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    My one shot for the Shonen Jump Competition

    Hey guys!

    I've been drawing manga for years, and I entered the recent International Shonen Jump Manga Competition with a one shot, titled DreamWalker. I didn't get into the final six, but I'm too attached to this story to let it sink like a failure. So I posted it on MangaMagazine, if you're interested you can read it, and I'd be really interested in hearing your opinions. Feedback and critiques are always welcome, I want to learn a lot from this project, so I can improve my skills.
    Thank you very much in advance, and I hope you'll enjoy reading my work! ^^


    You can read the manga here: http://www.mangamagazine.net/manga-a...e/5636?lang=en

    You can also watch a quick trailer video I made from it, to decide whether it's worth your time, or not. ^^" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tICSls5EUR8

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    Re: My one shot for the Shonen Jump Competition

    There is something you need to learn? I love Rain such a perfect character design that is even better than some of the lead characters in Jump even and in the competitions final six.

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    Re: My one shot for the Shonen Jump Competition

    Thank you for your opinion! Yes, there are many things I still need to learn, starting from art basics to story telling. This one shot has many flaws which could have been done better. ^^" But I'm really happy you liked the design of Rain.

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    Re: My one shot for the Shonen Jump Competition

    I am just now reading this first your art work is wonderful great concept. If u don't mind do u know what place u can in.
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    Re: My one shot for the Shonen Jump Competition

    that was pretty good.......one of the best for this sight

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    Re: My one shot for the Shonen Jump Competition

    I haven't finished it yet but it seems a bit exposition heavy at the moment.

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    Re: My one shot for the Shonen Jump Competition

    It was really great, i really liked it it was super cool one of the best

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