the war arc. how would you continue the manga from chapter 650, note plot wise and no new power ups.
i personally would stage a scenerio in which madara gets the kyuubi and hachibi ( they wont die since medical ninjutsu almost suddenly rivals Soten Kisshun and minatos already dead) ..... were under the assumptions that nothing is cheapened for plot...........
Madara intended to gather the last jin. Now madara uses his secret tech being multiple bijuu control and uses them too enhance his normal genjutsu on obito. making him voluntarily give up the juubi right after he loses to naruto talk no jutsu as the scenario plays out. apperently he needed hashi sage mode to do all that(combining the remaining bijuu) !!!!!!Now before casting infinite(whatever) he seals hashi forever and reveals the true power of the juubi life and death.As he brings back all the uchiha with power ups, he recruits sasuke(as a powerful uchiha general) and tries to make his ninja world.
the reason his dream differed from hashi was izuna's death, and all the other uchihas(lets blame it on the uchiha love.) he secretly wanted to bring them back as the rulers of naruto as he saw them as them as the rightful leaders. so he killed them(uchiha craziness) so they wouldnt be swayed by hashi dream of all ninja's being equal, thats why he respected hashi cause he could see it happening to his brethren.Finishing his monologue he states how the sage's mom inspired everything
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best i could come up with
Last edited by tobirama; October 10, 2013 at 05:33 AM.
i think the best is yet to come up
Kishi surely fucked up the story with obito, but i think that is more to drag the story rather than add anything qualitative to it.
The fact that all this plan has been made by madara, i would really wait to see what kishi has in store for madara.
Just get to the point and stop trying too hard.The recent chapters were just gross.Ew.
This world is beyond redemption. The only way to save it would be by leveling and eradicating everything through a chain of continuous natural and cosmic disasters, so that the planet can go into a few millennia of hibernation before it recovers and starts rebuilding everything from scratch.
Put it out of it's misery. A coup de grâce would be most appreciated at this point.
To save this manga the edo kages have to go!!
1. I would have Madara send out 2 clones going all out to catch, then killed Orochimaru. I would have him capture, release edo tensei. Then chop him up and burned... Kinda like trunks did friza.
2. I would have all the current kages killed by Madara save Gaara.
3. I would have obito nearly kill Sasuke and Naruto to the point where Sasuke would need to absorb Juugo and Naruto need the other half of the Kyuubi.
4. I would have Tobi and Madra battle it out for main villain and give the alliance time to regroup and repeat the never give up attitude.
5. I would have Gaara and Sasuke defeat Madara
6. Naruto and kakashi defeat obito.
Reveal that everything was a genjutsu or in Naruto's mind, either when the clone with 30% of Itachi's chakra put him in a genjutsu or when Pain caught him and nailed him down.
From there, I'd keep Naruto's development and keep him developing into someone worthy of being a hokage or super kage, and keep him from beating Pain. Sasuke turns good when he realizes his friends, and Taka goes back to Konoha. No Five Kage summit fight between Taka and the kage. Pain is Naruto's opponent while Tobi is both Sasuke and Naruto's, without that silly Juubi poop. Danzou becomes hokage and makes life hard due to desire for power until Naruto's popularity has Danzou ousted.
Danzou as last ditch effort tries to kill Naruto and Sasuke but both kill Danzou and thus, ending the era of evilness after every kage is changed and gets along.
Important thing to do is to keep Naruto's development and keep him developing though.
I would also have 2 more sagas after the war.. One would be about matching and developing the rookies and the other would be about rebuilding after the war.
How would you save naruto? Nothing, really.
The reasons why some of you was ranting your ass to the fullest because you felt that kishi betrayed your expectations. You want this/those/everything to happen. If that were the case, then why don't some of you create your own manga? A manga that's full of awesome, no garbage and no inconsistencies or no plot hole. Yea, some of you should create your own perfect manga.
seal away all of naruto & sasuke's mecha toys. especially susano'o. sasuke's strategic skill disintegrated as soon as he got that thing. ditto with naruto - definitely no bijuu bombs or even the kurama transformation.
turn their skills back to how they were right after naruto got SM and right before sasuke got regular MS. (i know naruto would stomp sasuke like that, but sage mode can actually be used as a strategic non-haxx ninja technique, much better than spamming flames and shit.) then they can fight properly, instead of having a who's-got-the-bigger-gun fight, which is what it's going to be....
as for this war arc, I'm not even gonna bother trying, this mess is far beyond redemption. just get obito out of the picture as fast as possible. those 2 chapters back in july where he lost consciousness when he became the jinchuuriki were the best 2 we've had all year......
(oh, and making orochimaru the real mastermind behind all this and the final boss - as unlikely as it is, I just think that would be the greatest thing ever )
Last edited by chibistar6; October 11, 2013 at 01:58 AM.
Reveal that everything was a dream that narutp had after his fight with sasuke in part 1 at the valley of the end. Then When naruto comes back with Jiraya after 2 years he should be as developed as he is now in the manga with full control of the kyuubi.
well , this manga can be saved , but it require some courage and cunning from kishi side ...
for example , sasuke can use one of uchiha forbiden jutsu and make opening for alliance ... ( and loss one of his eyes = no susanoo anymore )
and Naruto loss QB someway ( for example sacrificing himself and qb for finishing hit )
and then , kishi change this manga from a shonen to a senin and continue it as a senin manga with more realistic character ( and no more Love no jutsu , Talk no jutsu , Will of fire no jutsu , I won't give up no jutsu , I'm child of destiny no jutsu , I will be hokage no jutsu and all these bullshits ) ....
for example , as Obito said , after the war , 5 great villages begin another war ... or they use ninja alliance army as a tool and try to take over independent countries and other ninja village ( like rain country ) ...
this manga is done as shonen ...
Last edited by shafagh; October 13, 2013 at 01:52 AM.
Giving a damn about the story might help.
I mean, back at the beginning of when the manga started to stop being cool. Somewhere right after the fight with Pein. I think Kishi started feeling fatigued by the series at that point, and decided to start rushing things, which resulted in the crap we got now. Seriously the story has reached Bleach levels of "fuck the story, just show me pretty pictures".