Bakuman Omake 35

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Bakuman Extra Chapter
>> (deleted Bangaihen)

P4

“Baku 4-frame Man.ga”

It doesn’t matter what Akamaru extra chapters there are as long as they’re good!!
>> insert 'there'

Everyone is talking about it!! The anticipated new series “Gitantei TRAP” makes its first appearance in Akamaru?!
>> deleted '?', it's -> its, on -> in

>>missing TL underneath Gitantei Trap and to the left of "Ashirogi Muto" on the bottom. (the one with the 15 and 17)

Frame1:
Chief Editor: So, we’d like you guys to do an extra chapter for “Gitantei TRAP” in Akamaru.

Saiko: Okay.
Takagi: Now we even have jobs like these…!
>> switched order

Frame2:
CE: Drawing an extra chapter for “TRAP” is pretty tough, // but what’s important about a manga is that it’s good.
>> am -> drawing an; dropped a 'but' - too repetitive; comma

S: Yes, but what makes it good is…

Frame3:
CE: With 10 boxes of Saran Wrap we have a real trap*! Ahahahaha
*10 can be read as “to” so he’s making a pun: to-rap (trap)
>> inserted 'boxes of'; rap -> wrap; that's the -> we have a

>> missing TL for オヤジ　ギャグ

S: I don’t know if that is exactly…
>> not understanding this statement >_<
>> Do you mean something like:
>> "I don't think that's what it means..." (or to flow better with the chief's next sentence: "I think that's a bit too..." or "I don't really like it...")

Frame4:
CE: What don’t you like about it!? It’s just important for the manga to be good!! 10rap! That’s so good! 10rap! Hahahaha
>> This doesn't follow Saiko's statement above since Saiko didn't say he didn't like it.

S: I tried to intervene because it’s not good, but…

T: This chief editor is hopeless…

Frame5:

Title: **maru Jump by Ashirogi Muto

Trap: Saori-san, this is “Akamaru* Jump.”
Saori: I know, Trap-san.
*Aka is red

Trap: This is “Aomaru* Jump” which was released in 2004.
Saori: Wow, you know a lot Trap-san. I’m impressed.
*Ao is blue
>> that -> which; changed commas to period

Trap: This is “Inumaru Jump*” which will come out next.
Saori: “Inumaru Jump”!?
*Inu is dog
>> that -> which; is coming -> will come; dropped the extra 'r'

Trap: All 600 pages are full of dogs!
Saori: I see Ooishi-sensei worked really hard.
>> 800 -> 600; insert 'really'
>> Also, well, there's a manga in Jump that's called Inumaru Dashi, so maybe they mean 600 pages of Inumaru the manga since that's what's shown - the main character whose name is Inu.

Frame6:

CE: Ahaha. This is good! “Inumaru Jump”! Hahah. I never thought of that!
>> this -> that

Frame7:
S: But we’re worried that our joke is too closely related to Ooishi-sensei that our series will overlap with his.
>> we'll -> our series; him -> his

CE: What are you boys saying!?

Frame8:

CE: I’m going to make Ooishi write the same joke and purposely make your series overlap! That’s a good idea! Hahaha.
>> you guys -> your series

S: Chief… That’s not a good idea…
T: We don’t want to cause trouble for Ooishi-sensei…

Frame9:

CE: FOOLS! As long as it’s good! As long as I am good! Haha!
>> Hmm do you mean something like "As long as it's good, I'm good"?

S: It’s not about the manga anymore… It’s about him…
T: He’s finally shown his true self…

Oh, are you going to TL the side thing?