feeling ignored T-T
is it that bad?
Last edited by Raijatsu; July 18, 2007 at 03:56 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
I like it, nice little chapter. ^^ I especially like the first part. I can perfectly imagine Anlen's face, haha.
But what are Rinvak, Tabby and company about to do? Rescue Lione? If yes....they don't dare to enter the ship that just sails on the sea, right? ^_^"
well I they if Lione doesn't come back they would think he'd go after Jacques so I let them go to his camp. They don't know he's with Anlen.
Yeah I imagine Anlens face between shock and relieve since she did not want to blow up Boston. ^^
Last edited by Raijatsu; July 18, 2007 at 04:33 PM.
yay first post!i would have written earlier but i haven't been on as much as i used to due to having a slow computer at home (it takes forever to post) and studying for my upcoming mcat on tuesday
anyway, this was a great chapter since it contained advancements for the three sidestories/plots. i think you got lyra down but i'll have to ask my sister since it's her character.
so the exorcists are going to try to rescue the captured ones or lione? i'm kinda confused on that. if it's the former, i hope that i could write a torture chapter; i'm quite sadistic...
overall, great chapter
Last edited by rhapsody blue; July 18, 2007 at 06:13 PM.
they are going after Jaqcues and will need about three days (it's hard to measure distances because I have no idea of traveling in the late 19th century)
I've been thinking...should some of the exorcists stay behind to protect HQ while the others goes off to the rescue mission?
well your right......
but for my next chapter at least lyra has to go ^^
maybe you can rewrite the odds in your next chapter?
or should I edit mine?
i think my sister is going to incorporate that in her chapter so you don't have to rewrite it.
i think for the next chapter, it'll contain both her part and my part so it might be long...
.::.edit.::. my sister isn't going to include her part so i guess it'll just be a torture-centric chapter
Last edited by rhapsody blue; July 19, 2007 at 10:14 AM.