Last edited by Gottheim; February 20, 2009 at 09:59 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
I lol'd at Izuna's profile. A blind Uchiha going to battle... However, I like how much he cared about his brother. His entire fighting style is focused around his eyes, and he gives them away.
Again, thanks for the translations. Any idea on who you're going to do next (IF you are doing more, that is, since you've already done a lot)?
I'm currently working on Kakashi's file. Then, I'll take care of Chiyo (Sasori's grandma). And I'll give Shikamaru's entry another try. The sentences are a bit tricky, so I kinda gave up on it. But Yamato and Kakuzu's biographies weren't easy either, and I still managed. So I think Nara "Da Pimp" Shikamaru deserves another shot.Originally Posted by Shodan
Finally, I intend to complete the Hokage set. That's all for now.
ANBU, Karin, Nidaime and Sandaime entries done. Iruka and Izuna's entries have been added as well.
Now to return to Chiyo and Kakashi's profiles...
Last edited by Gottheim; February 25, 2009 at 10:33 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
Thanks man! The anbu translation was great, hopefully it will help clean their name around these forums seeing how a lot of people seem to believe anbus are fodder...
Anyway, Chiyo's entry has joined the mix. I also added an alternate phrasing for a couple of sentences in Tsunade's profile. Someone claimed the current ones are hard to understand, and proposed their own version, so don't be afraid to check it out and let me know.
I saw you used my transcriptions for Izuna and Iruka, are they userfriendly or do you think they could be improved somehow?
And I'm a girl.
I wanted to release the whole thing as a big package, but I don't translate fast enough to justify withholding the work long enough to post it all at once. So ladies and gents, I give you Tobi and Hidan's translations.
Shikamaru and Kakashi's profiles are rather difficult, and I'm still busy struggling with them. I plan on posting a few more entries, so I'll get through with those first, and these two will probably come last. Sorry.
Last edited by Gottheim; March 05, 2009 at 09:58 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
"Thou willeth massacre thy neighbor".
Wouldn't "Thou shalt massacre thy neighbor" be close to James's bible's "Thou shalt not kill"?
Last edited by Gingitsune; March 05, 2009 at 12:28 PM.
Never read the Bible in English either, but I watch the Simpsons
-No. The Simpsons.
Added Akatsuki, Myoubakuzan and the Uchiha clan to the OP. Checked Jiraiya's entry for mistakes and brought in a few stylistic tweaks to improve it.
Finally! Shikamaru's file is done! I've whined at length about how difficult it was given my skill level, so don't expect 100% accuracy. But it's decent, and should be reliable enough on the whole. I also restarted Hinata's file from scratch for a much needed improvement.
Zetsu joins da club! BTW, if anyone knows a more specific term for his "venus fly trap" appendages, please let me know.
Pain fans, rejoice! The word of God has been bestowed upon us... In a language even the Kanji-impaired folk can understand.
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Could you please translate Tobis Character box? I'd really appreciate that
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Bad news about Kakashi. The text is tougher than I expected, so I have no idea when I'll be able to post it, if at all. So if anyone wants to give it a try, they're more than welcome to it. The good news is, Sakura's entry has been added.
I've seen your version of the Tobi page. It seems you've managed pretty well without me. Just in case, let me dispel a little doubt: what you wrote in his info box is pretty much everything there was in the original text. I'll be looking forward to the rest of your work.
Added chakra nature and shape manipulation. Brought a few minor stylistic changes to the Tobi translation.
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Thanks for Sakura and Pain, I must admit I was afraid I'll be left to do them myself and I feel more comfortable with the smaller entries. And your wording is better anyway. ^^;
About Zetsu's "venus fly trap" appendages, the whole thing is called "leaf" and the "spikes" are called "cilia". See more on Wikipedia.
Edit: About Sakura's entry: "The death of a close one (tn: Duh?!), then the parting of ways with the person she loved..." Maybe they meant she lost Chiyo then she couldn't bring back Sasuke so she had to part ways with him (although that's definitely not what comes to the mind first...)
Edit: "I feel sick. Dozens of lines' worth of nice stuff on Sakura! *sob* Translated and written by me! And it's my largest file ever, at that! *sigh* The Sakura-hater in me cries for my blood. Boo-hoo. *contemplates suicide*(jk)"
lol! I'll do Ino and share your pain.
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