ARG!! What?! her name was HINE!? NO WAY!!
THE ROMAJI IS HAINE!!! @#!$!%katakanization of names@#!$@
Have fun going back and fixing all the chapters!!! Cuz I'm not!!
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white: With heaps of extras! Look for Kiri & Elle / on the cover of volume 1, hitting stores 8/4 (mon)!!
bold: Her life connects / to Kiri's!
Chapter 17 - Hopes and Dreams
komi naoshi
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-Her seizures stopped!
-Okay! Now's my chance!
-How many hundreds of people do you plan on dragging along?
-Do you intend on saving every single person you come across in the future?
-I know...
-Taking more people would make it impossible to travel...
-But...!
-I have an idea how we can save her...
-What--!?
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-I just need to
-treat Hine!
-Sister Elraine!?
-What're you doing?!
-This is a gamble!
-If I take on Hine's toxins,
-I may be killed
-BUT!
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-This disease causes death by seizures
-So conversely,
-As long as those seizures don't start, I can't die
-And Kiri
-Has the power to stop them!
-As long as Kiri is keeping the seizures back, I should be able to survive!
-I admit, this is just a wild guess, but...
-there's a chance it will work!
-Since he can't decide between letting her go, or taking her with us...
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-I'll bet on odds that my idea will work!
-Thank goodness...
-Looks like we're both okay
-Sister Elraine!!
-Did you just--!
-W-what did she do??
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-I can't believe you!!
-You could've told me first, ya know!!
-If you had been wrong, you'd be dead!!
-But if I had told you, you wouldn't have let me try, right?
-OBVIOUSLY NOT!! (small - you should think about yourself some more!!)
-Well, at least Hine-san's saved!
-Nothing was coming out of worrying about it, so now you can relax!
-Elraine...!!!
-If you wake up in the morning...
-And your clothes are covered in bear patches...don't go blaming me...!!
-PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!
small: Anything but that!
-sniff
-sniff
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-Hic
-sniff...
-u-hoo..
-Wah--!! W-what's wrong, Hine-san!?
-EH!? huh?! wh-why the tears?!
-n-N-no!! I'm just...
-...like...happy to be alive!
-The tears...kinda came by themselves...
-I thought there was like no way I'd survive
-and that I didn't have any hopes or dreams
-But...
-it looks like...I did have some after all
-...of course you do!
-It's just natural!
08-09 (follow panel order)
-Plus, our future hope is right here--
-You know, right next to me!
small - Sheesh! Quit exaggerating!
-Didn't you say it was your dream to become a painter?
-You still want to, right?
-In that case,
-don't you think you'd better start practicing right away?
-Once we go and rid the world of Troi
-All you Sisters will be out of a job!
-It's going to be hard for you to smile in the future if you've lost your touch!
-But I'll tell you what--I can show you how it's done any time!
-sniff
-aha...hahaha
-Yeah...
-You're totally right! I gotta get crackin'!
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-Nn...
-Huh?
-Who...are you?
-Ah! Wait!!
-You need to get more rest!
-Could you be...
-the Sister?
-What a relief
-...I thought you weren't coming
-S-stop it, Aryl!
-But Granny...
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-Loan's mommy died because a Sister showed up too late (t/n - she may be referring to herself in 3rd person)
-ARYL!!
-That's why I thought maybe the Sisters would be late again
-A-aah...
-P-please accept my apologies!
-I'm sorry!!
-It's just like you said
-Even though we're supposed to be on time
-Sometimes we don't make it
-So I'm very sorry about that!
-But...
-All of us are tryin' our very best
-And I know everyone truly wants to save everybody they can!
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-While you were busy fighting the pain from your illness,
-All of us were totally fighting to do our very best too
-So...could you find it in your heart to forgive us?
-In return,
-The next time ya fall sick, big sis here'll come dashing to your rescue!
-It's a promise!
-...really?
-Yep!
-Then...okay...
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(does anyone else find this top panel hilarious? i know it's supposed to be clouds but...what the heck??)
-Today's like, a little over 2 years from when I started treating people
-So probably, if I kept on totally pushing myself like this for another 2-3 years,
-I bet I'd like, fall into seizures all over again
-So you've got until then
-To find the cure for me!
small: Mr. hope (but i suggest Mr. Hero, is that more clear?)
-O-okay...
-But you better not kill yourself doing these treatments
-Yeah, totally!
-Besides, I like, decided to start painting again!
-I've got just the thing to put down on canvas, too!
-What're you two gonna do?
-Well...we'd better get back to the inn pronto.
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-Or else somebody's going to be really pissed in a second
-Of course I'd be!!
-You ran around out in the wide open! Do you even care that you're being targeted?
-Put yourself in my place!!
-I see...
-well, I'm going to head for like, the ward office, and after that leave the city
-So I guess this is goodbye
-You gotta promise me we'll meet again!! No matter what!!
-And I like, someday want to see your paintings, Kiri-san!!
-Feeling...sick...
-Well, I don't have a painting
-But I DO have a new
[b]appliqué[/b]!! (<-wikipedia link)
-Get a load of this...!
-MY NEW WORK!! (small - a monkey!)
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-Kiri-san sure is talented,
-But his tastes are a little strange...
small above hine - It's well-made...
elle's pic-bubbles:
"the great spirit of poop"
"fufufu" (laughter) - both exactly as they appeared in the beginning ch's
-WHAT WAS THAT!?
-Hold on!! I can't let this pass!
-C'mon, isn't this thing cute!? Isn't it!?!?!
-If you were trying to make something cute, I'm pretty sure it wasn't supposed to come out like this...
-B-but--!!! (illegible)
-...they like, don't have a care in the world!
-...aren't the Gazelle gonna target them like crazy from now on?
-Do you think they'll be alright?
-I'm not going to brush it off and say yes
-however...
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-All I know for sure is that a kid like him won't die so easily
-He's the kind of guy that rolls with the punches, no matter what happens
small from right to left (3 blocks)
-But you said that statue I made back home in the plaza was gorgeous! You know, that one! (pic)
-Ah...but you weren't the one who came up with the design...
--geh!! What are you trying to say!?
-...and the same goes for you
-...yep!
-They'll be fine
-...for sure! (t/n - clearly hine's words. If you notice, farran has his own font)
-...well, say what you will, but weak guys will kick the bucket sooner than later
-H-HUH!?!
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-That day
-The rain
-had stopped before anyone noticed
bubbles:
-Okay then!
-Take care of yourself!
-Mm. Same to you two!
-Oh, and you better invite me to the wedding!
-YOU BET WE WON'T
-BECAUSE THERE WON'T BE ONE!!!
(t/n - best panel EVAR)
-The boy that she met in this town
-would later become the subject of a famous painting (T/n - odd. for the first time it's like the narrator is not elle, unless she's excluding herself? Also, I'm assuming this means kiri because it says kono hito - singular form)
-but that...is a later story
bubble - I'd better ring up Chris
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-what am I gonna say to her!
-I'm sure she'll be shocked
-I wonder how I'm gonna explain everything...
-Heya Chris! It's me...
-I like, decided to paint again
-I'm gonna need supplies...
-Couldja get me a canvas, an easel,
-oh and brushes, and charcoal! Maybe some plaster, and...
-Chris!
-I...um...Those two...!
-They gave me back my "hopes" and "dreams!"
-Man, it's embarassing to say...but I like totally mean it!
-Aaah...I haven't felt like this in a long time!
-I'm so excited! I want to paint so bad, I can't hold it in! And the subject...
-came to me today...!
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-The composition...
-and the motif too!!
white text: Their silhouette...is forever etched into her heart!
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But jeez, Konomi, sure, because Kiri can stop Elraine's seizures that means she can drain again! Ugh, I hate mangaka's who pull this kind of shoddy loophole. OTL
Comments like these keep me going. I appreciate it.
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The trans should now be completed. please let me know if there's anything i missed (caught a bubble myself missing during a quick proof)
I agree with you saying that "best panel EVAR".. xD