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For a amatuer it really is a inspiration! great job and the story is something new. Best of luck.
:^_^Sounds like a awesome story. I love how you calloborated the eyes with the story and hes a special case which really makes a hero. Best of luck.
Its really well put together and interesting, with all of this information here alone I can see it being a long story with many twists and turns. Really has a lot of potential! I believe its worth...