I took a raw did these steps...
1. Changed mode to grayscale
2. Leveled it (Little too dark though)
3. Removed text and cleaned big dirt
4. Cleaned blacks
5. Redrew all area's I felt need it but the board on top
6. Replaced logo with of better quality and re-sized it so it looked right
I like how this pic has the "shorter" drawn version of his sword. Notw is it just me or is that sword always changing size? This new one looks good you kept it simple but still with enough to show how they both had to change for their two different dreams.
Had nothing to do so I took the newest Hajime no Ippo raw and cleaned up the first page.