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Tenjou Tenge 124

FIGHT: 124

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+ posted by naruto+4s as translation on May 17, 2009 22:09 | Go to Tenjou Tenge

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Page 1
滴る我が血よりもこの刻を惜しむ
I value this moment more than my dripping blood

Page 2-3
運命は私たちを変えていくかもしれないけれど、
Fate may change us,
私たちは運命に従っているわけじゃない
but it doesn't control us

Page 4
足りんっ
Not enough

Page 5
No text

Page 6
足りんっ
Not enough
光臣さん
Mitsuomi-san

Page 7
No text

Page 8
時が足りぬ
I don't have enough time
みっ......
Mit......
五十鈴... 不思議な事を言うようだが
Izuna... You seem to say mysterious things, but
あと...5分あれば
If I only had... another 5 minutes......
いや...3分でいい......
No... 3 minutes would be enough......
神を倒すために始めたの"戦"の最中
In the midst of the "war" started to defeat god
私は今......必死で神に祈ってる
I... Am praying to god for my life

Page 9
この至福の刻を私にくれっ...
Give me my moment of bliss...
神(アンタ)に追いついた
I've caught up to you, God

Page 10
そして神(アンタ)を
And now,
越えよとしているよ
I'm going to surpass you

Page 11
......ちっ...!!
......TCH...!!

Page 12
ぬおっ... な......なんじゃ-ッ!!
Whoa... wha...... what's wrong!!
ぬおっ!?ま...真貴子は!? キザマッ 何勝手に運転しとるかッ  どこに行く気じゃあーッ
What!? Where is Makiko!? Why are you driving all of a sudden. Where are we going~
喧しい黙れ放り出すぞ
Shut up, you're too noisy. I'm going to throw you out
ここはもう危険だ 見ろ
This place is too dangerous... Look
龍が......鎌首をッ...!?
The dragon is in...A gooseneck!?

Page 13
no text

page 14
龍挙...!!
Ryuu-ken...!! (Dragon fist)
こ......これ以上...さら...にが..."外氣"を喰らうというのか......!!
Are... you telling me... the "atmosphere" will be devoured if this continues......!?
"神"とやらは
It looks like "god"
まだ......生まれたばかりだ
has...... only just been born

page 15
これからたらふく喰って
It's going to eat to its heart's content
すくすくと育つのさ
And display rapid growth
Page 16
No text

Page 17
No text

Page 18
さすがは......"武"の神...凄王(スサノオウ)
As expected...... from the warrior god...King Susanoou
[TL note: Uses the kanji of uncanny and king]
無念っ...!!
Regret...!
ここ......までか...!!
So... This is it...!!
............ 待て... ......無念...!?
............ Wait... ......regret...!?
無念だとっ...!?
REGRET...!?

Page 19-20
喝ッ!!!
*Scold*!!!
何事ですか
What's going on?
その姿は
Taking a form like that

Page 21
この棗亜夜の婿ともあろう男が!!
The bridegroom of (棗亜夜)!!
そんなお化け赤ちゃんの中でを遊んでいるのです
Playing inside a monster baby like that!!
まだ...... 宗一郎様は...
Souichirou-sama is still...
あの"中"で戦っている
fighting inside that
いっ...... アイツ...いんのかよ......あん中にっ...
Is...... he...okay......inside that...
まだ
He hasn't
あきらめていないっ...!!
given up yet...!!

Page 22
約束......してくれましたよね
You promised... didn't you?
誰にも負けないって
You promised you wouldn't lose to anyone
ダムッ
Damn
ボケがぁ...どこまで人騒がせなヤロウだっつーのいきてんなら一言ぐらい俺に言えっつーんだ
Fool... He's one hell of a trouble maker, he should've told me if he's alive
ふむ
hum
ああ...そーいう事...ね ま......俺も今日の試合じゃちったぁ助かったし
Ah... Okay... I see. Anyway... I got helped out a little today, too
宗一郎様......これはあなた自身の戦い
Souichirou-sama......this is your own fight
私達にはーどうする事もできないけれど
We might not be able to help

Page 23-24
私はここでこのノドがはりさけてもかまわない
I don't mind if my throat bursts
宗一郎オー
SOUICHIROUー
この声が少しでもあなたの背中押す"力"になるのなら
If you can gain strength from hearing my voice
ファイッ
FIGHT

Page 25
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Page 26
た...... 助かった...一瞬だけど...
He...... he's saved... For now...
どうしてだろうアイツの動きが鈍った......
Why did his movements slow down......
兄さんっ!!もういいっ!!
Brother!! That's enough!!
私は今初めてキサマを呪う
This is the first time I'm truly cursing you

Page 27
知らなければよかった
I would have been better off not knowing
ここで死ぬのなら
If I'm going to die here
二度と戦えなくなるのなら
If I'm never going to fight again
この刻など
I should've never known
ー知らなければよかった
A moment like this

Page 28
もう一度......この男戦いたい
I want to fight this man... one more time
この次はもっと もっと 素晴らしい戦をしてみせる
I'll show you an even better battle next time
技もー...肉体も
techniques... strength-...
もっともっと
all better
もっとー...
betterー...
死にたくないッ
I don't want to die...

Page 29-30
生きたい
I want to live-...!!

Page 31
短いが、強く、切実な言葉、「生きたい」。 光臣の叫びも虚しく、武神の拳は振り下ろされるのか!!
A short, yet powerful honest cry, "I want to live." Is Mitsuomi's cry in vain against the might of the warrior god's fist!?

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#1. by styxian (Registered User)
Posted on May 20, 2009
Thanks for saying thank you. :)
I just read your translation, and I must say what you wrote on quite a few places
are definitely better than mine, exactly what one lose when one translate from a secondary source. What I did better was merely revising and choosing words, even fluffs.

For example,
1) page 15, I put "and healthily grow up", compared with yours "Then grew rapidly" probably don't make much sense, so maybe "and grow up nice and fast" (more fitting since Susanoo was suppose to be slain so to end all dragon powers, "nice and fast" make him sound like a livestock)
2) page 18, 無念=regret never occur to me, since in Chinese 無=no, 念=thought,
so "no thought" -> "thoughtless" "not thinking" -> those fists Mitsuomi trained that don't require thoughts to punch -> Mit attacked before Susanoo unleashed his dragon power, much like in 123. BUT, "regret" would fit in better with page 26-28, how he HATES the fact that he's going to die.
3) page 22, my Aya's speech about promise sounds as if she's trying to convince herself, losing confidence (although I'd like it to be this way, but-), while yours seems to be her shouting at him, much like what she did in Vol 1 in the fight against
Masataka (and man, I still think she's so damn egotistic)
and page 23-24, "I'll scream my throat out", couldn't find a sentence similar to this, so I put up with quite an unnatural one "even if my larynx break", understandable, but not great.
4) page 31, "screams are in vain", another one that I wouldn't have thought of (虚=hollow, cry hollowing out -> chap 118, "are you the moon or the man who stand tall but sound hollow, lifting his head to look at the moon"), I'm too familiar with this material and that tends to lead me astray, writing interpretations that are speculations instead of similar and literal meaning words.
Good job for your first, you'll definitely improve if you keep this up!
#2. by naruto+4s (Registered User)
Posted on May 20, 2009
Thx, but it's annoying when I find I make mistakes. -_- I really wonder why ten ten doesn't get anymore attention
#3. by styxian (Registered User)
Posted on May 20, 2009
Because it's monthly, and many times OG take breaks so it becomes bi-monthly.
It's really hard to keep up when a single fight lasts an entire year(exaggeration, but not that far from the truth)...
#4. by Meriken (Translator)
Posted on May 27, 2009
I've edited and approved this one as requested, naruto+4s. I suggest looking over the changes yourself and working out format issues to your satisfaction.

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