Domina no Do 1

1st off, the verdict is still out on whether or not this is a shounen. Content wise its probably seinen. I don't know what magazine it runs in, don't really care either its funny. You'll understand the question on whether or not its shounen 2wards the end of the chtpr... anyway, I've talked 2 much, enjoy ;)


page 1

red words) Become mine!!
blue words) The combination of 2 famous authors = a super love comedy?

page 2

b1-3) sniff, hicku, sniffle
b4) Waaaaahhhh
panel) A little girl crying in the park while the sun is setting?
b5) Are you okay?
b6) Wahh// hic
b7) It hurts.
b8) What, just this?
b9) A little saliva, and this will be fine.

page 3

b1) Ta-takeshi-kun, // is this...
b2) Are you...
b3) Huh?
bubble sfx.) beep (x6)

page 4

b1-4) beep (x7)
b5) a dream...
box1) I wonder why now...
b6) Honey, my necktie.
b7) Right, right.
box2) I thought I forgot about it.

page 5

b1) Is it possible that,
b2) today at school we'll have a dramatic reunion?
b3) A
b4) totally
b5) new.
b6) Of course not.
b7) Ahaha.
b8) Well, so long as everything is peaceful...
b9) You're Tsuchie Takeshi-san right?

page 6

b1) Yes?
b2) mmm...

page 7

b1) Ah....
b2) Excuse me...

page 8

b1) They've arrived.
b2) Thanks...

page 9

b1) hebb
b2) Go ahead.

page 10

b1) Have a seat.
b2) Like hell I will!
b3) I got dragged hear in a body bag and you want me...
b4) The tea will get cold.
b5) I don't want any!!
b6) And on top of that,
b7) Who the hell are you!?

page 11

b1) HOT!!
b2) Whaahh!!
b3) My eyes! My eyes!
b4) Tsuchie Takeshi!!

page 12

b1) From today on,
b1/5) you will be mine!
b2) WHA!?
b3) What are you talking about? And why me?
b4) That's obviously
b4/5) because you proposed to me.

page 13

b1) That's the first I'M hearing of this!
b2) Besides, who are yo...
b3) You're not going to say you don't remember me right.
b4) Hm?
b5) Hi- // Hikari-chan?
b6) What did you see that made you remember!?
b7) guah
b8) Come with me.
b9) I'll introduce you to my parents.

page 14

b1) Takeshi, // what's going on here?
b2) Exactly how are you two engaged?
b3) I don't know what's going on either.

page 15

b1) And isn't this a little unfair!?
b2) I was enjoying a nap in the manga cafe, then next thing I know, I"m here!
b3) Manga cafe?
b4) You weren't at the office?
b5) Ah... no...
b6) From what I hear from my daughter,
b7) when they were young, Takeshi-san had
b8) already made a vow to my child.
panel) vow
b9) Y-you already made a vow with her Takeshi?
b10) Get serisous!! I don't remember any...
b11) Then,
b12) are you saying my daughter is lying?
b13) Ah, no...
b14) I wouldn't say that...

page 16

b1) Then if that's the case,
b2) lets have you take responsibility for your words.
b3) But Takeshi is still in high school...
b4) Takeshi-san's father,
b4/5) at the begining of the year, you were fired from your job.
b5) Ah.
b6) No.
b7) Yet everyday, you pretended to go work, when actually, you went to an internet cafe, or killed time in the park.
b8) You got fired?
b9) What about our expenses? and the loan?
b10) And his mother, you even got a loan from the pachinko parlour. // In an attempt to pay it back, you tried your hand in investing and suffered heavy loss.
b11) Soon your house will be foreclosed.

page 17

b1) Is... is that true honey!?
b2) I had no other options...
b3) If it were just anyone, I wouldn't care,
b4) but when its the parents of my precious daughter's fiance, that's a different story.
b5) If you like, you can be vice-president of one of our affiliate company's.
b6) And, althoug small, a 4LDK* for you to live in for now...
*note- roughly a 2 bedroom apartment.
b7) Of course, we'll be taking Takeshi-san as a member of this house.
b8) By all means, please take care of our son.
b9) Come on!!

page 18

b1) Look at him getting shy.
b2) He's so happy to be blessed with such a good match.
b3) Looks like we're done talking.
b3/5) Then,
b4) lets get out of the way of the young ones.

page 19

b1) Mom, dad...
b2) This is too much.
b3) hic

page 20

b1) You can lick it.
b2) Since you seem very surprised by all whats happened,
b3) to make up for that, here's a gift.
b4) "Gift"??

page 21

b1) J-just to let you know, only the tip!!
b2) No, I mean this is the 'gift'?
b3) Only licking!
b4) You don't get to suck yet.
b5) ...huh? // No actually...
b6) Its...
b7) Hey!!
b8) What are you trying to pull!?
b9) whoa
b10) You don't mean...
b11) You're not trying to say you don't want my 'gift' are you?

page 22

b1) Um, // Its just...
b2) wabu
b3) Enough!!
b4) Hmph!
b5) Wha
b6) What was that about?
b7) You'll rest here today.

opage 23

b1) I'll take my leave.
b2) Nice...
b3) Sigh...
b4) Things have gotten totally out of hand...

age 24

box1) The Hikari-chan that I used to play a lot with,
box2) was a girl from a house that has this much money...// and I proposed to her?
b1) Being engaged to a long time friend?
b2) That's kinda
b3) nice.
bubble sfx.) knock, knock.
b4) Excuse me.
b5) A woman's voice...
b6) Is she...
panel) my maid!?
b7) Coming.

page 25

b1) I am Kirii Otose, // Hikari-sama's maid.
b2) She's a little different from what I imagined.
b3) Then are you going to be looking after me?
b4) HELL NO!!!
b5) eboo!?

page 26

b1) The only person I serve is Hikari-sama!!
b2) I have no reason to look after you.
b3) You're nothing more than my lady's new item!!
b4) You got that!?
b5) Didn't you hear me?
b6) ugh
b7) Ah. // Y-yes.
b8) Listen good, // The only plus you bring to the Domina family is,
b9) In the near future, you're going to have children with Hikari-sama.
b9/5) That's IT!!
b10) Chi...
b11) Children?

page 27

b1) On that note, any wasted shots will not be overlooked.
b2) If, at any time, I find out that you wasted a chance to have a child,
b3) I'll use this, // to cut your balls
b4) by 2/5.

page 28

b1) If you understand, wait here patiently till dinner time.
b2) Got that!?
b3) Ye-ye...
b4) Yes ma'am!!
b5) hmph.
b6) Your answer gets a passing grade.
b7) Until you hair grows back,
b8) i'll consider you Hikari-sama's item.
b9) Is it alright to go cutting her items?
bubble sfx.) drop
b10) Hm?
b11) Waah! I'm cut!
b12) The floor is getting dirty! // I need to clean it!

page 29

b1) This is Hikari-chan's thigh high...
box1) That's right, when she said 'gift'
box2) What did she mean?
b2) J-just a little...
b3) Just a little should be fine...
b4) Eeeeek.
b5) I d-d-didn't do anything! I'm sorry!
b6) I haven't done anything yet...

page 30

b1) Hello!
b2) I'm Hikari's younger sister,
b3) Domina Akari.
b4) Younger sister?
b5) Ah!!
b6) huh?
b7) No, this is!!
b8) Not that, your forehead!! You're bleeding!
b9) Oh yeah...
b10) Come sit here!!
b11) It was the maid with the eyepatch right.

page 31

b1) She's quite aggressive.
b2) But its a good thing the wound wasn't very deep.
b3) Thanks...
b4) By the way Akari-chan,
b5) Yes?
b6) Were'nt you surprised to hear that // your sister is getting married?
b7) Its true I was a little shocked...
b8) But I always wanted an older brother...
b9) So instead of being surprised, I was kinda glad.
b10) ehehe.
box) What a nice kid.
b11) And she's cute.

page 32

b1) Okay, I'm going to tie it in the back.
b2) Bend your head forward.
b3) Sure.
b4) Here we go.
b5) Don't move now.
b6) Whoa
b7) kyah

page 33

b1) See,
b1/5) that's why I told you not to move.
b2) S-sorry.
bubble sfx.) rub
b3) Whoa
b4) I can feel everything.
b5) What's wrong?
b6) N-nothing...
b7) Did you get a hard on?
b8) huh?
b9) Well?

page 34

b1) Like I said.
b2) Did your dick get hard after I rubbed my bare tits on you? // well?
b3,4) huh?
b5) Or were you thinking that you would like to
b6) stick your hard uncircumcised dick
b7) on an elementary school kids shaved pussy and jerk it
b8) until your thick cum splattered all over me?
b9) That's what you were thinking right?
b10) Onii-chan.
b11) A...
b13) Akari-chan...?

page 35

b1) I-its not like I'm here to apologize, // earlier I...
b2) I was a little // out of li
b3) ne.

page 36

b1) Hikari-neechan, save me!!
b2) Whaaaa!!?
b3) I just wanted to see what my new brother was like,
b4) Then he started asking me if I was already growing hair down there, or if I already had my period.
b5) He kept asking things of that nature.
panel) I was so scared.
b6) Otose.
b7) I'm here.

page 37

b1) Give me instructional tool "Stallion's lamentation"!
b2) Here.
b3) It looks like,
b3/5) instead of my 'gift'
b4) you'd rather have punishment!!
panel) Takeshi's days of submission have begun!?