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Choku! (ちょく!)By: TANIGAWA Nico
Demographics: Shounen
Status: 5 Chapters + 2 Specials (Ongoing)
Manga Details Page: HereRaws: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 | Chapter 5p01
A popular "bloody" love comedy from Fresh Gangan is now serialized!
box: For people who think lunch breaks can be quite a hassle
serika: Umm, I made some lunch. Would you...?
guy: Yes! I'm close to a new event scene.
box: this room is the perfect spot.
guy: Ack! Lunch break is already over?! // I better hurry up and eat.
p02
box: Although, recently, through a brief encounter...
guy: Huh?
box: I ended up meeting a weird girl here.
p03
Yellow and red: (Bloody) Encounters happen without notice!
guy: UWAHHHH
box: Her name is Serika. I don't know anything about her.
Bottom: Choku!
Chapter 1: This is me, and she's my friend.
p04
Guy: Uh... Eeh... E-Excuse me b-but... ummm... // Wh-What are you d-doing?
serika: I was taking a shit // when you came in.
[TN: she calls him Nao]
Nao: Er... ummm ... you were doing number 2... / But why in the boys bathroom?
serika: I Find it relaxing. // We're lovers so it's normal for us to take shits together and cover each other with blood from bloody noses.
Nao: Who does that?! / Regardless of who, count me out!!
p05
Nao: Also ... umm ... correct me if I'm wrong, but we're not even dating in the first place.
serika: We aren't?
nao: I'm a shorty and I'm really not comfortable around taller people... / I think I rejected you because of that.
p06
nao: B-But how about being my friend?! I don't have any so...!!
serika: Do friends cover each other with blood from bloody noses?
nao: No, no kind of relationship does that.
small: Do you want to?!
serika: Then do they get engaged?
nao: Nope. You think bloody noses are more important than getting engaged?
box: After school
p07
guy: What's that? // It says class 1-2. Hey, that's our class! But who's Nao?
street marks: To Nao from Class 1-2. Your friend is waiting for you. Let's go home together.
p08
Serika: We're friends so let's go home together.
Nao: ugh... she spotted me.
Serika: Hop in.
Nao: Eh ummm... // It's a bit embarrassing to be seen getting on
this thing...
small: This
Serika: Don't worry. You're cute so it's OK.
Nao: I don't see your logic there but...
p09
Nao: So... where are we headed?
Serika: To get our picture taken.
Nao: Our picture taken?
Serika: What do friends do?
Girl: Eh? // Um... well...
small: This is the first time she's spoken to me...
Girl: Hang out... Listen to each other...
Serika: Hang out?
Girl: Like with me, the other day I think I went shopping, went to a cafe and then took sticky pics...
[TN: Sticky pics are little picture booths that print out your picture on stickers
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Photo_booth#Purikura ]
Serika: Sticky pics?
p10
girl: These things.
Serika: Do want!
Girl: Eh? OK, which would you like?
Serika: None of yours.
Girl: Oh... OK...
Sign: Studio
Clerk: Welcome!
Nao think: Why are we at a photo studio?
Serika: I want to take that kind of picture with you.
Nao: EHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhh
pic: Congratulations Mr. Kazuki and Mai on your wedding!
p11
Nao think: Why that one?!
Clerk: Dressed as you are?
Serika: What do you have?
Clerk: We have suits and dresses.
Serika: You'll wear this.
Nao: Isn't that a bridesmaid dress?!
Clerk: I'm sorry, but dresses are for women only.
Serika: No problem. // He's cute.
Clerk: OK. Let's go into the studio.
Nao: OLD MAN!!
p12
Nao: I can't believe I actually put it on...
Serika: You look great like I thought you would.
Nao: You're not going to dress up?
Serika: I don't look as nice.
Nao: WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?
p13
Serika: A bloody nose mask. // This way my clothes don't get messy.
Nao: You made it?!
Clerk: OK, say cheese!
Nao: Oh my god...
Serika: Can I get it enlarged?
Clerk: It'll cost you extra.
p14
Serika: That went well.
Nao: Did it now... / Well, let's go home.
Serika: There's still a place I want to go to.
window: Shaizeria
[tn: play on Saizeriya]
Nao think: Why a coffee shop?
Serika: Friends hang out at places like this and talk over drinks.
Nao: ughhhhh
Nao think: Talk? About what...?
p15
Serika: What are your hobbies?
Nao: EHH?! // My h-hobbies? / I guess I like reading and playing video games.
Serika: I see. // What's your favorite subject?
Nao: Japanese... I think...
Serika: I see. // This is so fun.
Nao: Ehhhh. You're having fun?!
p16
Serika: Your turn to talk.
Nao: Ehh... ummm... OK...
Nao thought: What about...
Nao: So uh uhh what are your hobbies?
Serika: Collecting and looking at cute things.
Nao: Huh?
small: Where'd she go?
p17
Serika: I'm really having a blast.
Nao: How can you say that?!
Serika: Let's go.
Nao: Did you really have a good time?
Serika: Thank you very much. // I feel like we're closer now.
Nao: A-Are we now...?
p18
kid: Crap!! // Ahh!! // Let's get out of here!
Serika: They put graffiti on it.
Nao: Yeah...
p19
Nao: She's cr- crying!! // Depending on the angle it kinda looks like a cute panda. // Yea-h, didn't expect that to work.
Serika: You're right.
Nao: Huh!? // Wait, she stopped crying. Great.
Serika: But I want to get rid of the letters on its stomach.
p20
Serika: My pet is a goner.
Nao thought: She's really down. // Wait, I remember oily things...
Nao: I'll be right back.
sign: Dollar store.
door: Kyanso-
[Tn: Play on Dyso-]
clerk: That'll be $1.05.
p21
Nao: I'm back. // Umm Serika? // I got the stain out.
p22
Nao: Someone once wrote on my desk and I used this to get it off.
Serika: Thanks.
Nao: Eh?
Serika: Thank you.
p23
Nao: Oh uhh... // It's 'cause you're my f-friend. // And you want to help your friend when they're in need... // So I... uhh...
p24
Nao: Man, what am I saying?! I'm so embarrassed!
Serika: Then I want to do something for you too.
Nao: EH??? // Ohh umm well...
p25
Nao: Please be my friend forever. // EH?!? Why that expression?!
Serika: Are you trying to say you don't plan on being anything more than friends?
Nao: That's not what I meant. // I just want us to get along.
Serika: Then marry me.
Nao: I'm not going to do that.
Box: The next day.
p26
Serika: You can have this.
Girl: Really? // Th-thank you... // What in the hell!? // Here, let me give you my sticky pic...
Serika: No thanks.
Girl: Oh OK... // Is this short girl your friend? / She's cute.
Serika: That's my best friend.
Girl: What are you wearing?
Serika: A nosebleed mask.
Girl: A nosebleed mask!?
Girls: Let's go to the restroom. // OK.
p27
Serika: Why are they going to the restroom together?
Girl: Huh? Ah, hmm... I wonder. But yeah, girls often go to the restroom together. // Huh?
p28
Serika: Nao, let's go and take a shit.
Nao: Oh My God...
bottom: Will Nao continue to suffer?!
Next issue: December 11th.
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>> Umm, I made some lunch. Would you...
guy: Yes! Just a bit more until a new event scene.
>> I kind of don't like how this is phrased, maybe:
>> Yes! I'm close to a new event scene.
I better hurry and eat.
>> hurry up
p.4: Nao: Er... ummm ... you doing number 2... /
>> you were doing...
p.5: nao: I'm a small-fry and I'm really not comfortable around taller people...
>> I think it should be "I'm short" or "I'm a shortie/shorty"
p.9: Serika: What's Sticky pics?
>> What are sticky pics?
p.11: Clerk: OK. Let's move into the studio.
>> I like "Let's go into the studio" >.>
p.15: Serika: What are your hobies?
>> hobbies
Nao: Ehhhh you're having fun?!
>> period after ehhh; cap you're
p.17: Nao: Did you really have a good time?
>> You should emphasize 'really'
p.20:
-Nao thought: She's really down. // Wait, as I recall oily things...
>> recall is too educated- "Wait, I remember oily things..." or my previous suggestion of "Wait, if I recall correctly, oily things... (although it sounds more educated)
-Door not TLed
p.23: And when your friend needs help, then you want to help them...
>> drop the 'then' and possibly comma or change to:
>> And you want to help your friend (out) when they need help...
p.24: Nao: Man what am I saying?! I'm so embarrassed!
>> Man,
p.25: Why that face?!
>> expression might be better
p.26: What in the hell!?// Here let me give you my sticky pic...
>> What the hell? // Here,
p.27: Girl: Huh? Ah, hmm... I wonder. But yeah, girls oftne go to the restroom together.
>> oftne -> often
p.28: Serika: Nao let's go and take a shit.
>> Nao,
bottom: Will Nao's suffering continue?!
>> Will Nao continue to suffer?