Reserved for teh Binktopians.
1:
-We're broadcasting live from the sky above Aomori.
Text: Miroku vs Grana!! The battle concludes!!
-CALL 96. "The King Of Life."
-Toshiaki Iwashiro
-Hachinohe Expressway has completely collapsed due to an unknown explosion.
-Also...what on earth is that!?
-Something is emitting a blaze of light in the Container Yard at Hachinohe Port...!
2:
-Are those...
-people...?
-Haaah....
Text: I'm the puppeteer of life...!!
3:
Text: Sephiroth "Tifereth"
-regenerated...? / He uses the life force that he squeezed from those people as his own power...
-A power to stand above all life...!
-Kneel before me,
-Then become my food and die, humans.
4:
-Even if you stand above all the humans, / You'll never surpass the 'heavens'.
-...Oh,
-We'll see about that.
5:
6:
-In order to defeat you I chose this place and planted my seeds inside the humans beforehand.
-Since they're worthless beings that did nothing but exist, they should be satisfied being the foundation of my powers...!
-It's always about 'you', huh...
-Come with me, #01.
-...If
-you beat me...alright?
7:
-What in God's name is that...?
8:
-Nichirin 'Tensui'
9:
-'Sephiroth'
-Opening Gate
10:
-Kyaaa!!
-Gargh
11:
12:
-Tch...!!
-Right now I could throw a seed into your brain and take control.
-Therefore, I win this game.
-However, you'd be brain damaged,
-And I don't need a mindless doll as a subordinate.
13:
-You're useless unless you're on par with me.
-Why not walk the same path with me a little?
-Hah...
-And if I'm still not convinced?
-...When that happens, just say so,
-and I'll fight you again.
-I'm lookin' forward to it!
-Bah...Guess I don't got no choice. I'll stick with you guys for a little while.
14:
-Kukuku, seems we were a bit too flashy. And you're bein' broadcasted nationwide in the nude!
-It's because we fought all out. But to have our existence exposed here...
-Well, I guess that's also called destiny.
-#01, get me the camera.
-Hmm...
15:
-Wait, what...!?
-Uwaaaah!
-Here you go.
-Now then... I have no business with those good-for-nothing people who have no "power".
-This broadcast is only for the people who were able to understand what just happened here.
16:
-I'm speaking to all the people who live quietly while hiding their 'power' from the world.
-The world will change soon.
-Choose.
-Will you be with us? / ...Or will you stick with the humans who are worth as much as trash?
17:
-A world where only people with 'Power' will live.
-Urrrgh...!!
-I'll be the one to show you this sight!
-Ha...
-My name is Amagi Miroku.
-To those who don't understand their reasons for living,
-Scary, isn't he?
-I'll provide you the answer.
18:
-...Shall we go?
-Is it really okay to slip out without saying anything?
-We have no choice.
19:
-Besides, we're working with your father. It shouldn't be a problem.
-Howdy! Glad you came all this way,
-Amamiya-san!....And Yoshina-kun.
-Grr...
-...Oh yeah, he stopped being your father.
Side text: The purpose behind going to his father's Research Facility in Tokyo...!?
-CALL.96 / End.
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And I'm sorry to inform you, but the scanlation my take a while. Our site is currently experiencing a downtime and we don't have access to the fileserver.
We're trying our best to bring it out asap.
and similarly on 15... "power". to "power."
General rule in quotation, that you put punctuation inside, as opposed to outside, of the ending quote mark.
Thanks Queen!
Thanks for the comment. ^^
Page 1-
you said:
-Also...what on earth is that!?
I said:
-Also...what on Earth is that!?
---------------Make the 'Earth' have a capital letter.
Page 6-
You said:
-It's always about 'you', huh...
I say:
-It's always about 'you', huh?
-------------Doesn't this saying need a question mark?
Page 13-
You said:
-Bah...Guess I don't got no choice. I'll stick with you guys for a little while.
I said:
-Bah...Guess I don't have a choice. I'll stick with you for a little while.
--------------I don't know his actual grammar, but I changed his manner of speaking but in the same tone. Also, he's talking with only Amagi Miroku and not more than one person. So I removed 'guys'.
Page 16-
You said:
-I'm speaking to all the people who live quietly while hiding their 'power' from the world.
I said:
-I'm speaking to all 'of' the people who live 'silently' while hiding their 'power(s)' from 'our' world.
---------------------I added 'of' to the sentence.
---------------------Changed quietly -> silently
---------------------Power -> Powers
You said:
-The world will change soon.
I said:
-This world will change soon.
-------------I didn't like how you just said the world will change soon. It didn't bring enough impact. So I made sound more influential by changing 'the' to 'this'
Page 17-
You said:
-A world where only people with 'Power' will live.
I said:
-A world where only people with 'Power' shall live.
-----------Changed will to shall to make it more like an act of commandment. He's broadcasting to the world. he's surely talking more like he's in charge.
You said:
-To those who don't understand their reasons for living,
I said:
-For those who do not understand their reasons for living,
------------Changed 'To' -> For
I hope this helped.
1) Make the 'Earth' have a capital letter.
I don't think this is necessary, because she's just saying "what the hell is that?" She's not really talking about the planet Earth specifically. But I'll change it for you anyway. ^^
2) It's always about 'you', huh?
No, this doesn't need a question... he's just making a statement, not asking for conformation. XD
3) Bah...Guess I don't have a choice. I'll stick with you for a little while.
I went with 'got no choice' as Grana speaks very casually. I went with 'you guys' as I think he's talking about sticking with the W.I.S.E, not just Miroku. Like in previous chapters when talking to Grana, Miroku spoke of 'us' not 'I'.
4) I'm speaking to all 'of' the people who live 'silently' while hiding their 'power(s)' from 'our' world.
I like how you replaced 'quietly' with 'silently' but apart from that, I think my version is fine. I also don't think it's 'our' world as Miroku doesn't really seem to associate the world of "normal" people with him. :P
5)
A world where only people with 'Power' will live.
I said:
-A world where only people with 'Power' shall live.
-----------Changed will to shall to make it more like an act of commandment. He's broadcasting to the world. he's surely talking more like he's in charge.
Both are good, I think. Will sounds very commanding to me. He's also not really broadcasting to the world, just the people who can hear him telepathically.
@unokpasabaxaki
Ah, thank you. I'll go back and check the raws. I didn't notice a difference in the Katakana reading as the Kanji used was the exact same as Sephiroth ('tree of life').