Well, here is chapter 2 but it's not complete yet. lol so very sorry about the writing had very little time to do words (long story)....but anyways hope you like it!
let me know what you think, I am open to any criticism, thoughts, or opinions thanks! ^_^
and next time I will do the words with paint or something once again Im very sorry for the writing.
The writing's totally fine.
Anyway, come on, keep drawingggg, it's interesting!
also you did the borders with a ruler! wooo
haha kk I will . Im very glad you like it. ^_^ yeah I thought I should lol and are you sure about the writing cuz idk I got some bad print xD I was always better with cursive.
still I will try it with paint anyways if I can.
You can just type it if you're that worried, it takes no time to find a good manga font to download (something like Anime Ace or whatever) and that's another little thing like the borders that makes your work look more professional.
But that totally doesn't matter, the story's interesting. You have a pretty good talent for big casts of characters, you also had this in the story you sent me a while back. What you should make sure to do is make sure all the characters are connected to the other characters in some ways.
So yeah, as I said, keep writing! Right now, I'm your fan!