This doesn't sound okay
Spoiler tags were added to keep the TA forum a family-friendly forum. - mikkih
Last edited by mikkih; May 17, 2014 at 10:40 AM. Reason: spoiler tags, mature contents
Instead of using the word "cold," you may want to use "cooling down" or some other words. 冷める doesn't mean "getting cold" but rather cooling down and getting back to normal.
Edit/add: Your comma usage was proper, but I thought it might look a bit choppy followed by another comma right after. Other than that, tl sounds good to me.
Last edited by mikkih; May 17, 2014 at 10:54 AM.
Last edited by mikkih; May 18, 2014 at 09:14 AM. Reason: added spoiler tags, mature contents
aanta... hom mono no nihonjin? O_O
titilation is a form of being extremely stimulated.. not necessarily sexually : )
Either way, hope that helped..
Yeah I'm japanese from Tokyo
When your make posts contains mature subjects, please always use spoiler tags, the black triangle with a letter S.
Last edited by mikkih; May 18, 2014 at 09:52 AM. Reason: edit in JP