I'll be perfectly honest here, for about 3 years I've been having a kind of story in my head.
Like stuck, everyday it seems to develop bit by bit.
I dream about it at night and day, when I listen to music images of my characters appear within my mind pretty much automatically and consider me crazy but it's like I can see everything right in front of from my minds eye.Like I'm...almost in the world myself.
I can hear even their voices clearly.
I try to explain it as best as I can.
I can post more but I have no interest in spoiling anything because, while I am aware I have no talent for writing not drawing, I will make it my life time goal to be able to get this paper.What I wrote doesn't say much but within my head it's all clear.Quote:
I will never be able to rest until I got this down.If I had help it'd be all the better and I would appreciate any I can get from the bottom of my heart.
Overall, I don't want some "Nakama" crap, I hate power ups by "Emotions" and all such dilly dally.
I want a serious and real approach.My characters are vulnerable and killable.Yet I don't wanna write anything SUPER DARK and HOPELESS.
A major point will be the lesbian relationship between Erika and Jill.
Not Fanservice oriented or diabetes inducing just two people who will find their love towards each other and enter a serious relationship throughout the story.
Mysteries will be plenty but nothing complicated at all.Supernatural yes, but nothing over the top.
I like the concept; it seems unique and I'm interested to find out what will happen. ^^
Ummm... why don't you jot some notes down on a notebook or piece of paper? Then after rereading them, try to write a few paragraphs. If it sounds fine, keep it. If not, just edit it until you find it acceptable.
*bump* How's your story coming along?
So what is it exactly you need because it seems like you are most of the way there plot wise is it just someone to bounce ideas off of?
The end just makes me rather indecisive cause I got two way I'd like it to go.=/
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I don't need to "bounce off ideas from someone". Criticism and opinions are what I want.
Like is the idea I got even worth reading?
Has something like this been done before?
And so on.
Hmmm... why don't you write both of them and see which one fit the story the best? You can always put the other one as a bonus like an alternate ending type dealy.
Well I would first suggest working on the ending first with any mystery style story the ending Is imperative second it would be the villain with a a demon being a good guy I would presume that the main villains wouldn't be the demon world unless this demon is different from the rest personally I would go with angels as the villain since u don't see that very often and finally in regards to how the MC defend themselves I would suggest having the demon using the other ones body to release her power and the closer the 2 become the more power she can release this would work well with the yuri theme you have in mind
I'm not sure if this would be very helpful to you, but years ago I had an idea of a story. I tried really hard to put what was in my head down on paper, but I just couldn't seem to do it. After weeks of brainstorming, I got the idea of writing down summary plots that pop into my head, whenever they did. I carried around a small notebook, and whenever I started to daydream about the characters, I would jot down a few notes. When I filled up the notebook, I went through with a pen and started making notes to myself. Connecting the scenes that I sketched down. I did my best to number them in an order that would make sense. Then I transferred the notes to another notebook, and as I did so, I wrote more detail into each summary. When I finished I had a very rough, but well thought out, timeline of my story's plot. All that was left to do was flush it out into a full story.
How's your story progressing? ^^
It's actually going along pretty great.
Just not too sure regarding the background stories of 3 characters.
Oh and putting this out here as well, Artists are more than welcome to approach.Nah, make that are even wished for.