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February 08, 2007, 06:34 PM
"The Earl of Millenium has even spread his forces out to north America huh?" a silent shadow spoke. He walked carefully out into the dim light during the middle of the night. Dressed in full Exorcist wear, he scanned the surrounding areas.
"There's too many weak exorcists around here," he scoffed. "Lione as leader? The North American branch won't last long if things stay this way. Ah well, I don't particularly care about what happens if the North American branch falls. I still have that score to settle with you... Kanda Yuu."
The short black haired, 17-year old exorcist remembered his first arrival upon the European branch of the Black Order. And his first meeting with that long blakc haired Japanese bast*rd

"Hi..." a 16-year old Zeran stuttered. "I'm... the new recruit..."
"Get lost, midget," said the 17 year old Kanda. "I'm not here to play with kids."
"What's with that attitude?????" Zeran shouted, very ticked off.
"Nothing, wimp," Kanda sneered.
"Grrr..." Zeran growled. "What's your problem?
"You can't even bring yourself to my level right now," Kanda scoffed and started walking away. He paused and looked back. "I'll be looking forward ot the day you can beat me and Mugen."

I hate that bast*rd Zeran thought bitterly. Ah well the past is the past
An army of Lv 1 and 2 AKumas suddenly surrounded him. There were no less than twenty of them on an empty street. Since it was the middle of the night, nobody could really see them.
"END OF THE LINE EXORCIST!!!!!!!!!!" a buffed up lvl 2 Akuma yelled. "Get him!!!!!!!!!!!"
The Akumas all opened fire consecutively. Zeran jumped over using Tengoku(Heaven) and leapt to the leader's head.
"You're the leader huh?" Zeran smirked and drew his blades. "Good bye then... INNOCENCE HATSUDOU! Tengoku(Heaven) Tenkai no Uta (Heaven's song)!" The white blade floated up in the air and began to shimmer and play a loud screeching note defeaning to all those who were comprised of Dark Matter.
"Damn you exorcist!" Another lvl 2 Akuma (a fire one) sprayed flames. Zeran jumped and the flames destroyed the leader Akuma.
"Pitiful," Zeran snickered. "Jigoku (Hell)! Makai no En (Hell's flames)!" the black blade floated as well and scorched all the akumas remaining. "THAT is a real fire." The akumas had been defeated yet Zeran clutched his heart painfully. Let these pitiful souls be cleansed from this world he thought and prayed for a few seconds.

Now how do I get to the North American branch office? he wondered. ah well, I'm in no rush. Just you wait Kanda Yuu. I'll be the one to defeat you. Count on it.

February 08, 2007, 07:31 PM
Not sure wether to post chappie comments here on on the chapter itself, so I'll go with here. Nice chappie AnThrun =3 Got Kanda obbession much? xD hehe~ I like him.

rhapsody blue
February 08, 2007, 08:31 PM
"There's too many weak exorcists around here," he scoffed.

Did you just diss us? Sadness... jk jk :)

Anyway, I thought it was great chapter. I could visualize the scene in my head so that's good!

February 08, 2007, 11:32 PM
OHHH liked the chapter but your character isn't the only one thats badass you'll see some pretty awesome things from my character. I'm actually in the middle of writing my next chapter but there is still some time till I can post it!!!!

Kanda Yuu- hmmm I like it but Kanda is my second favorite character cause well I think samarai rock

February 09, 2007, 02:36 AM
Wuih, nice chapter ^_^.
I love the names of the attacks and you caught Kanda's character good in this chapter ^.~