Companion. A new series by Yoshitomo Akihito, author of RAY and Eat-Man. It's hard to explain this series without spoiling it, but we'll try.
Companion is about the people who escort you from purgatory into the world of the dead. After you die you must go through your personal gate into the world of the dead, and companions are the ones who lead you there.
Not sure if this is reserved for any particular scanlator group or not, but for now the translation is private.
RAW for chapter one:
HerePage 01Cover of MagazineZ, not particularly important.
Page 02吉富昭仁、新連載63P!!
Yoshitomo Akihito's Newest Series, 63 pages!!
お前にも見えるか・・・?
Can you see her, too...?
あの女の子が
That girl
たった今・・・
just...
新境地にして最高傑作完成!!!
A ground-breaking masterpiece!!
Page 03-04死んだ
Died.
ツレビト
Companion
ホラーを超えた死の年代記(デス・クロニカル)始動。
The death chronicle that has gone beyond horror begins.
ご案内しよう、死の0m地帯へ
We shall lead you to 0m from death.
Page 05ヤダ・・・
Jeez...
私ったら・・・
What's up with me...
Page 06まだ顔が火照ってる・・・
I'm still blushing...
だーからさー
Wellll, you knooow.
なんつーかさー・・・
Um, you know...
何だよ
What?
Page 07つまりさー・・・
I mean...
私を彼女にすればいいじゃん?
Couldn't I be your girlfriend?
・・・とか思うワケ
... That's how I feel.
Page 08ついにコクった・・・
I finally said it...
あんなに勇気が要るとは思わなかった・・・
I didn't think it would take so much courage...
私 エライ
I'm great.
Page 09ダ・・・
N-...
ダメかな・・・
No...?
え・・・
Er...
いやぁ・・・
Well...
ダっ・・・ダメとかそんな
I'm... I'm not saying no.
ダメなワケないっつーか・・・
No way I'd say that...
ダメじゃねーよ
I won't say no.
摩子ちゃんなら・・・
Since it's you, Mako...
マ・・・マジで?
Re-... really?
・・・うん
... Yeah.
Page 10はぁー・・・
Haaah...
まだドキドキする・・・
My heart's still beating fast...
隼人もドキドキしたかな・・・
I wonder if the same happened to Hayato...
Page 11あれっ そういえば私・・・
Huh, wait a minute, where's...
カバンは?
Where's my bag?
つーか自転車もどっか置いて来てるし・・・
Come to think of it, I must have left my bicycle somewhere, too...
ヤダァ
Jeez.
何やってんだろ 私・・・
What am I doing...
駅の駐輪場かな
My bike might be at the racks by the station.
取りに行かなきゃ
I've gotta go get it.
とりあえず着替えよう
First, I need to change my clothes.
あ・・・そっか
Ah... oh yeah.
家のカギ カバンの中だ
The key's in my bag.
Page 12ヤダァ
Jeez.
もー・・・
Man...
Page 13あれ・・・
Huh...
いつの間に部屋まで来たんだろ・・・
When did I get in my room...
カギ・・・開いてたっけ
The door... must've been unlocked.
Page 14ヤダ 私ったら
Jeez, what is up with me?
靴履いたまんま・・・
My shoes are still on...
Page 15あれ・・・おかしいな
Huh... that's weird.
靴履いてたと思ったんだけど・・・
I thought I had my shoes on...
気のせいかな
But I must have imagined it.
熱でもあるとか・・・
I might have a fever or something...
だったら隼人のせいだ
That would be Hayato's fault.
Page 16もー!
Man!
私をここまで狂わせるなんてーッ
He must really be driving me crazy.
なんつってーッ
Or something.
Page 17ありがとう 隼人
Thanks, Hayato.
OKしてくれて・・・
For giving me the OK...
ああ・・・
Ahh...
そうだ
Oh yeah.
自転車・・・
I've got...
取りに
to go get
行かなきゃ・・・
my bike...
Page 18No text.
Page 19コオオオオ
Khoooahh.
ヒュウウウウ
Heeoooh.
コオオオオ
Khoooahh.
Page 20プルルルルル
*ring*
ん・・・
Mm...
電話だ・・・
The phone...
んもォー お母さん早く出てよォ・・・
Jeez, mom, hurry up and answer it...
プルルルルル
*ring*
プッ
*beep*
Page 21切れちゃった・・・
They hung up...
お母さん まだ帰ってないのかな
I guess mom's not home yet.
え・・・ヤダ!
Huh... whoa!
もうこんな時間!?
It's already so late!?
Page 22え・・・
Huh...
私・・・何でリビングに居んの?
Why... why am I in the living room?
Page 23何か・・・
Something's...
ヘンだ・・・
weird...
う・・・
*sob*...
うう・・・
*sob-sob*...
うう・・・
*sob-sob*...
う・・・
*sob*...
Page 24お・・・
Mo-...
お母さん!?
Mom!?
うう・・・
*sob-sob*...
う・・・
*sob*...
何やってんの?
What're you doing?
ううう・・・
*sob*...
Page 25う・・・
*sob*...
うう・・・
*sob-sob*...
お母さん・・・
Mom...
ねえ・・・
Hey...
お母さんってば!!
Mom!!
Page 26ドクン
*ba-bump*
夢だ・・・
A dream...
そうだ・・・
That's right...
これ・・・
This...
夢なんだ・・・
This is all a dream...
Page 27ドクン
*ba-bump*
ヤ・・・
N-...
Page 28ヤダ・・・
No way...
こんなの・・・
This can't be...
Page 29・・・ひッ!?
... Eek!?
・・・外!?
... I'm outside!?
なに・・・
What...
コレ・・・
is going on...
Page 30-31No text.
Page 32No text.
Page 33じ・・・じゃあ
Al-... alright.
また明日!
See you tomorrow!
お・・・
Ye-...
おう!
Yeah!
Page 34気をつけてな
Ride safely.
うん
Okay.
ありがと
Thanks.
はあ
Haah.
はあ・・・
Haah...
Page 35はあ
Haah.
Page 36-37No text.
Page 38No text.
Page 39ウソ・・・
No way...
ウソ
No way.
・・・夢だ
... It's a dream.
こんなの・・・
This...
夢だ・・・
This is a dream...
夢だ・・・
A dream...
Page 40-41No text.
Page 42No text.
Page 43No text.
Page 44No text.
Page 45お迎えに参りました
We've come for you.
摩子さん・・・
Mako...
Page 46し・・・
So-...
死に神・・・!
You're reapers...! ①
ホッホッ
Hahah.
最初は皆さんそうおっしゃる
Everyone says that at first.
Page 47じゃあ・・・
Then...
・・・何?
... what are you?
あなたと同じ身の上ですよ・・・
Those in a situation similar to your own...
ペリ
*crackle*
Page 48い・・・要らない・・・
I... don't need it...
よしなさい
Leave her be.
ミヨ
Miyo.
Page 49コロッ
*clackh*
コロ
*clack*
さて・・・〝死に神〟という言葉が出てきたところを見ると
Well then... Judging by the fact that you called us "Death",
自覚されておられるんですな?
You are aware then, yes?
ご自分が亡くなられた事を・・・
Aware that you are dead...
コロ
*clack*
コロッ
*clackh*
Page 50・・・夢だ
... This is a dream.
これ・・・
It's...
夢だから・・・
a dream...
イヤな・・・
A bad...
ヘンな夢・・・
strange dream...
私は死んでなんかない・・・
I'm not dead...
死んでなんか・・・
I'm not...
Page 51カリ
*krk*
Page 52-53No text.
Page 54お父さん・・・
Dad...
お母さん・・・
Mom...
みんな・・・
Guys...
トラックだって・・・
I heard it was a truck...
痛かっただろうな・・・
That had to hurt...
摩子ォー・・・
Makooo...
Page 55俺が・・・俺が送って行きゃ良かったんだ・・・
If only... if only I'd seen her home...
俺が送ってかなかったから・・・
This is my fault, because I didn't...
隼人・・・
Hayato...
違う・・・
No...
違うよ・・・
You're wrong...
やめて・・・
Stop this...
ちょっと・・・
Please...
やめてよ・・・
Stop this...
ねえ・・・
Hey...
Page 56や・・・
St-...
やめてェーッ!!
Stop this!!
Page 57落ち着きなさい 摩子さん!
Calm down, Mako!
落ち着いて!
Calm down!
ヤダ・・・
No...
ヤダ・・・!!
No...!!
Page 58ヤダーッ!!
Nooo!!
Page 59いかん・・・
This bad...
(バラ)拡散けてしまう・・・!
She's going to scatter...!
ヤダ!
No!
ヤダ!ヤダー!!
No! Noo!!
摩子さん 落ち着いて!
Mako, calm down!
落ち着きなさい!!
Calm down this instant!!
Page 60-61No text.
Page 62お前が落ち着け
You will calm down.
センドウ
Sendou.
あ・・・
Ma-...
阿弥様・・・
Master Aya...
Page 63あなたは・・・?
Who are you...?
阿弥・・・
Aya...
大雲阿弥・・・
Ookumo Aya...
Page 64〝ツレビト〟だ
I am a "companion".
死は訪問者ではない。声を潜めた同居人なのだ。
Death is not a visitor. He is a family member with a soft voice.
次号、摩子は自らの死を生きる。
Next issue, Mako lives through her death.
①I used the word soul reapers to refer to shinigami. It's not exactly a Bleach reference, but it is a really good way to translate the term in my opinion. Not to mention we probably won't hear it in many other places in the manga, it doesn't seem worth it to use a Japanese word there and explain it. Other alternates would be something like Death, (capital D). UPDATE: Switched to Death, works better in my opinion.
Enjoy.
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Chapter seems pretty long for just presenting a girl dealing with a traumatic experience of realized she just died, but I suppose the art makes up for it.
Translation seems really good. It's obvious Mako was pretty woozy the whole way through and you managed to be able to convey that through her thoughts in English. Looking forward to the next chapter and finding out more about Lord Aya. Hopefully the pace will be a little bit faster in the next one, though.
The thing is, I don't translate for the most veteran manga readers, heh, I translate for people who would just be picking it up on a whim. That's one of the main reasons why I try my damnedest to remove all Japanese that is possible from the script. Looking at notes merely throws you out of the experience, really. A "soul reaper" as a descriptor is pretty good for defining what a "shinigami" is, though thinking about it now, I'm probably going to go back and change some of the lines.
"Are you Death?" for instance. That makes perfect sense to most, if not all, English readers, I would think.
EDIT: Found it. What was it originally?
EDIT2: Soul reapers. Duh me. Yeah, that's better.
The key is in my bag.
Drive safely.
I actually like Reaper more than Death. Death makes me think of Terry Pratchett. Reaper has a more sinister feel to it. Like it refers to a person, rather than an event.
How about "The key's in my bag."
You don't drive a bicycle, you ride one, heh.
How about: "You're reapers...!" or with a capital R, though it won't make too much difference.
I'm totally down with that one.
Indeed. Forgot it was a bike. But is that something you'd actually say? Like in everyday conversation? I'm asking since I don't know.
Hell, I used to dress as a reaper almost every halloween for a while (hey, I had a kick-ass skull mask.)