I'm new here and I wanted to know if my story is any good or not.
Summary:-The story is about an insane spirit (Shiku) who wants to kill everyone, and the way to stop him is to defeat him. The main character, Yuu-chan, and her whole school getting trapped in the desert by Shiku. Shiku explains that in order to defeat him, the team that you are placed on has to defeat him. you have a better chance of defeating him if you have a person who has a special mark on them(temporarily called the colorless), you have a better chance of defeating Shiku. the only problem is that Shiku did not reveal those people. the way to reveal those people is to almost kill them, all except one survives. so the goal is to find the last surviving colorless person, defeat shiku and go home

how is it?