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    Registered User 初心者/ Shoshinsha / Beginner devilgaara's Avatar
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    No Trust First try on cleaning

    Hi!
    I'm new and this is my first time cleaning so what do you guys think
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    and this is the original one

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    Re: First try on cleaning

    congrats on your 1st try. however, you can still improve the quality by sticking to the philosophy : make the white, white and the black, black. try to level the white more, and burn/brush those white specks inside the black area.
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    Re: First try on cleaning

    not bad! try to level more the whites like bobrianto said and use the burn tool to burn the blacks (look at this tutorial: http://senbonzakura.kageyoshi.net/20...ans-burn-tool/ )
    and the dodge tool for the whites
    if you want to make the greys in the first panel look better, read the grey part from this tutorial: http://i-lock.deviantart.com/art/Tut...-ENG-106960041

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    Re: First try on cleaning

    CTL L. level it until you feel u are making it to stuffed. invert all colours just dodging the whites doesnt give the same affect as burning the inverted colours. follow some tutuoriels
    litterelly a 2 second try just to show you what i mean
    Last edited by Mushashi; January 10, 2010 at 01:56 AM.

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    Re: First try on cleaning

    musashi, you overleveled the withes, in fact her hairs are half cancelled
    besides you left dirt aroun her shoes

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    Re: First try on cleaning

    Thank you for the manga raws
    Hee Hee

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    Re: First try on cleaning

    Quote Originally Posted by progste View Post
    musashi, you overleveled the withes, in fact her hairs are half cancelled
    besides you left dirt aroun her shoes
    Yes, I agree with progste; you kind of overdid it. But, yeah, generally you could have leveled it a tiny bit more and you could have removed some of the specks.

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