Chapter 86 - Out of control
First of all, I am sorry that I did not finish this chapter but let it as short as it is now. It still can be considered as having an ending though, it's not that I cut it off all of sudden.
Just, my brain is completely empty and school's killing me, resp. I am feeling kinda...exhausted when I come home every day.
I will still put all my effort in our superb, amazing, wonderful story
Sorry for letting you wait for so long. Snooge, just go ahead with the battles. I am sure you enjoy writing them.
Last edited by Schwindelmagier; September 24, 2007 at 10:45 AM.
i don't know what you're talking about. this chapter was amazing and didn't seem incomplete.
the ship after the drunken orgy reminded me of a frat house. haha i liked the hints about anlen's past but oh no! what has lione done?
i only have one part left (a little rin/daniel/zane interaction) and then i'll have to revise it. my chapter will come out sometime this week but i don't know exactly when. ^^
what exactly heppened at the end? has he killed her?
anyway it was a great chapter
Thanks both of you *bows*
I am glad you liked my chapter although it was so short.
@ Rai: No, he did not kill her. He can't kill her because Anlen can't die (BECAUSE she is a Noah). I know, Noahs are not immortal but Anlen, well, has a special function given by the Earl of Millennium. That's why she's been living for..I dunno...like 200 years and up now.
But this kind of, let me name it "rebirth" is painful though. The symbols on her body
Hard to explain but I hope you understood what I wanted to say xD.
In short, no...she's still alive although she's feeling pain.