!?
SFX: Sniffle

Akiyama: Nonoka-san, / Next time, we should give Fuuka and Moeka a day off.

100
Akiayama: It's pretty bad that only we got a day off. / Since that was the reason that we got to have sex
Akiyama: Return the favor../ I mean.

Akiyama: If' we are going to put our energy together and make Koibana Onsen a lively place,
Akiyama: I think that's also important too.

Akiyama: I'm going to do my best!
Nonoka: Yes!

101
Akiyama: I'm so terrible.
Text: I was only thinking of myself.
Akiyama: I made Nonoka cry...
Text: Even though we are connected...

Text: I need to become a man that can take care of her.
Nonoka: Akiyama-san

Nonka: I love you.
SFX: Kiss
Akiyama: Huh?

Akiyama: M-/ Me too!!

102
Text Box: And even though I said that...
SFX: Bounce, bounce
Fantasy Nonoka: Ah... Ah.. etc..
SFX: Squeeze
Akiyama: I had another wet dream...

Akiyama: My heart and body disagree...
SFX: Sob
Akiyama: I don't get love!!

Fuuka: Not again...

(End)

Translation: Crash! 2

Wed, 27 May 2009 07:50:59 +0000

51

52
Text Box: Infestation
Text Box: One day in the beginning of summer, we were writing a manuscript / til one in the morning.
SFX: Scratch, scratch
Text: Acchan was helping me.

Yuka: Hey, Acchan about this point...
SFX: Dizzy
Text: I wear glasses when I work.
Acchan: Ah, yes?

Text: Acchan

Acchan: There's so many of them!!
Text Box: Frozen
Text: Huh?

Text Box: And there were, / TONS.
SFX: Buzz
Text: Strangely gigantic.

Both: Eeeeek! When did they get in!?
?: What!?
?: Bees!?
?: Why!?
Sub Text: Both of us hate bugs.

Text Box: We asked my little brother for help.
Text: They won't come down from the ceiling.
SFX: Snap
Text: He tried fighting them with a rubber band.

Text Box: We shook my dad away and asked for help.
Text: Half-asleep
SFX: Smack

Text Box: In the end it turned out to be some kind of giant flying ant. / Just thinking about where they came from and how long they've been there is frightening.
Text: Nothing omitted.

53
Text: Would you like to be famous?

Kiri: Famous?

Text: A word
There may be those that noticed but, he's the young guy that showed up on the first page of the last chapter. Actually, he appeared in a previous manga "Dancing Baby Karin". He was Etaro-kun.

I was really happy that people that saw him in this story told me they recognized him.

This kid.

Etaro: Are you okay?
He was such a popular character with readers that I ended up using him. Please read "Dancing Baby Karin"
Blatantly Advertising here!

54
Kiri: So, / does it pay?
SFX: Cha-ching

Hana: If it pays, it pays / If it doesn't, it doesn't. It's different per person.
Kiri: Hmm, then no way!

Text: Goodbye.
Door: White Star

SFX: Shuffle
Door: White Star

Kiri: So, Don't follow me!!
Hana: Well, this is my home, so maybe you do want to!?
Kiri: What!? You should have said something! So annoying!!
Hana: But this is a talent agency?

55
Kiri: Huh?

Text:

Hana: Well right now everyone's out right now so I'll talk to you but.. / why'd you come here?
Text: The president and chief are both on business...
Text: Talent agency?
Kiri: I was told I could make money here/ from the old dude at the ramen shop.
SFX: Spin, spin
Hana: Ramen? Who the heck is that?

Kiri: And, who the hell are you!? (continues off bubble) Is this an interview?

Hana: I'm the boss's daughter. / I help out scouting talent.

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Hana: Kiri Kurose, wasn't it? / How old are you?
Kiri: I'm a sophomore.
Text: 16
Hana: That's the same as me.

Hana: You're worried about whether you'll make money at this age... do you really need money that bad?
SFX: Bob

Kiri: I NEED IT.
SFX: Cackle

Kiri: My dad lent money to this friend of his good-naturedly / and that friends stabbed him in the back and ran off with it.
Kiri: This year my family was debt-ridden all of a sudden.
Text: Do those kind of things really happen...
Do these kind of things really happen...

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Kiri: But, / at this point all we can do is pay it back.
Kiri: So I want to help out as much as I can.
Text: Wow...
Text: He really has a respectable side to him...

Kiri: But no matter what I end up getting fired... / just because some customers complain.
SFX: Stomp
Text: And he hasn't figured out why that is yet....

Kiri: *sigh* I have to find another job.
Text: I'm sick of this..
SFX: Oh!
Text: I just had a great idea...

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Hana: So how about a / celebrity job!

Kiri: Celebrity job?
Hana: Yes! We'll forget about whether it will work out or not and you do what you can... / we'll give you proper hourly wages.
Kiri: How much?

Hana: 850 Yen
(TN: 100 yen = $1)
SFX: Hmmm.

Hana: Ugh.... / 855 yen!
SFX:

SFX: Heh

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Kiri: I'll do it!
SFX: Smack

Text: Yahoo! I've got a job!
Hana: (And in the mean time I'll make up a contract...)
Text: I won't let you escape!
SFX: Clench

Text: For the time being...
SFX: Grin

Text: I've got 1!!!
Hana: In other words...

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Hana: This is Kiri Kurose. He's sixteen.
SFX: Tehee
SFX: Tada!
Kiri: Nice to meet you. I'm the 855 yen an hour celebrity.

Chouko: Wait a sec, Hana! I haven't heard about this! And 855 yen!
Hana: I'm sorry mama, it's just for a little while, please!
Kiri Text: Yo
Manager Text: Nice to meet you.
Sub Text: The two of them came back...

Chouko: I guess we've got to.. I believe that Hana's eyes...er nose isn't wrong. / I can't wait for the other four.
Kiri Text: Who's this lady?
Kiri Text: The president?

Kiri: The other four?
Hana: I'm planning a celebrity group of five to debut, including you.

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Kiri: I won't debut solo!?
Text: Huh?
SFX: Shock

Kiri: I'm sorry, I think I'll quit.
Hana: That was fast!

Hana: B- but what about your 855 yen wages?
Kiri: Okay, I'll do it.
Text Box: Simpleton.

Character Intro
Hana Shiraboshi
Sophomore
Blood type O
160 cm tall

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Text: For now the only way to keep him is with wages.
Kiri: But

Kiri: If I don't feel like it anymore, I'll quit. / Remember that.

Hana: I get it.

Text: But get one thing...
SFX:

Text: I'm not going to let you quit that easily...
Text: You can't just
Text: half ass things here!
Hana: Mama

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Hana: I have one more thing to ask you...
Hana: If I can get all five of them together, then

Hana: can I produce them myself?

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Hana: I can see it
Hana: in my head
Hana: the five of them in the future.

Chouko: Sure

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Chouko: This time we'll leave it to Hana.

Manager: Boss!
Chouko: However, / our company has a plan as well...

Chouko: That's right, the condition is that you have to get them together in under a month.
Chouko: If you can't, it will go to another newbie. / How does that sound?
Hana: Great!

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Hana: Yes! I'll put my heart into it!
Kiri: She's going to... produce?
Chouko: She's my daughter/ she ought to be talented.

Kiri: Heh
SFX: Grin
Kiri: It's gotten interesting.

Kiri: Let me rake in the cash, producer!
SFX: Mwahaha
SFX: Cha-ching
Text: Yen
SFX: Shock
Text: It's all me from here on.

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Text: First I have to find the members.
Text Box: Sunday, Central Park

Hana: They say that criminals come back to the scene of the crime.
Text: They probably won't show up.

Text Box: So
Kiri: Why do I have to come with you?
Hana: They're you team members!

Kiri: By the way, I have a basic question for you?
Hana: What?

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Kiri: What does a celebrity do?
Text: So basic...!!

Hana: What do you mean... they dance and sing
Kiri: Dance? I've never done that before.
Hana: That's fine! / From now on we'll give you fully lessons from the beginning.

Kiri: Such a pain in the ass...
Kiri: My limit is warm up exercises
(TN: In Japan they have a set tape of warm up exercises that they do before sports activities. Aka, he barely even warms up.)

SFX: Chomp, chomp
Text: Is he really okay?
Hana: (I mean I did choose him after all...)
SFX: Worn out.
Text: And since then I haven't had a bloody nose yet..

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Text: I'm afraid for the future...
SFX: Jingle, jangle

Kiri: What is it?
SFX: Twang, twang
Hana: It's a street performer, / I often see him here.

Kiri: He sucks!
SFX:

Character Intro
Kiri Kurose
Sophomore
Blood Type B
175 cm tall

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Hana: He can hear you!!! (continues out of bubble) Look! He's coming this way!
Kiri: I said it so he could hear me!
SFX: Thud, thud
SFX:

Guy: You're a rude jerk!
Text: Ack, what is he, like out of the seventies?
Kiri: Well the way you're playing even I could play better..
Guy: I don't want to hear that from some showy guy like you.

SFX: Bang

SFX: Wah!
Hana: What the hell? What are you doing with that?
SFX: Strum
Text: This stinks.

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Kiri: I haven't played the guitar in ages/ maybe I'll play a song.
Bubble edge text: He picked the fight with me anyways...
Hana: Can you really play the guitar?
Bubble edge text: You're not just saying that?

SFX: Grin

Kiri: Kiri Kurose / Hobbies singing and playing the guitar.

Kiri: As my producer you should remember that!

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SFX: Plink

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SFX: dapo-
Box: Let me explain! / When Hana feels the powerful aura of an idol, she gets a nose bleed like this.

Hana: (But I don't get it... / Aside from the guitar../ his singing is that great...)
SFX: daridari
Text Box: In spite of that

Text Box: I don't know why but...
SFX: Chattering
Text Box: He attracts attention.

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Text Box: People are gathering

Text Box: And they are starting / to smile.

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Hana: I knew it, / it looks like nothing is wrong with my nose.

SFX: Strum
SFX: Clapping
SFX: Cheering

SFX: Su

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Kiri: So each song is 300 yen! / Thanks you again!
SFX: Swish
Girl: Oh..
Girl: O-okay...
SFX: Cha-ching

Hana: Knock it off!
Hana Text: So in the end it was money.
Kiri: You're annoying! You got a problem?
SFX: Rushing over

Guitar Guy: Police officer, that's the guy!! / He beat me up and took my guitar!!
Kiri Text: Huh?
Police officer text: What!?

Police officer: What's your name?
Kiri: Huh? I'm an idol!
Police officer: Idol? What agency?
SFX: Eeek!
Hana: Um...

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Hana: Oh!

Hana: UFO!
Other: Huh!
SFX: Swipe
Box: Escape

Police officer text: Oh! / Hey!!!
Guitar Guy: Oh, my guitar is back!

Kiri: What the hell? And I'd just gotten than money!

Hana: That wasn't the problem!
Text Box: Argh / Come one.
Text Box: Seriously!

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Text: He's such a mess!
SFX: Grumble

SFX: Rumble

Kiri Text: Hey!
Hana: So- hungry... (outside) suddenly exhausted
SFX: Collapse

Shop sign: Ramen
Kiri: We'll go to the ramen shop I go to. / First let's get some food in you. (outside) Just so you know, you're paying for yourself.
SFX: Wheeze
SFX: Limp
Box: Batteries worn out.

Ramen Dude Text: Welcome!
Ramen Dude: Oh, you brought your girlfriend this time?
Kiri: She's not my girlfriend!!

Ramen Dude: Huh?
Hana: Huh?

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Ramen Dude: Love Child!?
Hana: Daddy!?

Text: Order up!

Hana: The ramen shop you introduced me to was my dad's shop! / I had no idea. / Didn't it used to be an oden shop?
(TN: Oden is soup that's been stewing from 3 hours to up to two days)
Kiri: So you guys were related... the mystery is solved.

SFX: Grin
Dad: So, what do you think, Hana?
Dad: You liked him right away, right?
SFX: Slurp, slurp

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Kiri: As if, all she does is get screeching mad at me.
Text: So annoying... what's gives...

Hana: Yep
SFX: Plop
Hana: I like it!

Hana: It's really rare, for someone to get me this excited.

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Hana: And I found four others just like him.
Dad: That's great! 4 more.

Hana: I'll deffinitely / find them/ and scout them

Hana: and I'll make the five of them top idols!

Dad: I see.

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Dad: Well eat up child and do your best.
Hana: Yeah!
TV: So today we welcome the super popular Mr. Shinozaka.

TV: And what's this! Just for tonight we have a special guest!
SFX: Munch

Kiri: <choke>, ack!! <choke> It's that guy from the other day!!
Hana's bowl: Seconds
Hana: Huh?
SFX: Choking

SFX: drop

TV: This is his son, Rei Shinozaka.

Text Box: I- / I've found the second one!

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Text Box: Infestation 2
Text Box: It was one week after the first bug infestation. / It was one in the morning and I was drafting by myself....
Text Box: When...
SFX: Scratch, scratch

SFX: Screech
Text Box: Mother's Shriek

Mother: What the hell is that!?
SFX: Screech
Dad: What, what is it?
SFX: Clatter
Yuka: (What the heck!?)
Text Box: The moment I stood up...
SFX: Swish

Text: Something black was in front of me!!
Yuka: (Misc struggling noises) Ugh, ahh, eep! Ack!
Text: What is it!?

SFX: Zip
Text: Behind the curtain

Text: Save me!!! (small) half crying

Text Box: Apparently it was a bat. / A bat that had gotten into my parents room happened to fly into my room as I opened the door.
Arrow Text: And again, how the hell did it get in? And when? Even though we live in an ordinary residential street....
Text: It took 30 minutes for my dad to catch it with a butterfly net.
Arrow Text Up: It really looked like slapstick comedy.
Arrow Text Down: Still half asleep.
Text Box: I wonder what will get in next time. I'm scared of my own room.
SFX: Swish
SFX: Squeak, squeak
Text: The bat looked scared too.

Translation: Koibana Onsen 10

Sun, 10 May 2009 01:10:07 +0000

Chapter 10
54

Koibana Onsen
Tenth Spring: First Experience at Koibana Onsen

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Fuuka: Couples in love will grow even closer.

Fuuka: If you've grown tired of each other, it will refresh your love./ For a hot spring trip for two, definitely come to our hot spring hotel./ Koibana Onsen, where love blooms.

Fuuka/Moeka: Welcome.

Akiyama: Huh?
Nonoka: Fuuka,/ and Moeka, you too,/ are you okay?
SFX: Jerk

?: Ack!
?: You moron!!

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Fuuka: Were doing this for the two of you!
Nonoka: You're doing it...
Akiyama: for us?
Fuuka: What's with that attitude!?

Fuuka: Today, were going to let you two experience Koibana Onsen.

Nonoka: Experience?
Akiyama: What?/ Do you mean we're to be guests?

Fuuka: That's right./ It's been a year since you started here Akiyama./ You've hardly had a single break the whole time you've been working here.
Fuuka: It's a thank you from Moeka and I.
Moeka: We'll do our best to serve you!

Moeka: Okay! Akiyama, take off your jacket (happi).
Fuuka: Nonoka, you change too!
Nonoka: Wha-/ I want to serve Akiyama too!

Fuuka: You idiot!/ There's a kind of serving that only you can do...
Nonoka: What!?

Nonoka: How can you throw this on me all of a sudden!!

Fuuka: What, you don't like the surprise?
SFX: Yes, yes
SFX: Pat, pat
Nonoka: But...

Fuuka: What is it? DId you forget to shave?/ Hurry up and shave it...
Nonoka: That's not it!!

Fuuka: Whatever it is, get over it today!
SFX: Blush
Fuuka: You can do it in the spring or wherever you want./ You can do what you've always wanted to.

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Text: Even if she says that...

SFX: Blush

SFX: Thump, thump

Nonoka: I wonder why I can't calm down?

Akiyama: Yeah, me too./ What do guests do in their rooms, do you think?

Akiayam: Huh?

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Nonoka: Oh! It's a memory journal.
Akiyama: Memory?
Nonoka: Guests write down what happened while they were here.

Text: It was such a great hotel. My boyfriend and I grew much closer.
SFX: Flip

Text: My boyfriend was so demanding, I think it was the influence of the other couples. It was the most amazing time ever.
SFX: Flip

Text: This year I reached double digits. Every year, we do it more and more. I'll try to do it more next year.
SFX: Flip

Text: This time we did it in the woods. He was really happy. Outdoor sex rules!

Akiyama: They're all over each other.
Nonoka: Yeah.

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Akiyama: I've feeling in the mood.
Nonoka: What?
SFX: Thump
Nonoka: In the.../ mood?

Akiyama: The customers have put me in a really warm and fuzzy mood.
SFX: Thump, thump
Nonoka: Oh... I don't think I'm really ready...what!?
Moeka: Try a little harder!!

Nonoka: I guess you're right.
Akiyama: Huh
Text: He really wants to do it...

Moeka: Excuse me.
SFX: Slide

Moeka: Mr. Akiyama, it's time for your bath.
SFX: Ahaha
Akiyama: Quit calling me Mr. Akiyama, Moeka-chan.

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?: We'll go in together, won't we?/ I mean after all it is Koibana Onsen's selling point...
Text: So we'll do it in the bath!?

Nonoka: I'm a little embarassed.
SFX: Thump, thump
SFX: Secretly

Akiyama: Yeah
Text: Wow, it's really hard.
SFX: Thump, thump
Text: I'm embarrassed she's going to see it all erect.

Akiyama: I'm going to get in first./ Nonoka please get in after me.
SFX: Rattle
SFX: Thud, thud
Nonoka: Huh?

Nonoka: Oh...okay.

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Nonoka: Akiyama,/ where are you?
SFX: Tip, toe.

SFX: Scrub, scrub

Nonoka: What are you doing?
Akiayama; Oh! / Nonoka.

Nonoka: Umm.
Akiyama: I thought it wasn't clean enough, I mean Fuuka cleaned it right?
SFX: Scrub, scrub

Akiyama: Oh!/ And the bucket was left out!!

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Nonoka: You ended up cleaning until our time was up.
Nonoka: Is this enough?
Akiyama: I'm sorry/ It was really bothering me.

Nonoka: Okay,/ let's eat.
Akiyama: Oh, that's right!/ Nonoka, what do you want to eat?

Akiyama: I'll feed it to you.

Nonoka: Oh?
Akiyama: Come on, come on.

Nonoka: Okay, I'd like a mushroom.
Akiyama: A mushroom, huh?
(TN: A matsutake is a Japanese mushroom that is extremely phallic...)

Akiyama: Say aaaah!
SFX: Thump, thump...

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SFX: Thump, thump
SFX: Snap
Akiyama: Is it good?

SFX: Chomp, chomp
SFX: Nervous

Nonoka: It's salty.
Akiyama: Huh?

Nonoka: It's such a waste to over season food like this./ Fuuka!!/ I'll make the food for the other customers.
Akiyama: What?/ Nonoka?

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Fuuka: I'm sorry, I ended up making you work./ From here on out, we'll do it ourselves.
SFX: Pour
Nonoka: If you can't handle it yourselves, just tell me.
SFX: Sure!
Moeka: I'm sorry Akiyama.

Moeka: Hey, Akiyama/ When I finish the totals, can I come and hang out?
Fuuka: You moron!

Moeka: Ow!
Fuuka: I'll take care of this one and make her go to bed.

Fuuka: Have lots of fun tonight!
Fuuka: Sleep in plenty late tomorrow.

Moeka: I guess it's really rough on them when we're not around.
SFX: Drowsy
Text: Drunk Nonoka sure is sexy.
SFX: Excited
Akiyama: I can see her panties.
Akiyama: Yeah./ I'm no help really, but without you...

SFX: Grab
Nonoka: No help? Seriously!!
Nonoka: Koibana Onsen can't get by without you!!

SFX: Thump, thump
Akiyama: Huh..

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Nonoka: And I...
SFX: Soft
SFX: Thump
Nonoka: can't live without you.

Akiyama: Nonoka
SFX: Squeeze
Nonoka: Ah.

SFX: Wobble

Akiyama: Nonoka?
SFX: Deep breathing

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Nonoka: Oh.../ Akiyama!

Nonoka: I'm sorry.
Nonoka: I fell asleep!
Nonoka: It's the first time I've had alcohol, / it looks like I got drunk.

Akiyama: Yep, it does./ How are you feeling?/ Have some water.

Nonoka: Ye-/ yeah.
SFX: Sip
Nonoka: I'm sorry.

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SFX: Nervous.

Akiyama: A year ago we slept side by side like this.
Nonoka: Huh?

Nonoka: Oh yeah.
SFX: Tehee.
Nonoka: Back then, / I didn't think we'd end up like this.

Akiyama: I / started to think that I wanted to be like this

SFX: kiss

Akiyama: with you.

70 (MIA)

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SFX: Slide

Nonoka: Ah
SFX: lick

Nonoka: Ah, ah
SFX: Kiss

SFX: Uh.
SFX: Slowly

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SFX: Flop
Nonoka: N-

Nonoka: Don't
Nonoka: there.
Nonoka: Ah.
Nonoka: Oh, ah

Nonoka: Don't
SFX; Shock
Nonoka: like me.

Nonoka: Do you like licking?
SFX: Shake, shake
Nonoka: Ah
SFX: Slowly

Nonoka: (But its so embarassing)
SFX:Pant

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SFX: Thump, thump

SFX: Thump, thump

SFX: Slurp

SFX: Pant
Akiyama: Are you okay?

SFX: Grab

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Nonoka: Come to me.
SFX: Squeeze.
SFX: Hurry
Akiyama: Uh
Akiyama: But

Nonoka: It's fine, we don't need one.
SFX: Thump, thump
Nonoka: Today.../mabye...

Nonoka: What you did felt amazing./ I want to make you feel amazing to.
Akiyama: Uh.
Akiyama: Ah.
SFX: Tweak.
Nonoka: I want to feel it together.

?: Oh
SFX: Tug
?: Ah

Akiayama: Ah.
SFX: Sploosh.
Nonoka: Ah.

Akiyama: I-I'm inside....
Nonoka: Yeah.
Akiyama: I'm going to go in deeper.

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Akiyama: It feels so good inside you.

Akiyama: I always want to feel this.
SFX: Shake

Akiyama: My body is...
Akiyama: I'm sorry Nonoka.
SFX: Slide, slide
Akiyama: I'm going to come already.

SFX: (misc sex noises)

Nonoka: Ah
SFX: Tug, tug
Nonoka: Ah
Nonoka: Oh.

Nonoka: It's okay. / I'll always accept your feelings.
Nonoka: Don't hold it in.

(Main image)
Nonoka: Ah, ah, ah.
Nonoka: Oh

(Side of main image)
Nonoka: Ah
Nonoka: Uh, / uh
Nonoka: Uh
Nonoka: Oh.
SFX: Heart beating

(Inside main image)
Nonoka: Making love really is amazing.../ You really made me feel it.
Akiyama: Yeah./ It really was amazing, / Nonoka.

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Akyama: Good morning
Nonoka: G-good morning

Nonoka: It's a little.
SFX: Shrug
Akiyama: You're blushing.
SFX: Haha.

Nonoka: Let's it breakfast.
Akiyama: Yeah.

SFX: Slurp

SFX: Rustle
Akiyama: Nonoka-san

Nonoka: Fuuka screwed up the soup.
SFX: Flap, flap
Akiyama: Huh!

Notebook:
At this hotel, I met the love of my life. Thank you, "Koibana Onsen."
We'll be back!

(End)

Translation: Crash! 1

Wed, 15 Apr 2009 10:07:04 +0000

Crash

Stage 1

2

Contents: Crash!

Hana: Hurry up and turn the page!!
SFX: Bang
Cats: Sparta, She's in Sparta mode!
Cats: How scary...

3

Kiri: Oh~ Shit~
Magazine right to left: Part time Job, Help Wanted

Kiri: There's probably nothing better than this one.

Guy: Hey, what about this one?

Kiri: Central Park Event Staff?
Flyer: Central Park's XXth Anniversary
Event Staff Wanted
Guests
Marika Momohara
Mr. Shinozuka
Application

4
Crash
Stage 1

5

6

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?: Did you see that show on TV last night?
Small: SFX: Ding dong dang (school bell)
SFX: Eek!

?:You mean P-s (TN: sounds like peace) new song? They were super cool.
Magazine: P-s, special edition

?: Hana-chan did you see it too?

Hana: No, I'm not really interested in celebrities...

8

Bun head: Oh, really?
Hana: Yeah.
?: But P-s are so cool.
?: Oh/ look, look, Marika Momohara is in here too.

?: She's been in here a lot lately.

Black: Huh? Hana-chan is gone.
Bun head: She always leaves early, huh?
?: I wonder what she's doing. (small) A job?

Text Box: Hana Shiraboshi, shinning high school sophomore.
Text Box: I have secret.
(TN: Shiraboshi means white star)

9

Text Box: And that is...
Poster: Marika Momohara; Marika's first picture
Chouko: This talent agency is in it's tenth year! / We're going to have an explosive competition between our large scale newbies.

Aoyagi: Boss, along what lines do you mean large scale?
Chouko: Uh, / I don't know.
Text: Decisive
Chouko: I mean, they are always...
SFX: Slam
Hana: I'm back!

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Chouko: Hana! (small) and just in time!
Hana: Mama.
Hana: You can hear your voice out in the hallway.
Text Box: My secret is that my house is a talent agency.

Text Box: The reason I feigned disinterest in idols was to protect our company and the celebrity's information. / Celebrities are very important to me. (small) Sorry classmates!

Hana: Mama's all fired up... (small) this time.
Oyama Text: Welcome home.
Chouko: Let's see, data, data...

Aoyagi: It is ten years worth of work after all.
Text Box: Chief Manager, Kyougo Aoyagi
Oyama: I wonder what the newbie will be like!
Small Text Box: Newbie
Text Box: Manager, Oyama
Text: A cute girl would be nice!

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Chouko: This may be a little sudden, Hana, but...
Text Box: White Star President, Chouko Shiraboshi
Chouko: can you do it up like always.

Hana: Okay!
Oyama Text: Like always?

SFX: Flop

SFX: Gulp

SFX: Stare

SFX: Tingle

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SFX: Blinding

SFX: Silence

Chouko: They all failed!!
Oyama: What? What? Why?? / Shouldn't we at least talk to one of them?
Text: Where were you looking just now?

Chouka: What the heck, Oyama? / We do NOT settle!
Oyama: Really? But this girl is really cute.
Aoyagi: Should we hold auditions?
Chouka: Hmmm maybe.
SFX: Clatter

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Marika: Good morning!
Text Box: A Celebrity with White Star, Marika Momohara
Chouko Text: Good morning.
Hana: Markia!

Oyama: Marika-san! Today you have two magazine interviews... / by the way tomorrow at the Central Park there will be a talk and you'll sing.
Oyama Text: Let's do our best!
Marika Text: Yeah!

Hana: Mama, tomorrow can I go with Marika?
Chouko: Sure, but why?

Hana: Central Park is a hangout for young people.
Hana: Wouldn't it be good for me too scout some fresh faces?
Chouka: Oh.

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Chouko Text: Nice idea!
Marika Text: Yay! Hana is coming too!
Oyama: Um...Chief...why does the bosses daughter have all this power, like just before... (small) is this all right?

Aoyagi: Oh that's right, you don't know that yet.../ the young lady's talent.

Oyama: Talent?

Aoyagi: The one who / discovered Marika Momohara and all the other money makers was all...
Aoyagi: her.

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Aoyagi: At a single glance, she can tell whether or not they will sell, people call her...
Aoyagi: The flower of fresh blood.
Text: Fresh Blood...!?

Oyama: And how exactly does that work?
Oyama TextL I didn't really get what was going on before...
Aoyagi: Miss
SFX: Slide
Aoyagi: Will you look at this one and that one?

Text: Oh- she's pretty
Text: Cute

SFX: Slide
Text: A picture of Marika at her debut.

SFX: Tingle, tingle

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SFX: Drip

Text Oyama: A bloody nose standard?
SFX: Shock
Marika: I remember when I first met Hana, I saw such pretty blood.
Hana Text: I feel a bit nostalgic.
Text Aoyagi: Good Work.
Box: Tissues
Text Box: This condition is probably from the environment.
Hana: (It's not bad for me.)
SFX: Dab, dab

Chouko: You sixth sense is in top shape as usual!
Chouko: We're counting on you tomorrow!

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Text: Right now, all I can do is help but...
Text Box: With this nose / and the heart of a celebrity inside me...
Text Box: someday I want to produce a celebrity.
Hana: Leave it to me, Mama!

SFX: Chattering

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SFX: Crunch

Kiri: Oh, this is Central Park?

SFX: Swish

Hana: Let's see, today after Marika's act / there's a dance and live performance / then Mr. Shinozuka's magic show at a special booth.
Text Box: Marika and Oyama are standing by

Hana Text: Mr. Shinozuka has been on TV quite a lot recently.

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Hana: (But I shouldn't be looking at that old guy now.)
Text: Scout, Scout

Rei: Dad, I'm done with the hat trick.
Shinozuka: I'm sorry Rei for asking you to fill in as my assistant at such short notice.
Rei: Whatever.

SFX: Rustling
SFX: Hurray!
SFX: Music blaring

Text: This is the dance area!

Hana: (No reaction)
Junpei: Kazuhiko, over here!
Kazuhiko: Junpei! I got lost!

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Kazuhiko: I'll be a little nervous because we're in front of so many people, / but I'll do my best! (small) At watching anyways...

Junpei: Yeah!
Junpei: We have to get our energy up, this is the real thing!

Kazuhiko: Junpei you're really loud.
Junpei: Hahaha, really?
Hana: (Hmm, no reaction here either.)
SFX: Eep!

Girl: Yuugo, I want a ticket to see the live show.
Yuugo Text: There aren't any left?
Girl: Me too!
Yuugo: Do whatever you like, / my dad is hosting the even after all.
Text: Eep! Yay!

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SFX: Chattering

Hana SFX: Hmm.
Hana: (And there's so many people too.)
SFX: Smack
Kiri: Oh, sorry.

SFX: Glimmer

Kiri: Geeze, every one is in my way.

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Text: What's with this guy!?
Hana: Hey! You in the work shirt!

Hana: At least apologize!
Guy: Um.

Guy: Are you okay?

SFX: Tingle

SFX: Ah-chooo!

Hana Text: Oh, yes, I'm fine.
Guy: That's good. That guy just bumped into me too.

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Text Hana: That's too bad...
Text Box: For this many people, there's really aren't any with raw potential.

Hana: A good face isn't enough.
Text: Nope, nope.
SFX: Stare

Announcer: Every one , thank you for waiting./ Next up is Marika Momohara!
SFX: Yipee!!
Hana: (Oh, it's starting.)

Marika: Hi every one! / I'm Marika Momohara!

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Text: Marika-chan!
Text: No way! That's Marika-chan?
Text: In person!? She's so cute!
Text: Marika-
Text Hana: I've seen so many different celebrities these last ten years at my mother's side.

Text Hana: Celebrities are mysterious.
Text Hana: Just by being there..../ just by laughing...

Text Hana: so many people are happy.

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Text Hana: I want to create one...
Text Hana: one that surpasses happiness...

Text Hana: an earth shattering....

SFX: Clatter
Kiri: I don't need this stinking job!

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SFX: Murmuring

Kiri: I did it just like you asked. / Are you going to bitch about it again?
SFX: Kick

Hana: (That's the jerk worker from earlier...!?)
Hana Text: How much ruder can her get!?

Guy: Hey, what are you doing!? (small) Grab him!
Guy: We're so sorry Shinozuka-san.

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Rei: What are you apologizing for? He's the one that's pissing me off.

Rei: All I did was tell the truth.
Rei: That he's useless and can hardly even clean properly.

SFX: Thump
SFX: Tingle
Text Box: I.. / found one!

Kiri: I'm not working for you! / I'm doing it for the $100 pay (10,000 yen)...
SFX: Smack
Kazuhiko: Ah!

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Kiri: Get out of the way! (small) you stupid kid!
SFX: Frightened

SFX: Frozen
Junpei: Hey, no wait just a second-

Junpei: Just let it go.

Text Box: and over here too...?
SFX: Thump, thump
SFX: Tingle, tingle
Text Box: A second.../ and a third!

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Junpei: It's not good for you health to be so angry.
Text: Ha, ha, ha
SFX: Slap
Kiri: Ah, ah... (small) what's with this guy?

Yuugo: What? What?
SFX: Poof
Yuugo: It looks like something interesting is going on.

Yuugo: $100... that's what my hankerchief cost.
SFX: Grin
SFX: bekun?
Yuugo: How blase, (small) right.

SFX: Tingle, tingle
Text Box: A fourth!
SFX: Glare
Junpei Text: Oh.

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Kiri: Are you looking for a fight!?
SFX: Smack
?: Making fun of me!
SFX: Eek!
Text: Some one stop them!
Text Box: It can't be..

Text Box: true...

Oayama: This is Marika Momohara's event!? / What's with the ruckus...

Oyama: Oh- Hana-san?
SFX: Wah, wah
Hana: Um...

Hana: I need to talk / with those four over there.
Kiri: Get out of here, this has nothing to do with you!

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Hana: I need to talk with the four of them!
SFX: Spin
Hana: You're the one that it's got
Hana: nothing...

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Hana: Oh?

33

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SFX: Spurt

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Text Box: It was almost like
SFX: Collapse
SFX: Eeep!
Oyama Text: Hana-chan!
Text Box: the chances of being struck by lightning.

SFX: Ah!
Text: Someone's collapsed!
SFX: Ah!

Text: I

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Text Hana: I want to create one
Text Hana: one that surpasses happiness...
Text Hana: an earth shattering celebrity

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Text: What are you're names?

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SFX: Snap
Hana: Do you guys want to be famous!!
SFX: Jolt
SFX: Flick
Chouko: Well she's definitely come to.

Hana: Huh? I was at Central Park...
Chouko: You collapsed and they brought you here.
Text Box: This is the agency.

Hana: Where are those guys!?
Oyama: You mean those four? When I'd realized, they'd already disappeared.

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Chouko: Hana didn't just have a bloody nose, she collapse. What on earth are those four?

Hana: It wasn't four, it was five.
Chouko: What?

Text: Cool
Text: Cute
Text: Cheerful
Text: Sexy

Text Box: And

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Text: Chaos

Text: It's a five celebrity team.

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SFX: Gulp

Hana: Our tenth year in business will be them, Mama!

Kiri: Hey, you! Take this!
SFX: Slam

Guy: You're back?
Kiri: What's with the "you're back?"

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Kiri: Man,/ I've had one hell of a time.

Guy: Blood?
Kiri: Oh, I met a strange bloody nosed girl.
Text: Ugh
Text: There's blood here too!

Guy: Ahahaha! "A strange bloody nosed girl" !!
Kiri: What are you laughing at!?

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Guy: Son
SFX: Gasp
Guy: You're luck is definitely going to change.

Kiri: Luck? / I don't believe in that stuff.
SFX: Slurp

Guy: Don't say that.
Guy: Just go to this place.

Kiri: I don't really like the places you recommend.
Text: But your ramen is damn good.
Guy: You'll get money out of it.

SFX: Grin

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SFX: Ding, dong

Hana: First, / let's see, how am I going to find them.
SFX:
Hana: I'll try going back to the park again first.

Hana: I wish I'd at least go their na-

Hana: -mes.

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SFX: Shock
Text Box: Ack!

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Kiri: Bloody Nosed girl!?
SFX:
SFX: Plop
Text: Why are you here!?

SFX: Spin
Text: So today for dinner...

SFX: Grab

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Hana: I'm Hana Shiraboshi...!
SFX: Twist
Text: So strong!
Kiri: Hana as in nose?
Hana: It's Hana, as in flower!
(TN: Hana means both nose and flower.)

Hana: You

Hana: What's you're name?

Kiri: Kiri

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Kiri: Kiri Kurose
Text: Kiri
Text: Kurose

Hana: Kurose-kun, would you
SFX: Thump

Text: What are your names?

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Hana: like to become famous!?

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Text Box: For Crash!'s release, I went early to Kushiro in Hokkaido for a book signing.
SFX: Vroom
Text Box: In continuation from last year, I went with Ms. Nana Haruta.

Text Box: Because the weather was crappy, every time the plane shook, the seat belt sign...
SFX: Ping
Text: Deep Sleep
SFX: Shake, shake
Text Box: Despite the bad weather, we landed safely.

Text Box: Despite that it was the middle of April/ BLIZZARD.
SFX: Shiver
Yuka Fujihara: Ice
Text Box: Apparently this was the most snow they've had on this day in ten years!
Text: According to the taxi driver...

Diamond overlay 1:
Yuka Fujihara: Ack!
SFX: Slip
Text w/ arrow: Since I had no idea it would be like this, I wore heels.
Diamond overlay 2:
Yuka: Eeek!
SFX: Floating
Text: I can't see anything.

Inner Text
Yuka: Ahhhh!
SFX: Tumble
Person: Publisher Mr X
Publisher Text: Ms. Fujihara!!
Person: Publisher SA

rectangle inlay:
Text: I really fell.
Guy Text: Don't grab me!
Yuka Text: I'm sorry
SFX: Feebly
Sub text: Like an old woman!

Text Box: The next day, the day of the book signing, somehow the blizzard stopped and I met my readers!
Text: Just as I thought, they were all ribbon wearing angels!
Girl Text: Please do your best!
Yuka Text: I- I- I- will try.

Yuka Text: There was lots of good things to eat
Yuka Text: I feel like I ate a lifetime's worth of shrimp and crab
Text: A card drawn of Nana and I.
Text: The problems were fixed.
Yuka Text: This is freaky.
Nana Text: It's completely off!
Text Box: It was a very memorable book signing.
Text: I'll never forget the winter landscape!

Translation: Koibana Onsen 9

Sat, 28 Mar 2009 06:28:44 +0000

?: I've got the pictures from the wedding.
?: Oh!
Moeka: Moeka wants to see them too!

?: It was a really beautiful wedding.
Moeka: Waka-ne looked so beautiful.
Fuuka: Her husband's such a nice guy./ Oh...I want to wear a wedding dress already!
Koibana Onsen

Moeka: Are you in such a rush because Waka-nee is younger than you?
Fuuka: Shut up,/ Moeka!

Fuuka: Oh,/ Nonoka will probably get married before me.
Nonoka: Sister....

Fuuka: Speaking of which, Nonoka and Akiyama haven't done it yet, huh?/ What? You're not going to wait until marriage?
Nonoka: I don't...

Text: I don't intend to wait.
Fuuka: If you tease him too much, you'll drive him away.
Text: I really want to make love with Akiyama.

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Koibana Onsen
9th Spring: Look-a-Like Honey

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Text: Akiyama-san!?
SFX: Oh my god!
Nonoka: But, but...
Memory Fuuka: You'll drive him away.

Nonoka: Oh...

Nonoka: Phew...
Text Box: Kazuma Akabane
Text Box: Shizuka Hayase
Text: When I got a better look, it was one of our guests.

Text: But he still looks a lot like him.

Text: It looks like Akiyama is kissing her.
SFX: Moan

SFX: Kiss
Text: I feel strange.

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Shizuka: Kazuma-kun
Kazuma: What?

Shizuka: That girl over there has been watching us for a while...
SFX: Eeep!

SFX: Tap, tap, tap
Nonoka: I-/I'm sorry.

Kazuma: Never mind that, let's go continue in our room.
Shizuka: Huh? You want to do it again?

Text: That couple is really close.
Kazuma: C'mon, hurry. I can't wait any longer.
Text: More than normal...

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Text: I'm jealous...
Nonoka: Oh!

SFX: Tap, tap, tap
SFX: Blush
Nonoka: Akiyama-san!
Akiyama: Nonoka-san.

Nonoka: Ah.../ Uh..
SFX: Embarrassed
SFX: Grab
SFX: Thump
Akiyama: Huh?

Akiyama: W-what is it?
SFX: Thump, thump

Text: I can't do it....
Nonoka: Uh!

Nonoka: I-I'm sorry!
Akiyama: Huh?/ No...

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Moeka: Nonoka-ne!/ There's guests!
Fuuka: Akiyama! Go bring in the futons. Go help out!

Nonoka: Later, Akiyama-san.../ Go work hard.
Akiyama: Yep./ You too Nonoka.

Fuuka: Hurry!! It looks like it's going to rain.
SFX: Stomp, stomp
SFX: Rush

Nonoka: Welcome to Koibana Hot Springs!

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Nonoka: Moeka, please show them to their room.
Moeka: Yes!

Moeka: Right this way.
SFX: Tap, tap
SFX: Hehe

Nonoka: So,/ those were the last guests scheduled to check in today.
SFX: Slap
Book: Guest Log

Nonoka: There's some time before I have to start making dinner.
SFX: Click
Nonoka: Akiyama-san also should have some time before he has to clean the open air bath.

Nonoka: Even though it's just a short time, we could....
SFX: Thump, thump

Fuuka: Nonoka? You're face is flushed, are you okay?
Nonka: Ack.

Nonoka: I- / I'm fine~
Fuuka: Really?

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Nonoka: We are really busy every day but...
Nonoka: If it's just for a little bit, we can spend time together.
Nonoka: Akiyama-san, where are you?

Nonoka: I have to find Akiyama-san soon.
Nonoka: Even if it's only for a little bit,

Nonoka: I want to be with him!

Nonoka: There he is!!
Nonoka: Akiyama-san
SFX: Swish
SFX: Pit pat
Nonoka: Okay!
Nonoka: I'll surprise him!

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Nonoka: Who am I?
SFX: Pat
Kazuma: Huh?/ Wha-/ Wha-/ What?

Kazuma: Is that Shizu-chan?/ Did your boobs get bigger?
SFX: Blink
Nonoka: Huh?

Nonoka: Mr. Akabane!?
Kazuma: Inn keeper?
SFX: Eeep!

Text: I messed up again?
Nonoka: I made a mistake./ I'm so sorry!
SFX: Bow, bow

Nonoka: I got carried away./ Even if you look identical, you weren't even wearing the inn's happi (jacket).
SFX: Bang, bang

Shizuka: Um...

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Nonoka: Ms. Hayase
Shizuka: Can I ask you something?
Nonoka: Yes.

Nonoka: In just a towel, you'll catch cold/ why don't you get in the bath?
Shizuka: Oh... sorry.

Text: It looks like I'm going lose my time with Akiyama-san.

Shizuka: Wow!/ The water is so nice, isn't it?
Nonoka: Thank you./ You hadn't been in it yet, huh.

Shizuka: Well, before I got in, Kazuma came after me in the changing room.
Nonoka: I see...

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Nonoka: You guys are really crazy about each other.
Text: So jealous!!!!

Shizuka: Really?

Shizuka: You say we're crazy about each other, but it seems like it's just sex./ We've already done it five times since we got here.
Star Bubble: 5 times!!
Nonoka: You have?

Shizuka: Are all guys like this?/ He's actually my first...
Nonoka: Oh- really?
Text: They managed to do it five times in such a short time...

Shizuka: I'm a student and he's working.
Shizuka: We usually don't get to spend a lot of time together and even though I really just want to talk...
SFX: Drip, drip
Shizuka: Now we have sex then were tired so we just rest./ What do you think?

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Nonoka: I'm jealous....

Shizuka: Huh?

Nonoka: Well the thing is there's this guy I like and we don't really get any time together...

Akiyama: Okay!/ It's about time to start cleaning.

Akiyama: Huh?/ There's still guests in the bath?

Text: Nonoka?
Nonoka: We still.../haven't...

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Nonoka: gone all the way. / we've been making out for a few months...
Nonoka: and my feelings are gradually growing stronger.

Nonoka: I want it...
SFX: Thump

Nonoka: like it is with you two.

Nonoka: I want him to come after me and caress me.

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SFX: Blank
Nonoka: Oh.

Nonoka: S-/ Sorry. / I've been going on about myself..
Shizuka: N-no not at all.
Nonoka: Shall I wash your back?
Shizuka: Oh? / Sure.

Nonoka: I'm sure that Mr. Akabane just wants to treasure the time you have together.
SFX: Scrub

Nonoka: The feelings probably just build up so much,/ and he can't control them, right?
SFX: Scrub
Shizuka: Maybe you're right?

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Nonoka: Please try to respond to his feelings.
SFX: Scrub
Shizuka: Y-/ Yes.

Nonoka: It's great that Akabane is so positive,/ but he really does look just like him.
Shizuka: Like your boyfriend?/ But Kazuma a huge moron....

SFX: Rattle
Kazuma: Shizu-chan
SFX: Shock
Kazuma: I'm sorry to keep you waiting!
Kazuma's privates bubble: Boing
Kazuma: I've completely recovered!
Shizuka: Like this.

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Couple: Ooo, oh, ah

Nonoka: Akiyama-san!

Nonoka: Oh, did you come to clean?
SFX: Oh no!
SFX: Thump, thump
Nonoka: There's guests in the hot springs right now, could you please wait.

Nonoka: Akiyama-san?
SFX: Thump, thump

SFX: Clatter

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SFX: Thump
SFX: Squeeze
SFX: Grab

Akiyama: I'm sorry Nonoka-san.

Akiyama: I heard what you said.

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Akiyama: You said you wanted me to come after you.
Nonoka: Oh!/ No that's not what I meant!!/ I said it for the guest...

Nonoka: And because of what's happened today,/ I was just saying whatever...
SFX: Wave, wave
Akiyama: Really?/ Are you sure?

Couple: Oh, ugh.
Kazuma: Shizu-chan/ Together...
Nonoka: Damn,/ actually...
SFX: Oo-la-la

Nonoka: A-/ Akiyama-san!
Nonoka: Will you...

Nonoka: Will you caress me?
Akiyama: Nonoka-san

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4 bubbles: Panting

SFX: Kiss

SFX: Lick

Nonoka: Oh

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Nonoka: Oh

SFX: Boing
SFX: Slide

Akiyama: Ah

Akiyama: Mmph

SFX: Squish
Nonoka: Aah.

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SFX: Rub, rub
3 bubbles: Ah, ah, ah

SFX: Tweak
2 bubbles: Ah, ah

3 bubbles: Panting

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Nonoka: Ah/ Stop.
SFX: Slide

Akiyama: Oh wow....
SFX: Slide
Nonoka: No.

Nonoka: They're wet.
SFX: Blush

Nonoka: Ah
Nonoka: Ah
SFX: Lick

SFX: Shiver

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Akiyama: Huh?
Nonoka: Hurry.../ If you don't hurry...
Nonoka: This time,/ I want to go all the way.

SFX: Zip

Nonoka: Oh.

SFX: Thump, thump
SFX; Squeeze
SFX: Gush

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Fuuka: Hey!/ If you don't start cooking soon......
Fuuka: Oh!
SFX: Rumble
SFX: Shock

Nonoka: Akiyama-san/ Here!/ Work hard at cleaning.
SFX: Drip, drip
Akiyama: Yes!/ I'm sorry!/ Nonoka-san, you too.
SFX: Sloppily

Fuuka SFX: Sigh
Fuuka: What the heck were they doing, sneaking around like that.
SFX: Tip toe

Fuuka: If I don't make them do it properly the first time....
Fuuka: Okay!/ I'll give them a little push!
(TN: The kanji for the phrase give the a little push is suggestive of being naked, sort of like strip naked)
SFX: Shock

Subtext: Ninth Spring: Look-a-like Honey Finish

Translation: Umisho 53

Fri, 27 Mar 2009 08:50:14 +0000

97

Watermelon: Kenko Zenrakei Suiebu Umisho
Text box: The Kanto Tournament is over.
Text box: And it's finally summer!!
SFX: Cicada chirping

Superimposed Amuro SFX: Munch, munch

Amuro: Tasty, tasty-
SFX: Munch
SFX: yum, yum
Kaname: small (I'm good with only 2 or 3 slices). You really can eat huh.

Amuro: Huh, but if I don't eat a ton, I'll get hungry before dinner.
Kaname: Uh, well, watermelon isn't lunch....

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Kaname's Mom: I'll buy more watermelon for you tomorrow, Amuro.
Text: Lunch will be somen (TN: thin cold noodles, very cheap.)
Kaname: If you do that, we'll be stuck with her forever.
Amuro: Yay!

Amuro's dad: Speaking of which, they're holding a watermelon eating contest by the beach.
Amuro: Really!!

Amuro: I can eat lots??
Dad: Yeah.
Kaname: I think I see where this is going...
Mom: Isn't that nice.
SFX: Clatter

SFX: Tug
Kaname: Yeah.
Amuro: Kaname let's enter together! (small) and bring swimsuits.
Kaname: Oh~ I knew it!
Dad: I think I'll do it too. (small) I'm not busy.

SFX: Woosh
Announcer: Ladies and Gentlemen!

99

Amuro: Yeah-
Dad: No-
SFX: Clapping
Kaname: Why do you have to wear a swimsuit for a watermelon eating contest?

Yoshi: The watermelon eating contest will start now! Peace!
SFX: Clapping
Sub Text: Host: Beach House "Peace!" owner, Yoshi

Yoshi: The rules are simple!! Eat lots of watermelon!/ However, if you can't eat one splice per minute, or throw up, you're out!
Kaname: (I'm going to loose right away.)
Kaname Text: My stomach gets upset easily.

Yoshi: Also, if you lose, we've set up trap doors that will open and you'll fall into a tank below. (small) Thrilling!
Dad: That's sweet.
Kaname: What!?
SFX: Flap

Kaname: Hold on a second, I'll drown!!
Yoshi: Okay, on your mark!
Kaname: Hey!!

Yoshi: Get ready!!
Kaname Text: Shit! As it stands....
SFX: gogogo

100
Yoshi: Go!
Kaname Text: I have to win!!!
Dad SFX: Aaah
SFX: Munch

Yoshi: Woah!
SFX: crunch, crunch
SFX: slurp, slurp
SFX Bubble: Swipe
Yoshi: Contestant 3 is already on their second slice!!

Amuro: Kaname-chan is doing amazing! I can't lose!!
SFX: Angry
Kaname Text: Please lose.
SFX: crunch, crunch

Text Box: 15 minutes later
SFX: excitement
Yoshi: There are still no drop outs!

SFX: Bob
?: Ugh

SFX Bubble: Barf
SFX Superimposed: Beeeeeep!
SFX: Glittering
Yoshi: Yikes, Contestant 9 has blown chunks!
Sub Text: We've changed the unfortunate sounds to something more pleasant...

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Top three bubbles: Beep superimposed upon Barfing sound
Yoshi:Wow!
SFX: Glittering
Yoshi:Barfing in unison!

Yoshi: Contestants 5, 7, 8, 9 are out!!
SFX: Split
SFX: Splash

Kaname Text: That was close, I almost barfed too.
Dad SFX: Munching
Kaname SFX: Panting

Kaname: But it's getting worse and worse.
SFX: Panting

Kaname: ( I should think about something else while I'm eating./ Um, come one, ah, )
Kaname Text: I've got it!

Text: Fantasty World!!
Apron: Shizuoka?
Shizuoka Text: Master, hang in there!
ORizuka: Um...do your best!
Hat: Orizuka?
SFX:Happiness

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?: I can't take it anymore...
SFX:Growl
?: Me either.

Yoshi: 4 and 6 are out!!
SFX: Splash
Yoshi: There's only 3 left!!

Kaname: It looks like we've all eaten about the same amount.
Orizuka Text: Just a little longer!
Shizuoka: Master, if you don't try harder, I'll beat you up!
Text: I'm begging you.

Text: Both of you just...
SFX: munch, munch
SFX: crunch, crunch
Text: let me win!!

Amuro: Ahhh-
Amuro: I ate too much watermelon at home and now I'm full.
Kaname: (Oh..Yes!)

Amuro: I think I'll stop after five more.
Text: Five more!!

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Shizuoka: Didn't you promise us you'd win?
Orizuka: I love you so, please.
SFX: Munch, munch
Text: But, just a little more.
Text: Don't give up! Kaname!

Amuro: Ugh, I'm done for.
SFX: Drop

Yoshi: Number 1 is out!

Text: All that's left is Amuro's dad.
Kaname Text: It looks like he's having no problem.
SFX: Munch, munch
Hat: Sumo Fatty
Dad Text: So delicious.

Text: Oh, that's right...

Text: He's an adult, If I tell him the situation, maybe he'll let me win!!
SFX: crunch

Kaname: Um, can I ask you something?
Kaname: The thing is, I can't swim and so forth..
SFX: Murmuring

Kaname: I'm begging you... Please let me win!!
SFX:slurp, slurp

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Dad: No way, I want to win.

SFX:Ack!
Text: He's nothing like an adult!

Yoshi: So, who will be the true king of eating. Peace!!
SFX:Evil Laughter

SFX: Munch, Munch
SFX: Gulp, gulp
Cheering from the girls: Fight, fight, fight....
Sub text: There's more of them...

Kaname: (Damnit! I have to win on my own!)
SFX: Gulp
Cheering: Fight, fight!

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Text: Crap, why..
Text: is he so calm!?
SFX: Grumble
Kaname: Ugh!!!

Text: This is bad, diarrhea!
SFX: Rumble, rumble
Text: I don't have time for delusions!
Cheers slowly melting: fight, fight...

Text: I'm not match for him.
SFX: Grumble
Text: I'm no match?

Text: He's been holding the same pose for a while now.
SFX: Hush

Yoshi: What's this?

106

Yoshi: Number two has lost consciousness mid bite!!
Black SFX: dribble
White: Bang!
Kaname: There's nothing calm about him!!

Yoshi: Which means contestant 3 is the winner!!!
SFX:explode
SFX: Hurray!! (Cheering)
SFX:dribble
Kaname: I think that's the most I've fought for anything in my whole life.

SFX: Cheering

Text Box: The next day.
SFX: Hum, hum
Amuro: I want revenge for yesterday!
Amuro: Rematch!!
SFX: Gag
Mother Text: Here you go./ Somen!

Translation: Umisho 52

Fri, 27 Mar 2009 08:33:49 +0000

85
Anouncer: At the turn, Umisho and Tamatsuka are once again head to head!!! (small text ) for first/ Shizuoka has a chance!!!
SFX: Splash
Kenko Zenrakei Suiebu Umisho

Ikamasa Song: Free! Free!
Maki:Shio no Kahori (TN: It's the name of another comic, means Kahori's Tide?)
Amuro: Amuro, Amuro, Amuro

Announcer: The sing off in the stands is also a close match!!
Song: La,la,la/ the kindness/ from my mother-

Mimi: Eep! They're gaining on us!
SFX: Hurray! (TN: all across the bottom panel)
Kise Text: Oh my god. Oh my god.
Announcer: And finally the last swimmer!!

86
Announcer: A nearly simultaneous start!!
Black SFX: Bang!
Song: La, la, la/ la, la, la
Song: Our, (our)

Kaname: Orizuka-sempai's dive was a tad slow!
Takeda Text: Oh, oh, tan skin, pant.

?:Woah, she's outdistancing Orizuka!!
SFX: splash
Song: Future/ route
Orizuka: (Shit,/ she's fast!!)

Orizuka: (But I can't rush and screw up my pace...)
Orizuka: (The real fight is in the last 50 meters!!)
SFX: Bubble

Maki: What do I do, the song ended..
Amuro: Sing another song!!

87
Kaname Text: You're going to sing more??
Kaname: Shouldn't we sing something together.
SFX: Cackle
Ikamasa: Then
Ikamasa: I've got the perfect one!!

White song: the many...
SFX: Clang, clang

Black Song: Ohhhh- On the cliffs of Onoshima-
Text Box: Onoshima's lead singer
White SFX: Thud, thud
Black SFX: Clang, clang
Girls: What the hell!???

SFX: Clang...
Kaname: You don't have to dance too, and you're pants are off...
Ikamasa: You moron! The lead singer can only have a pair of underwear on!!
Amuro: Hey, hey

Kaname Text: You're going to get in their way....
SFX: Shake, shake
SFX: Shimmy, shimmy
Girls: They're shimmying over!? (small) so noisy...
Black song: Yoi-yoi sa-sa-, Yoi-yoi sa-sa-
White song: La, la, la, /Riding the wind...

Girl: Eek!?
Girl: They've been doing it for a while, why...

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?: Eeee, something is...
Song: Hoi, Hoi
SFX: Peek
?: His balls are showing~!?
SFX: Shock

Announcer: Tamatuska in the lead at the 50 meter turn!!
SFX: Turn
Text Box: Orizuka
Text Box: Shindo

Nagi: (Huh?)
Song: LA, la, LA/ the VERy beST
Nagi: (The rhythm is a bit off...)

Girls: Ewww!
SFX: Chatter, chatter
Girls: He's coming over!!
Song: Those are the island's ~ treasures..
SFX: Shimmy, shimmy

SFX: Shimmy, shimmy
Girl: No way... What is it?
Song: Ahhhh~
Girl: Ew!!!
Girl: Keep away!!
SFX: Chatter
Girl: Ugh! Scary!!
Girl: Mommy!!
Song: Onoshima
Girl: Don't push!!

Girls SFX: Eeeeeep! Gross!!

89

Ikamasa: Yoi/ yoi
SFX: Slide
Girls: AHHHHHHHH!
SFX: Flop
SFX: Vroom
Small bubble by crotch: Yo

SFX: Scornful laughter

SFX: Splash, splash
Nagi: (Why did the song stop!?)
SFX: Crash

Kise: Oh! Her pace is off! (small) I wonder why...

Orizuka: (Now, let's fight!)
SFX: Splash

90
Announcer: They're coming up on the goal!!
SFX: Hurray!
SFX: Splash
Announcer: Only 3 meters/ 2 meters/ 1 meter!!

SFX: Smack
Announcer: Goal!!!!
SFX: Smack
Announcer: Who won!?

SFX: Pop!
SFX: Ohhhhh!
Announcer: Ohhh! It's Umisho!!! (did our lead singer's plan work?)
SFX: Splash
Orizuka: Yes!!!

91
Kise: Nice job Zuka!!/ With that time we'll deffinitely go on to the finals!!
Orizuka: But it's still the preliminaries. It's still too soon to celebrate.
SFX: Ahhhh!
Maaya: At this pace, will come in first in the finals.
Sub text: To make it to the finals you have to rank in the top 8 of the 44 schools.

Maaya: Hey, don't cry.
Shizuoka: This feels so much better than winning in the individual events.
Shizuoka text: Um, um...

?: Eeeeew
Text: Nasty! Eeek! Ugh, what is that!?

Ikamasa: Let us join the victory party!!
Misc cries: Eewww! Eeep!
SFX: Vroom
SFX: Thud, thud
Kaname: Put on your pants already!!
?: Choke

Text Box: Umisho somehow had the best score in the preliminaries.
SFX: Stomp

Text box: and went on to the finals that afternoon.
SFX: Drag

SFX: Hurray!
Text box: However...

92
Tamatsuka girls (right): Cheering
Text Box: In the finals
Nagi: Yes!
SFX: Zonk
Text Box: they dropped (small text) to dead last ?
SFX: Hurray!
Shinomiya: Smack
Nanjo: Heh, not bad.

Nagi: Looks like we win the finals.
Text Box: Tamatsuka, 1rst place, (advances to Inter-high)
SFX: splash

Nanjo: What? Was your preliminary time just a fluke? (small) I knew it!
SFX: Splash
Text Box: Shinomiya Daifu, 2nd place (advances to Inter-high)

?: Oh.
Text: Shower

Shower Head: Woosh
Kise SFX: Limp
Orizuka SFX: Dissapointed
Kise: We used up all our energy on the preliminary round. (small) emotional and physical
Orizuka: We topped out in the wrong spot.
Maaya: Tut
SFX: Swish

Maaya: Maya was stupid for expecting anything from you guys. (You said you'd give a hundred percent today)
SFX: Bold
Kise: (I'm out). Both Shizuoka and I sucked it up after the preliminary round.
Shizuoka right: Aren't you going to take a shower?
Shizuoka left: Ah, I will now.
Sub Text: Both lost in the prelims, 100m Breast Stroke, 200m Individual Medley

Orizuka: But everyone did such a great job/ We made great time and I've no regrets on the relay.
SFX: Swish

93
Kaname: Oh, you're out./ Nice work.

Orizuka: Thanks. We somehow managed third place, I really wanted to go to Inter-high though.
Shizuoka: (I didn't get to go this year either.)
Maaya: Oh! Ohki!
Kise: So, I can start planning my summer vacation. (small) to relax.
Kaname: Huh?

Kaname: What are you saying?
Kaname: You beat the record for the preliminaries so you get to go. (small) even though we lost the tournament.
Text: Advance to Interhigh!!
Everyone: Huh!!!!!! (small) Really?
Text Box: The top three teams in the finals or any team that breaks the record time in either the finals or the preliminaries gets to go on to Inter-high.

94
Girls: Yay!!!!
Kise SFX: kiss, kiss
Maaya: As I'd expect from Okhy!!
Orizuka: Yay!!
Shizuoka: Eep!
Text Box: Shizuoka is wondering whether to jump in.
SFX: Thud
Kaname: Ack! Why me!?

SFX: Hurray!
Text Box: And just like things got better for Umisho.

Text Box: Day three they were on fire!!
SFX: Bang
Text Box: 100m Freestyle finals

Amuro: Great! I won!!
SFX: Cheering
Text: Nanjo 3rd Place
Nanjo: Screech
Kaname Text: In no time
Maki: Yay!
Text Box: Amuro, first place (advances to Inter-high)
Text Box: Orizuka, second place (advances to Inter-high)
Orizuka: Yeah!
Misc chatter: Chatter, What's with that girl/ She's amazing/ but strange.
Text Box: At the end of the tournament, they advance to inter-high in four events.

95

Text: We're taking applications for boyfriends.

96

Umisho Short Story ~ Characters from Other Schools

Shinomiya College Prep
Shinomiya came into play since the start of the prefectural tournament, but actually, I'd set them up to be the rival school before serial publication. (The leader being Nanjo). However, I think when you look at the picture, you'll understand that Nanjo had a different air about her. (Though she still is a big breasted airhead.)
The thing is, when I penned Nanjo into her first scene, at first glance I realized she was rather like Shizuoka so at the last minute I gave her a pony-tail and changed the shape of her eyes. Also, the fox-racoonish Naruko wasn't initially set.

Tamatsuka Academy
Tamatsuka, the school that appeared during the Kanto Tournament was not an initial setting and I made it up from the start of the tournament. I originally named it Takarazuka. I really liked the unique design of the quadruplets, with black hair, tan skin in white swimsuits. However, they really didn't show up too much during the Kanto Tournaments so hereafter I want to do a follow up on the girls from Tamatsuka.

Takura High School
Takura's coach is Manabu Domon. He's a really easy character to use, but it's troubling that he ends up as a pervert no matter what I do. Oops, that's right, I forgot to put him in the Kanto Tournament.

Translation: Umisho 51

Fri, 27 Mar 2009 08:26:03 +0000

Umisho 51
75
Announcer: Medley Relay, the four mysterious tanned quadruplets!
SFX: Chattering
Quadruplet 3: So noisy.
Kise: No way!
Announcer: What is their potential!?

SFX: Nervous
Text Box: First Swimmer, Mimi Shindo

Kise: Wow, you guys look identical.
SFX: Stare intently
Mimi SFX: Shock

SFX: Dash

Nagi: Sorry.
Nagi: Mimi is really shy around strangers.
Text Box: Fourth Swimmer, Nagi Shindo.
Kise: Oh, I see.

76
Maaya: Oh, I get it they were quadruplets.
Maaya Text: I was a little freaked out though.
Text Box: First Swimmer, Maaya

A quadruplet: Mimi, do your best!
Mimi: Yeah.
Maaya: (Like they could win, Maya is on fire today.)

SFX: Tweet
Ikamasa: Do you best!
Maki SFX: Gulp
Amuro SFX: Impatient
Maki: They'll start soon.

Kaname: (Huh?)

Kaname: What's with that stick?
SFX: Shh

Referee: Get ready.

SFX: Grab

77
White SFX: Beeeeep
Black SFX: Splash

All: Nice!
SFX: Wow

?: A perfect start by Maaya!!
SFX: Swish

Text Box: Currently, Umisho 1st Place
Text Box: Tamatsuka 5th Place
SFX: Splash, splash

Maki: Umisho is in the lead right off the bat,/ I guess Tamatsuka isn't that fast, huh?
Kaname: No, wait!!

78
Kaname: She's catching up!!
SFX: Splash

Kaname: She's moved up to second place already!!

Maki: Amazing! Her movements are precise/ As if she's swimming with the music.
SFX: La, la, la

Song: La, la, la/ This vast ocean/ is / ours
Kaname: They're really signing!!
Maki; What!?

Orizuka: They're swimming with the song....
Song: Always/ (always)
Orizuka: They're synchronized!?
Sub Text: Tamatsuka's swim club song

Maki: Certainly, this is...
Song: we will become fish~

79
Maki: The synchronized medley melody swimming technique! (small text) in short SMMS!
Song: Pure/ True/ Beautiful

Maki: Oh.
SFX: Turn
Announcer: She's catching up at the turn!
Maaya: (What's with her!?)
SFX: Splash
Maaya: (Shit! I can't lose!!)

SFX: Splash

Announcer: And it a moment, the switch off.
Text Box: Second Swimmers, Mayo Shindo and Kise.
Mayo Text: My neck is really stiff today.
Kise Text: Here she comes.
SFX: Oooooh!

80
SFX: Cheering (TN: this continues across the top two panels)
SFX: Splash
Maaya: Crap!!
(TN: An F-bomb would also be appropriate here)

SFX: Grip

SFX: Spring
Announcer: Nearly the same time!

Maki et al: What!?

Announcer: Both of them are only two laps behind,
?: Wow, amazing!
SFX: Bang
?: This is the prelims!??
Announcer: two seconds shy of the high school record!

81
Orizuka: I can't lose either!/ I don't even care about the individual round anymore.
Orizuka: I'll go on...
SFX: Splash

Orizuka: (Damn she's fast.)
Black SFX: Splash
White: Hurray!
Song: Tomorrow, on the waves...
Maki: The've really opened the gap between them and the rest.

Maki: Heh. SMMS is really effective.
Song: La, la, la
Ikamasa: Okay.

Ikamasa: If that's how it is, then we'll sing too!!
Maki et al: Huh!?

Ikamasa: Co~me to the Japanese style restaurant in front of the station~
Song: Lali, la, la, la~
Maki Text: What the heck...
Kaname: Why's he advertising...

Ikamasa: Everyone sing random songs!!
SFX:
Maki: Okay, then.
Maki: The white- Lighthouse*-
* School Song
Amuro: I want to eat fish, fish.

82
Ai text: Mayo! Get a bigger lead!!
Text Box: Third Swimmers, Ai Shindo and Shizuoka
SFX: Cheering
Shizuoka: (Oh..)
SFX: Nervous

Shizuoka: (Everyone's excited over the fight for first place and)
Shizuoka: (I'm dizzy because of nerves and because they're so many of them that look alike)
SFX: Thump, thump

Kaname: Kise is keeping up!!
Shizuoka: (And both Maaya and Kise have done so well...)
SFX: Splash
Kise: Pant
Shizuoka: (I might screw it all up.)

Shizuoka Text: I knew it, I can't
Shizuoka Text: I, I
SFX: Thump, Thump

SFX: Slap
Shizuoka: Aagh!?

Shizuoka: M-Maya.
Maaya: What'll we do if you wimp out now?
SFX: Jerk
Maaya: Even if we lose, it's not the end of the world?/ Take it easy!

83
SFX: Relief
Shizuoka: Yeah.

Orizuka: (Well look at that, when did we)
Orizuka: (start acting like a team?)
SFX: Rub

Maaya: If you screw up, grandma over there will do something or other.
SFX: Angry
Orizuka: Hey!

SFX: Turn
Announcer: Tamatsuka got a head start.

Announcer: Umisho
SFX: Splash
Announcer: is only two seconds behind.

?: Shizuoka, go!!!
Kise SFX: Splash
SFX: Turn

84
SFX: Bubble
Orizuka: I have to pull my own weight.

SFX: Ohh!
Maki et al: Shizuoka-sempai is in hot pursuit!!
(TN: sempai is like san but used for your seniors in a club or school)

SFX: Splash!
Nagi: (Oh?)

Iakamsa: Hey, you!
Ikamasa: A beer for you!
Text: To be continued!!
Maki Song: Ah~ Umisho~
Amuro Song: Head, head, head
Kaname: Let's have a little bit more unity...
Girls: (What's with them...?)
SFX: La, la, la

Translation: Koibana Onsen 8

Sun, 22 Feb 2009 04:12:21 +0000

Koibana Onsen 2

5
Girl: Akiyama,/ please look after the place while we're out!
Koibana Onsen
Akiyama: I will!
Nanoka: Thanks, Akiyama./ We can go to our cousin's wedding without having to worry.
Moeka: We'll be staying the night there.
Moeka: If anything comes up, please call us.
Akiyama: I'll be fine!/ There's no reservations for today,/ so just leave it to me and have a good time.
Nonoka: See you later.
Fuuka: We're counting on you!
Moeka: Bye, Kazu!
Akiyama: Come back soon!

6
SFX: Caw, caw
Akiyama: I knew it, being alone...
Akiyama: Sucks.
SFX: Sigh
SFX: Sweep
Guy: Hey!/ You!
SFX: Panting.
Guy: What's your connection/ with the hotel?
Guy: The thing is
Jurina: This place looks nice.
SFX: Chatter
Maria: It says they have a private bath.
Rikako: Let's go straight to the hot springs!
Guy: due to a mistake, we're double booked./ I was hoping you could look after these three college girls at Koibana Onsen.
Akiyama: What!?/ But Nonoka isn't even here today!
Guy: I'm apologize!/ We'll bring food over from our place!
Guy: I'm counting on you.
Akiyama: W-/ wait.

7
Koibana Onsen
8th Spring: First Time in Charge While Everyone's Out.

8
Jurina: Even so, today's been the worst.
Jurina: There aren't any cute guys.
Maria: But you were so excited to try and pick guys up at the beach instead.
Rikako: You're so picky about guys.
Text Box: Jurina Takahashi
Jurina: So you're saying it's okay to not have standards, like Maria.
Text Box: Maria Hirose
Maria: So mean! Just because I don't have as much experience with guys as you do.
Text Box: Rikako Itou
Rikako: Just drop it./ Anyways, hot springs! hot springs!
SFX: Clatter

9
Maria: Eeeeeeep!
SFX: Startled
Akiyama: I forgot to put out the sign!
Akiyama: I'm trying to get it cleaned quickly.
Text: I failed!!
Jurina: Wait!
Jurina: Hey, you./ There's a swimsuit in my bag in the room...
Jurina: Wash it and dry it for me.
Akiyama: Huh? Yes./ I'll do it.
Akiyama: Excuse me.
SFX: Hmmm.
Maria: He saw me naked.
Text: Oh no!

10
Girl: Ah/ the waters so nice.
Jurina: Hehehe
Rikako: Jurina? What's the matter?/ You're acting strange.
Jurina: That employee...
Jurina: is a virgin, don't you think?
Maria: Huh?
Rikako: Why's that?/ He's pretty cute.
Jurina: Yes, there's no mistake./ He's a virgin.
SFX: Water dripping
Maria: Ah.
Rikako: Jurina really likes virgins, doesn't she.

11
Jurina: Do you want to mess with him?
Maria: Oh, that sounds like fun!
Rikako: Let's not./ That's kind of mean.
Jurina: Rikako? / Why are you acting so good?
Rikako: I'm not./ I think just teasing him is a little boring, don't you?
SFX: Nervous smile.
Rikako: You want to put your money where you mouth is?
Maria: A bet?
Rikako: The person who sleeps with him doesn't have to pay for their hotel room,/ or something like that?
Rikako: The two of us that don't sleep with him will pay for it.
Maria: Okay./ It sounds fun.
Jurina: Heh, I've easily got this one.

12
Text: Oh- shit.
Akiyama: Excuse me.
Akiyama: (There's probably no point in calling Nonoka.)
SFX: Thunk
Akiyama: This is the bag, huh.
Akiyama: This is a swimsuit!?
Akiyama: There's nothing to it!
SFX: Sexy
Text: Wow
SFX: Excited
Akiyama: I wonder what this would look like on.
Rikako: Um.
SFX: Smooth
SFX: Startled
Rikako: Could you help me?
Akiyama: Uh..
Rikako: I got sunburned at the beach today.
SFX: Slide
Rikako: Could you rub lotion on it?
Akiyama: Huh!?

13
Akiyama: Like this?
SFX: Rub, rub
Rikako: Yes
SFX: Rub, rub
Rikako: Thank you.
Akiyama: Sure.
Text: Her tan lines are so skimpy too.
Akiyama: you're welcome...
Rikako: Um..

14
Rikako: Could you do the front too?
Akiyama: What!?
Text: The front is skimpy too!
Akiyama: I mean...
Akiyama: I'm sorry/ could you do the front yourself?
Akiyama: Excuse me!
SFX: Ahaha
Rikako: So he's a virgin after all.

15
Text: Her tan lines were sexy...
Akiyama: Snap out of it!/ I have to pull myself together!!
SFX: Gasp
Akiyama: Even if they are another hotels guests,/ I have to make sure they've had a good time at Koibana Onsen.
SFX: Grip
Akiyama: Nonoka, I'll do my best!
Maria: Hey, excuse me.
SFX: Appear from nowhere
Akiyama: Ack/ what is it?
Maria: Could you give me a massage?/ I swam so much today,/ my body is so tense.
SFX: Slide

16
Akiyama: I'm not a masseuse./ I can call a professional.
Maria: It's fine./ I don't have a lot of money anyways.
Akiyama: But...
Maira: It's fine./ I wan't you to massage me./ Come on.
Akiyama: (Oh well...)
Akiyama: Okay.
Maria: Ah!
SFX: Shock
Akiyama: I'm sorry!/ Did I hurt you!?
Maria: No./ It felt good so I moaned.
Maria: Please rub a little lower.
Akyama: Yes.
Maria: Yes!
SFX: Rub, rub
Maria: There, there!
Mara: Oh/ it feels good.
Akiyama: Her voice sounds so sexy.

17
Maria: You're really good.
Akiyama: Oh.
Maria: Okay, here too.
SFX: Grab
Akiyama: Huh?
Maria: Rub them.
SFX: Squeeze
Maria: I have a complex because my boobs aren't very big./ Rub them and make them bigger.
SFX: Squish
Akiyama: Huh!?
Maria: More.
SFX: Squeeze
SFX: Pinch
Akiyama: (I don't understand it but....)
Maria: Pinch my nipples more.

18
SFX: Panting
SFX: kunikuni
Maria: They feel so good.
SFX: Gasp
Akiyama: I-I can't!
Maria: Huh!? Why!?
Akiyama: You should have your boyfriend do it for you.
Maria: W-/wait!
Maria: If I had a boyfriend, three of us girls wouldn't have come to a place like this together!
Maria: Seriously!
Rikako: He's really daft, huh?
Maria: I know!
Jurina: You two are/ being too subtle.

19
Jurina: You need a more direct approach.
Jurina: Hey you.

Jurina: Today, I was at the beach and...
Jurina: When I get sunburned, my body feels warm-
Akiyama: (She's going to want a massage or me to rub some lotion on her...)
Jurina: It makes me want to have sex-
SFX: Slide
Akiyama: What!?

20
Jurina: I want you/ to know what it feels like.
Akiyama: W-/ what it feels like??
Jurina: I'm/ really good with my mouth.
SFX: Ahh
Akiyama: What!? With your...
SFX: Suck
Akiyama: mouth!?
SFX: Startled
SFX: Lick, slide
Akiyama: Ah!!
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Suck
Akiyama: Ohhh!
Maria: Woah.
Rikako: Jurina is overdoing it.

21
Text: The way she's moving her tongue
SFX: Lick
SFX: Flick
Text: I wonder how good it'd feel on my ......(TN: use your imagination)
Jurina: So? You you want me to try it on you for real?
Akiyama: We cant!
Akiyama: No matter how good I feel right now...
Akiyama: (That's right, we can't)
Akiyama: You should do this with with the person you love!
Jurina: Even if you say that now...
SFX: Rub
Jurina: I've done this with more than a hundred people so far.
Akiyama: What!?

22
Jurina: I'm so pissed off!!/ My fellatio technique failed!!
Maria: You're too forward.
Rikako: That's getting you.
Jurina: Today has really been the worst!/ My body's so riled up-
Maria: Me too.
Rikako: I know. At this rate, I'll never get to sleep.
Jurina: Let's call him over here.
Maria: And? You're going to attack him?
Text: Squeal
Rikako: The bet is still on isn't it?
Rikako: So the first one that sleeps with him, right?
Jurina: I'll be taking his virginity!
Maria: I won't lose!
SFX: Slide
Akiyama: Excuse me.
Akiyama: I've brought you another beer...
Akiyama: Huh? Did they go to sleep?

23
SFX: Thud.
Akiyama: Wha-
Akiyama: -t
SFX: Topple
Akiyama: i-
Akiyama: -s
Akiyama: this-!?
SFX: Zip

24
Akiyama: What!?
Maria: Our bodies ache and we can't sleep.
Jurina: We want to do something that will feel very good with you!
Akiyama: Wait/ Wait
Akiyama: Wait just a minute!
Jurina: No!/ I can't wait.
Akiyama: Umph.
SFX: Smooch
SFX: Squish

25
Text: Oh, her mouth fees so nice.
Text: Ah, here hand graze my...
SFX: Slide
Text: Ahh, if she rubs me like that I'll come.
SFX: Squeeze
Text: I'm feeling so fuzzy.
Akiyama: Huh.
Text: No!

26
Akiyama: Wait!
Akiyama: We can't have sex just because you ache or you feel all warm.
Akiyama: You have to do it with a person you love, right!
Maria: That's not in style these days.
Rikako: You say this with a nice big erection.
Jurina: It's your first time, isn't it?/ Once you do it, you'll stop talking that way!
Akiyama: I'm sure you guys are really nice/ but there's a girl I like.
Akiyama: So I have sex with anyone else.
Maria: You're just saying this because you're a virgin.
Rikako: We'll be really gentle with you.
Jurina: Just be quiet and do it with us.

27
Akiyama: Sniffle, I'm done for.
Akiyama: Nonoka/ I'm sorry.
SFX: Bun
Rikako: Ugh
Jurina: Eep!
SFX: Bang
SFX: Thud
Maria: Oh no!
Akiyama: Fuuka!
SFX: Poof
SFX: Squeak
Fuuka: This isn't a place for girls like you./ Come back when you actually have boyfriends.

28
Fuuka: It's a good thing we came back early.
Moeka: Yeah.
Nonoka: It looks like their sleeping quietly now.
SFX: Kick
Text: Eeep!
Fuuka: I really gave that jerk a talking to.
Nonoka: Akiyama, I'm sorry.
Akiyama: No! Don't say that./ I did a horrible job of stopping them...
Fuuka: Even so...
Fuuka: You still haven't done it yet..../ Hurry up and get it over with!
SFX: Embarassed
SFX: Nervous laughter.
Moeka: I don't want you to though...

Translation: Umisho 50

Sun, 22 Feb 2009 01:58:16 +0000

65
Kenko Zenrankei Suiebu Umisho
SFX: Noise
Text Box: Kanto Tournament Day 2, 7am/ Before the events start
Sub Text: Before the events start, you are allowed to practice in the main pool.
Maki: Ack! We have the preliminary round of the medley relay right off the bat!
SFX: Thud
Maki: We can make up for our complete and utter failure yesterday!! (small text) I want to join the fight with my kickboard!!
SFX: Roar
Kaname: Makio-chan calm down..
Amuro: Wow, today there's tons of different schools./ those girls over there all look like Makio-chan.
Kaname: Huh?
SFX: Noise
Sub Text: Amuro is super excited
Maki: Woah, they look more like a choir than a swim team..
Girl in unison: Yes!
: They're all cheering loudly
Kaname: Oh, their from Tamatsuka High School in Saitama. (small text) a music school/ They're famous for being super strict.

66
Kaname: Oh, we ought to be in the same round for the preliminaries.
Makio: Then were rivals!!
SFX: On fire
Amuro: Ooo, then I'm going to go say "hi".
SFX: Light Running
Amuro: Huh! Uh, wait!
Amuro: Good Morning!
Amuro: I'm Amuro Ninagawa from Umisho./ Were in the same round for the relay medley. Good luck! (small text) I won't be in it though.
SFX: Bow
Girl: What's with that girl..
SFX: Chatter
Shindo: You're the Amuro Ninagawa that did the 50 and 100m freestyle, right?
SFX: Shove
SFX: Slender
Jacket: Tamatsuka H.S.
Girl: Oh, Shindo.

67
Shindo: I've heard about you. You're form is a little strange, but you're really fast, huh?
Amuro: Well, I lost the 50m yesterday ..
Amuro: But, you sure know a lot about me.
Shindo: Well,
Shindo: I have a thing for lively girls/ like you....
SFX: Stare
Shindo: It's too bad you're not in the medley relay.
SFX: Rushing off
Takeda: Ooooooh! I'm dying to see her tanned @ss!
SFX: Panting
: She's cute.
Maki: She's really nice considering she's our rival.
Kaname: What did you talk about?
Amuro: It seems I'm her type.
Kaname: Huh?

68
SFX: Grip
SFX: Splash
SFX: Gliding
Orizuka: W-
Orizuka: What's gotten into Nanako, I wonder.
Small Text: She was mopey until yesteday.
Kise: She's oddly enthusiastic.
SFX: Splash
SFX: Big Splash
SFX: Glance
Maaya: Hey, you guys get practicing too./ It's a group even and I don't want you holding me back.
Orizuka: Heh-heh, you're one to talk!
Amuro: Oh, it's free swim now?
SFX: Thud, thud, thud
Orizuka: Huh?

69
Orizuka: You should be resting up for tomorrow....
Amuro: Oof
SFX: Tug
Amuro:
SFX: Boing
Orizuka: Seriously
Shizuoka: But Isn't it great that she looks so happy?
Orizuka: Ninagawa!
Orizuka: If you're going to swim, at least swim in the same direction as everyone else!
Amuro:
SFX: Splash
SFX: Crash
Amuro: Eeep!
Orizuka: Argh, I give up...
SFX: Splash
Amuro: I-I'm sorry.
Amuro: Isn't that...

70
SFX: Glare
Amuro: So we meet again. (small text) how'd you get over here so quickly?
SFX: Splash
SFX: Dash
SFX: Smack
Amuro: I'm/ Amuro, we met before.
SFX: Creeping up
SFX: Surprise
Girl: I-
Girl: I don't know you!
SFX: Creeping away
Amuro: Why are you running away? Wait!
Orizuka: What's she doing?
Kise small text: An acquaintance?

71
Amuro: Why won't she talk to me?
Text: Pee pee time.
SFX: Clatter
Girl: What's that!
Girl: Oh really, if you just grab his p**is, it's easy.
Amuro: Huh!
Girl: Ahaha, some girl you didn't know tried to talk to you?
SFX: Dumbfounded
SFX:Yakity yak
Girl: Uh-huh, that's right.
Amuro: Huh?
Amuro: Weren't you still in the pool?
SFX: Confused
Orizuka: Oh, Ninagawa
SFX: Sound of crowd moving
Orizuka: What's the matter? You look pale.
SFX: Pat, pat
Amuro: Um, well

72
SFX: Crash
SFX: Thud
Amuro: Oh! Are you okay!?
Girl: Ugh, sorry!
SFX: Plunk
Girl: It wasn't on purpose!!
Girl: It really was an accident. I'm not a bad person!
SFX: Pat, pat
Girl: Run away!
SFX: Dash
SFX: Fizzle
Orizuka: Well, whatever, just rest up for tomorrow.

73
Announcer: In lane three, / Umisho Commercial High School's Swim Team from Kanagawa Prefecture
SFX: Cheering
Announcer: And now, we'll start the medley really!
Kaname: Amuro, what's the matter?
Maki: Fight!
Amuro: Uhhh.
Announcer: In lane four, Tamatsuka High School's Swim Team from Saitama
SFX: Cheering
Makio: Oh, it's that girl from before.
Girl: Mimi, I'm counting on you for a perfect start!
Mimi: Yes.
SFX: Nod
Orizuka: (Those two girls...)
Orizuka: (look the same)
Makio: Aha, so they were twins, right?
Kaname: Not exactly...

74
SFX:
Kaname/Maki: Quadruplets!!?
2nd Girl Text: Kiss, kiss
3rd Girl: Oh know, they'll find out we're quadruplets!
4th Girl: Thump, thump
SFX: Gasp
SFX: Fizzle
Maki's head: Impossible
Kaname: Are they really?
Text: Isn't that a bit of an overkill.
Amuro: Oh I get it. (small text) there were four of them.
SFX: Relieved
Girl: Good luck, Umineko.
(TN: Litterally black tailed gull. Just a play on the name of their school)
SFX: Grin
SFX: Tug, tug
Text: Not funny...

Translation: Oretama 28

Sun, 15 Feb 2009 06:11:58 +0000

"This translation belongs to franky-house, if you want to use it ask for permission first"
My Balls 28

1
Text Bubble: I'm going to save the world!?
M Balls
Come see the My Balls Battalion of 5, at the brink
We'll protect humanity from danger!! (Maybe)
28th Ball: She's right in front of me!?

2
Kohta:
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Smack, Squish
Irene: Ah.
Kohta: Ahhh!
SFX: Shock
Irene: Mmmmm.
Irene: Please let me suck on it some more.
SFX: Lick

3
Irene: (There's only 3 days left in July.)
SFX: Tumble
Irene: (I have to be ready and get enough beautiful young boys just in case..)
Irene: Okay, let's go again!
Kohta: Huh!?
Text: July 29th 20XX
Minayo: Alright, I'm off to work!
Kohta: Are you sure, Minayo?/ Shouldn't you rest...

4
Minayo: I'm fine!
Minayo: I'm sorry I caused you so much trouble when I collapsed yesterday, Kohta.
Minayo: I'm not really sure why, but at that time I felt something scary and pleasant at the same time.
SFX: Ha, ha
Kohta: It's probably just your imagination, right?
Minayo: Okay, I'll see you later.
Kohta: Take care.
Elyse: You're lucky she doesn't remember aything about it,/ but you need to be careful not to involve her any further.
SFX: Slam

5
Kohta: Elyse!!/ It's all thanks to you that we were saved.
Elyse: Thanks to me? Hah.
SFX: Rub, rub.
Elyse: Becuase I'm an A cup?
SFX: Glare
Kohta: Ah, well, anyways, since that holy rosary made a barrier on my penis/ those careless demons couldn't lay a hand on me.
Elyse: What, are you getting cocky? You can't handle any more...
Kohta: Don't worry. We've only got three days left.
Kohta: Hey, want some green beans?

6
SFX: Pop
SFX: Panting
Kohta: Ahhh! I had imagined something dirty.
SFX: Shock
Elyse: Don't even say it! Not only are you at your limit but
Elyse: any more and the muscle that controls you ejaculation might tear!?
Kohta: I'm sorry.
SFX: Buzz

7
Beezlebub: I see. That barrier was unfortunate, but/ He's at his limit.
Beezlebub: Just one little push...
Asmodeus: Lady Beezlebub/ If that's all it takes, leave it to me.
SFX: Sucking in air
Kohta: Before Minayo gets home/ I need to get dinner ready.
Elyse: (No fair. If it's for that Minayo girl, he'll do anything...)

8
Kohta: Elyse! Is there anything you want to eat?
Elyse: Who?/ Me?
Elyse: Umm., well then that spicy/ soup thing you put on rice.
Kohta: Ah! Curry?
Kohta: Shall I make it mild for the little princess?
Elyse: A little spicy is fine!
Kohta: All right, a little spicy.
Kohta: Just you wait, I'm pretty good at making curry.

9
Elyse: Kohta is making it for me..
SFX: Tehee
Duel as Minayo: I'm home!
SFX: Bang
Kohta: What's the matter? Aren't you in the middle of your shift?
Duel as Minyao: Yeah but I just stopped home for a bit.
Elyse: My curry!
Elyse: Stupid woman.
Kohta: I'm sorry. I'm still making dinner.

10 (62)
Kohta: Huh!?
Dual as Minayo: Who cares about that...
SFX: Heavy breathing
Duel Minayo: I came home early for that!
Kohta: Minayo?
Kohta: (What the hell? She can't be drunk, can she?)
Kohta: No, she doesn't smell like alcohol.

11
Duel as Minayo: Kohta, hurry up and take them off.
Kohta: No, Minayo, we can't.
SFX: Whirr
Duel: Ahhhh!
SFX: Waaaaaah
Kohta: (The barrier is reacting?)
SFX: Whirr
Duel: I see. This holy power/ is making it so that demon's can't touch it.
SFX: Poof

12
Duel: I'm the doppelganger, Duel.
Duel: I'm going to free Lady Emanniel immediately!
Kohta: Doppelganger?
Elyse: Shit! The demons have already gone this far!!
SFX: Clatter
Elyse: Kohta!!

13
Duel: Umpf
Elyse: Ugh
SFX: Shazam
Duel: The magic of a lesser demon like you won't break through that magic seal./ So just stay in there nice and quiet.
Elyse: It won't open!?/ Shit..
SFX: Rattle, rattle
Kohta: I don't know what the hell a doppelganger is but
SFX: Hah!
Kohta: She can't do anything sexual to me with the barrier in place.

14
Duel: Quit bluffing. I know you're at your limit.
Duel: I'll make you come involuntarily without even touching you.
Kohta: Involuntarily?
Duel: Yes, it's a phenomenon where it gets so excited that it will ejaculate without any friction whatsoever./ The more it builds up, can an injured person like you contain it?
Kohta: (Without touching me!?)
Kohta: Who would get that excited by someone like you!?
SFX: Swish
Duel: I told you didn't I? I'm a doppelganger.

15
Duel: I can change into anything...
SFX: Poof
Duel: Even a gravure model.
Kohta: She looks just like that popular big boobed idol.
Magazine: Young Gravure
Calling all guys who like boobs.
Duel: I can copy style, of course
SFX: Boing
Duel: and even the color of her nipples.

16
Kohta: (Oh! It has the same impact as the real thing!?)
SFX: Boing
Kohta: Her nipples are bigger than I though, so sexy...
Duel: It's not just the boobs.
SFX: Slip
Duel: I'm just like the real thing down here too.
SFX: Exposed

17
Duel: I'll only show it to you.../ A private photo shoot.
SFX: Wiggle
Kohta: Oh god.
Kohta: This model I've dreamed of/ is posing naked ...
Kohta: I'm unbelievable aroused.
Elyse: That jerk!/ Why does he have to get so aroused from gigantic boobs.
SFX: Clawing
Elyse: Gigantic boobs...
Duel: What's the matter? Should I make it a little sexier?
SFX: Swish
Duel: Well then...

18
Duel: How about I become..
Duel: a hollywood star for you.
SFX: Poof
Kohta: Angel*** Jolie!?
SFX: Choking
Duel: So? Aren't I sexy?/ You couldn't see this even if you paid millions of dollars.

19
Duel: So, please come for me my little one.
Kohta: But, but--
SFX: Panting
Kohta: (What man wouldn't want to do her once! / Angel***'s pheromones are enough to make me come. I can't take it anymore...)
SFX: Throbbing
Elyse: What makes her so sexy!? That pisses me off./ If only I could undo her spell...
Elyse: Wait!
Kohta: Ahh!
SFX: Sharp pain
Kohta: It's no use. My ejaculatory shaft control muscle....!

20
Elyse: Kohta!
Elyse: You can break the seal on this door with the holy power from the thing on your penis!
Kohta: Huh?
Elyse: Hurry up!
SFX: Whip
Kohta: What!?
Kohta: Shit. I have no idea what I'm doing...
SFX: Whirr
Kohta: Ahhhhh!
SFX: Bang

21
SFX: Spurt
Duel: No way. My magic seal...
SFX: Poof
Elyse: Kyaaaaaa!
Elyse: I may have small boobs!
Elyse: But it its throwing your weight around, I never lose! Take that!?
Duel: Ahhh!

22
SFX: Poof
Kohta: That was a close one./ Who'd have though that Angel*** would...
Elyse: You! You think that's sexy!??/ And I'm stuck with the body of a child!
Kohta: Wait! Eeeek!
SFX: Menacing aura

23
Angel: Demons are streaming through the gate into the human world.../ What on earth is going on?
SFX: Flutter
Beezlebub: We've failed again. We can't lay a hand on him.
Beezlebub: I apologize that we have to come to you for help.
Lucifer: I see. A holy barrier?
Angel: It can't be her!

24
Lucifer: Shall I, the demon lord...
Lucifer: put an end to this battle?
SFX: Flutter
Angel: (The fallen angel, Lucifer, also known as, the demon lord Satan....)
Angel: This is big...
Text Box: Two days left until the human race escapes destruction.

Translation: Koibana Onsen Special : Cheer!

Sun, 15 Feb 2009 06:03:21 +0000

173
Koibana Onsen
Fuuka: Heh
Moeka: Welcome to Koibana Onsen where love blossoms!
SFX:Small Bow

174
Koibana Onsen

175

176
Sign: Video Game Shop Ochimusha
(TN: Ochimusha means a soldier who has lost and flees)
Boss: Miyamoto
Boss: Shall we close the shop soon?
Miyamoto: Yeah.
Miyamoto: We were really busy today, huh, boss?
SFX: Clatter
Boss: Yeah.
Sign:Toran-- on sale today ---Hina in stock
Boss: We had back to back new releases.
Boss: But it used to be way worse. / They'd line up before the store even opened.

177
Miyamoto: I used to do that too when I was in junior high./ I think I got in trouble for waiting all night.
Boss: Oh?/ I didn't know you were into video games.
Miyamoto: Well, not anymore./ Now I hardly play them at all.
Boss: Why's that?/ Needless to say that you help out at the store so much/ I may not even be able to pay you your salary this month.
Miyamoto: What!??
Miyamoto: That guy sucks at jokes.
Miyamoto: Maybe I'll change jobs.
Miyamoto: Huh?

178

179
Miyamoto: (What's up with this messed up cheer leader.)
Miyamoto: (I've never seen her before.)
Miyamoto: Um,/ This is my apartment....
Miyamoto: Uh, would...
Miyamoto: would you mind getting up?
SFX: Rattle

180
Cheerleader: You're Miyamoto!?
SFX: Rustle
Miyamoto: Ah, yeah.
Cheerleader: I've been waiting to meet you!
SFX: Rush
Miyamoto: Ugh.
Cheerleader: Oh I'm sorry. Thank you for waiting.
Miyamoto: Wait, what?/ What's going on?

181
Miyamoto: Personal Controller??
Izumi: Yes./ I am the personal controller for "Cheer! The Love Support Game"
Izumi: I'm Izumi Kirisawa.
SFX: Bow
Izumi: Thank you for applying to our company's monitor./ You were chosen through a strict lottery system.
Miyamoto: i don't really understand anything you're saying but...
Izumi: Hmm? That's strange...
SFX: pom pom
SFX: Curtsey

182
Izumi: This/ is your application, isn't it?
Miyamoto: What!?
SFX: In tatters
Paper:
Application
We're developing the game of your dreams. Consequently, fill in your dream. A lottery of those that apply will determine the game monitor. You can have the game of your dreams at your fingertips.

Name: Gunpei Miyamoto
Address: ........

Miyamoto: (That's definitely my handwriting....)
Miyamoto: This is that thing I send out for in junior high!?
Text: Sorry to intrude.
Izumi: I;m sorry. The development experienced delays and was put off five years after it was scheduled.
Miyamoto: So, you're staff? An event companion?
SFX: Rattle
Izumi: I'm the game controller.
Izumi: This game has a human shaped controller.
Izumi: In other words, it's the game of the century! The play fulfills his dreams in reality using me!
SFX: Tehee

183
Izumi: Of course, there are mans for you and I to enjoy our love.
SFX: Squeal
SFX: Toss
Izumi: In other words, that's the main even....
Miyamoto: (This is awkward.)
Izumi: Oh! / You don't believe me!?
Miyamoto: Well, I mean, can you ....
Izumi: Here!
Miyamoto: Ah!
SFX: Smoosh

184
Izumi: How is it?
SFX: Squish
Miyamoto: So soft...
Izumi: Not that!
SFX: Tighter
SFX: Oomph
Izumi: Don't you hear it?
Miyamoto: Buzzing...
Miyamoto: Something buzzing in there!!
SFX: Scooting away

185
Izumi: I was made as the concentrated effort of all technology./ Just to bring your dreams to reality.
Izumi: Now do you believe me?
SFX: Yay!
Miyamoto: (So her body is actually a game controller.)
SFX: Nervous
Miyamoto: Wow.
Izumi: So then let the game...../ begin!

186
Izumi: So first, please choose my name.
SFX: Pop
Card: What am I called?
1) Izumi Kirisawa
2) Pig
Miyamoto: What's with that board?
Izumi: This is the multiple choice screen.
Miyamoto: So, I'm supposed to choose the right answer?
Miyamoto: (No one would suddenly call you a pig...)
Miyamoto: Okay, Number 1, Izumi Kirisawa.
Izumi: Is that your final answer?
SFX: Stare
SFX: Hahaha
Miyamoto: Haha, final answer...
SFX: Fling
Izumi: Thank goodness!
Miyamoto: What do you mean/ thank goodnes!?

187
Izumi: 1) was the lovey dovey course,/ 2) was the breaking in through strenous beating course
Miyamoto: W-waig, breaking in?
Fantasy Miyamoto: You pig.
Fantasy Miyamoto: You she-pig
SFX: Squeeze
SFX: Moan
Text: What the hell is that.....
Izumi: So our we leveled up our affection and intimacy levels.
Miyamoto: Huh?/ Love level?
Izumi: In me there are a variety of paramaters/ like affection level, intimacy level and trust level.
Izumi: They change according to the player's choices.
Miyamoto: Oh?

188
Izumi: Miyamoto-san/ This is great!
Izumi: You understand everything about me, don't you!!
Izumi: So now we've leveled up our affection and trust levels.
Miyamoto: I don't really get it but,/ it looks like our parameters are going up.
Izumi: Miyamoto-san
Miyamoto: Huh?
Izumi: I love you...
Miyamoto: Uh...

189
Miyamoto: I wonder...
SFX: Thump, thump, thump
Miyamoto: If the parameter's level up, then you...
Izumi: Yes.
SFX: Blush
Izumi: When all the parameters reach their max/ my body body and heart are yours to do what you like.
Text: Body and heart, body and heart
Text: As I like, As I like
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan!
SFX: Aroused
SFX: Crack
SFX: Smack
Izumi: I'm sorry/ if you try to do sexual things with me before the parameters are high enough my self defense mechanism kicks in.
Miyamoto: I see.

190
Text: The next day
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan, you like aquariums don't you...
Izumi: Yes, I love them
SFX: Yay!
Izumi: The parameters are going up!
Boy: He, isn't that girl
Boy: a little strange?
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan
Izumi: Yes?

191
Izumi: Is something like this?
Izumi: okay?
Miyamoto: Surely you don't want to be in those ripped up clothes forever?
Miyamoto: What's the matter? Don't you like them?
Izumi: That's not it./ What should I do? If the affection level goes up too high...
Izumi: The parameters could reach their max just today...
SFX: Sniffle

192
Text: Honestly, it costs more that four games put together, but
Miyamoto: Where should we go next?
Izumi: Yeah.
Text: Izumi-chan is worth way more than that.
Text: It;s really been a long time
Text: since I've had this much fun.

193
Izumi: By the way, is it okay that you're not in school?
Miyamoto: School?
SFX: Sigh
Miyamoto: Oh, I'm currently on a break from school./ I'm just working.
Izumi: You can do that in junior high?
Miyamoto: I was going to a specialty school...
Izumi: What!? According to my information, you're supposed to me a junior high school student.
Miyamoto: That data was from 5 years ago, right?
Izumi: Oh, that's right! That's why you weren't at the first house I went to.
Miyamoto: What!? You went to my parents house!?
Izumi: Yes, but on my way here I got lost/ and it was so terrible a dog chased after me
Text: No!
SFX: Hahaha

194
Izumi: Okay, then I'll input the new data. What's your name?
Miyamoto: Gunpei Miyamoto.
Izumi: Birthday?
Miyamoto: Uh... that wouldn't change, would it?
Izumi: Oh you're right, I'm sorry./ Okay, then your job?
Miyamoto: I was going to school for computers/ but I'm on a break.
Izumi: What type of girl do you like?
Miyamoto: Huh?
Miyamoto: Well.
Miyamoto: I like girls like Izumi-chan.

195
Izumi: Really!? My data says that you used to like older sister types.
Miyamoto: But how I feel now?/ A lot changes in 5 years.
Izumi: I guess so.
SFX: sigh
Izumi: So, what's your dream for the future?
Miyamoto: Dream?
Miyamoto: Dream, huh.
SFX: Um
Miyamoto: I don't have one right now.

196
SFX: Ping
SFX: Flop
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan?
Miyamoto: What's wrong?
SFX: Beep, beep
Miyamoto: Hey!?
Izumi: The password is incorrect so game mode has been suspended.
Izumi: Please input the password again.

197
Miyamoto: Password!?
Miyamoto: What password!?
Izumi: That's
SFX: Creak
Izumi: Miyamoto's
Izumi: Dream
SFX: Slump
SFX: Wilt
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan

198
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan.../.shit
Miyamoto: I don't remember that stuff from 5 years ago!!/ I even forgot I'd applied!!
Miyamoto: That's it!!/ The application form!!
Miyamoto: No good. The important stuff is torn off.
(TN: For application form, it's the same as p182, but the kanji for dream is in the torn part)

199
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan
SFX: Sigh
Miyamoto: Say something, please!!
SFX: Shake
Miyamoto: I, I!!
Miyamoto: Today was so much fun./ It was just like I had a real girlfriend.
Miyamoto: Every time the parameters went up, my feelings did too.../ I'd completely forgotten it was a game...
Miyamoto: A game, huh...

200 (memory)
Text: After all, it's just virtual reality?
Text: Come now, Miyamoto-kun
Miyamoto: That may be so but/ I was really moved.
Boy 1: Yeah, yeah.
Boy 2: I don't get you game nerds.
Miyamoto: You wouldn't know, you've never tried it!!
Glasses: They don't get it./ Just leave it be.
Miyamoto: NO WAY!
Glasses: Eep!
Miyamoto: I want to design games!!
Miyamoto: Fun games!! so they they, no EVERYONE will be sucked into my awesome game!!
SFX: On fire

201
Miyamoto: That's right.
Miyamoto: My
SFX: Twitch
Miyamoto: My dream is
Miyamoto: to make a fantasty game
Miyamoto: a game some amazing it sucks everyone int!!
SFX: Groan
SFX: Snatch

202
Miyamoto: Izumi-chan!!
Izumi: Password accepted.
Miyamoto: Thank you.
SFX: Hug
Miyamoto: Thanks to you I remebered something very important.
Izumi: Will you let me hep you reach your dream?
Miyamoto: Of course.
Izumi: Then, input the data/ in here.

203
SFX: Thump, thump cont...
Text: So cute!
SFX: Yikes
Text: Even if it's a game, or virtual reality...
SFX: Slide

204
SFX: Squeeze
Text; They're so soft!
SFX: Slide
SFX: Pant
Text: Is this really a game!?
Text: I love her!
Text: I can't stop!! What will happen

205
Text: to Izumi there?
Izumi: Ah. No.
SFX: Panting
SFX: Squish
Izumi: Stop!!
Miyamoto: Huh?

206
SFX: Crack
Miyamoto: AHHHHHH!
Izumi: I'm sorry./ The trust level isn't high enough yet. And...
Miyamoto: And from that action all the levels have dropped.
SFX: Smoldering
Miyamoto: I see.
Miyamoto: That's fine!
SFX: Heh
Miyamoto: From now on, I'm going to to my best to become a game creator!!
SFX: Yes!
Miyamoto: But, Izumi can I really make that game?
Izumi: Do you best!!
Text: Cheer! End

Translation: 7

Wed, 04 Feb 2009 09:02:21 +0000

149
Text Box: This is
: What the hell place is this!?
: There's nothing here!
: No shit! I can't even get a signal on my phone!!
: There's no TV!?
: The place where love blossoms. as if!!
: Sucky-----
Sign/Text: Koibana Onsen

150
Seventh Bath: The Internet Addict
Koibana Onsen

151
Megumi: Why the hell did you bring me here!?/ You're a moron Yoshida!
Yoshida: I'm sorry, Megu--
Yoshida: Um,/ excuse me.
Yoshida: Are there any manga or internet cafes around here?
SFX: Frustrated
Akiyama: Huh?
Akiyama: I-I don't think so.
Akiyama: I mean we don't even have a convenience store so....
Megumi: I checked around/ and I can't even get a signal.
Megumi: I can't believe there's a place like this exists!!
SFX: Whine

152
Fuuka: Internet addiction?
SFX: Clatter
Fuuka: What a strange guest.
SFX: Huff
SFX: Swing
Fuuka: Well,/ he said he brought her to Koibana Springs to wander aimlessly and be all lovely dove.
Fuuka: And get swept up in the romantic atmosphere.
SFX: Kiss, smooch
SFX: Swing
SFX: Hahaha
Akiyama: I guess so.
Akiyama: Let me finish chopping the wood.
Fuuka: No way you moron!/ You'll take my job!
Akiyama: It's fine, take a break.

153
Akiyama: Phew.
Akiyama: I'm exhausted!
Fuuka: Good work!
Fuuka: How's it going? / Are you getting anywhere with Nonoka?
Akiyama: Heh.../ Thanks to you.
SFX: Drowsy
Akiyama: We've been so busy, we haven't had any time alone together.
Fuuka: (That goes without saying)
Fuuka: I see.
Akiyama: Coo.

154
Fuuka: Oh, he fell asleep?
Fuuka: Oh well.
SFX: Snore
Text: Arg! Why does it have to be Nonoka!
Text: If it were me...
SFX: Spin, spin
Text: I'm sorry!
Text: I just want a little...
SFX: Woosh

155
Megumi: Isn't that stupid?
SFX: Hmmm
SFX: Thump, thump
Yoshida: Gasp
Megumi: What kind of inn is this?/ Seriously, even the waitress is screwing around?
Megumi: You brought me to an absolutely rediculous place. / There's nothing to do, nothing!?
Yoshida: I'm sorry, Meg.
Fuuka: That must be the infamous net addict!
Fuuka: Interesting...
Fuuka: I'll show you! / There's plenty of messing around you can do!
SFX: Swish
Fuuka: Akiyama, help me!
SFX: Yawn

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Akiyama: Are you serious!?
SFX: Rustling
Akiyama: You're really doing to do it?
Fuuka: We're going to get her excited.
Akiyama: But/ I think this is a bad idea.
Fuuka: It's fine.
SFX: Snatch
Fuuka: Do it.

157
Fuuka: (Oh, they're watching, they're watching. I'll give you something to get excited about.)
Fuuka: (How's that for you?)
SFX: Smooch, Kiss
Akiyama: (Soo nice)
Megumi: Hmph!
Yoshida: Gulp
SFX: Thump, thump. thump

158
Fuuka: (Shit, she's looks unaffected)
Fuuka: Akiyama
Akiyama: Huh?
Fuuka: Grab my boob!
Akiyama: What!?
Fuuka: It's for the guest, come on!
SFX: Yank
Akiyama: Ack!
Akiyama: Wait- /
SFX: Y-your bare chest??

159
Fuuka: It's fine, just do it!
SFX: Squeeze
SFX: Squish
Fuuka: Ah
Akiyama: (Fuuka's boobs are so soft)
SFX: Tweak

160
Fuuka: (You're really good at this Akiyama)
Fuuka: (I'll end up..)
Fuuka: (doing it for real...)
Both: We can't do this!

161
Akiyama: Ack/ She's not even there.
SFX: Blush
Fuuka: Let go you idiot!
SFX: Thud
Akiyama: What!?
Akiyama: Why'd you do that..?
Text: It hurts!
Yoshida: Uh, hello,
SFX: Nervous laughter

162
Fuuka: You!/ Make her tell you whether the internet is more important or you are!!
Fuuka: It looks like she'd say the internet, right?
Fuuka: Pathetic!!
Fuuka: Yoshida!! You're pathetic!
Yoshida: It seems like she can't get the internet out of her head no matter what I do./ But this place is so remote you can't even use a cell phone, huh? I might have been a little cruel?
Fuuka: Don't call it remote!!
Fuuka: And don't think like that!
Fuuka: You came here so she'd forget the internet and you two could be all lovey-dovey, didn't you?
Yoshida: Well that's what I was thinking but...
Fuuka: Great! I'll give you some pointers./ Do exactly what I tell you!
Yoshida: What!?

163
Megumi: Really?
SFX: Delight
Megumi: I'll really get service here?
Megumi: At an outdoor bath?
Yoshida: Apparently...
SFX: Nervous laughter
Yoshida: (Somehow I got her here, Fuuka.)
Akiyama: It'll really work here?
Fuuka: Like I have any idea.
Fuuka: Are you ready?
Fuuka: This is it.

164
Fuuka: For a couple like you people, who get caught up in other things,/ physical contact is important.
SFX: Tug
SFX: Rub, rub
Fuuka: Anyways, just touch her body.
Megumi: Hey, Yoshida!/ I knew it, there's no signal here.
Yoshida: Huh? Ahh, really? That's funny
Megumi: You were tricked, weren't you?
Yoshida: Well, maybe./ I thought it was a little strange too.
Megumi: Seriously!
SFX: Pant
Yoshida: Meg, since we're here, do you want to use the outdoor bath?
SFX: Thumpity-thump
Yoshida: Together..
SFX: Thump
SFX: Twitch
Megumi: Huh!?
Megumi: No, that's okay.

165
Yoshida: Don''t say that.
Yoshida: I mean, even if we go back to the room, there's nothing to do.
SFX: Push
SFX: Squeeze
SFX: Thump
Megumi: Well, I guess/ just for a little while.
Yoshida: Okay!
Fuuka: Then next/ Show a little bit of that male bod/ it's really effective!
SFX: Tug
SFX: Ahh!
Yoshida: I'll wash your back/ Meg.
SFX: Splash
SFX: Thump, thump
Megumi: N- / N-no that's okay./ I'll do it myself.
Yoshida: Don't be silly.

166
Megumi: You're acting different that usual./ It's so outgoing.
Fuuka: After that, stimulate different areas.
SFX: Eek!
Fuuka: I'm sure you know a few areas, right?
SFX: Shock
Yoshida: A little, I guess?
Yoshida: Is this okay?
Megumi: It's not bad...
SFX: Squish

167
Fuuka: Her brain will get overloaded by the stimulation.
SFX: Thump
Yoshida: Oh, Meg...
Text: Died and gone to heaven
SFX: Sigh
Fuuka: You can express your love through your fingertips. / You can bring her back to the real world.
Megumi: Oh.
SFX: Squish
Megumi: (I haven't felt like this in a long time..)
Megumi: (What should I do?)
SFX: Squeeze

168
SFX: Ring, ring
Phone: You've got mail.
Akiyama: The phone rang!
Fuuka: Argh, that moron!!/ They were just getting to the good stuff!!
SFX: Rushes to phone
SFX: Flip
Phone: This months storm sure was interesting huh? Especially
SFX: Click, clack
SFX: Splash
Yoshida: Ack!
Yoshida: What are you doing?
SFX: Bubble
SFX: Plunk
Yoshida: You're precious cell phone!!
Megumi: Who cares about that! Right now, the most important thing is right in front of me, Yoshida.

169
Yoshida: Meg!
Megumi: Ah.
Megumi: More
Megumi: Squeeze harder.
Megumi: Oh.
SFX: Boing
SFX: Squeeze
Megumi: It's terrible.
Yoshida: Huh?
Megumi: I'm only just now realizing
Megumi: how you've been looking at me like this.

170
Megumi: You've gotten so hard.
Megumi: Why don't you
Megumi: "connect" with me...
(TN: Playing on how she always connects to the internet)
Yoshida: Yes.
SFX: Slide
Megumi: Oh, it's
SFX: Smack

171
SFX: Squish, Squelch, Smack
SFX: Ah.
Megumi: This is the first time/ it's felt so good.
Megumi: It feels so great. I want to stay connected forever.
Megumi: Ah
Megumi: Ah
Megumi: Ah
Yoshida: Uh, me too.
Megumi: Ah
Yoshida: Oh
Fuuka: Wow,/ Now she's a sex addict.
SFX: Hahaha
Akiayama: Isn't that good enough for now?
Megumi: Oh!
Yoshida: Ahh.

172
Yoshida/Megumi: Thank you.
Fuuka: Please come back again!
Yoshida: Fuuka/ Thank you so much.
Fuuka: It's great. Come back soon.
Yoshida: Yes.
Nonoka: Really, great, huh?
SFX: Shuffle
Fuuka: Nonoka?
Fuuka: Have you been watching this whole time?
Nonoka: Yes!/ You did your best to help them, didn't you?
Fuuka: You didn't happen to see "it" did you?
Nonoka: By it, do you mean when you kissed Akiyama?
Fuuka: You saw it!!
Fuuka: I'm sorry!

Translation: Umisho 49

Wed, 04 Feb 2009 08:50:13 +0000

Umisho 49
55
Text Box: The three day long Kanto Swimming Tournament finally began.
SFX: Hurray
Text: ~ Events Umisho will participate in~
Day 1: 50 and 800 Meter Freestyle/ 100 Meter Back Stroke
Day 2: 100 Meter Breast Stroke/ 200 Meter Individual Medley Relay/ Medley Relay
Day 3: 100 Meter Freestyle/ 200 Meter Back Stroke/ 200 Meter Butterfly (Men)
Kenko Zenrakei Suiebu Umisho
Text Box: ....But
SFX: Ugh
?: Something's wrong with the person in lane 4, huh?
?: She's bobbing
?; And what kind of swimming style is that?
White SFX: Oohs and Aahs
Black SFX: Splash
Small SFX: Listless
Maki: Amuro, do your best!!
Orizuka: You're coming in dead last!!
Amuro: I don't feel so well.
White SFX: Oohs and Aahs
Black SFX: Smack
Text Box: Amuro lost in the 50m freestyle preliminary round.

56
Kaname: Obviously she's still dizzy from yesterday's endurance competition...
Orizuka: And that's why I didn't want to do it!!
Maki and : But she ended up playing anyways...
Nanjo: Heh, you guys are in bad shape, huh?
Orizuka: What!?
Nanjo: You're just lucky your even isn't today, huh Zuka?
Orizuka: Shut up! You're the one who's relieved that it's not today!
Naruko Text: Guessed Right
SFX: Dizzy
Nanjo: Oh really. What are you implying?
Sub Text: They're holding her up.
Maki: Aah!
Maki: Nakamura is doing terrible~~
SFX: Splash
SFX: Pant
Text Box: 800m freestyle

57
Kaname: All you have left today is your 100m back stroke, Maaya.
Kaname: You're probably dizzy too, huh? Are you okay?
Maaya: Piece of cake- (small text) I may even get second place in 100m and 200m./ I mean it's like a handicap.
Text: 5 I ---
6 Nishioka ---e
7 Nanako Maaya
8 Kozawa Rie

SFX: Poof
SFX: Drip, drip
Kise: Maaya, your 100m back stroke ...
Maaya: No way,
Maaya?: No way, I'm out of the tournament!!!

58
Sign: Shikishima Inn
Orizuka: What the hell are you doing.../ Even if we won the pre-tournament "competition" it's meaningless if we don't win now!!
Kaname: (But you were so happy when we won...)
Kise: We even lost to Shinomiya in the third event.
Amuro: I'm still worn out.
Maki: Are you okay?
Orizuka: Who has events tomorrow?
Shizoka: I do.
Shizuoka Text Box: 200m individual medley relay
Ikamasa: Mine's on day three.
Kise: I'll do my best.
Kise Text Box: 100m breast stroke.
Kaname: And there's a medley relay tomorrow too.
Orizuka: That's it! The medley relay!!
Orizuka: We didn't practice transitions, but we still made excellent time and made it through the prefectural tournament with the medley relay!! (small text) That story was cut out though.
Orizuka: We'll make up for our losses to Shinomiya today!
Text Box: By the way
Swimmers for the medley relay
1) Maaya (Back Stroke)
2) Kise (Breast Stroke)
3) Shizuoka (Butterfly)
4) Orizuka (Freestyle)

Orizuka: Nanako, are you listening?

59
Orizuka: Today was unfortunate but you still have tomorrow's relay and a 200 meter the day after.
Maaya: ...Even if I win those
Maaya: It doesn't erase today's losses.
SFX: Ugly
Orizuka: Huh!?
Orizuka: Don't think of it like that. (small text) You may hate that you lost but.
Orizuka: Just forget about it, it's just the first match.
Maaya: What!
Maaya: Because you've done nothing but lose..
Maaya: You can't possibly understand my feelings. I always win!
SFX: Clank
Orizuka: Nanako, wait!!
SFX: Dash
SFX: Thud, thud
Kaname: I'll go after her.
Orizuka: Seriously
Ikamasa: Me too!
Takeda: I won't let you steal this chance!

60
Orizuka: The rest of you go to bed so you'll be fresh tomorrow./ Ninagawa, please rest tomorrow. (small text) so you'll be okay for the day after.
SFX: Crowd leaving
Text by Maki: Maaya-san
Amuro: Sigh
SFX: Chrip (crickets)
SFX: Thud, thud
SFX: Pant
Kaname: Where the hell did she go?
Takeda: Maaya! I'll comfort you!
SFX: Thud, thud
SFX: Chirp
SFX: Chirp
Maaya: Crap
SFX: Chirp
Shizuoka: Uh
SFX: Rustle

61
SFX: Whip
Shizuoka: Ah
Maaya: What are you doing here!?
SFX: Grumbling
Shizuoka: Um, well...
Shizuoka: I couldn'r sleep so
SFX: Waving hands
Shizuoka: I just stepped out for a walk.. by chance...
Shizuoka: We have the tournament tomorrow...so I'll go back soon...
Maaya: Ugh, you've never been to inter-high before, have you?/ You'll probably just lose again, huh?
SFX: Sulk
Shizuoka: You're probably right.,
SFX: Collapse
Maaya: Are you making fun of me? Aren't you the least bit upset?
SFX: Roar
Maaya: You-- you--
SFX: Grab
Shizuoka: Ah!

62
Maaya: All you've got going for you is your big boobs!!
SFX: Squish
Shizuoka: Ahh!
Maaya: You stupid, stupid
SFX: Pinching
Shizuoka: P-please stop..
Maaya: Waaaaah!!
SFX: Ah, huh?
Maaya; Hiccup, waaah.
Maaya: Hiccup,
SFX: Squeeze
SFX: Gushing
Shizuoka: (Oh..)
SFX: Squeeze

63
Shizuoka: Well, if Iose.../ I'm sad too.
Shizuoka: So we have to try harder next time, right?
Shizuoka: It's not the end of the world if we lose..
SFX:
Shizuoka: Oh! I'm sorry. I was just speaking my mind.
Shizuoka: (She looks like she's gonna hit me...)
Maaya: You're in the really too, huh.
Shizuoka: Uh, yeah. I'm butterfly.
SFX: Bob
SFX: Swish
SFX: Shock

64
Maaya: Let's do our best tomorrow.
Maaya: Thanks. (small)
Shizuoka: Yeah.
SFX: Smack
Ikamasa: Sure is pretty!?
SFX: Surprise
Maaya: How long have you been waching us! Take that!
SFX: Blast
By Ikamasa's head SFX: Zing
By Kaname's head SFX: Woosh
Text Box: And on that note, let's go on to tomorrows events.

Translation: Koibana Onsen 6

Thu, 29 Jan 2009 08:00:17 +0000

125
Text: Koibana Onsen
; Eek! It's a stranger!
; Somebody catch him!!
: Go get the sasumata!
(TN: A sasumata is a long metal pole with a reversed hook used to pin intruders to the wall. It dates back to the Edo period but it still used in Japanese schools. --Note to typesetter, this object appears on page 127, you could just draw an arrow to it and omit the TN--)

126
Koibana Onsen
Text: Sixth Bath: I love my big brother!

127
SFX: Ga-chang
SFX: Eep!
Akiyama: Ugh.
Teacher?: We got him!
Moeka: Big brother?
Moeka: What's going on?
Akiyama: M-moeka.
Akiyama: You forgot this.
SFX: Repeatedly
SFX: Nervous laughter
Moeka: Oh, my lunch!
Moeka: I'm sorry, big brother.
Girl: What!? You're Moeka's older brother!?
Akiyama: Well..

128
Girl: Huh?/ Moeka had an older brother?
Sign: Changing Room
Girl: This is the first I've heard of it.
Chi-chan: Wait is he the live-in worker?
Moeka: Yep.
Mikarin: You're living with a guy!?/ Does that mean you're finally getting some experience?
Moeka: What? Experience?/ He's not like that!
Chi-chan: Well, you're not like that anyway.
SFX: Giggling
Mikarin: You haven't even started puberty yet have you?
Moeka: That's harsh...

129
Moeka: It's not like you have any experience, Mikarin.
(TN: "rin" is a common ending used in nicknames to make them sound cute)
Moeka: What?/ No way!
Mika: Well
Chi-chan: You did it!
Moeka: You're lying!?
Chi-chan: When, when? / With who?/ You have a boyfriend?/ Spill the details!
SFX: Shriek
Mika: It was at a hotel a week ago with a college guy I met at my job.
Mika: He kept asking so we did it three times...
Moeka: Three times...
SFX: Creak, creak
Moeka: In a hotel...

130
Chi-chan: Really--- Was it okay?
Mika: Yeah. It hurt at first but he was being gentle./ It got a little better.
Mika: He kissed me a lot too.
Girl: I see./ What a nice guy.
Girl: I like guys who are good kissers.
Girl: Good kisses are so nice, they make me wet.
Moeka: W-wet... Kiss....
SFX: Flustered

131

Mika: Just as you'd expect someone who lost their virginity in middle school, huh?
Moeka: Oh, you lost it too?
Mika: Ah.
SFX: Spacing Out
Mikarin: Are you okay Moeka?/ But this an everyday kind of thing at your inn, isn't it?
Girl: And, isn't it just work?
Moeka: But you two are going into vivid detail.
Moeka: It's way different when it's a guest!
Mika: Really? Moeka's just a little kid, don't you think?
Moeka: N-no I'm not!!

132
Moeka: I'm home!
Akiyama: Welcome back.
Fuuka: Do you want a snack?
Moeka: Are you guys on break?
Moeka: Thank you for earlier.
Moeka: I'm sorry.
Akiayama: It turned into such a big deal, huh?
Akiyama: My bad./ I had heard it was Fuuka and Nonoka's old highschool, so I was looking around and...
Fuuka: The whole village has been talking about it.
Moeka: I don't need anything.
Moeka: I'm going to change.

133
Moeka; Hurry
Moeka: Hurry
Moeka: Before Kazu is done with his break...
(TN: Oni-chan literally means older brother, but in context is just a term of familiarity, so I've shortened his first name Kazuhiro, to Kazu instead)
SFX: Scrub
Moeka: I need to finish cleaning the open air baths.
Moeka: I wonder if he'll be happy.
Akiyama: For bringing you your lunch, a thank you is fine.
Moeka: As a reward I'll give you an steamy kiss.
Moeka: How nice...
Moeka: Huh?
Moeka: A kiss?
Moeka: Why do I have to kiss Kazu?
Moeka: I'm having strange fantasies because Mikarin was talking about stuff like that.

134
Moeka: I mean Kazu/ is all lovey dovey/ with Nonoka anways...
SFX: Thud, thud, thud
SFX: Scrub
Text: Forbidden Love!?
Moeka: No!/ Not like that!
SFX: Slip
Moeka: Ahhh!
Moeka: Ah!
Moeka: No
Moeka: No
Moeka: No
Moeka: Ahhh-
SFX: Splash

135
Moeka: Sob
SFX: Soaked
Moeka: What should I do?
Akiyama: Huh?
Sign: Closed for Cleaning
SFX: Clatter
Akiyama: That's strange.
Akiyama: I'm sorry. / I'm sorry.
SFX: Ack!
Akiyama: You were in here!
Moeka: Wait
Moeka: You've got the wrong idea, Kazu
Moeka: I can explain...
Moeka: Ahhh!
SFX: Bang

136
Moeka: Ow, ow, ow/ I'm sorry Kazu...
SFX: Shake Shake
Moeka: Kazu! / Kazu!
Moeka: Are you okay?
SFX: Bang, bang
Akiyama: Ugh
SFX: Twitch
Moeka: Do you have a concussion?
SFX: Squish
Moeka: I'm really sorry Kazu! . I'm such a clutz.
Moeka: Ah...

137
Maki: He kissed me a lot too.
Chi-chan: Good kisses are so nice, they make me wet.
SFX: Shock
SFX: Swish, swish
SFX: Thump, thump
Moeka: I want to know/ how it feels.
Text: Kazu!
Text: Nonoka!
Text: I'm sorry---!!

138
Moeka: I did it.
SFX: Tehee
Moeka: Hmm,/ it's not that great.
Chi-chan: Moeka's just a little kid.
Maki: She hasn't even hit puberty.
SFX: Hmm
Moeka: Something's not right.
Moeka: One more time!
Text: Maybe like this?
SFX: Kiss
Text: No that's not it.
SFX: Uhh.
SFX: Kiss
Text: I don't get it---!!

139
SFX: Thump
Text: Oh, this is nice.
Text: Lips fit perfectly together.
Text: I knew it. Kissing is..
Text: Great!!

140
SFX: Thump, thump
Text: What should I do?
Text: I can't stop!
SFX (in bubbles): Kiss, Smooch, Smack

141
Akiyama: Huh? / Moeka!!
Akiayama: What!?
Akiayama Are you doing!?
Moeka: What, you say?
SFX: Kiss
Akiyama: What are you doing?
Moeka: While I was kissing you...
Moeka: I got carried away.
SFX: Kiss
Akiyama: Huh?

142
Aikyama: What?
Moeka: I don't know what I'm doing.
SFX: Thump
Akiyama: Moeka...
Akiyama: Groan
SFX: Squish

143
Moeka: Uh.
SFX: Twitch
Moeka: This is...
Text: Bad
Moeka: Kazu's ...?
Aikyama: (I can't believe I'm responding to Moeka---!)
Moeka: If I put this in me...
SFX: Throbbing
SFX: Slippery
Moeka: I wonder if these feelings will go away?

144
Akiayama: No/ No/ No
SFX: Throwing
Akiayama: Stop/ Stop!!
Akiyama: Why are you doing this?
Akiyama: You're acting strange!
Moeka: But...
SFX: Pout
Moeka: But
SFX: Whap, whap
Text: Pathetic
Moeka: I'm the only one at school who hasn't had sex yet!
Akiyama: That's not right.
Akiyama: You're first time should be special.
Akiyama: You have to do it with someone you love./ Here put this on.
Moeka: Kazu...
Akiyama: And I haven't even gone all the way with Nonoka...
Akiyama: Crap...

145
Moeka: Kazu, you've never had sex!?
SFX: Gasp
Text: We stopped at oral sex!!
Akiayama: Hey, I'm a half virgin!! (small text) I think?
Akiayama: I think you have to take this kind of thing slow. / Don't rush it!
Akiyama: But that;s just me.
Akiyama: Let your friends do what they want.
Akiyama: Everyone has their own pace.
Akiyama: You have your own clumsy way/ You should find you own way to love.

146
Akiyama: So save yourself until you have someone you love.
Akiyama: Doing it with the person you love is special.

147
SFX: Gasp
Akiyama: What's the matter?
Moeka: Don't tell my sisters!
SFX: Thud, thud
Moeka: I suddenly feel really embarassed./ Um, I feel like a huge clutz again.
SFX: Whack, whack (aka temper tantrum)
SFX: Pat, pat (feet pattering)
SFX: ha-ha-ha
Akiyama: I hope you find someone you like soon.
Moeka: Me too!

148
Fuuka: I have to hand it to Akiyama for being steady as ever./ But, do you think you're in the clear?
SFX: Swish
Nonoka: Well, as for clear...
Fuuka: So you were worried?
SFX: Grin
Nonoka: That's not it!/ I trust Moeka and Akiyama!!
Fuuka: Okay, then maybe I'll go after him?
Nonoka: Don't even think about it!!
Fuuka: Why not?
Nonoka: Because I don't trust you!
Clothing tag: Akiyama
Moeka: I think / I've found someone I like!
SFX: Thumpity-thump

Translation: Koibana Onsen 5

Tue, 27 Jan 2009 07:52:14 +0000

(TN: I translated onsen to hot spring except when it was paired up with Koibana)
Chapter 5

101
Fuuka: Akiyama!
Text: This is the place where love blossoms, Koibana Onsen.
(TN: Onsen means public bath or hot spring)
Text: I am Kazuhiro Akiyama.
Fuuka: Akiyama!
Text: I've been working part time at this inn for about six months.
Fuuka: Hey! Akiyama!
SFX: Bang, bang, bang
Text: In the time I've been here, I haven't had one day of actual rest.
Fuuka: Argh!!
SFX: Rattle
Text: As you can see, I'm worn out.

102
Koibana Onsen
Fifth Bath: Koibana's source (TN: Koibana means flower of love, so this could be a play on that meaning the source of budding love or some such)

103
Fuuka: Wake up Akiyama!
Fuuka: You've been slacking off lately.
Text: I think I want a little break.
Akiyama: I'm sorry Fuuka.
Fuuka: Hey, hey, eep!
Akiyama: Though...
SFX: Thud, thud, thud
Akiyama: Nonoka and them have been working without rest also.
Fuuka: What are you doing, Nonoka!?
SFX: Thump, bang
Fuuka: It's not like you at all.
Nonoka: I'm sorry.
Akiyama: What's the matter?

104
Nonoka: I misplaced an order.
Nonoka: So we didn't have enough ingredients.
Nonoka: I forgot that our dealer has today off.
Nonoka: I'm really sorry.
Akiyama: N-no...

105
Text: I'm so lucky I get to go shopping with Nonoka.
Nonoka: And now I'm dragged you along...
Text: So this is how Nonoka usually dresses.
SFX: Swish, swish
Nonoka: Akiyama?
Akiyama: Huh?
Akiyama: Golden Week has been so busy/ I'm a little worn out.
SFX: Hastily
Nonoka: Really?
SFX: Nervous laughter
Akiyama: Really.

106
Akiyama: I didn't know there was an hot spring village like this near Koibana Onsen.
Nonoka: You didn't know?
Akiyama: I've never really left the inn's property.
Old Woman: Oh, is that little Nonoka?
Nonoka: It's been a really long time, ma'am.
Guy: What? Is that Nonoka?
Guy 2: What? It is!

107
Guys: It's been so long./ Has business been good?
Guys: You've gotten prettier.
Guys: So you've been busy?
Guy:s Are you hungry?
Guys: Fuuka hasn't been coming out to drink lately...
Guys: I wish she'd come every now and then.
Baldy: By the way, who are you?
Akiyama: Huh?
SFX: Frightened
Nonoka: This is Akiyama. He's been helping us out since the new year.
Akiyama: Nice to meet you.
Guys: Oh is that so.
Guys: The pleasure is ours.
Guys: Welcome.
Guys: If you need anything, give us a holler.
Text: They sure seem nice.
Baldy: If you put your hands on those three girls, I can't answer for what will happen.
SFX: Eep!
Baldy: Death by dango skewers.
(TN: dango = rice dumpling)
Akiyama: Yikes!

108
Nonoka: They gave me so many things./ Here you go Akiyama.
Akiyama: What?
Nonoka: These manju are so delicious.
(TN: Manju are little balls of rice pounded until gooey with red bean paste inside)
Akiyama: Yeah.
Akiyama: They really are good!!
Nonoka: I know, huh?
Akiyama: Hmm.
SFX: Munch, munch
Akiyama: It kind of feels like were on a date.
SFX: Gulp

109
Nonoka: W-we just came to buy some things, didn't we??/ We should hurry up and get back.
SFX: Drip, drip
Akiyama: Oh? Oh...
Akiyama: But can we get ingredients in a place like this?
Nonoka: Of course! If you go down that alley way there...
Store Clerk: Come back again soon. It's free!
Akiyama: There really are places where you can get proper ingredients, huh?
Nonoka: They're store designed for people like us who live in a touristy area.
Akiyama: Even so, isn't this a lot of free stuff?
SFX: Heavy
Nonoka: Yeah, I guess.
SFX: Thump
Nonoka: We'll carry them all somehow.
Nonoka: Huh?
SFX: Rustle
Nonoka: I wonder what's in this paper bag?

110
Nonoka: Soap?
Nonoka: And...
White SFX: Shock
Black SFX: Rub, rub
Flashback Fuuka: Hey, we don't have too many customers today, so take your time.
Text: My sister...
Akiyama: Nonoka
SFX: Eek!
Nonoka: This is a...
SFX: Shock
Nonoka: Oh- My sister- this--
SFX: Woosh, woosh

111
Akiyama: I knew it. Soooo cute!
Nonoka: Huh?
Akiyama: Woah. Sailor style uniform!
Akiyama: Moeka is so tiny!
Nonoka: They still had this up?
Nonoka: That's a picture they took for us when sis started high school.
SFX: Nervous laughter
Text: It's good he didn't see the condom.
Text: Seriously, Fuuka!

112
Nonoka: My sisters and I lost our parents really early, so the people from around the hot spring village were a little like family./ They treated us just like a parent would their own children when we were young.
Akiyama; Oh, so that's why they were so considerate.
Nonoka: But since we've been so busy,/ we've been so rude to everyone.
Akiyama: Then why don't we go out together again?
Nonoka: Huh?
Akiyama: I want to see more of where you grew up.
Nonoka: Ok.
Akiyama: Sweet! That's a date!

113
Akiyama: Nonoka.
Akiyama: Kobana Onsen is back there...?
Akiyama: Nonoka...
Nonoka: Over here is where Koibana's water come from.
Nonoka: Do you want to see?
SFX: Flip
Akiyama: Huh? Yeah...

114
Nonoka: It's over here.
Akiyama: Woah!
Nonoka: Animals even use it.
Akiyama: Neat!
Akiyama: N-nonoka...
SFX: Clasp
Nonoka: Ah..
SFX: Blush
Akiyama: Since we're here, do you wanna take a dip?
Nonoka: Uh, sure.

115
SFX: Glance
SFX: Gulp, trot, trot

116
SFX: Splash
Nonoka: Are you okay?
Black SFX: Bubble, bubble
White SFX: Thump, thump
Nonoka: This spring is good for relieving fatigue./ Lately, you've looked so tired, so it's perfect timing.
Akiyama: Yeah, I'm really happy./ It's so nice and hot.
SFX: Plunk

117
Nonoka: And there was was soap in my bag so-
Nonoka: I want to wash your body if it's okay...
Akiyama: Huh? Yikes!
SFX: Wahh!
Akiyama: Yes, please!
Nonoka: Your back is really broad.
SFX: Scrub, scrub
Akiyama: Oh, is it?

118
Nonoka: Ooh.
SFX: Swish
SFX: Tweak
Akiyama: Oh.
SFX: Squish
SFX: Flip
SFX: Panting
SFX: Kiss

119
SFX: Sigh
Akiyama: Now, I'll wash you.
SFX: Nod
Nonoka: Ah.
SFX: Wriggle
Akiyama: You know today, when we saw the people in town
Akiyama: I thought of something.
Akiyama: When I think of you, I will do my best
Akiyama: to treasure you more than anyone else does!
SFX: Squeeze

120-121
Nonoka: Akiyama!
SFX: Smack
Akiyama: Oh?
Nonoka: Thank you!
SFX: Swish
Akiyama: What?
Nonoka: I too
Akiyama: Ugh..
SFX: Squish
Nonoka: want to
Akiyama: Oh!
SFX: Sploosh

122
Nonoka: Oh, oh..
SFX: Jump
SFX: Thump, thump
Akiayam: I'm sorry! I sort of came....
Nonoka: No I'm the one whose sorry.
Text: Wow
Nonoka: I got carried away.
Text: So much
Akiyama: Huh?
SFX: Thud, thud, thud
Nonoka: But I got caught up when I saw the way your face looked...
Akiyama: Nonoka, I'm about to come again!!
SFX: Rustling

123
SFX: Squeak
Nonoka: How cute! It looks like a little monkey./ This is the first time I've seen one up close.
Akiyama: It startled me.
Akiyama: Huh?
SFX: Pfft
Akiyama: No------
White SFX: Squeak
SFX: Pitter patter
Akiyama: Wait! /Wait up!/ Give it back!
SFX: Squeak
SFX: Rustling

124
Fuuka: You're late!/ You took wa----y too long!
Fuuka: You'll have to do three times the work!
Fuuka: Just when I let you guys have a break/ you come back all exhausted, have you been going at it like monkeys?
SFX: Limp
Nonoka; N-no we didn't!
Moeka: What's the matter, big brother?/ Is that cut okay?
Akiyama: Moeka
Moeka: You're whole body is covered in cuts! I have to treat them!
SFX: Collapse
Fuuka: No way? Nonoka is a sadist...
Fuuka: I had no idea you was into that sort of stuff.
Nonoka: I'm not!!

Translation: Umisho 48

Sat, 24 Jan 2009 06:04:18 +0000

*Nonbiri Scans, please ask for permission to use it.*

43
Orizuka and co.: Didn't you want a competition!!!
SFX: Thump, thump, thump
Text Box: Before the Kanto Swimming Tounament, another batter begins between Umisho and Shinomiya.---!!!
SFX: Thump, thump, thump

44
Text Box: On the other side, in the boys bath---
Text: That's it! Ah! Are we gonna do it! Eep! Like I'd do that!
Kaname: The girl's baths been really noisy for a while now.
Takeda: Mysterious isn't it?
Kaname: What?
Takeda: Considering what Shizuoka did earlier, something unbelievable is going on in the girls bath as we speak.
Kaname: Unbelievable?
Takeda: In order to find out
SFX: Splash
Takdea: We have to see and hear what's going on on the other side!!!
White SFX: Rustle, rustle
Black SFX: Huff, huff
Text: There's gotta be a hole here somewhere.
Kaname: So he just wanted to peep after all.
Nanjo: So.
SFX: Ba-doing

45
Nanjo: Now that I think of it,
Nanjo; we don't have even numbers to do a relay..
Amuro: Let's hurry up and do---
SFX: Thud, thud
Amuro: this.
SFX: Thunk
Orizuka: (Seriously, that girl...)
SFX: Owie.
Text Maki: You're always hitting your head...
Orizuka: Isn't it a little shallow to be doing this...
Nanjo: Hmm, you're right.
Nanjo: I guess there's nothing left to use but
Nanjo: "that" to settle the score once and for all.
SFX: Grinding
Orizuka: What's 'that'?

46
Text: Edurance Competition
Nanjo: Ha, ha, ha. The first team that has all it's members get out of the bath loses.
Orizuka: And if you stand up for any reason you're out!
SFX: Splash
Kise: I've had enough.
Text: Indifferent
SFX: Splash
Text Box: Kise drops out...
Shinomiya girl: Nanjo makes us do such troublesome things....
Shinomiya girl: I know.
Shizuka: (Oh my, how'd I end up in the bath with so many people...)
Shizuka: (I want to get out but...)
Shizuka: (If I get out first, everyone will see me naked...)
SFX: Bubbles
SFX:

47
Nanjo: Oh, forgot to mention it but..
Nanjo: Everyone on the losing team will shave their crotch! (small text) In front of the winning team!
Umisho: What?????
Orizuka: Um, what about the people who don't have any hair there yet?
Nanjo: They're fine I guess.
Another girl (Amuro maybe): Wait, the losers have to shave it all?
Maaya: Eww
Another girl (Hard to see); No way? Down there!?
Takeda: Oh~~~
Text: No way! Yuck!
Takeda: It looks as if the girls are going to shave each other now!! (mimicking speacial ops) Roger---?
Kaname: Knock it off already.
SFX: Perk up
Masa: Let us help you!!!
Takeda: Gross, It's touching me--- (small text) his balls!
SFX: Whack, Whack
SFX: Squeak
Takeda: We have to shave!!
Kaname: I think it's a bad idea to bang on that (the fence)...

48
Text: Ahh! Shaving!
SFX: Huff, huff
SFX: Bang, whack
A girl (from behind); The guys side is really noisy... (small text) Scary
Shinomiya girl: Nanjo, I can't take it anymore...
SFX: Flop
SFX: Teetering
Another Shinomiya girl: Me either...
Text: 2 more Shinomiya girls drop out.
Nanjo: How dare you guys get out before me!!
SFX: Staggering
Shinomiya girl: But, but...
Nanjo: Honesty... Naruko, Hara, you guys are fine, right?
Naruko: Uh, yeah, I can keep going.
Hara: Somwhat..
Nanjo: Then..
Nanjo: I'll leave it up to you guys!!!
SFX: Splash
Text Box: Nanjo drops out

49
Nanjo: Ha, ha, ha... Learn your lesson, you're no match for Team Shinomiya...
SFX: Slither away
Orizuka: That bitch. (Nasty girl)
Maaya: Maaya's had it. (small text) I've beaten Nanjo, so there's no point anymore.
SFX: Splash
Maki: Double Suicide
Text box: Both teams have drop outs. How exciting...
Takeda: What the hell (on earth) is going on, I wonder.
TEXT: I can't take it anymore. Ah! I'm done for!
Masa: Can you hear?
Sub Text: Takeda's desire is for sex, Ikamasa's desire is for shaving.
Fantasizing/ Amuro: Wow, this looks like it would feel so good.
SFX: Splash
SFX: Relaxing
Fantasizing/ Shizuka?: How about doing it together? It does feels so good..
SFX: crack
Takeda: Oh! Oh! They're leXXng it out!
SFX: Bang, bang
SFX: Boing
Masa: We want to feel good and shave ourselves too!
Kaname: Hold on a minute...
SFX: Creak
Masa: Oh..

50
SFX; Crash
Orizuka: What the hell are you boys doing!!!
Another girl: Eeep!
SFX: Thwack, thwack
Kaname: Ugh.
Orizuka: Honestly, those idiots...
SFX: Hmph.
Amuro Text: Kaname and them were over there?
Nanjo: Oh, look at that. Everyone stood up.
Orizuka: Oh, crap!
SFX: Plunk

51
Nanjo: Ha, ha, ha. Shinomiya's victory! You said it yourself, if you stand up for any reason!!
SFX: Bang
Text: Yay, Shinomiya!
Orizuka; But, but...
Haru: Good job!
Orizuka: A woman never goes back on her word!!
SFX: What??
Orizuka: I'll do it...
Maki: Huh? Shizuoka is missing.
SFX: Looking around...
Orizuka:What???
SFX: Rustling
A girl: It's true. She's gone.
Amuro: Shizuoka??
Orizuka: Where'd she go?
Maaya/Kaori?: Aha!
Maaya/Kaori?: She's here!

52
Maaya (maybe): She's still in the water!!!
Shizuka: I don't want to get out...
SFX: Bang
Shizuoka: If I get out they'll see me.
Maki: Umisho comes back from defeat!!!
SFX: Dragging
Orizuka: A woman never goes back on her word!!!
Shinmiya: Shriek!
Nanjo (maybe): We'll do it!!
SFX: Splash
Text Box: This is how they ended up staying up late....
SFX: Grumble...

53
Woman w/dog: Oh, it started raining...

54
Umisho Short Story ~Kise~
Although she appeared on the fourth page of the first story, in the beginning she didn't have a name and was just "another club member". However her character slowly started to appear and now Kise is turning into a regular.
The rought draft on the left it kinda looks like she has slight sideburns. Her name and class year are different.
Nevertheless, I honestly didn't think she'd be a character I could use. She's easily pleased by flattery, crafty with money, and has no problem lying. She's a really attractive girl that has no qualms stripping if the need arises and is quite popular.
(However, it's too bad for Mr. Nobuzawa...)
Also, people also like that she's tall, has thick eyebrows and doesn't have large breasts.
In the third volume there was a story about the foundation of the swimming club and even then, it worked out that Kise brought out a new aspect of Orizuka's personlaity.
It was omitted that in the end most of it was made up by Kise though...
But, it wasn't that it was intentionally left it out, merely that I wanted to draw it more seriously. Since this manga is a one liner, boys manga, I decided to drop it.
It was a bit of a waste, probably.
If I have the chance, I want to draw a canned trio of senior high school students .

Translation: Umisho 47

Sat, 24 Jan 2009 04:56:45 +0000

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33
Amuro: We're here!
Sign: Shikishima Inn
Text: The night before Kanto Tournament they arrived at an inn near the meet.
Text: In the end the went back to the convenience store and picked up Amuro.
Text: At which point, Orizuka gave in and used the toilet there.
SFX: Sullen
SFX: Poke
White SFX: Crowd Streaming In
Student: I guess it can't be helped that it's so rugged.
Kaori: Do you think other schools are staying here too?
SFX: Clank, Clank
Amuro's Dad: Okay, I'll be back to pick you up in two days. I've got nothing better to do, so I'll just hang around here.
Thought Bubble: (I don't think he has a job...)
Shizuoka: (Thank goodness I didn't throw up... but...)
SFX: Sigh
Maaya: What a crappy inn.
Maki: Well, a little.

34
Shizuoka: (I'm really not that great with this kind of group sleep over....)
Kaname: Shizuoka?
Kaname: If it's too hard on you, just let me know.
Kaname: I have medicine for motion sickness.
Shizuoka: Oh, thanks!
Shizuoka: (Okiura is always looking out for me...)
Kaname: (Just don't forget your undergarments...)
SFX: Swish, swish
Orizuka: Well, let's eat dinner first and I want to use the baths.
SFX: Crowd Streaming In
Kaname: Speaking of which, it looks like this place has baths outdoors.
SFX: Yahoo!
Maki: That's awesome!
Ikamasa: Yes! I'll shave in the outdoor baths!
SFX: Yipee!
Amuro: I want to have a pillow fight!
Maki: We have to tell ghost stories!
Orizuka: We didn't come to play!
Someone: Woah, there's a river. (small text) Nature!
SFX: Rustle, rustle
Someone: There is!

35
Kise: It's s big, it's awesome!
Maki?: I feel my batteries recharging.
Amuro?: Maybe I'll try to get down to where the water comes in.
Kaori?: You'd better not go naked...
Orizuka: Agreed!
White SFX: Slosh
Black SFX: Splash
Kise: Who cares about tomorrows tournament.
Orizuka: What are you talking about! Were going to crush Shinomiy and go on to Inter-high.
Amuro: Hey-
Amuro: Where's Shizuoka?
SFX: Looking Around
Maki: She's not here, huh...
Text: She's waited a bit so no one would see her changing.
SFX: Taking off clothes

36
Shizuoka: (I don't really like getting in the baths with so many people..)
Shizuoka: (But I don't really want to have a falling out with the swim team.)
Text: Really? Hahaha.
SFX (next to text): Sound of crowd streaming in
SFX: Bob
Shizuoka: Gasp
Shizuoka: (It sounds like a lot of young people are coming in here!?)
SFX: Thump, thump
Nanjo: For being so cheap, the inn sure has a nice feel to it.
Shizuoka: (Crap! They're from Shinomiya!!?)
SFX: Crowd streaming in
Shizuoka: (Uh oh, what do I do?)
SFX: Rustle, rustle

37
Shizuoka: (If they find out I'm from Umisho, they'll say something)
SFX: Thud, thud, thud
Shizuoka: (There's no way I want them seeing me in my panties. I have to hurry up and get in the baths..)
SFX: Slide
Naruko/Hara: Huh?
SFX: Freeze
Naruko: Hmmm?
SFX: Slide up
Shizuoka: (Uh, uh, I think I'm busted ---)
Naruko: Nanjo! Look at these clothes!!
Nanjo: What?
Shizuoka: Umph.
Nanjo: Aren't these from Umisho!!!
(Uniforms say Umisho)

38
Nanjo: What!! Being at the same inn as them makes me sick!!
SFX: Drip, drip
Naruko?: wait, that means they are in the baths now, huh?
Hara?: Sick.
Nanjo: I've got a score to settle with that Zuka girl and the one with the "X" barrettes in her hair.
Nanjo: I really don't like that Shizuoka girl either!! How can her boobs be bigger than mine!
Naruko: Me too! I'll tear her to pieces tomorrow for what she did at the Prefectural tournament.
SFX: Thump
Shizuoka: (Um, ah)
Shizuoka: (I can't stay here anymore...)
SFX: Thud, thud
SFX: Gulp
Shizuoka: ( I have to hurry)
Text: Before I'm found out!!
SFX: Woosh.
Shizuoka: Ah!
SFX: Twitch

39
Hara: They're out there! There's a whole bunch of them from Umisho!
Nanjo: Well, whatever.
Shinomiya girl: I can't stand Umisho
SFX: Snatch
Shizuoka: (I can't take them off~)
SFX: Thump, thump
SFX: Tightly
Shizoka: (That's right! Even if I did get into the baths, we'd still end up bumping into eachother...)
SFX: Thump, thump, thump
Shizuoka: (So, I'd better not get in...)
Naruko: Now that we've seen them here, they're done for!
SFX: Smack
SFX: Twitch
Shizuoka: Ahhhh!
SFX: Dash
Shinomiya girl: Is she from Umisho...
Shinomiya girl: She's been eavesdropping this whole time!!
SFX: Thud, thud, thud
Shizuoka: (I can't take it anymore...!!)
Shizuoka: (I'll go back to my room..)
SFX: Thud, thud

40
Ikamasa: Hehe, let's shave eachother!
SFX: Energetic
Kaname: Nope, aren't you the only one participating...
Ikamasa: You fool! Whether or not we're on the same wave length could control the outcome!
Kaname: (He's changed his story again...)
SFX: tap, tap, tap (running sound)
SFX: Woosh!
Shizuoka: Woah!
SFX: Spin Around
Kaname: Was that just...
SFX: Thump, thump
Kise: I think I'm ready to get out..
Orizuka: Me too. I'm feeling a little dizzy.
SFX: Splash
Nanjo: Wait just a second.

41
Orizuka: (We're in the same inn as Nanjo???)
Nanjo; Ah ha ha ha.
SFX: Bang
Nanjo: Good evening. It's been about a month hasn't it, Zuka?
Nanjo: So how about it? Since were finally in this great big bath, why don't we have a little pre-tournament competition.
SFX: Swish, swish
Orizuka: What?
Nanjo: For instance, a relay with everyone or something would be good.
Maaya: Hold it!
SFX: Splash
Maaya: We got in first and we're a bit dizzy, aren't we at a disadvantage!
SFX: Splash
Orizuka: Nanako is right. Even if we win, it's pointless. Okay, everyone let's get out now.
Nanjo: Oh, really...

42
SFX Across the Page: Tada!
Nanjo: Then, go get the hostage...
Nanjo: It's fine if we shave every last hair down there off of her then, right---!?
Naruko: (Overdoing it a little much...)
Shizuka: Ahh. Stop it...!!! (small text) I'm completely exposed.
Text: Razor
SFX: Cackle
Small Text: Oh my. It's so thin...
Maaya: Okay, the competition??
SFX: Grumbling
Maki: So this is the adult world..
Kaname: (The girls bath sure is noisy...)
Ikamasa: Shaving
SFX: Buzz
Guy: Gulp

Translation: Umisho 46

Wed, 14 Jan 2009 07:40:42 +0000

*Please request permission before using*

Chapter 46

23

Text Box: The day before Kanto Swimming Tournament
SFX: Clunk, clunk, clunk
SFX: Buzz-buzz
Text Box: Umisho's swim team was on it's way to a ryokan near the site
(TN: Ryokan is a traditional Japanese style inn)
SFX: Buzz-buzz
Amuro: Wow!
Swim Team Girl : Hey, give me one!
Ikamasa: Yahoo. It's a chartered bus!
Orizuka: Hey. Quit walking around and sit down!
Orizuka: Even without him we stand out as it is...
SFX: Stare
Orizuka: To cut back on the costs of getting there, thankfully we got that corrupt monk from Chutoku Temple to get us a bus (tiny) forced him rather
Orizuka: You have a crap ton of cars! Arrange some kind van for us!!
Tiny Text: As punishment for tricking us!!
Oka: B-but you broke my vase..
Orizuka: Wasn't that your fault too!! If you'd only done the zen meditation properly...
(TN: Japanese monks are very very rich)
Orizuka: I didn't think...

24
Orizuka: it would be this...
Bus Reads: Glug Glug Kindergarten
SFX: Clunk, clunk, clunk
Sub Text: The Kindergarten run by the monk
Orizuka: Still, thank you for driving us
Amuro's Dad: Well, I wasn't doing anything..
Orizuka: (I wonder if he's unemployed...)
Ikamasa: Let's all play a game!
Kise: Yay!
Kise: So, what shall we play? The Prince Game?
(TN: The Prince Game is a game where everyone draws numbers and one of them indicates the prince. The prince then orders people to do ridiculous things by number until his turn is up, and they all redraw)
Ikamasa: Oh, I've already got everything ready
Ikamasa: Dominoes, Jenga, and Guragura
Tiny Text: Oh! I have a frisbee too!
(TN: Guragura is a miniature leaning tower of Pisa on which pieces are put until it falls over)
SFX: Excited
Kise: None of those games work here. (tiny) it's too narrow and too shaky
Ikamasa; Okay, my turn!! Next is Okiura.
Kaname: You're really doing it...
SFX: slide
SFX: Clatter
Kaname: Ahh!

25
Maaya: A---
Maaya: -nnoying!! What are you doing in my presence!?
SFX: Clunk, clunk
Ikamasa: How could you....
SFX: Shaking
Ikamasa: This jenga
Ikamasa: is filled with memories of my childhood!!
SFX: Sob
Small Text: It's R-ki's turn!
Small SFX: Thud, thud (heart beat)
Maaya: I see. You pervert
SFX: Kick
Ikamasa: Kick the captain again, again!
Small Text by Ikamasa: Oh yeah!
Shizuoka: Will I be okay?
SFX: Thump, thump
Shizuoka: I get car sick in buses and stuff easily...

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Amuro: Shizuoka-- I've brought something I dried myself. Want some? (small text) It's homemade--
Shizuoka: Ugh!
Shizuoka: N-no thank you.
SFX: Mmph
Shizuoka: I want to get off the bus already..
Amuro: Really?
Text: Dried fish
Orizuka: Come on.
SFX: Pfft
Orizuka: Be quiet!!
Makio: Um, Orizuka. It's hard for me to say this at a time like this but...
SFX: Fidget
Makio: I need to use the toilet...
Orizuka: Hold it in!
SFX: Slash (Maki being cut down)
Amuro: Amuro has to go pee too!
Takeda: Oh me too, me too.
Kise: Me too! (small text) Acutally, I've been holding it.
Maaya: Maaya wants to buy something to drink-
SFX: buzz, buzz
Club Member: Oh! Shizuoka looks like she's going to puke!!
Another student: Me too.
Ikamasa: I could just let it out all over the place--
SFX: Nervous
Orizuka: Honestly. Fine, I get it. We'll take a ten minute break!!
SFX: Yippee!

27
Shizuoka: I'm saved...
Orizuka: I'm so sorry we've brought so many people here...
Black SFX: Bow
White SFX: People streaming in
Text by Amuro: Squeak
Ikamasa: Store cle---rk!
SFX Above Ikamasa: Clank
Text by Ikamasa: Tehee
Ikamasa: I took a dump and the toilets clogged!
Text by Kise: Nasty
Swim team girl: Gross
Orizuka: We'll fix it right away!!!
SFX: Bow, bow
Orizuka: Everyone who's finished get back on the bus!!
Amuro: Ooo, I'll buy ice cream--
Orizuka: Is everyone on the bus? We're not stopping until we get to the inn!!!
Text: Yes!
SFX: Clunk, clunk
Orizuka: Okay, let's go!
Orizuka: Seriously...
SFX: Clunk, clunk
Orizuka: (Huh?)

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Girl Kaori maybe: And then...
Orizuka: (Ah...)
Kaname: Orizuka, can I sit next to you?
Orizuka: Huh.
SFX: What? (disbelief)
Orizuka: Sure, why?
Kaname: It's about the schedule for today and tomorrow.
SFX: Plunk
SFX: Squeak
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Thud
Sub Text: Railroad Crossing
Kaname: From 7 p.m...
White SFX: Sway
Black SFX: Twitch
Orizuka; Uh huh.
Kaname: Hey!? What's worng?
Kaname: (It sounded a little bit like a moan...)
Orizuka: Uh, no, it's nothing..
SFX: Thump, thump
Text: This is bad.

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Text: No good...
Text: At this rate..
Orizuka: Ah..
SFX: Pant
Orizuka: Okiura, would you...
SFX: Hiss
Kaname: What?
Makio: Huh?
SFX: Ahhh. (Opening mouth for food sound)
Above Text: Shizuoka's in the front seat.
Makio: Amuro's not on the bus!!
Other kids: What!!?
SFX: Spring (to her feet)
Girl: So we've left her at the convenience store (tiny) earlier
Makio: This is awful!
SFX: Thud
Makio: Orizuka!!
Makio: Amuro is..
SFX: Screeching Halt

30
Makio: Woah!
SFX: Squeeze
Makio: What are you doing----!?!?!?!
SFX: Tightly
Text: What is this...
Kaname: No, it's just that Orizuka suddenly.
SFX: Heart racing/ thud, thud
Text: Aha! Makio's brain finally gets it!!
Text: In other words, this is...
SFX: Heart racing/ Thud, thud
Text: Stolen Love!
SFX: Thud

31
Text: All this time Orizuka has been after Kaname any time Amuro isn't looking...
Small Text: I'm much more appealing....
Text: No wait...
Makio: Don't tell me you left Amuro behind on purpose..!!!
White SFX: Rushing over
Tiny Text: Kise
Kise: Hey, Zuka what are you doing?
Orizuka: Uh..
Orizuka: It's not what it looks like.
Kaori : Eek! Orizuka how bold--
SFX: Drip, drip
Orizuka: I-I couldn't help it!
Kise: What do you mean you couldn't help it?
Kaname: First, let's go bak to the convenience store for Amuro...
Orizuka: N-no way! We're almost to the inn!!
Orizuka: Ninagawa might have contacted the inn!!
Kaname: No..Amuro doesn't know the inn's number.
Kaori : I knew it. We'd better go back.
Makio: Yeah, let's go back.
Kise: Let's go, let's go.
Orizuka: No way!!!

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Orizuka: If we don't keep going...
Orizuka: I'll piss my pants!!
Text: I can't take it anymore!!
Orizuka: Hurry up and head to the inn!!
Kaname Text: She's really holding it it...
SFX: Swaying
Amuro's Dad: Huh? What about Amuro?
Orizuka: She'll be fine!!
Text: Amuro was eating ice cream and waiting patiently.
Amuro: Where did everyone go---?

Translation: Oretama 27

Mon, 12 Jan 2009 01:58:09 +0000

"This is a Franky-House translation. If you want to use it, please ask for permission"
My Balls 27
Text: I'm going to save the world?~
Do you want to listen with me?
27th Ball: In a Bind with Minayo!!

2
Text: 20XX July 28th 11:00 pm
Text on Hospital: Emergency
Minayo: Kohta is taking so long....
Minayo: I hope it's nothing serious.
Sub Text: This is a work of fiction. There's no connection between any current people, groups, or events.

3
Doctor: Take care!
Flashback/Doctor: Worst case scenario, the ejaculatory shaft control muscle could rupture completely!
Kohta: Unbelievable...
Kohta: (Who'd have thought this month of abstinence)
Kohta: (has done this much damage to my body...)
Elyse: Hey, Kohta...?
Kohta: Elyse...
Elyse: What's the matter...you fell over all of a sudden...

4
Elyse: What..!?
Elyse: You can't hold it back anymore!?
Kohta: Yeah... if I force myself to keep from coming, the muscle will tear and I'll ejaculate...
Kohta: If I don't think of some way to protect myself from the demons for the remaining three days...
Kohta: I could...
Elyse: You moron!! It's because you've been living with her!!
Kohta: No..this time it was your fault....
Kohta: Wait, speaking of her..
Kohta: Where's Minayo..?

5
SFX: Ring, ring
Kohta: Minayo!? Where are you...
Beezlebub: I've finally found you, Kohta..
SFX: heh, heh, heh
Beezlebub: I'm looking after your precious girlfriend...
Kohta: (A demon!?)
Beezlebub: If you'd like her back, come straight here, okay?
Kohta: (No way! Minayo's a hostage!?)
Kohta: Hey!? Is Minayo okay!?
Asmodeus: Don't worry~ She's just unconscious at the moment
Asmodeus: but if you cross us...

6
Minayo: Ahh...
Minayo: Oh...
Text: She's moaning~~!?
Minayo: A~h
Kohta: W-what the hell are you doing!?
Kohta: Can't she feel it!?
Kohta: I get it already, so knock it off!
Kohta: Shit...
Elyse: What's the matter, Kohta...?
Elyse: Did something happen to that Minayo girl?

7
Kohta: (What the hell.. Minayo's a hostage!?)
Kohta: (But if I go, I'll definitely be subjected to something kinky...!!
Kohta: (With my damaged ejaculatory shaft control muscle, I can't handle anything more)
Kohta: (What the hell should I do?)
SFX: Rub
Elyse: Hey, Kohta..?
Kohta: (What a second!? I've got it...)
Kohta: ( maybe I can bear it now!!)
Kohta: Elyse, I please help me!!
Kohta: I really need your help!
Elyse: Um?

8 (140)
Side Bar: My Balls. ~I'm going to save the world!?~
An erotic comedy with Kohta and Demons.
Angel: You...If I we're only 1,000,000 years younger..
Irene: Please forgive me~~
Asmodeus: You shouldn't care so much.
Asmodeus: I'll tear you to bits as soon as we release Lady Emmaniel~~!
Sub Text: Young Animal Storm

9
Beezlebub: And of course, Kohta and that little traitorous demon too....
Beezlebub: Heh, heh...
Kohta: Hey! Demons!
Kohta: Is Minayo safe!?
Beezlebub: Oh good, Kohta, you came!
Asmodeus: Don't worry, our pet Kimaira
Asmodeus: has been keeping her company~~~
Kohta: K-Kimaira!?

10
Asmodeus: Only Kimaira is a specially bred..
Asmodeus: part octopus, part turtle, part abalone~
Kohta: (Octopus, turtle and abalone..!?)
Kohta: (What an obscene combination!?)
Asmodeus: The turtle part in particular doesn't listen to a thing we say,
Asmoedeus: and may get violent!

11
Beezlebub: So, hurry up and release
Beezlebub: Lady Emanniel!
Angel: Kohta! D-don't!
Angel: The fate of man kind depends on it!?
Angel: Don't let her free!
Kohta: Old geezer! Irene!
Beezlebub: What's the matter? If you can't do it yourself
Beezlebub: I'd be happy to help you.
SFX: Poof.
Elyse: Wait a minute!
Elyse: Beezlebub, Asmodeus!

12
SFX: Swish
Beezlebub: You...lesser demon, Elyse!
Beezlebub: You think you can just show up and help him? You traitor...
Elyse: N-no. That's not why I'm here...
Elyse: I want to be the one to get him off!
Elyse: You can have my life in exchange...

13
Elyse: (What do you intend to do Kohta? Even if I'm on your side and it's me doing it...)
Elyse: (If they find out that I'm intentionally holding back to keep you from ejaculating, they'll kill both of us on the spot!?)
Elyse: (Or have you already given up..!?)
Kohta: Make me come, I'm begging you...
Elyse: So, at least, at the end let me....
Kohta: (Elyse, it's fine. Don't hold back.)
Kohta: (If everything goes according to my plan...)
Beezlebub: Interesting...it's fine I guess..
Beezlebub: Kohta, don't fight it, 'kay?

14
Beezlebub: If you cross us..
Minayo: Ahh..
Minayo: sigh...
Kohta: I get it!
Kohta: I'll do exactly what you want!
Kohta: But I've held back for so long...
Kohta: and I want to end this by getting off the way I want to..
Beezlebub: What?
Kohta: My male fantasy, titty fucking..
Kohta: Please make me come by titty fucking me~~!

15 (147)
Beezlebub: Titty fucking? Heh, booooring...!
Beezlebub: Hey, Elyse, get it done...
Elyse: (I-is he trying to pick a fight..!?)
SFX: Quivering
Elyse: (He wants to be titty fucked by an A cup like me!?)
Elyse: (He thinks he can handle it if it's my pathetic boobs..?)
Elyse: (That's his plan!?)
Asmodeus: No way is this possible~~
Beezlebub: I think you're right..
Elyse: I'll do it...

16
Elyse: Let me do it!
Elyse: I'll show you I have get him off with my boobs!
Beezlebub: N-no. If you can't do it...
Elyse: Screwing with something you know I'm self conscious about...
Kohta: P-please stop...
Elyse: I'll definitely make you come!
SFX: Squeeze
SFX: Squeeze, squeeze

17
Elyse: He's not even close.
Elyse: I can't squeeze it!
Kohta: (Just as I thought...If it's her, I can manage.)
Kohta: (They're practically flat.)
Kohta: (Don't think badly of me, Elyse...)
Kohta: (It's to protect humanity...)
Kohta: (Elyse, just keep it up and buy some time until morning!)
Kohta: I'm not sure, but demons are weak against daylight, right?
Elyse: This jackass. So even if I titty fuck him with my small boobs until morning, he wont come...!?
Elyse: That really pisses me off---!!
SFX: Whack

18
Elyse: (Even I can..)
Elyse: (push them up and titty fuck you!)
Beezlebub: Oh!?

19
Elyse: Hah!
Elyse: How's this!
Kohta: Oh...
Elyse: I've got it!
Elyse: (I'll definitely make you come!)
Elyse: Uh..
Kohta; Hey, Elyse..
Kohta: You're getting a little carried away...
Kohta: (Crap..even the stimulation from her tiny boobs is rather....)
Kohta: (I have to hold it it in!!)

20
Kohta: Ahhh!?
SFX: Rub
Kohta: My ejaculatory shaft control muscle~~~!?
Asmodeus: Hey! Even if you've managed to squeeze him, at this rate, the sun will come up~~~!
Asmodeus: Kimaira! Go!
Asmodeus: It's going to take over~~!
Angel: Oh no!
Angel: Is that the holy rosary I gave you!?

21
Angel: (Even though I told him to always keep it on him.)
Angel: God forgive me.
Angel: (How indiscrete!)
Angel: No wait! If i channel holy power at it...
SFX: Eeep!
Asmodeus: Give it up!
Asmodeus: Taste the highest grade abalone~~~!
Kohta: Ack!
Kohta: (An abalone!?)
SFX: Goo~~
Angel: Gasp!
SFX: Cackle

22
SFX: Screech
Kimaira: Shriek!
Kohta/Elyse: Huh~~~~?
Asmodeus: What's that beam of light~~~!?
Asmodeus: This defiance....
Kohta: But.. I didn't do anything..!
SFX: Caw

23
SFX: Bam!
Beezlebub: Ugh! This power!
Beezlebub: So bright...
Beezlebub: Eep!
Beezlebub: We won't forget this!!
SFX: Vanish
Irene: You saved us~~~
Angel: Huff...
Angel: (I should say they've been injured...)
Angel: (Because he put the rosary in a place like that...)
Angel: (The demons won't easily be able to get their hands on him...)

24 (156)
Angel: But you can't let your guard down!
Angel: The demons are going to keep risking their lives to attack you...
Angel: For the next three days we have to work together...
SFX: Yes!!
Angel: We must protect humanity! Right!
Side Text: Worthless Humans and Worthless Demons Meet!! Will it be okay?
Kohta: My p-penis was sparkling~~!? (small text) What the hell!?
Minayo: Moan, that's the spot.
Irene: Nyanis, I'm coming to see you now!
Elyse: Get bigger, get bigger.
SFX: Pant/Gasp
Text Box: Three days until humanity escapes destruction--!!
Angel: I don't think we're going to make it...

Translation: Umisho 45

Thu, 08 Jan 2009 08:33:05 +0000

13
Text Box: 5 days until Kanto Swimming Tournament
Maki: Today's practice is really easy, which is a little different than last week.
Text: Boring---
Amuro: But I want to swim more---
Maaya: Don't you guys know anything about 'tapering off'?
Text: Why does Maaya have to tell you guys...
Maki: What?
Amuro: Taper-what?
Maaya: About one week before a tournament, you allot time to build up energy and get rid of fatigue.

Time line: (TN: from top to bottom)
1~3 Weeks: Focus on heavy practice, eat lots of food.
1 week ~ 10 Days: Preparation time ("Tapering off"), Checking form, Turning practice, and other light practice. Eat less meat and eat more carbohydrates like pasta.
Day of Tournament

Orizuka: It's just as Nanako says. During this time its best to do mental training if you can.
Ikamasa: If it's mental training, I've got a great idea!
SFX: Clank

14
Orizuka (or some other swim team girl): Didn't we tell you NOT to open the door without knocking!!
SFX: Punch, smack, wham
Kaname: (He never learns.)
Text: ---The next day
SFX: Shuffle, shuffle
Orizuka: So...
Orizuka: What kind of mental training?
SFX: Shuffle, suffle
Maaya: Does Maaya have to do it too?
Maki: Well
Kaname: That thing? Here?
Ikamasa: Yes.
Text Box: Buddha from some period or other.
Ikamasa: Were going to meditate..
Ikamasa: at Chuutoku temple!!
FX: Tada!
Everyone else: What!?
Orizuka: Zen meditation, hmm. It's not a half bad idea. (tiny) for Ikamasa anyway
Kise: But, are they going to let us meditate here?
Ikamasa: Heh, heh. The chief priest here is a regular customer at my family's restaurant.
SFX: Swish, swish
Ikamasa: Hey, chief priest.

15
SFX: ha, ha, ha
Chief Priest: I'm going to go rough on you guys today.
(TN: In "Zen" meditation they whack you if you make a mistake)
Text Box: Chuutoku Temple Chief Priest, Oka
Swimming Club Member: Thank you so much!
Maaya: Hey, you, I won't let you lay a finger on me!
Amuro: Amuro wants to get hit first--
Tiny Text Oka; Why on earth would she want that!
Maaya: What the hell is this...
Oka: So, first, could you please clean the temple grounds. In swimsuits.
Kise: And in swimsuits no less
Oka: You fools! This is another part of training!! Hurry up and prepare yourselves!!
FX: Ha!!
Orizuka: Y-yes!
SFX: Drip, drip, drip
SFX Thud, thud, thud
Oka: Young people these days...

16
Oka: aren't that bad.. (in small print: I feel young again)
Tiny text Ikamasa: They look great...
Orizuka: Um--
Oka: Ah, uh, yes? What is it?
Orizuka: We've pretty much finished cleaning...
Oka: Ah, oh good work. So, I guess we should try it.
Orizuka: ...Try what?
Someone?: Hot!
Oka: Well, well. I should read the manual one more time...
FX: Hurry, hurry
Orizuka: (Huh?)
Tiny Text Orizuka: Something's a little strange...
SFX: Tap, tap
Oka: Okay, a smack on the right shoulder is a sign to tilt your head leff, palms together.
SFX: creak, creak

17
SFX: creak, creak, creak.....
Tiny Text: So big!
FX: Stare
FX: Glance
FX: Shock
SFX: Flip
SFX: Thump, thump (heart beat)
Oka: (What's with this girl...does she even get the point of meditation?)
SFX: Clack
Sub Text: Smacking signal

18
Amuro: Yay! I'm the first!
FX: Jump up!
Oka: What?
Amuro: Please, go ahead.
SFX: Boing
Oka: No, we just smack you on the shoulder...
SFX: Smack
Amuro: Thank you so much!
FX: Bow
Oka: Don't talk.
Oka: (If I don't just ignore her, this could go on forever..)
FX: Glance
Text: Aura that seems to say "If you smack me I'll kill you"
SFX: click, click
Oka:...

19
Oka: Hey, a most of your group is having trouble with this..
SFX: Whisper, whisper
Ikamasa: Hm? It's fine just wing it.
Oka: And, In the first place, I'm a different sect, and I've never done zen meditation.
Ikamasa: As long as the form is similar, there's no problem. So hey, I'll buy you a beer tonight--
SFX: Whisper, whisper
Orizuka:...
SFX: Loud Smack
Orizuka: I'll take care of the rest so..
Orizuka: You just sit down and shut up you corrupt monk!!!
Black Text: Go, go, go
Sub Text: Gesture
Okay: Yes ma'am...
Orizuka: And Ikamasa...
SFX: Smack
Orizuka: I'm kicking you out!
SFX: Bang!!

20
SFX: tap, tap, tap.... (marching)
Bubble SFX: Whack
(TN: lots of whacking)
Orizuka: FX Yelling at top of lungs!!!
Takeda: Ahh!
SFX: Loud CRACK!
Orizuka: (Huh!? Where's Ninagawa!?)
Orizuka: You're back!! Where've you been!!
SFX: Tap, tap
Orizuka Text: Amuro's whacking stick..
Orizuka Text: Is a grave post!!
Orizuka Text: No way!!
SFX: Smack!
Amuro Text: Why??

21
SFX: Stomp, stomp, stomp
Text: No matter how you look at it, it's a nice vace
SFX: Flip
SFX: Bump
Oka; Huh?
Oka: Uh, oh.
SFX: Clomp
Amuro: Huh? It's night already?
FX: Stagger
Oka: Wait, that's a...
Amuro: Ahhh!!!
Oka: Ahhh!
SFX: Smash
Oka: a 2,000,000 yen vase!!!
Kaname: Ack!
Tiny text: Turned pale
Everyone: What???????

22
Text: The nearest station to the temple, Kataseonoshima Station
Passerby: Huh?
Another passerby: What?
SFX: Chattering
Another passerby: Is it a performance?
Another passerby: Cool!
SFX: Chattering
Text box: So basically...
Text box: to help pay for the vase, it turned into mendicant beggar training.
Shizuoka: (I want this to be over already)
Tiny text: Rattle
Tiny text Kaname: Shizuka's raking it in.
Amuro: Training is fun!
SFX: Ring, ring
Tiny text Ikamasa: My heart feels somewhat pure...
FX: Stare----

Translation: Umisho 44

Thu, 08 Jan 2009 08:31:02 +0000

2
Umisho's school news paper omitted.

3

SFX:
Orizuka: How many seconds?
Kaname: One minute, five seconds.
Orizuka: There's only ten days left until the Kanto Swimming Tournament, and we're a little off our game. At this rate we'll lose to Nanjo.
Orizuka: I wonder if there's any kind of training to raise our level in a short period of time.
Kaname: Hmm, I wonder...
SFX: drip (Water falling off of her)
Ikamasa: My worried little lambs...
Kaname: Uh, What's with the robe, Captain?

4
Ikamasa: It seems like you're worried that you haven't practiced enough!!!
Orizuka: What is it? Do you have some kind of plan?
Ikamasa: I have four plans that seem realistic.
SFX: Flip
Sign: 1) Stop time. 2) Go back in time. 3) Steroids 4) Get ahead of our rivals by using a secret weapon.
Orizuka or Kaname: So realistic...huh?
Maki: What's this secret weapon in number 4?
Orizuka: Really? As if such a thing exists.
Ikamasa: Behold!
SFX: Ta-da!
Kaname: Uh, what is that?

5
First Frame
Text Box to the Right of his head: The rubber on the neck, arms and legs provides resistance training for swimming time.
Text Box to the Left of his head: Equipped with internal music player so you can enjoy practicing.
Text Box Pointing to his belt: Control Panel
Text Box Pointing to his chest: You can train your body automatically in 18 spots with the EMS (Electric Muscle Stimulator)
The only text not in a box: The next generation powered swimming suit Moro 1 developed in cooperation with Morobosis Bots.
Text Box Pointing to leg: Made with fatigue reducing titanium and germanium.
Text under picture: A sporting goods store in the next town over that Ikamasa supports
Maki: Amazing!
Amuro: It looks strong!!
SFX: Oooo!
Ikamasa: I'm going for it! Power ON!
Ikamasa: Everyone behold the suit's......
Text: Sound Seeping out (referring to the musical notes)
SFX: Twitch, twitch, twitch
SFX: Bang
Ikamasa: Power!!
SFX:

6
Text: Electric Shock (merely describing what's going on)
Ikamasa: AHHHHHH!
Orizuka: Moron
Kaname: Oh, but I just remembered something...
Text Maki: Ugh, he smells like rubber.
SFX: Poke, poke
Kaname: If we use a rubber cord tied to our waist we can practice that way.
Text above swimmer: Resistance Training
Text below swimming: Assisted Swimming
Orizuka: That sounds good!
Orizuka: Hey! Ikamasa! Do your job and buy rubber cords!
Orizuka: Try not to spend so much money, okay?
Text: 'Cuz products like that cost a lot of money.
TIny text Kaname: Is he listening?
Ikamasa: Got eeet~
FX: Staggering
Text: And then.....
SFX: Squeak (TN: Sound of something being tied tightly)

7
Orizuka: Like this, do you think?
Kaname: Yeah. Usually there's a cord made specifically for this, though.
Kise: Doesn't this cord look used?
Text: It's really stuck together
Ikamasa: I got it for cheap. Don't complain.
Orizuka?: There's not enough for everyone, so priority goes to those participating in the tournament.
Maki: So it means its the mark of being an advance swimmer!
FX: Confused
Amuro: Shizuoka, shall I tie yours for you?
Shizuoka: Um, well...
SFX: Rustle, rustle
Amura: Leave it to me!
Shizuoka: Not there! (tiny) This is bad
Big Black SFX: Squeak!
SFX Shizuoka: Ack!
White SFX: Squeak

8
Shizuoka: I'll do it myself...
Text Takeda: Shall I help you?
Amura: Oh, really?
SFX: Snap
Orizuka: You tied yours wrong too. Fix it please.
Orizuka: Okay, whoever is ready, do three successive laps.
Orizuka: Okiura, the signal.
Kaname: Okay.
Kaname: Go, (sfx: beep!)
Amuro: Amuro's going too!
SFX: Splash, splash
Kise: Looks hard.
Ikamasa: We'll wait for our turn.
SFX: splash splash
Black FX: Stretch
Maki: Wow! It's really stretching!
Kaname: The further you go, the more it stretches and harder it is.

9
Orizuka: (Just a little further)
Orizuka: (It doesn't seem like its going to go any further)
SFX: Splash
Orizka:(I wish the tube were a little longer...)
SFX: Splash, splash (louder splash)
Orizuka: (Oh well, I guess I'll just swim back from here.)
Orizuka: You can't swim any further forward. Don't overdo it.
Orizuka: Are you listening to me!?
Text Orizuka: Ninagawa..
SFX: splash, splash

10

FX: Sink
Amuro: Out of energy...
SFX: Snap!
Amura: Ugh!
Amura: Ahhh!
Maki: Oh no!!
Kaname: It's snapping back!
SFX: Brrrrack
Amuro: I can't stop----
Amuro: i'm going to crash!
SFX: Thump, thump, thump
Orizuka: Hey! Someone stop her!
Kaname: Takeda--
Takeda: Me?

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Kaname: I'm sorry!!!
Takeda: Huh?
SFX: Bang
SFX Amuro: Wahhhhh
Amuro: Look out!!
Amuro: What a shock!
Kanamea: (So sorry...)
SFX: bob (floating sound)
Orizuka: Well, at least only Takeda got hurt.
Orizuka: Okay, I'm going for 10 laps!
Amuro: Okay!
Kise: And they're doing more
Masa: You're welcome!!
SFX: Caw, caw
Kise: Soooo tired.
FX: Limp
Orizuka: But that training was great!!
Orizuka: Let's do it again tomorrow!!
Orizuka: Thanks for getting such cheap cords, Ikamasa.
Tiny Text: It's so rare for him to do a good job.
Masa: Heh, heh, that's what I'm here for.
Orizuka: Oh, that's right. Today I took my bike.
SFX: Flip
Kaname: Really? (tiny) that's rare

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Girl: This sucks.
Another Girl: Mine too!
Orizuka: What's the matter?
Orizuka: What--?
Orizuka: All the bike's air tubes...
Orizuka: are missing!! (tiny) even mine too!!
FX: Pealed off
Orizuka: Who did this...
Masa: But wasn't practice going so well?
Orizuka: Take me to my house!!
SFX: Beep-beep
SFX: Whip
Text: Amuro wants to ride too.
Text Box: Ten days until the Kanto Swimming Tournament

Translation: Umisho 43

Thu, 08 Jan 2009 08:24:33 +0000

Umisho 3
Chapter 43

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Kenko Zenrankei Suiebu Umisho

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Side Text: Okiura's Morning Off
SFX: Woosh (wave crashing)
White SFX: Chirp, chirp
Black SFX: Bark, bark
White SFX: Bark, bark
Kaname: Uh
Kaname: Geeze... Lala's been noisy (tiny) Lala's the dog's name
Kaname: all morning.
SFX: Bark, bark
Amuro: Look!
Kanme: Ack!
SFX: Bark, bark,
SFX: Pant, pant
Kaname: What are you doing in my room!! (tiny) Lala doesn't belong in the house!!
FX: Gnawing
Amura: Oh, good morning!

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Kanayo: Everyone, breakfast is ready.
Kaname: Okay!
Amuro: Ah, I'll go wake up dad then!
Sub Text: By the way, Kaname only has one parent.
Text Box: Room where Amuro's family is staying.
Text Box: Kaname's room
Kaname: (Come to think of it, I've never seen inside the room they're staying in..)
FX: Slide
Amuro: Dad! Breakfast!
Amuro's Dad: Uh, oh...
FX: Stare
Text: A tent in the house??
Dad: Ah..
Dad: It'd be nice to have A1 right about now.
Amuro: Yeah, it would.
Kaname: A1?
Kaname: What's this A1?
Dad: Huh? A1 is A1.
Amuro: That thing you shake..
Amuro: Ok, I'll go buy A1 right now! Kaname, Let's go!!
SFX: Tap, tap
Kaname: What? Me too? And what's A1??
Dad: Come back soon!
Text box: To be continued

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Side Text Itty Bitty Titty Club Dreaming
SFX: Groan
Maki: Maki's body...
Maki: has gotten sexy!!!
SFX: Boing!
Maki: Maaya too!
Maaya: Huh??
SFX: Jiggle
Maki: We did it! Our dreams have come true!!
Maaya: What the hell is this??
SFX: Splash
Ohhh: Shizuoka!, your boobs!!
FX: Cling
Orizuka: Hey you two, get practicing.
Maki: Oh!

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Amuro: Hey, everyone...
FX: Flat chested
Text Kise: I didn't have boobs to begin with..
Amuro: we've got no boobs!
Maki; The itty bitty titty club has taken over the big boobs!
Maaya: Ha, ha, ha, Look at them!
Ikamasa: Hey!
Ikamasa: Ohhhhh!!
SFX: Ba, dump!
SFX: Groan, Groan
Text Box: Both of them are having the same dream!

Side Text: Orizuka's day off
SFX: crunch, crunch, crunch

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Black SFX: munch, munch, munch
SFX: Munch, munch
White FX: Roll over
Black SFX: munch munch
SFX: Ring, ring, ring
Text Message:
From Sanae
No Title
Are you free? Wanna go to Karaoke?
I've got nothing to do---
Orizuka texting back: (I just want to stay at home)
SFX: Click, click
SFX: Beep
Orizuka's parent: Momoko, go buy me cigarettes!
SFX: Huh?
Orizuka: That much you can do yourself!
Text Box: Actually, Orizuka's a big hermit.

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Side Text: Kise, who wants to go to Karaoke
Kise: What the heck? Zuka won't come.
Kise: I can't exactly go to karaoke by myself. Who can I call..
SFX: click, click
Amuro: Neither the convenience store nor the grocery store sells it.
SFX: tap, tap, tap
Kaname: So, what the heck is A1?
Kise: Hey you two, nice timing!
Amuro: Oh! Kise! Do you know where we can get A1?
Kise: A1? What's that?
Amuro: It's that thing you put on things..
Amuro's hand motion SFX; Shake, shake
Kise: Oh, that thing. I saw it somewhere..
Amuro: Really?
Kise: Yep, yep. It's on the tip of my tongue..
Kise: It's just a matter of time..
Tiny Text: Come on, think hard!!
Kise: I might remember in there, want to to in together?
(TN: Sign behind reads Karaoke)
Amuro: Yeah!
Text Box: So they were forcefully dragged to karaoke by Kise
Kaname: (We've been tricked!)
Text Box: To be continued.

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Side Text: Japanese Style Cuisine, Ikariya ~Afternoon~
SFX: Snore, snore
Floor sign: Lunch time
Door sign: Now serving wheat noodles, cold noodles, cold chow mein, cold pasta
Hanging sign: Liveliest place in Japan
SFX: Snore, snore
SFX: Rumble (door opening)
FX: Look up.
SFX: Bang!
Ikariya: Welcome!!!!
Ikamasa: Can we help you!!!
Customer: Oh, so high-spirited.
Ikariya: Yes!! Were the liveliest place in Japan!
Ikamasa: Please have a seat..(tiny) over here
Ikariya: So what will you have? We have lunch too!
FX: Puddle
Customer: Huh? It's wet here.
FX: Wipe, wipe
Ikamasa: We can't have that! It's our drool.
Customer: I think I'll go to another place...
SFX: Rumble
Ikariya: Come again!
Ikamasa: Come again!
SFX: Snore, snore

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Side Text: The Great Legend, Takeda
SFX: Whammo
Sub Text: Fighting Game
Text Box: A legendary guy is in an subway arcade in the middle of the afternoon.
Onlooker: Wow! He's crushed 42 people!
SFX: Chatter, chatter
Text Box: The guys name is Takeda
SFX: Zing
SFX: Kaboom!
Sub Text: Shooting Game
Onlooker: He's cleared on one coin!
Text Box: He's the strongest guy in this arcade the whole day!!
SFX: Clamoring
Text Box: The strongest!!
SFX: Tires squealing
Text: Two hours later
Sub Text: Racing game
Video Game Sign: Taiko Superman
(TN: Taiko is a Japanese drum)
Text Box: The strongest!!!
SFX: Boom, boom, boom
Text: 5 hours later
Sub Text: Drumming game
FX: Empty
Text: The great legend Takeda
SFX: Grumbling
Tiny Text: So hungry....
Kanji to the Side: Fin (TN Dramatic Ending)

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Side Text: Onoshima Idol, Ono's day
7:00 am Get up
FX: Jiggle
8:00 am Breakfast and a walk
FX: Wave, wave
Amuro: Ono!!
0:00 pm Crown pleasing
SFX: Slap, slap
Crowd: Ono! Ooo! Aww!
2:00 pm Tired of the crowd
Crowd: Look over here! Hey! Ono!
5:00 pm
SFX: Swish
Amuro's Dad: (He looks so delicious)
Text: Amuro's dad casually waiting to catch him
7:00 pm Dinner
Amuro: Ono! We're back!
Kaname: (Every time I see him he's eating squid...)
SFX: Slurp, slurp
10:00 pm Offensive and Defensive battle with Amuro's dad
Amuro's Dad: (Tsk, he's not falling for the trap..)
0:00 am Bed time
SFX: Dribble
Text: Go back to the beginning

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Side Text: Possessed By Evil
Text Box: Umineko City, Suburban High-Rise Apartment Building is...
Text Box: Maaya's home
SFX: Buzz (curler)
Maaya: I knew it! Maaya's cute!
SFX: Flip (hair)
Maaya: (This is cute too!)
FX: Tying hair up
SFX: Oooo~
Maaya: (This is cute too!)
Maaya: (This too!)
SFX: Giggle
Text: Mimicking Amuro
Maaya: This pisses me off!!!
SFX: Screech!

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Side Text: Iori at the Bookstore
Text Box: I confess
Text Box: I have a fingertip fetish.
SFX: Blush
SFX: Gasp
Iori: The fingertips of the boy on the cover sure are nice...
Another Customer: Oh, this one's good!
FX: Firm grip
FX: Slip away
Text on Hand: Iori's hand
Text: Oops, who are you? They're nice fingers even if they are oval shaped..
Tiny Text: Imagining his face
Text: Surely you have nice looking face...
Customer: Wow! I'll read this and go to Umisho again...
Customer: Yes, yes yes,,,

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Side Text: The thing Shizuoka wants...
Sign: Folk Costumes, Musical Instruments, Sundry Goods. "N Bag"
Shizuoka: (There was a store like this in this neighborhood)
Shizuoka: (Maybe.. I'll take a look inside..)
FX: Nervous
Shizuoka: (Wow!)
Shizuoka: (There's lots of nice shaped carvings...)
SFX: Thud, thud (heart beat)
Text Box: Shizuoka's secret hobby is collecting folk crafts, (carvings in particular)
Shizuoka: (Masks are nice too)
SFX: Bam!
Shizuoka: What?
Sign: Penis Sheath, New Article 20,000 Yen

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Text: Pe**s sheath??
FX: Nervous
FX: Stare
Text: What should I do? Should I buy it?
SFX: Thump, thump, thump....
Text: But, a girl can't exactly bring this to the register....
Store Keep: Can I help you with anything?
SFX: Eeep!
Shizuoka: Ah!
Text: What should I do... I guess I can't buy it...
FX: Wave, wave
Shizuoka; Um, well...
Store Keep: Don't hold back, just say it...
Text: I just want to spit it out..

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Text: God help me...
SFX: Thump, thump....
Text: Please give me
SFX: Thump, thump
Text: The courage to buy this
SFX: Gasp
Shizuoka: Th-
Shizuoka: Thi-
Shizuoka: This please!!
SFX: Zing
Store Keep: Okay
Text: I-
Text: I did it! I bought it!
SFX: Sigh of relief
Text: Oh, god.
Store Keep: Please come to the register
SFX: Clank
Text: That one??

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Side Text: Japanese Style Cuisine, Ikariya ~Evening~
Ikariya: So you see...
Customer 1: Ha, ha, ha
Customer 2: If that's the case, why don't you remarry...
Customer 1: Yeah. How many years has it been she your wife ran off on you?
Ikariya: Annoying-- You don't know anything.
Customer 1: So you have one?
Ikariya: Um, no, well, I wasn't macho enough...
Customer: What was her name again?
Ikariya: Um, um.
SFX: Drip, drip, drip (sweat)
Customer: Nami, no Kanae, no Momoko was it?
SFX: Rattle
Orizua: Ikamasa, give me my DVD back...
SFX: Rumble (sliding door)
Ikamasa: Oh, Momoko.
Tiny Text: Oh Momoko was it...
Customer 1: This is...
Customer 1 SFX: Stare
Customer 2 SFX: Smirk
Orizuka: (What's with those looks?)

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Side Text: The sun is setting...
Kaname: (After Kise mercilessly drug us along, then said she forgot and ran off)
Kaname: I don't think they sell it here, do you?
Tiny Text: And what is A1 anyways??
Text Amuro: Hmm.
Amuro: It looks like we can't find it, let's go home.
FX: Spin
Kaname: (Finally)
SFX: Woosh (waves crashing)
Amuro: Kaname, thanks for today,
SFX: Splash
Kaname: Huh? What's this all of a sudden...

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Kaname: Whatever, I'm used to it.
SFX: Woosh
Amuro: Hey, Kaname. Do you remember this place?
FX: Spin
Kaname: Um?
SFX: Woosh, whoosh
Kaname: The place where we first met?
Amuro: Booo!

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Amuro: That was the second time!!
SFX: Beep
Amuro: First time was Chura Sea??
(TN: Chura means beautiful in Okinawan dialect)
Flashback Amuro: Chura Sea?
Text; She said it again...
Amuro: Don't forget it..
FX: Sulking
Kaname: Then, do you remember when the first time was?
Text Amuro: Um, no...
Amuro: But it's true!! (tiny) Um.. Um...
Kaname: Well, whatever...
Text Box: In any case...

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Text: It doesn't change
Text: how we get along now...
SFX: Bob (floating sound)
Kaname: What's that bottle?
Amuro: A1!!!!
Kaname: That's it??
Kaname: Wait, so you mean that this is...
Kaname: the remains of your house that was torn up in the storm...
Amuro: I found Amuro's froggy!
Amuro: And dad's computer!!
Text Box: By the way, A1 is a big name sauce in Okinawa. (tiny) It goes on steak and hamburgers and such...

To be continued in Volume 4

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Text: When is that song from?

Translation: Umisho 42

Tue, 06 Jan 2009 08:42:49 +0000

Umisho 3 42

128
Umisho Short Story: The other boys on the swim team

I tried to find something from the preliminary settings before Umisho was serialized of the boys on the swim team other than the main characters like Ikamasa but, this is all I could find... The names and details are different, and there's traces of a character I cut out. You can kinda see the halfhearted state in which Umisho started serialization.

Even so, the one that looks like Takeda has a pointy head and at first glance he's a dead ringer for the perverted character slot. In a word, he was convenient for it...

By the way, presently there are girl characters that aren't regularly appearing that I haven't worked out the details for yet. At the beginning I didn't set all the characters in stone. Rather, I hashed them out as I went along and made them regulars, which is makes it easier to bring them to life. That's why I didn't bother to work them all out.
(For that reason there were hardly any boys)
Kise was another character that got created in this manner. So, from here on out, more and more characters will rise from "other club member" into regular status.

Pictures from left to right, top to bottom:
Junior, Tadashi Suzuki, back stroke
Sophomore, Jun Fukube, breast stroke
Junior, Nadore?, freestyle
Junior

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Title: Kenko Zenrakei Suieibu Umisho
Text Box: A lot of things happened during the summer festival...
SFX omitted from flashback
Text Box: But...
Text: There was actually a little more drama...
Text Box: It goes back to just before the "Fukubashiri" (Lucky Marathon)
Text Box: Jun Tobe, genius computer programmer
Takeda: Today,..
Text Box: Seito Takeda, "I'm a respectable guy, really"
Text Box: Isao Tsutsumi, "Snort" (Snore)
Takeda: we won't let them slip from our hands.
SFX: Thump, Thump

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Takeda: We're going to pick up cute girls!!
SFX: Thud
Orizuka: A--hem! Guys with girlfriends with will rise and escape swim team oppression!!
Orizuka: Squash the cockroach
Text: Oh, My girlfriend
Takeda: Okay, targets acquired immediately!!!
SFX: Bang
SFX: Bang
Takeda: Go pick up girls!!
Isao: Um, do you want to go somewhere?
Girl: Uh, where?
Isao: Like your house
Jun: Do you want to try a fortune teller I made? We can check our compatibility.
SFX: Click, click, click (typing)
Jun: Honorable Death!!!
Isao: Well, I've never picked up girls before...
Takeda: How pathetic.
White SFX: Bang
Non, bubble text Takeda: Oh my.
Takeda: Just watch me. I'll slay her!
Iori: What!?

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SFX: Swish, swish
Takeda: Giggle, can I buy you something?
Text: Primary School Student
Girl: Uh---?
Isao: That's not quite picking up a girl....
Girl's mother: Who the heck are you!?
Girl: Hi, mama.
Takeda: C-crap! Run away!!
Isao: Us too!?
SFX: Dash (sound of running away)
Orizuka: It must have been my imagination..?
Kise: What? What? A cute guy?
Text: Found Orizuka!!
Takeda: Phew, that was close...
Isao: How about a little bit older girl next time...
SFX: Huff, huff (panting)
Iori: Like what about that group of girls..
Takeda: Yeah! Ok!! This time for sure!!
Text: Group
Takeda: Yo, yo, cutie!
Isao: Are you busy?

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Nanjo: Hmm?
SFX: Crash
Nanjo: Did you want something?
SFX: Stare
Iori: Uh, um..
Takeda: Oh!! It's a group of girls from Shinomiya
Nanjo: Oh, you suck at picking up girls... Wait.. you guys..
Nanjo: Haven't I met you someone before...
Takeda: Well, we have met before.
Takeda: I'm a dwarf prince..
Nanjo: Huh??
Takeda: and you were an elf princess.
Takeda: We met in a previous life--
Tiny Text: Interracial forbidden love!!
SFX: Clip-clop (horse hooves)
Nanjo: Another life...

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Takeda: And we've finally met in this life.
Takeda: Let's go...
Takeda: to our flower garden!!!!
SFX: Prancing
Nanjo: Go by yourself
Takeda SFX: Grumbling
Nanjo: And we came all the way here for this boring festival
Isao: Maybe cut our loses...
Text: It's not gonna happen for us.
Text: Yeah, we can still go back..
Takeda: I'm not done yet...
SFX: Boing (jump up suddenly)
Takeda: Hey..
SFX: Whip
Takeda: Weren't you from Shinomiya...
Naruko: Are you guys okay?

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Takeda: Well I'm used to it.
Naruko: Are you guys busy?
Isao: Well, I guess not...
Takdea: (Not really interested in "fish lips", "ugly glasses" and "racoon fox")
Naruko: If you guys are free, do you want to light fireworks (in tiny)with us?
SFX: Swish
Boys; Huh??
Takeda: W-who? Us?
Isao: Us...
SFX: Huh? (confused)
Naruko: Well some was hitting on Nanjo and she went off somewhere...
Tiny Text: Naruko: Even though Nanjo said she'd do fireworks with us..
Hara: And we're not busy...
Naruko: You don't have to if you don't want to...
Boys: We'll go!!
SFX: Score!!!!!

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White SFX: Fizzle
Girl: Ahh!
Hara: What the heck is that?
White SFX: Pop, pop, pop
Takeda: Flame Dance!!!
Black Text: Hahaha
Iori: Does anyone want a snow cone?
Naruko: I do!!
Fish lips: Oh, uh huh, uh huh
Jun: Look at this
Hara: Woah, that's cool..
Takeda: (Tsk, it looks like they're doing well...(tiny) boring..)
Takeda: (With this...)
SFX: click
Sub text: Mouse Firecracker
Takeda: Take this!!
SFX: Plop
Naruko: Tehee!
SFX: Fizzle, pop
Takeda: Ack! (tiny) It came back!!
Naruko: It's a little scary!!
Bubble SFX: Squish
White SFX: Pop, pop
Naruko: Oh, sorry. (tiny) That surprised me--
Black SFX: Squeak, squeak
Takeda: Oh, ah um..

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Naruko: Ah, Umisho's so nice...
Naruko: At Shinomiya, it's Nanjo's one woman show, it sucks. (tiny) you know.
Takeda: On the outside it looks nice and all, but behind the scenes, there's a monster of a girl...
Naruko: Oh really?
SFX: Bang
Naruko: Haha, it's the same.
Takeda: Yep, same, same
Naruko: So,,,
SFX: Flip
Naruko: We're both in the same boat
Naruko: So lets do our best!! (tiny) Okay!
SFX: Thump (heart beat)
Text Takeda: That's strange...

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Text Takeda: She is looking...
SFX: Thump, thump, thump
Text Takeda: kinda cute.
White SFX: Thump, thump
Black SFX: More quickly (referring to the heart beats)
Takeda: Oh yeah..
Naruko: Huh?
Text Takeda: You and I...
White SFX: Thump, thump
Text Takeda: in a previous life...
White SFX: Thump, thump
Text Takeda: we met, didnt we?
White SFX: thump, thump, thump..

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Girl's mom: There he is!!
SFX: Slip
Girl's mom: Police officer, those three!
SFX: Bang
Girl's mom: They tried to kidnap my daughter!!!
Takeda: Huh?
Takeda: No, we just tried to hit on her!!
SFX: Drip, drip (sweat)
Naruko: Huh?
Naruko: You're kidding, you tried to hit on that little girl??
SFX: Shock
Takeda: Uh, no, um...
Police Officer: Well, for the time being, let's go down to the station.
SFX: Thunk
Naruko: Let's get out of here...
Text Box: Their summer night dreams were crushed.