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Actually, we've known that since the summit, when Mifune referred to him as Ei dono.
Ei is an alternate spelling of the pronunciation of the letter A in japanese, so it's given two readings on...
Good translation, but I'd like to point out a few things:
* It's more like Shikamaru takes down Asuma, as in kills
* Asuma enters nirvana. Guess this is a peaceful death, but the 「仏」 here is...
nothing that isn't self-explanatory from looking at the pictures here. ohana merely points out that the chapter indeed ends with mifune.
just thought i'd translate it so that non-japanese speakers...
minor mistake here. it should be: "the person whose words are recorded is sucked in (into his gourd)".
also, both kinkaku and ginkaku use that technique (taking the souls of their opponents by...
thanks, you guys! i'm past my best before date at mh, i suppose! :)
i might come back to this art forum one day though. hope to see you around!
this has amaretti all over it! :D
not very like you, is it?
i'm considering making my final post at MH, and that being said, obviously my last contribution to the art forums. thus, i would make a final statement, which will have to be my latest work....
unfortunately, only three pics i really liked in this... :/
i think its cool! but remove the lines on the clouds, looks very unnatural!
i really have no idea what is going on with the colors here, sorry...
its the translation which is just real sloppy.
check the spoiler pics --> madara clearly states that it seems that konan is not going to let...
what can i say... its too much? :) especially the hair, way too contrastive. its hard for me to look at... :/ i think its too... "oily", kinda...!
this is a really boring cover, so you need to do something really cool with it to make it work. unfortunately, all i see are a couple of blue hues and a flat background. it has no pop! go a little...
i think this is actually pretty cool! :)
look at the light source (the moon) and you'll see that the shadows are misplaced.
if the light is on top of them, there's not much logic to the shading. also, work a bit more on the lines, i find them a little too edgy!
plus, who gives a damn thing about the colour contests?? :)
these colors are pretty interesting! :)
you did a good job, i think.
perhaps a little too much shadow around her eyes?
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I wonder which it is (Ohana's note?)
"But first, the Kyuubi", says Kushina, and restraints 9b.
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Kushina punches Naruto in the stomach.
Kushina uses Naruto's favorite expression (dattebayo!).
And, the story of Yondaime...
good, but not as good as some of the others!
v1 is the better one, although the sky looks better in v2.
as for improvement, you need more shadows and contrast, and i also think they are all slightly too warm.
its a minor, but "no telling where she's been" should be "i don't know what village kushina is from." :)
minor edit, but... looking at the original spoiler, i think that "naruto" was omitted from that incoherent line. it should be:
"bee and naruto put out their fists"
sweet, but the combination sunshine, warm colors and snowfall is a little tricky...
the blue sky is not as much an issue as the warmness of the colors on naruto's face and hair, i think they should...
no worries, you could always just redo it... :)
yeah, well, as googlez already pointed out, it doesnt work too well with the background...
well done! i like it a lot!
just remove the text, it detracts from the image!
page 9, 14/15 and 16 are amazing! they are my favorites at least! ^^
i like what you did with the flames and the color theme is cool, but sasuke doesnt look too good, particularly the clothes. i know you can do better! :)
you should probably not translate if you dont understand the contents... :)
it ends with someone (doesnt say who, but in all likeliness naruto) stating he will fight sasuke.
its assumed that he...
i suggest you fix the light falling over them, it would never fall that evenly, since their hair, faces and so on are not all flat! apart from that, its good! :)
good work with the light, looks great that way!
good stuff, you have definitely improved!
that is actually pretty good, well done, both of you!
if you wanna achieve realism, how about you start making the hair less angular and spiky?
it doesnt blend well, ya know.
i think you need to do some serious thinking on what exactly you want to achieve "painting" this way. its way too hysterical for me, esp with the leaves. :/
here's a few more, including a progress meme i did! ^^
animated rain...?? sounds like overkill...
Translation of the spoiler from ohana
Karin and Sasuke notice how one eye on Danzou's right arm closes every 60 seconds.
you have an odd sense of realism. and what exactly is so amazing about the eyes? maybe im missing something?
there isnt rly a whole lof of realism about this... the coat is not rly working for me. and his forehead and hair meet in a weird way i think.
nah, what i really mean is that all that blackness in such a bright picture really detracts from her femininity. shoulders, below eyes, outlines of lips and nose... IMO, you would be better off...
dude, i dont get it... why is there so much black in there? get rid of 90% of the lines and im sure it would work much better. the eyebrows make her look like a female russian wrestler or...
haha, this is cool! :)
what a weird feeling... its very good, but im not sure i like it...
no need to worry, you'll get there with time and practice. just remember to pay constant attention to your light source! :thumbs
shadows are weird and inconsistent, esp on their faces. the mood in the picture is good though, keep it up!
his hair has a lime green hue to it, which i find very unattractive im afraid.
oh, and therhi pointed out some good things, keep those in mind. :)
hang on, sry, but i dont see your point...?