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The redraws look very good. There are some mistakes, but you can only see them with the raw next to the clean.
There is, however, still a lot of dirt and noise on the page. Watch this video and you'll be able to easily check your pages for leftover dirt/noise: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jwT0-W0YO4A
Thanks for the help.
Could you make a suggestion about how to fix this mistake?
I tried to make this piece of the suit jacket seems like cloth, but I couldn't.
Last edited by Ana Clara; February 15, 2014 at 08:34 AM.
You mean something like this?
You add an empty layer, you outline the missing part with Pen Tool, you stroke it with white brush (1px tip), then you use soft eraser to slightly erase half (or so) of the line's width. And voila~
1. The leg should be slightly wider.
2. There should be more books filling the white space.
3. The jacket should partially cover said books - it shouldn't go under any of them (like it does now).
Also, little finger seems to be missing a joint. Otherwise, really good redraw.
I followed the 3 hints, but I still have problems with the jacket.
But, here is what i've done until now:
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The jacket's edge isn't good enough yet, but it's getting better. The same goes for the fingers.
Last edited by Ana Clara; February 15, 2014 at 03:54 PM.