Hey Ladies and Gents, here's my new comic. Any feedback, or comments will be great! Thanks!
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Kris' long eyes kinda bug me a bit, but great job on the artwork! Jazz's fight with the three scythe guys was pretty cool. You sure this ain't already on the market? ;D
Story and narration's alright; I get that the death of his brother is the reason for the protagonist's current personality in the 'present' and I'm anticipating something dark and nasty, but I'm not holding my breath for the next chapter. That's probably because I'm not really into the tagging thing (yet?), but you'll probably build more interest in the later chapters.
Still, good first chapter overall.
One more thing: Thanks for using good fonts.
Last edited by TitaniumChloride; February 21, 2011 at 10:42 AM.
I have the utmost respect for this manga and this artist.
31 pages worth of very good art. Although the art reminds me more of... say.. Ben Ten or Danny Phantom a good western-style cartoon (can't seem to think of one example, dammit... but yeah for anime I'd like to think Yugi-Oh is quite relevant in terms of style), I'd say this a very good piece of work.
Just continue the great work mannie!
(note: Ben Ten or Danny Phantom are still quite good for me, even though a lot of people might not like them, so when your manga reminded me of them, it's not an insult. Peace.)
I love the artwork on this comic. I'm currently drawing my own at the current time but i'm doing it the old fashion way without a tablet. I just wanted to ask you what software you use because it looks very pro and thats what i need. i'll upload my manga as soon as i've finished the first chapter. thanks
Nice story and amazing art work.
You are really something.