I've been drawing manga for years, and I entered the recent International Shonen Jump Manga Competition with a one shot, titled DreamWalker. I didn't get into the final six, but I'm too attached to this story to let it sink like a failure. So I posted it on MangaMagazine, if you're interested you can read it, and I'd be really interested in hearing your opinions. Feedback and critiques are always welcome, I want to learn a lot from this project, so I can improve my skills.
Thank you very much in advance, and I hope you'll enjoy reading my work! ^^
You can read the manga here: http://www.mangamagazine.net/manga-a...e/5636?lang=en
You can also watch a quick trailer video I made from it, to decide whether it's worth your time, or not. ^^" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tICSls5EUR8
There is something you need to learn? I love Rain such a perfect character design that is even better than some of the lead characters in Jump even and in the competitions final six.
Thank you for your opinion! Yes, there are many things I still need to learn, starting from art basics to story telling. This one shot has many flaws which could have been done better. ^^" But I'm really happy you liked the design of Rain.
I am just now reading this first your art work is wonderful great concept. If u don't mind do u know what place u can in.
that was pretty good.......one of the best for this sight
I haven't finished it yet but it seems a bit exposition heavy at the moment.